Okay. This is a new chappy and I'm sooooo happy! I hope you like this one
too for the people who were interested in the last one. This one is longer.
I PROMISE. Thank you. R&R plz.
Sincerely,
Samantha Sagara(Shadowbabygirl55555)
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It was so dark but yet so hot! Jim didn't understand. And he couldn't see a damn thing with a blindfold wrapped tightly around his eyes. Some rope around his wrists so he was restricted from using his hands. Jim felt like crying. Why did him and Gene always have to fight? If he could, he would go back, and apologize for him not to be kidnapped. Jim would rather apologize(even if it wasn't his fault)to that jerk Gene than get kidnapped! What would they want with him anyway? Certainly not ransom because Gene was broke. So were Suzuka, Melfina, and Aisha. That was common knowledge though. Jim tried to move around blindly on the cement floor. He wasn't sure where he was but he needed to get out because the heat was unbearable. So hot...burning against the concrete floor.....Jim was parched...and most of all confused.
But Jim couldn't do anything. He sat up against the wall next to something. It seemed like a hand buy his leg. Was there someone else in here? Jim sure hoped that they could see; unlike him. Jim felt around a bit more with his leg and felt a body. But it was naked. And cold. And it was dead. Jim suddenly scooted back, making sure he was far away from the body. Then he ran into someone else.
Dead. How many dead people were in here?! Jim started to really freak out. What the hell brought him here?! And what were they going to do to him??? Gene......help........
~~~~~~~~~~~~~With Gene and the others....
"Hey, Gene. Aren't you worried about Jim?" Melfina asked him as she set a plate of sunny side up eggs with a side of sausage. Gene ignored her question and dug in. "Gene? Did you hear me? Where did Jim go? I'm really worried. He hasn't come back, he could be hurt, or something else. Gene!"
He chewed up some more sausage. Then looked Melfina straight in the eyes.
"I don't give a damn about that little brat. He can run away, and I don't give a frickin' damn," Gene replied. Of course, he knew that he was lying in the bottom of his heart. Truthfully; he felt guilty. "Just give him a couple of more hours and he'll come back. He's eleven years old, smart, he can take care of himself. So stop yer' worrying about him."
Then Aisha came storming in.
"How dare you say that about Jim! Melfina is right! He might be hurt or something! And all you have to say is that you don't give a damn?! How could you say such a thing about your partner?!?" asked Aisha in a rage. She cared about Jim like a little brother so she wouldn't let anyone hurt him or put him down while she was around. "I don't know about you but me and Suzuka are going to go look for him."
"Go ahead. Waste your time," Gene replied.
Melfina walked over to Aisha. "I'll help too."
"You too?" Gene asked.
She nodded. She seemed to have a cold stare in her eyes. "I'll give you a call when we find him."
"You can just stay here if he just happens to come in," Aisha added.
"So? Gene is not coming?" Suzuka asked as she came into the kitchen, for she had listened to the disscusion just a second ago. And that Gene wasn't going. Which she thought that was just Gene being Gene. "I would have expected that he might have chosen to do so. Because he doesn't want to feel guilty if he finds out that Jim is hurt because of his stupid arguement that *he* started in the first place. Is that not right, Gene?"
"Shutup. I just feel that he'll be okay. Jim always comes back."
The girls were pretty sure that he was just trying to be the tough guy that he usually tried to be. Or was, they guessed, but either way he SHOULD come no matter what. That was his partner, not to mention his long time friend, who did get in a lot of arguements but that was besides the point.
"That is your choice. But I trully think your an idiot making a stupid mistake just because he's scared of what the other person might say," Suzuka finished.
And the girls started to walk away to go find their friend Jim. What Suzuka said was true. Gene was SORT(A/N- In his mind atleast) of scared of what Jim would say. Or if he was hurt. Then Gene would feel guilty. Blah, Blah, Blah. Have to apologize because of it too. But he did want to say he was sorry for starting that arguement over doing a job.
"Wait," Gene stood up from his chair as they reached just the outside of it. He sighed out "You win. I'll come too. You people really know how to lay down a guilt trip."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~With Jim.......
Jim was practically scared to death. He needed the others to come and help him. But not Gene. He was the whole reason why he was in this fucked up mess. Jim found atleast one place up against a wall that wasn't near a body, he had yelled and screamed for help, but obviously noyone heard him and noyone was alive in this hell room.
Then Jim heard footsteps ringing throughout the room. Someone was coming? Oh please let it be Aisha, Melfina, Suzuka, or Gene. Gene so he could bitch at him for leading to this.
It wasn't their voice. It was sort of high.. Had to be a girl.
"Hello there, James," the person said.
Jim felt the blindfold come off. It was dark, but not to dark. Light seeped through the door. Then he gasped at who he saw. He could hardly believe it! When he looked at the person, she had long black hair and red eyes. This was his MOTHER!
"M-Mother?! What the..." said Jim to her. This was soooo strange. She was supposed to be DEAD.
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How was that? It is longer than last time atleast! MWAHHAHA!!!! Well, thanks for reading. Hope you read the next chapter that will be up shortly. But first I need two more reviews before I put another up. I LOVE JIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He is my fav. Okay, R&R plz. Yes, I know, he don't look like his mother but OH WELL.
Sincerely,
Samantha Sagara(Shadowbabygirl5555)
Sincerely,
Samantha Sagara(Shadowbabygirl55555)
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It was so dark but yet so hot! Jim didn't understand. And he couldn't see a damn thing with a blindfold wrapped tightly around his eyes. Some rope around his wrists so he was restricted from using his hands. Jim felt like crying. Why did him and Gene always have to fight? If he could, he would go back, and apologize for him not to be kidnapped. Jim would rather apologize(even if it wasn't his fault)to that jerk Gene than get kidnapped! What would they want with him anyway? Certainly not ransom because Gene was broke. So were Suzuka, Melfina, and Aisha. That was common knowledge though. Jim tried to move around blindly on the cement floor. He wasn't sure where he was but he needed to get out because the heat was unbearable. So hot...burning against the concrete floor.....Jim was parched...and most of all confused.
But Jim couldn't do anything. He sat up against the wall next to something. It seemed like a hand buy his leg. Was there someone else in here? Jim sure hoped that they could see; unlike him. Jim felt around a bit more with his leg and felt a body. But it was naked. And cold. And it was dead. Jim suddenly scooted back, making sure he was far away from the body. Then he ran into someone else.
Dead. How many dead people were in here?! Jim started to really freak out. What the hell brought him here?! And what were they going to do to him??? Gene......help........
~~~~~~~~~~~~~With Gene and the others....
"Hey, Gene. Aren't you worried about Jim?" Melfina asked him as she set a plate of sunny side up eggs with a side of sausage. Gene ignored her question and dug in. "Gene? Did you hear me? Where did Jim go? I'm really worried. He hasn't come back, he could be hurt, or something else. Gene!"
He chewed up some more sausage. Then looked Melfina straight in the eyes.
"I don't give a damn about that little brat. He can run away, and I don't give a frickin' damn," Gene replied. Of course, he knew that he was lying in the bottom of his heart. Truthfully; he felt guilty. "Just give him a couple of more hours and he'll come back. He's eleven years old, smart, he can take care of himself. So stop yer' worrying about him."
Then Aisha came storming in.
"How dare you say that about Jim! Melfina is right! He might be hurt or something! And all you have to say is that you don't give a damn?! How could you say such a thing about your partner?!?" asked Aisha in a rage. She cared about Jim like a little brother so she wouldn't let anyone hurt him or put him down while she was around. "I don't know about you but me and Suzuka are going to go look for him."
"Go ahead. Waste your time," Gene replied.
Melfina walked over to Aisha. "I'll help too."
"You too?" Gene asked.
She nodded. She seemed to have a cold stare in her eyes. "I'll give you a call when we find him."
"You can just stay here if he just happens to come in," Aisha added.
"So? Gene is not coming?" Suzuka asked as she came into the kitchen, for she had listened to the disscusion just a second ago. And that Gene wasn't going. Which she thought that was just Gene being Gene. "I would have expected that he might have chosen to do so. Because he doesn't want to feel guilty if he finds out that Jim is hurt because of his stupid arguement that *he* started in the first place. Is that not right, Gene?"
"Shutup. I just feel that he'll be okay. Jim always comes back."
The girls were pretty sure that he was just trying to be the tough guy that he usually tried to be. Or was, they guessed, but either way he SHOULD come no matter what. That was his partner, not to mention his long time friend, who did get in a lot of arguements but that was besides the point.
"That is your choice. But I trully think your an idiot making a stupid mistake just because he's scared of what the other person might say," Suzuka finished.
And the girls started to walk away to go find their friend Jim. What Suzuka said was true. Gene was SORT(A/N- In his mind atleast) of scared of what Jim would say. Or if he was hurt. Then Gene would feel guilty. Blah, Blah, Blah. Have to apologize because of it too. But he did want to say he was sorry for starting that arguement over doing a job.
"Wait," Gene stood up from his chair as they reached just the outside of it. He sighed out "You win. I'll come too. You people really know how to lay down a guilt trip."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~With Jim.......
Jim was practically scared to death. He needed the others to come and help him. But not Gene. He was the whole reason why he was in this fucked up mess. Jim found atleast one place up against a wall that wasn't near a body, he had yelled and screamed for help, but obviously noyone heard him and noyone was alive in this hell room.
Then Jim heard footsteps ringing throughout the room. Someone was coming? Oh please let it be Aisha, Melfina, Suzuka, or Gene. Gene so he could bitch at him for leading to this.
It wasn't their voice. It was sort of high.. Had to be a girl.
"Hello there, James," the person said.
Jim felt the blindfold come off. It was dark, but not to dark. Light seeped through the door. Then he gasped at who he saw. He could hardly believe it! When he looked at the person, she had long black hair and red eyes. This was his MOTHER!
"M-Mother?! What the..." said Jim to her. This was soooo strange. She was supposed to be DEAD.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ End of chapter
How was that? It is longer than last time atleast! MWAHHAHA!!!! Well, thanks for reading. Hope you read the next chapter that will be up shortly. But first I need two more reviews before I put another up. I LOVE JIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He is my fav. Okay, R&R plz. Yes, I know, he don't look like his mother but OH WELL.
Sincerely,
Samantha Sagara(Shadowbabygirl5555)
