Pages-Well you finally read it. About time. Glad you like my story and I
know that chapter 22 shocked you which was kind of funny to hear you. I
only make the cliffhangers to make you and scribs mad and well my other
readers too (you guys know I love you). Just because I am how do we put
this..not quite as enamored by Newsies as you are doesn't mean that my
story had to be horrible. Lol. I got you to cry, ah technically that's not
hard.just kidding but if I were to cry..now that's a different story. One
of our friends would have to hurt me pretty badly to make me cry but you
know me..but Anyways (lol) kind of getting off the subject there. Don't
yell at me or I won't finish it for you (just kidding SO {the word [that
you and Casey never really used] lol} that all you other readers will
know). Alright enough said.
Merp- I'm the exact same way, everyone who knows me knows that I don't cry. This chapter almost moved me to tears myself. I try to update as fast as I can. Tonight my teachers deemed that they would be nice (cough huge surprise cough) so I can type more of the story. Thanks for the review.
Snorts90-Thanks for the review. This is one of my favorite chapters too but I like them all because I wrote them.
Spider Chick-I don't always make people die, give me some credit here. Chatterbox is kinda cute, exactly the opposite of all my siblings lol. Thanks for the review.
Angel Fish7-Thanks for another review. Keep reading to find out if she dies.dun dun dun. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and of course Spot although he had acted (to put it mildly) a little um stupid (we love him anyways) he had to come to the rescue. I love fight scenes. They are so easy to picture in my head (hmm everyone now knows what I think about .well there's other stuff okay I'm stopping my mouth now) but so hard to write out on paper type out whatever. I do my best though (line from Medda's song runs through my head okay enough Brittany. Okay all in favor of me losing my mind say aye.)
Dreamer Conlon- Why can't she die though? Everyone says "no she can't die". Why? What's so important about her? Okay she's my character I love her to death I'm not being this callous okay that didn't make sense whatever I'll cut this response short and just get to the damn chapter lol. Thanks for the review.
Sarah Kate-Another review. It's a good day for me. Okay guys are soo cute when they cry because they like never show emotions and it's like really cute and well just cute. Yea well I'm starting to get really impatient with this story so I'm trying not to rush things too much. Yea but anyways story time...
Chapter 27
"Nooo, Raven please sweetheart. Talk to me. Say something anything. Please. Come on please." Raven just lay there limply. Tonya whimpered in the background bringing Spot back to the present.
"We have to go Tonya lets go. We have to get to a hospital." Tonya nodded and just looked at him. They stood there a moment.
"Not trying to say this in a mean way but I don't know where the nearest damn hospital is."
"Oh" she replied sheepishly. "This way." She took off running through a field of corn. Spot looked at it funny and followed. The stalks of the corn cut into Spot's legs as he pounded across the ground. Time seemed to stand still as they flew over the ground.
The three covered the ground slowly, each mile seeming to take longer than the last. Spot glanced down at Raven, she appeared to be like the delicate paperweight he had thrown at her. So fragile. She looked like she'd shatter just like the glass paperweight.
"Tonya" he yelled. She slowed and fell back.
"What?" she gasped, having trouble breathing.
"How much farther? Raven's not goin ta make it much longer." He gasped also because as used to the streets of New York as he was this was a much harder task, not that he'd ever admit it to anyone.
"We'se getting dere."
"We'se aways a way." Spot commented.
"Not exactly, I just don't know how much longer we'se goin ta be able ta go. The nearest hospital is about 2 miles."
"Then let's get goin."
"How are we goin ta pay? Will they even see her?"
"Don't worry bout it." Spot took off in the direction she had been leading them.
"Spot wait up."
"Hurry." He yelled over his shoulder but regardless slowed a bit so she could pass him and keep on going.
The two miles seemed to take eternity to Spot. Each step was agony. At the same time each step was one second closer to Raven living or dying.
"Raven, we'se takin ya ta da doctor. He's goin ta help ya. Hang on we'se almost dere." How Spot kept running was beyond him. He didn't even know how Tonya with her short legs kept on running. They finally made it to the town and they dashed down the main street to where it intersected.
"This way." Tonya motioned to Spot and he changed direction quickly and almost fell but he surprisingly managed to stay upright.
"Heah" Tonya skidded to a halt outside a building but stepped up and opened the door for Spot. He walked in sideways, careful of bumping her head. After all the jostling from trying to get her he didn't really think it would matter but still.
The receptionist glanced at them and muttered in a monotone voice "Can I help you?"
Tonya stepped up to the desk. "My sister has been cut very badly. She's lost a lot of blood. Can you help me?"
"Sure dear. Let me see when the doctor can see you." The receptionist glanced down at her book. "It looks like the doctors busy with some important people right now I'm afraid you'll have to wait a bit."
"How long?" Tonya questioned.
"A couple of hours." Spot had come up behind Tonya in time to hear the last few sentences.
"Excuse me." Spot interrupted.
"Yes s..." the woman looked him up and down and choked back the sir.
"As you can see in my arms is this little girl's sister and my girl. You will help her."
"As I said before um s... as I said before you will have to wait."
"Can you not see that she's bleeding on your damn white floor?"
"Alright I'll see what I can do."
"No." Spot bit off. "Ya will get a damn doctor to see her right now or I will fucking go get a damn doctor and if ya won't let me past then I will fucking kill ya." Spot grew calm, but his eyes locked on the receptionist's. He said each word slowly and very pronounced. "Understand? Might you have any questions?"
"Yes I feel privileged enough to ask a question. Who do you think you are to order me around?"
"Get a damn doctor now or I will personally find one myself." Spot roared.
The receptionist, knowing when she had been bested, left to assumedly go get a doctor. Spot followed her motioning for Tonya to sit and wait.
"Here boy. This here doctor will help you."
"Bout time." He muttered under his breath. Spot strode in with Raven in his arms and laid her gently on the table.
A man came up behind him and looked at Raven. "This doesn't look good. I'm not going to give her a good chance of survival."
"She's strong. She'll make it."
"I'm not sure anyone could make it, let alone a slip of a girl. I'm sorry son, I'll do all I can but she's lost a lot of blood and things aren't looking good."
"You have to help her." Spot still had tears flowing down his face. "She can't die, she just can't."
"Here let me put her in this other room and I'll see what I can do alright son?"
"Do whatever you can."
"Bring her this way." The doctor went out of the room and through a door. Spot picked up Raven and followed the doctor. The man was in a room with a single bed. "Lay her here." Spot complied and stepped back as the doctor moved forward. He yelled down the hall for some supplies and then turned back to Spot as he waited.
"Why don't you go out to the waiting room and wait? You really can't do much here and only time will tell. I can't really give her much of a chance but-." He was cut off by Spot.
"You'll fix her."
"I'll do what I can. Now go."
Spot bent down and kissed Raven on the lips. A tear rolled down his cheek and fell on her lips. He kissed it away and with one last glance back, walked out of the room.
A/n: hope you guys are happy for a while. I'll try and get up more soon. In the meantime if you review I'll get it up faster...
Merp- I'm the exact same way, everyone who knows me knows that I don't cry. This chapter almost moved me to tears myself. I try to update as fast as I can. Tonight my teachers deemed that they would be nice (cough huge surprise cough) so I can type more of the story. Thanks for the review.
Snorts90-Thanks for the review. This is one of my favorite chapters too but I like them all because I wrote them.
Spider Chick-I don't always make people die, give me some credit here. Chatterbox is kinda cute, exactly the opposite of all my siblings lol. Thanks for the review.
Angel Fish7-Thanks for another review. Keep reading to find out if she dies.dun dun dun. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and of course Spot although he had acted (to put it mildly) a little um stupid (we love him anyways) he had to come to the rescue. I love fight scenes. They are so easy to picture in my head (hmm everyone now knows what I think about .well there's other stuff okay I'm stopping my mouth now) but so hard to write out on paper type out whatever. I do my best though (line from Medda's song runs through my head okay enough Brittany. Okay all in favor of me losing my mind say aye.)
Dreamer Conlon- Why can't she die though? Everyone says "no she can't die". Why? What's so important about her? Okay she's my character I love her to death I'm not being this callous okay that didn't make sense whatever I'll cut this response short and just get to the damn chapter lol. Thanks for the review.
Sarah Kate-Another review. It's a good day for me. Okay guys are soo cute when they cry because they like never show emotions and it's like really cute and well just cute. Yea well I'm starting to get really impatient with this story so I'm trying not to rush things too much. Yea but anyways story time...
Chapter 27
"Nooo, Raven please sweetheart. Talk to me. Say something anything. Please. Come on please." Raven just lay there limply. Tonya whimpered in the background bringing Spot back to the present.
"We have to go Tonya lets go. We have to get to a hospital." Tonya nodded and just looked at him. They stood there a moment.
"Not trying to say this in a mean way but I don't know where the nearest damn hospital is."
"Oh" she replied sheepishly. "This way." She took off running through a field of corn. Spot looked at it funny and followed. The stalks of the corn cut into Spot's legs as he pounded across the ground. Time seemed to stand still as they flew over the ground.
The three covered the ground slowly, each mile seeming to take longer than the last. Spot glanced down at Raven, she appeared to be like the delicate paperweight he had thrown at her. So fragile. She looked like she'd shatter just like the glass paperweight.
"Tonya" he yelled. She slowed and fell back.
"What?" she gasped, having trouble breathing.
"How much farther? Raven's not goin ta make it much longer." He gasped also because as used to the streets of New York as he was this was a much harder task, not that he'd ever admit it to anyone.
"We'se getting dere."
"We'se aways a way." Spot commented.
"Not exactly, I just don't know how much longer we'se goin ta be able ta go. The nearest hospital is about 2 miles."
"Then let's get goin."
"How are we goin ta pay? Will they even see her?"
"Don't worry bout it." Spot took off in the direction she had been leading them.
"Spot wait up."
"Hurry." He yelled over his shoulder but regardless slowed a bit so she could pass him and keep on going.
The two miles seemed to take eternity to Spot. Each step was agony. At the same time each step was one second closer to Raven living or dying.
"Raven, we'se takin ya ta da doctor. He's goin ta help ya. Hang on we'se almost dere." How Spot kept running was beyond him. He didn't even know how Tonya with her short legs kept on running. They finally made it to the town and they dashed down the main street to where it intersected.
"This way." Tonya motioned to Spot and he changed direction quickly and almost fell but he surprisingly managed to stay upright.
"Heah" Tonya skidded to a halt outside a building but stepped up and opened the door for Spot. He walked in sideways, careful of bumping her head. After all the jostling from trying to get her he didn't really think it would matter but still.
The receptionist glanced at them and muttered in a monotone voice "Can I help you?"
Tonya stepped up to the desk. "My sister has been cut very badly. She's lost a lot of blood. Can you help me?"
"Sure dear. Let me see when the doctor can see you." The receptionist glanced down at her book. "It looks like the doctors busy with some important people right now I'm afraid you'll have to wait a bit."
"How long?" Tonya questioned.
"A couple of hours." Spot had come up behind Tonya in time to hear the last few sentences.
"Excuse me." Spot interrupted.
"Yes s..." the woman looked him up and down and choked back the sir.
"As you can see in my arms is this little girl's sister and my girl. You will help her."
"As I said before um s... as I said before you will have to wait."
"Can you not see that she's bleeding on your damn white floor?"
"Alright I'll see what I can do."
"No." Spot bit off. "Ya will get a damn doctor to see her right now or I will fucking go get a damn doctor and if ya won't let me past then I will fucking kill ya." Spot grew calm, but his eyes locked on the receptionist's. He said each word slowly and very pronounced. "Understand? Might you have any questions?"
"Yes I feel privileged enough to ask a question. Who do you think you are to order me around?"
"Get a damn doctor now or I will personally find one myself." Spot roared.
The receptionist, knowing when she had been bested, left to assumedly go get a doctor. Spot followed her motioning for Tonya to sit and wait.
"Here boy. This here doctor will help you."
"Bout time." He muttered under his breath. Spot strode in with Raven in his arms and laid her gently on the table.
A man came up behind him and looked at Raven. "This doesn't look good. I'm not going to give her a good chance of survival."
"She's strong. She'll make it."
"I'm not sure anyone could make it, let alone a slip of a girl. I'm sorry son, I'll do all I can but she's lost a lot of blood and things aren't looking good."
"You have to help her." Spot still had tears flowing down his face. "She can't die, she just can't."
"Here let me put her in this other room and I'll see what I can do alright son?"
"Do whatever you can."
"Bring her this way." The doctor went out of the room and through a door. Spot picked up Raven and followed the doctor. The man was in a room with a single bed. "Lay her here." Spot complied and stepped back as the doctor moved forward. He yelled down the hall for some supplies and then turned back to Spot as he waited.
"Why don't you go out to the waiting room and wait? You really can't do much here and only time will tell. I can't really give her much of a chance but-." He was cut off by Spot.
"You'll fix her."
"I'll do what I can. Now go."
Spot bent down and kissed Raven on the lips. A tear rolled down his cheek and fell on her lips. He kissed it away and with one last glance back, walked out of the room.
A/n: hope you guys are happy for a while. I'll try and get up more soon. In the meantime if you review I'll get it up faster...