Greetings all, this is my very first fanfiction story that I've ever written. I must say that the first chapter isn't too great, but if you stay with me, I believe it gets better... Anyway, please remember to submit your review, but if you are telling me my story 'sucks', please explain WHY first. lol. This is kind of a short chapter, but I guess I haven't had that much time. Also, I've used the English names in this story. I suppose I could have used the Japanese names, but I'm to lazy to have to check my spelling of all the Japanese names, so sorry for any inconvenience... Anyway, I'll shush, so here's the first chapter!
Darien sat bolt upright, sweat hanging on his face. A laughter... a maniacal laughter rang through his head. Serena had been with him, in his dream... when her face faded slowly into darkness, as his surroundings had done too. They had been walking together, when Serena suddenly looked frightened, within the dream, and then appeared to panic. Her face then faded away... He looked out his window at the moon shining brightly outside. He could only wonder why his dreams had shown him this...
"Serena..." Darien muttered to himself quietly. He turned away from his window, only to find one of his roses laying on his lap. His vision blurred, and he heard Serena's voice, calling him, asking for help. Her voice echoed within his mind, and he was surprised to find that the rose in his lap was slowly wilting, like something had gone horribly wrong... He climbed out of bed, and walked out the door. He climbed the apartment stair way, and reached the roof of his apartment building. He leapt from building to building, and reached Serena's home. He had to make sure she was ok... He had to make sure it was only a dream. He hopped off the roof, and peered into Serena's window, which was open, letting in the cool summer's breeze.
To Darien's horror, Serena was gone. Tons of possibilities flooded into his mind, of what could have happened to her. He leapt in through the window, and walked through the house. He noticed a door open, to the kitchen, with light pouring out. He walked up to the doorway, and looked around before entering. Serena lay alone on the couch, seemingly asleep. Serena's brother Sammy walked in, sleepy-eyed. He noticed Darien, surprised. He thought briefly.
"I think I remember you... you're Serena's boyfriend right?"
Never the less, Sammy explained.
"She's been like that for three days now. We're really worried, she won't wake up. We've taken her to the doctors, and the hospital, but no one's been able to do anything yet."
Darien looked at Serena, distressed.
"My dream... what's... happened?" Darien thought to himself. Sammy looked at Darien.
"Do you know what's happened?" Sammy asked questioningly.
Darien only shook his head no. Darien picked up Serena carefully, and Serena only slightly stirred.
"I believe I have an idea. I'll see what I can do..." Darien walked out through the door, and Sammy just watched, frozen.
"Can't I come?" Sammy spoke only to empty air, as Darien had already left...
End of Chapter 1
-Ultimate-
Darien sat bolt upright, sweat hanging on his face. A laughter... a maniacal laughter rang through his head. Serena had been with him, in his dream... when her face faded slowly into darkness, as his surroundings had done too. They had been walking together, when Serena suddenly looked frightened, within the dream, and then appeared to panic. Her face then faded away... He looked out his window at the moon shining brightly outside. He could only wonder why his dreams had shown him this...
"Serena..." Darien muttered to himself quietly. He turned away from his window, only to find one of his roses laying on his lap. His vision blurred, and he heard Serena's voice, calling him, asking for help. Her voice echoed within his mind, and he was surprised to find that the rose in his lap was slowly wilting, like something had gone horribly wrong... He climbed out of bed, and walked out the door. He climbed the apartment stair way, and reached the roof of his apartment building. He leapt from building to building, and reached Serena's home. He had to make sure she was ok... He had to make sure it was only a dream. He hopped off the roof, and peered into Serena's window, which was open, letting in the cool summer's breeze.
To Darien's horror, Serena was gone. Tons of possibilities flooded into his mind, of what could have happened to her. He leapt in through the window, and walked through the house. He noticed a door open, to the kitchen, with light pouring out. He walked up to the doorway, and looked around before entering. Serena lay alone on the couch, seemingly asleep. Serena's brother Sammy walked in, sleepy-eyed. He noticed Darien, surprised. He thought briefly.
"I think I remember you... you're Serena's boyfriend right?"
Never the less, Sammy explained.
"She's been like that for three days now. We're really worried, she won't wake up. We've taken her to the doctors, and the hospital, but no one's been able to do anything yet."
Darien looked at Serena, distressed.
"My dream... what's... happened?" Darien thought to himself. Sammy looked at Darien.
"Do you know what's happened?" Sammy asked questioningly.
Darien only shook his head no. Darien picked up Serena carefully, and Serena only slightly stirred.
"I believe I have an idea. I'll see what I can do..." Darien walked out through the door, and Sammy just watched, frozen.
"Can't I come?" Sammy spoke only to empty air, as Darien had already left...
End of Chapter 1
-Ultimate-