Thank you, all for such kind reviews! -
Imoen- it was a spellbook, the spell split him into 2 people.
Whitetail- I thought that was kinda funny 2! ^^
Lady Penguin - thanks! ^_^
Sea Breeze - I'm glad you like it!
Sailor Flower - Kudos on cool pen name! I was trying to make it different.
Riven - I was trying to make my story go as far from kik/inu as possible! Thank you^_~
Anime Demon- Coming from you Em, that means a lot. See ya later!
Enchanted Pink Jade- Thank you, I enjoyed your questions + long review b/c it means you took an interest in the story. Kagome did say a spell; in this chapter you will see what it was! I noticed that error 2, but this chapter I will try to be better!
If I didn't thank you personally, it means I didn't get it in time. I will try to give you credit next time! Thank you taking time to review, it was greatly appreciated.
I just want to say that I hate the name Inu-demon, but I couldn't think of a better one at the time, so just try to ignore it, like I do.
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All of Me
Ch.2 ~ Spellbook
"H..he..ll..o, milord." One of Inu-demon's servants greeted the king, as he walked past him. The king paid no attention to the speaker, and kept going. He passed a long line of servants who bowed at his feet. He could smell the fear generating off of them, and it made him extremely happy.
The demon went to his battlefield, and found several of his male slaves already waiting there. His head servant, Yuri, rushed over to him, with a finely decorated katana in hand. He bowed before his master, and humbly offered it to him. The lord snatched the blade, and looked over its craftsmanship. Inu-demon slashed the servant's arm, and the slave's pained expression could plainly be seen, but still he said nothing. He growled in disgust, and threw the sword carelessly into the mud. "It's useless! I said I wanted the BEST, and YOU will not sleep until I get it." The king snarled at Yuri, "Take these men, and have them beheaded. I don't how they look. They're filthy."
"But, Your Grace, these are your practice fighters. You need these men to exercise your fighting skills." The little creature tried to persuade his master.(think jaken)
"Fine, have it your way, but if you don't find me a sword that I can actually use, then it will be your head."
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"Hello, grandmother." Kagome called to the old woman, who was still cleaning their hut. Kaede smiled at the girl, and continued her work.
"Met that boy, did ye?" The old woman asked, as she saw Kagome's happy smile. At her grandmother's words, Kagome blushed lightly, then became puzzled.
"How did you know I met someone?"
The old woman looked at her granddaughter, and thought, "I really don't know."
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Inuyasha felt sore all over. He got up from his futon, and stretched out. He smelled something cooking, and turned to see his friend Miroku cooking. The priest's son turned around, and handed Inuyasha a bowl of food. "Thanks, but what are you doing here?"
"I came to check on you. I saw that pretty girl bring you here, and figured you could use my help. What happened, and who was the girl?" Miroku sat down, beside his friend.
"I don't know what happened. All I can remember is waking up, feeling horrible. That girl happened to be there too, and helped me. Her name's Kagome."
"Is she taken?" Inuyasha could see his friend get that lecherous gleam in his eye, and Inuyasha quickly hit him over the head. As soon as he did it, he felt like he'd done it before, almost like déjà vu.
"Ouch! What was that for?" Yelled the other boy, rubbing his head.
"Don't even think about her. She's mine."
"Really Now. Does she know this?" Miroku asked sarcastically.
"No, but she will."
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Kagome flopped down on her mat, but held back a cry of pain, because she sat down on something very hard. She got up, and saw the open book that she had earlier. It was open to the same page that she'd last been on, but she couldn't remember why that made her feel a little antsy.
She looked over the strange words, but did not speak them. They seemed like a weird poem, but they didn't sound like one.
Ease apart
If it is your wish to be. Two of a kind, you will become Split apart Let your troubles split in half Split apart Let your body, mind, soul Ease apart. That certainly didn't sound like any poem she'd ever heard, but who cares? Kagome was tired, and didn't bother to read the other side of the page, the exact opposite of this poem.
Imoen- it was a spellbook, the spell split him into 2 people.
Whitetail- I thought that was kinda funny 2! ^^
Lady Penguin - thanks! ^_^
Sea Breeze - I'm glad you like it!
Sailor Flower - Kudos on cool pen name! I was trying to make it different.
Riven - I was trying to make my story go as far from kik/inu as possible! Thank you^_~
Anime Demon- Coming from you Em, that means a lot. See ya later!
Enchanted Pink Jade- Thank you, I enjoyed your questions + long review b/c it means you took an interest in the story. Kagome did say a spell; in this chapter you will see what it was! I noticed that error 2, but this chapter I will try to be better!
If I didn't thank you personally, it means I didn't get it in time. I will try to give you credit next time! Thank you taking time to review, it was greatly appreciated.
I just want to say that I hate the name Inu-demon, but I couldn't think of a better one at the time, so just try to ignore it, like I do.
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All of Me
Ch.2 ~ Spellbook
"H..he..ll..o, milord." One of Inu-demon's servants greeted the king, as he walked past him. The king paid no attention to the speaker, and kept going. He passed a long line of servants who bowed at his feet. He could smell the fear generating off of them, and it made him extremely happy.
The demon went to his battlefield, and found several of his male slaves already waiting there. His head servant, Yuri, rushed over to him, with a finely decorated katana in hand. He bowed before his master, and humbly offered it to him. The lord snatched the blade, and looked over its craftsmanship. Inu-demon slashed the servant's arm, and the slave's pained expression could plainly be seen, but still he said nothing. He growled in disgust, and threw the sword carelessly into the mud. "It's useless! I said I wanted the BEST, and YOU will not sleep until I get it." The king snarled at Yuri, "Take these men, and have them beheaded. I don't how they look. They're filthy."
"But, Your Grace, these are your practice fighters. You need these men to exercise your fighting skills." The little creature tried to persuade his master.(think jaken)
"Fine, have it your way, but if you don't find me a sword that I can actually use, then it will be your head."
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"Hello, grandmother." Kagome called to the old woman, who was still cleaning their hut. Kaede smiled at the girl, and continued her work.
"Met that boy, did ye?" The old woman asked, as she saw Kagome's happy smile. At her grandmother's words, Kagome blushed lightly, then became puzzled.
"How did you know I met someone?"
The old woman looked at her granddaughter, and thought, "I really don't know."
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Inuyasha felt sore all over. He got up from his futon, and stretched out. He smelled something cooking, and turned to see his friend Miroku cooking. The priest's son turned around, and handed Inuyasha a bowl of food. "Thanks, but what are you doing here?"
"I came to check on you. I saw that pretty girl bring you here, and figured you could use my help. What happened, and who was the girl?" Miroku sat down, beside his friend.
"I don't know what happened. All I can remember is waking up, feeling horrible. That girl happened to be there too, and helped me. Her name's Kagome."
"Is she taken?" Inuyasha could see his friend get that lecherous gleam in his eye, and Inuyasha quickly hit him over the head. As soon as he did it, he felt like he'd done it before, almost like déjà vu.
"Ouch! What was that for?" Yelled the other boy, rubbing his head.
"Don't even think about her. She's mine."
"Really Now. Does she know this?" Miroku asked sarcastically.
"No, but she will."
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Kagome flopped down on her mat, but held back a cry of pain, because she sat down on something very hard. She got up, and saw the open book that she had earlier. It was open to the same page that she'd last been on, but she couldn't remember why that made her feel a little antsy.
She looked over the strange words, but did not speak them. They seemed like a weird poem, but they didn't sound like one.
Ease apart
If it is your wish to be. Two of a kind, you will become Split apart Let your troubles split in half Split apart Let your body, mind, soul Ease apart. That certainly didn't sound like any poem she'd ever heard, but who cares? Kagome was tired, and didn't bother to read the other side of the page, the exact opposite of this poem.