***To all my readers. I've read another story (Of Love and War by
Butterfly{It's really good, read it}) and her apostrophes are like mine and
she said that she found out that it was fanfiction's problem and that she
couldn't fix it so I guess my apostrophes will be a little messed up. I
hope you'll bear with me and keep reading and reviewing. Thanks.
Kat-Thanks for your review. I'm glad you like the story. I've got lots of surprises planned, so keep reading.
Cerridwen-Thanks for another review. It's great hearing what you think. My first reviewer *tear* lol. Keep reading and reviewing please.
Anastas-Thanks for your review. I love getting new reviewers.yay. Sorry I get excited easily .lol. Please keep reading and reviewing.
Sarah Kate- I'm glad you like this. Thanks for your second review. I try and get a chapter up each day or at least every other day. I know they are kind of short but I'll try and put more details into them to make them longer but I try and end them where they are a cliffhanger so everyone had to wonder. Speaking of which I have some major cliffhangers coming up... (Hmm got to wonder)..
Angel Fish-Your one of my favorite people. You're still reviewing I'm so happy. Thanks a ton. I know Spot is being really mean but he has many personalities, and I'm with you on Raven, she really is not getting the good end of the deal.
Chapter 11
Raven got back to the bunkroom and went and laid on her bed. She lay there thinking for a while. After some time, she heard the newsies heading back in. Rolling over, she closed her eyes, and pretended she was asleep.
"Wonda why Raven walked out like dat?" the voice sounded like it belonged to Blink.
"She's here," Race said "But she's sleeping."
"Spot neva came back in afta he followed her."
"Wonda how long dey were out dere."
"And wonda what dey were doin."
"Raven wouldn't do dat, she's not like dat." Raven's eyes misted, at least Mush still believed in her. Jack walked in and told all of them to go to bed. She couldn't fall asleep and she just laid there for a while.
A hand came up and covered her mouth. "We'se goin up to da roof. Be quiet or da boys will wake up." Jack's voice cut through the thoughts in her head. She nodded and sat up. He took his hand off her mouth and motioned to the window. They climbed up the fire escape and sat up there.
"Ya wanna tell me why youse walked out on us..without even a "Scuse me" or "Gotta go"?"
"I'se sorry Jack, I didn't mean ta walk out on ya jus the singing brought back memories." She shivered. "I don't really want ta talk bout it."
"It's okay, ya don't have ta tell me bout it."
"Thanks" They fell silent for a while.
"Did Spot come out dere afta ya?"
"Yea"
"Youse goin ta tell me anymore den dat? Like why he wouldn't come back in."
"No." she replied after a pause. "There's not much to tell. We talked and he humiliated me. Again. It was worse because I told him stuff I'se neva told anyone else." She left out the part where he comforted her; she didn't want to think about being in his arms and sitting on his lap. It just had felt so.right.
"Promise not ta soak me if I say somethin ya might not want ta hear?"
She laughed softly "No."
Jack laughed. "Eva though dat Spot likes ya?" She snorted. " Maybe he's scared dat ya don't like him back, he'd neva admit it but it is a possibility." He paused and looked her in the eyes. "Maybe he's scared because youse said ya hated him because of what ya heard him say. What if he keeps teasin ya and makin ya mad because he doesn't know how else ta talk to ya."
"Maybe?" It was half question, half statement.
"Think bout dat. How's ya leg?"
"It's okay. Spot kinda grabbed da bruise, but it don't hoit dat bad."
"Oh. Sorry bout today, when we split up I couldn't find ya again."
"It's alright."
"Now let's go ta bed. We'se got papes ta sell tamorraw." She agreed and they went back down into the bunkroom.
A/N: Maybe? I hate that word. It is one of the worst words in the English language I have to say. Lol. Makes you wonder. Please review. Hit that little button, humor me please.
Kat-Thanks for your review. I'm glad you like the story. I've got lots of surprises planned, so keep reading.
Cerridwen-Thanks for another review. It's great hearing what you think. My first reviewer *tear* lol. Keep reading and reviewing please.
Anastas-Thanks for your review. I love getting new reviewers.yay. Sorry I get excited easily .lol. Please keep reading and reviewing.
Sarah Kate- I'm glad you like this. Thanks for your second review. I try and get a chapter up each day or at least every other day. I know they are kind of short but I'll try and put more details into them to make them longer but I try and end them where they are a cliffhanger so everyone had to wonder. Speaking of which I have some major cliffhangers coming up... (Hmm got to wonder)..
Angel Fish-Your one of my favorite people. You're still reviewing I'm so happy. Thanks a ton. I know Spot is being really mean but he has many personalities, and I'm with you on Raven, she really is not getting the good end of the deal.
Chapter 11
Raven got back to the bunkroom and went and laid on her bed. She lay there thinking for a while. After some time, she heard the newsies heading back in. Rolling over, she closed her eyes, and pretended she was asleep.
"Wonda why Raven walked out like dat?" the voice sounded like it belonged to Blink.
"She's here," Race said "But she's sleeping."
"Spot neva came back in afta he followed her."
"Wonda how long dey were out dere."
"And wonda what dey were doin."
"Raven wouldn't do dat, she's not like dat." Raven's eyes misted, at least Mush still believed in her. Jack walked in and told all of them to go to bed. She couldn't fall asleep and she just laid there for a while.
A hand came up and covered her mouth. "We'se goin up to da roof. Be quiet or da boys will wake up." Jack's voice cut through the thoughts in her head. She nodded and sat up. He took his hand off her mouth and motioned to the window. They climbed up the fire escape and sat up there.
"Ya wanna tell me why youse walked out on us..without even a "Scuse me" or "Gotta go"?"
"I'se sorry Jack, I didn't mean ta walk out on ya jus the singing brought back memories." She shivered. "I don't really want ta talk bout it."
"It's okay, ya don't have ta tell me bout it."
"Thanks" They fell silent for a while.
"Did Spot come out dere afta ya?"
"Yea"
"Youse goin ta tell me anymore den dat? Like why he wouldn't come back in."
"No." she replied after a pause. "There's not much to tell. We talked and he humiliated me. Again. It was worse because I told him stuff I'se neva told anyone else." She left out the part where he comforted her; she didn't want to think about being in his arms and sitting on his lap. It just had felt so.right.
"Promise not ta soak me if I say somethin ya might not want ta hear?"
She laughed softly "No."
Jack laughed. "Eva though dat Spot likes ya?" She snorted. " Maybe he's scared dat ya don't like him back, he'd neva admit it but it is a possibility." He paused and looked her in the eyes. "Maybe he's scared because youse said ya hated him because of what ya heard him say. What if he keeps teasin ya and makin ya mad because he doesn't know how else ta talk to ya."
"Maybe?" It was half question, half statement.
"Think bout dat. How's ya leg?"
"It's okay. Spot kinda grabbed da bruise, but it don't hoit dat bad."
"Oh. Sorry bout today, when we split up I couldn't find ya again."
"It's alright."
"Now let's go ta bed. We'se got papes ta sell tamorraw." She agreed and they went back down into the bunkroom.
A/N: Maybe? I hate that word. It is one of the worst words in the English language I have to say. Lol. Makes you wonder. Please review. Hit that little button, humor me please.