Aurora Conlon-Of course. Spottie is the best. I'll be updating soon.
Angel Fish7- I hate the number at the end of my name too. I know it's only a two but it's still annoying. I know I love it when guys spill out their feelings. Thanks for another review.
Brooklyn Grl- hey it doesn't matter if it's a word I make up words all the time. Lol. Yes I'm trying to add more detail and make the chapters longer, I'm glad you like the extra effort. Thanks fro the review.
Sarah Kate-I try to always leave with a cliff hanger. It's just so so evil. I'm evil (lol). Thank you, I don't think I'm a great writer but I'm okay. Thanks for another review. Hope you have/had fun at the beach.
Anglachel-You're probably right to be laughing. I know it's about time they start to get closer. Thanks for the review.
Anastas- it would be kind of different to get a paperweight thrown at you. Then of course if it hits you in the head and you pass out then you barely get to register the fact that someone actually threw a paperweight at you. Oh well, sorry I just kind of started talking. Anyways thanks for a review.
Erin Sailor Ditz- Wow. Thanks so much for your review. I read your story one night when I couldn't sleep also. I'll write a review also because I have to reread it, I haven't read it in a while. You guys have to go to school early at least to me but whatever. Yes kissing always seems to fix everything. lol. I'm glad you really like my story. I thought it was quite a funny cliffhanger and I really liked that last line but that's just me and I also know what's coming.
Chapter 22
Raven sat there and glared at him, her breathing sounded loud inside her own head. Spot looked at her shocked.
"Oh shit." he said slowly. "Ya hoid all of dat didn't ya?"
Raven just looked at him. "What do ya t'ink?"
Spot stood up furious. "Why didn't ya say somet'ing?"
"It was more fun ta listen ta ya Conlon. Neva seen ya like dat."
"Youse probably neva goin ta again."
Raven smiled, "Well.." She said slowly. "What if I ask really nicely?"
Spot replied. "Ya got ta see me when I was unguarded. It wasn't fair."
"Who plays fair anymore? Coitainly not Spot Conlon."
Spot growled low in his throat getting angrier by the second. Raven didn't appear to be fazed. She slowly drew off the blankets piled on her, sat up and stepped off the bed.
"What if I said I liked that side of you?"
"Well ya still probably won't see it again."
"Why not?" she stuck her lower lip out and pouted. Spot noticed how tantalizing she looked and could barely restrain himself.
"My boys wouldn't respect me."
"So.?" Raven drew out the word in a purr.
"Raven." Spot clenched his teeth.
"What?" she asked innocently.
"Don't tempt me." he warned.
"I'm a big goil, I'se cin handle myself and any man that wants to try and take me on." Raven slid behind him and started massaging his shoulders.
Spot involuntarily felt himself relax at her touch. She continued massaging his back moving her way down his back to where his shirt was tucked into his pants.
"Raven, I love ya ta death." he broke off as he felt her stop. He turned her around and slid his hands around her waist. She stopped playing and grew serious. Spot looked down at her and slowly lowered his head until his lips brushed hers.
Raven felt sparks explode in her head and an electrical feeling spread throughout her limbs. Spot pulled away and looked at her, waiting for her reaction. She didn't pause just pulled him in for another kiss.
Spot finished it and looked at her shocked.
"Wha?" she asked, noticing his look.
"Just a second ago I was screaming at ya and a couple a hours ago I broke ya rib. An now look at ya." Spot motioned to her, and the fact she was standing up.
"Well I wouldn't be like this if it weren't for you." Raven pulled away a little, stunned he was acting like this.
"I know. Ya just know how guilty I feel. I don't want ta use ya just because ya know dat I'm sorry and ya feel sorry fer me."
"No one could eva pity ya Spot." Raven looked at him.
"Yea dey could an I neva want ta lose respect wit me boys."
"So dats all I'll be, just somet'ing dat helps ya lose respect an den youse will end up hating me fer it." Raven couldn't continue, she had thought she had broken through the walls around his heart.
"No dats not it."
"What den? I thought dat ya actually cared. It was nice seeing dat ya cin actually care fer once. I loved y all da more fer it. An now youse jus pushin me away again."
Spot pulled her closer. "I don't want ta push ya away. I want ya ta come closer."
"Do ya?" Raven asked softly, afraid of the answer.
"Oh yes, very much so. I do love ya an I was serious when I said all dose t'ings." Spot leaned in close. "I know I was a jack ass but will ya still be my goil."
Raven leaned in and kissed him. "Hell yea." Spot smiled and they kissed again. They kissed several more times and then took a second to breathe. Before long they were kissing again. Spot opened his mouth and slipped his tongue in hers. Their tongues had a small battle of wills and Raven clung to Spot, ready to fall to the floor.
Spot pulled away with great difficulty. "Heah" he led her to the bad. "Youse will be more comfortable heah." He gave her a wicked smile and his eyes met hers and she laughed. Spot slid into the bed next to her and pulled her into his arms.
Raven put her lips to his and slid her hands over Spot's back. Spot kissed her and barely noticed as she was pulling his shirt over his head. They stopped kissing for a second as Raven felt the shirt she was wearing being pulled over her head.
Seeming like it was taking an eternity, Raven undressed Spot as Spot undressed her as both were trying to kiss each other at the same time. They couldn't seem to get their hands off of each other.
"I love ya ya know dat?"
"I know, now shut up." Spot laughed and they spent the rest of the night enjoying their new love. Their hands explored each other as if they were a forgotten island that had been waiting forever for this. Spot rolled on top of her and kissed her, his tongue seeking entrance that Raven gladly gave. Spot opened his mouth to say something but Raven just kissed him and he forgot what he was going to say.
Consumed by their passion, they never noticed as Slip came in once to see how things were going. He was afraid Spot had tried to kill her too, it couldn't have been farther from the truth. Knowing how furious Spot would be if he knew Slip had come in, Slip made a hasty retreat, closing the door firmly behind him.
After several hours of lovemaking, Raven had fallen asleep in Spot's arms. He had just woken up and barely stirred but Raven felt it and also woke up.
"What happened ta da clothes I'se was wearing when I came heah?" Raven asked having wondered that question for a while.
Spot looked at her and laughed. "It doesn't really mattah now does it?"
"Youse stripped me?"
"Not entirely.well except for a couple of hours ago." Spot grinned. Raven slapped him.
"WHAT WAS DAT FOAH?!?"
"Foah seeing me naked."
"I'se don't undastand. I just spent da whole night wit ya naked in me arms."
"BUT I'SE DIDN'T AGREE TO IT." Raven slapped him again.
"Would ya quit doin dat already, it stings like a bitch?" He grabbed her wrists and rolled on top of her.
Raven started laughing and then kissed him. "I'll only be a good goil if ya promise ta be my jailer and punish me appropriately."
"Wouldn't have it any uddah way." He smirked and then leaned down to kiss her again. Raven complied and they played until 5:00 came around.
A/n: This chapter is for Raven46. She helped me sooo much on this one. *claps* okay ya know I love ya. Please review. What do you think?
Angel Fish7- I hate the number at the end of my name too. I know it's only a two but it's still annoying. I know I love it when guys spill out their feelings. Thanks for another review.
Brooklyn Grl- hey it doesn't matter if it's a word I make up words all the time. Lol. Yes I'm trying to add more detail and make the chapters longer, I'm glad you like the extra effort. Thanks fro the review.
Sarah Kate-I try to always leave with a cliff hanger. It's just so so evil. I'm evil (lol). Thank you, I don't think I'm a great writer but I'm okay. Thanks for another review. Hope you have/had fun at the beach.
Anglachel-You're probably right to be laughing. I know it's about time they start to get closer. Thanks for the review.
Anastas- it would be kind of different to get a paperweight thrown at you. Then of course if it hits you in the head and you pass out then you barely get to register the fact that someone actually threw a paperweight at you. Oh well, sorry I just kind of started talking. Anyways thanks for a review.
Erin Sailor Ditz- Wow. Thanks so much for your review. I read your story one night when I couldn't sleep also. I'll write a review also because I have to reread it, I haven't read it in a while. You guys have to go to school early at least to me but whatever. Yes kissing always seems to fix everything. lol. I'm glad you really like my story. I thought it was quite a funny cliffhanger and I really liked that last line but that's just me and I also know what's coming.
Chapter 22
Raven sat there and glared at him, her breathing sounded loud inside her own head. Spot looked at her shocked.
"Oh shit." he said slowly. "Ya hoid all of dat didn't ya?"
Raven just looked at him. "What do ya t'ink?"
Spot stood up furious. "Why didn't ya say somet'ing?"
"It was more fun ta listen ta ya Conlon. Neva seen ya like dat."
"Youse probably neva goin ta again."
Raven smiled, "Well.." She said slowly. "What if I ask really nicely?"
Spot replied. "Ya got ta see me when I was unguarded. It wasn't fair."
"Who plays fair anymore? Coitainly not Spot Conlon."
Spot growled low in his throat getting angrier by the second. Raven didn't appear to be fazed. She slowly drew off the blankets piled on her, sat up and stepped off the bed.
"What if I said I liked that side of you?"
"Well ya still probably won't see it again."
"Why not?" she stuck her lower lip out and pouted. Spot noticed how tantalizing she looked and could barely restrain himself.
"My boys wouldn't respect me."
"So.?" Raven drew out the word in a purr.
"Raven." Spot clenched his teeth.
"What?" she asked innocently.
"Don't tempt me." he warned.
"I'm a big goil, I'se cin handle myself and any man that wants to try and take me on." Raven slid behind him and started massaging his shoulders.
Spot involuntarily felt himself relax at her touch. She continued massaging his back moving her way down his back to where his shirt was tucked into his pants.
"Raven, I love ya ta death." he broke off as he felt her stop. He turned her around and slid his hands around her waist. She stopped playing and grew serious. Spot looked down at her and slowly lowered his head until his lips brushed hers.
Raven felt sparks explode in her head and an electrical feeling spread throughout her limbs. Spot pulled away and looked at her, waiting for her reaction. She didn't pause just pulled him in for another kiss.
Spot finished it and looked at her shocked.
"Wha?" she asked, noticing his look.
"Just a second ago I was screaming at ya and a couple a hours ago I broke ya rib. An now look at ya." Spot motioned to her, and the fact she was standing up.
"Well I wouldn't be like this if it weren't for you." Raven pulled away a little, stunned he was acting like this.
"I know. Ya just know how guilty I feel. I don't want ta use ya just because ya know dat I'm sorry and ya feel sorry fer me."
"No one could eva pity ya Spot." Raven looked at him.
"Yea dey could an I neva want ta lose respect wit me boys."
"So dats all I'll be, just somet'ing dat helps ya lose respect an den youse will end up hating me fer it." Raven couldn't continue, she had thought she had broken through the walls around his heart.
"No dats not it."
"What den? I thought dat ya actually cared. It was nice seeing dat ya cin actually care fer once. I loved y all da more fer it. An now youse jus pushin me away again."
Spot pulled her closer. "I don't want ta push ya away. I want ya ta come closer."
"Do ya?" Raven asked softly, afraid of the answer.
"Oh yes, very much so. I do love ya an I was serious when I said all dose t'ings." Spot leaned in close. "I know I was a jack ass but will ya still be my goil."
Raven leaned in and kissed him. "Hell yea." Spot smiled and they kissed again. They kissed several more times and then took a second to breathe. Before long they were kissing again. Spot opened his mouth and slipped his tongue in hers. Their tongues had a small battle of wills and Raven clung to Spot, ready to fall to the floor.
Spot pulled away with great difficulty. "Heah" he led her to the bad. "Youse will be more comfortable heah." He gave her a wicked smile and his eyes met hers and she laughed. Spot slid into the bed next to her and pulled her into his arms.
Raven put her lips to his and slid her hands over Spot's back. Spot kissed her and barely noticed as she was pulling his shirt over his head. They stopped kissing for a second as Raven felt the shirt she was wearing being pulled over her head.
Seeming like it was taking an eternity, Raven undressed Spot as Spot undressed her as both were trying to kiss each other at the same time. They couldn't seem to get their hands off of each other.
"I love ya ya know dat?"
"I know, now shut up." Spot laughed and they spent the rest of the night enjoying their new love. Their hands explored each other as if they were a forgotten island that had been waiting forever for this. Spot rolled on top of her and kissed her, his tongue seeking entrance that Raven gladly gave. Spot opened his mouth to say something but Raven just kissed him and he forgot what he was going to say.
Consumed by their passion, they never noticed as Slip came in once to see how things were going. He was afraid Spot had tried to kill her too, it couldn't have been farther from the truth. Knowing how furious Spot would be if he knew Slip had come in, Slip made a hasty retreat, closing the door firmly behind him.
After several hours of lovemaking, Raven had fallen asleep in Spot's arms. He had just woken up and barely stirred but Raven felt it and also woke up.
"What happened ta da clothes I'se was wearing when I came heah?" Raven asked having wondered that question for a while.
Spot looked at her and laughed. "It doesn't really mattah now does it?"
"Youse stripped me?"
"Not entirely.well except for a couple of hours ago." Spot grinned. Raven slapped him.
"WHAT WAS DAT FOAH?!?"
"Foah seeing me naked."
"I'se don't undastand. I just spent da whole night wit ya naked in me arms."
"BUT I'SE DIDN'T AGREE TO IT." Raven slapped him again.
"Would ya quit doin dat already, it stings like a bitch?" He grabbed her wrists and rolled on top of her.
Raven started laughing and then kissed him. "I'll only be a good goil if ya promise ta be my jailer and punish me appropriately."
"Wouldn't have it any uddah way." He smirked and then leaned down to kiss her again. Raven complied and they played until 5:00 came around.
A/n: This chapter is for Raven46. She helped me sooo much on this one. *claps* okay ya know I love ya. Please review. What do you think?