Author's Note:
Flower_on_thewind: Eeeh, this fic is OLD but I forgot to do something with it..
I forgot to thank the readers!!!!!! MEH, I'm so stupid!!
Duo: BLAH, now look at what you have to do! There would be nothing but a loooong list of reviewers. They don't deserve the time you're wasting.
Flower_on_thewind: *smacks duo with a frying pan* YOU INCONSIDERATE ASS HOLE! They deserve it all! If it weren't for them, I wouldn't know how my stories are, and what my mistakes are!!! Hell, we should give them all a cookie for being so nice!
Duo: Blah, I bet nobody even remembers this fic. it's been so long ago! *reads date* woah, you last updated it. October 07, 2002. DUDE, YOU SUCK!!!!!
Flower_on_thewind: T_T...I know...
~*THE REVIEWS*~
ME (2003-08-21): I LIKE KAIS FINAL BETTER! KEVIN WAS SO MEAN! HE HURT MY REI-CHAN TOO MUCH!
Response: I'm glad you like Kai's ending better! Kai's pretty hot, ne? Thanks for your opinion!
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KMM + Team MINAMI + Jack White (2003-04-26): (chapter 3)
Megumi: Aww. That was cute. I loved this fic, it was so well written and full of passion!
Neph: *dancing around and pretending to play the guitar* Mienai -ashita- dakara koso,
WAKU WAKU, dekirun dato, ah, kizuita,
never lose! Kokoro de kiru, just like cards, kitto
kiseki ga okoru kara!!
Megumi: Having fun?
Neph: Yes. Yes I am.
Megumi: Anywho, I liked both of the endings of your fic, but...oh, I can't decide which one I liked better. They were both very good. I love Rei, he's so cute. And Tala. He has purdy eyes..
Neph: Shut up.
Megumi: Yeah, whatever..
Jack White: Can I leave now? You people are crazy and the pink haired girl is feeling my biceps again.
Mao: *nuzzling up against Jack and purring*
Megumi: No, you can't go, but Mao can. *pushes Mao out a window* I've always wanted to do that.
Response: LOL you guys are COOL!! WAY TO THROW HER OUTTA THE WINDOW! You wanna do it again? *produces a very new and very breakable window from out of nowhere* thank you for reviewing!
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Anime Angel (2003-04-07): GEEZ, IT'S LONG! *yawns* ~_~ How long can u keep this up? Huh?
Response: Good question... *looks at her energizer batteries* Eeep, I gotta buy some more!! *shoves Duo out the door* GET ME ANOTHER TRUCK LOAD! (Duo: argh, she's such a dork...)
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Hehe-kiki (2002-11-11):
veri nice stori! itz veri kool! itz good i took mi time to read it cuz itz worth it! thumbz up!
Response: Oi! Thanks for taking the time to read it! *huggles kiki* You're such a good friend! I'll let you huggle my bro too! *in comes some kid with signs of puberty sprouting on his face* -_-; you're not my brother...
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moonlight-blossom (2002-10-08):
Great chapter
I'm so glad that I read this, it was awesome
I'm glad that you wrote one ending for Kevin and one for Kai, I think that it's great you're so loose with your ideas
Response: *blushes* eep, thanks for the compliment. I'm just glad that no rabid kai fan flamed me... -_-; oi, I think I might have jinxed myself. THANKS A LOT! And I really love your fic: a solitary blue. It ROX!!
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Demon Rising (demon_rising@hotmail.com) (2002-10-08) chapter 3:
*screams and jumps around hyperly* YESYESYES!!!!!! omg, i loved this story!! And i want more, maybe a sequel or a new Kai/Ray story *looks hopefull* This story was sooooooo good, and it was damn well worth the wait! ^_________^ now you've got me all hyper and in a Kai/Ray slurging mood.......cept ive read all the Kai/Ray fics out there and i want moreeee T.T!!! KEEP writing, make more Kay/Ray'z!!! And i disagree with whoever said a Kai/Tyson sequel......*maims them* nooooo, Kai belongs with Ray!! ^____^ Again, the one of the most bestestest storiez ive read in a while!!!
~Demon
Response: O______________O dude, this fic isn't THAAT great, but I'm glad it got you feeling waff-y! *glomps Demon* Kai/Ray is pretty cool, but so is Kai/Tyson... aaaahhh!! I don't know which one's better?!! Erk.*hangs head in shame* (Duo: *snickers* thanks Demon, you got her all confused now!)
Chapter 2/1: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! THERE WAS NO RAY/KAY MUSH/FLUFF/WHATEVER!!!!! WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! lol, I'm obsessed, what can i say? It's just so kawaii! But aside from that, i TOTALLY LOVED the fic, it was really awesome! Keep writing.....maybe a ray/kai fluff later *hint hint* lol, be bak when ya got more out!
~Demon
...oooh, there's going to be two seperate endings....woooooops, missed that part! *laugh sheepishly* my bad, hurry hurry with the Ray/Kai ending then! ::obsessed:: But as i said before, awesome, awesome, awesome fic!! I loved it! I'll write my own Ray/Kai, but it's prolly gonna suck becuz i don't think i've seen enuff Beyblade to rilly be able to write for the characters, but meh, i'll try! KEEP WRITING, you're awesome! I rilly say the word 'awesome' alot don't i? lol
~Demon
Response: I think you should write your own fic!! I bet it'll be REALLY good, cuz you have the personalities down pat! Go for it!
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gamefreak (2002-10-07):
that was a great fic, are you going to keep on writing? more kai/rei? I hope you do
Response: Erm... no... after the fic I'm currently working on, I'm not sure if I will write any more... or, if I do, I'm not sure if it will be with beyblades... BUT HEY! You never know! V-force is pretty good! Maybe I'll be inspired to write something else!
*** Joce (2002-10-0) Chapter 2:
Me agree with Fyredra, except that I AM obsessed with the couple of Kai/Tyson... Make a sequel for Kai/Tyson! *Looks back at the two making-out boys.* Um...gotta go! Hyper! SUGAR!
Jul: *Glares at Joce, P.S. Joce itise.* Alright, which asshole fed her sugar THIS time?
Joce: *Slaps Jul.* Now bad language! Children still live ya' know!
Jul: Shut-up! You're only 11, and that makes YOU a child.
Joce: *Ignores her.* Flower-on-thewind, pwease continue soon! Bye bye!
Response: MWAHAHAHA *feeds Joce more sugar* Kai and Tyson are soooo cute together... especially when they're making-out ^_~; thanks for reviewing, and if you didn't know, chapter 3 was out a while ago!
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:D (2002-09-19) (chapter 2)
WANNA SEE THE NEXT CHAP UP!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Response: IT'S UP!!!!! THANKS FOR BEING SO PATIENT!
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Fyredra (2002-09-18 2) (chapter 2):
Awwww. That. that was SO SWEET!!! *is hyperventilating with joy* Kevin is SOOOO adorable. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *continues laughing her head off with delight* Sorry, it's just that YOUR STORY'S MADE ME TOTALLY HYPER!!!!!!!!! I swear that was one of the best stories I ever read in my WHOLE. DAMN. LIFE!!!!!!!! *continues going crazy with delight* I can't help it, that was just AWESOME! *calms down a bit* Seriously, it was an absolutely WONDERFUL fic, you write Rei and Kevin REALLY well, except that Rei's a bit OOC, I ADORED Kevin in this, Kai's OOC, obviously, Tyson's excellently done. I also just have to say that the wish upon a star scenes were pure beauty, I really enjoyed them, and the butterfly kick story was very interesting as well. Even though I'm not exactly the No. 1 fan of yaoi I still really liked this!!! Maybe you should do a Kai/Tyson sequel. I'm not into that couple but. I REALLY loved this, now if you could do such a great job without the OOCness I swear you would be one of the best fanfic writers on FF.net. At least in my books. Please write more stuff with Kevin and/or Rei in it 'cuz I REALLY WANT MORE OF YOUR EXTRAORDINARILY TALENTED WRITING!!!!!! And I'm not kidding here.
Totally hyper and practically ready to jump out of her skin with total and absolute delight,
~Fyredra~
Response: *is now a tomato from too much compliments* oi, I'm not THAT great of a writer... but I'm glad that you enjoyed it! WHEEEE ANOTHER KEVIN FAN!! There should be more of us out there! Hahaha, I agree w/ you on the OOC part. Oi, I need to work on that. Thanks for being honest w/ me! Enjoy your moment of WAFF! *is still blushing like a demented moron*
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dragon'sShadowlime (2002-09-05) chapter 2:
Thats was soooooo cute ::wipes a tear from her eye:: Now you got me into rai/kevin. Anyways now for ideas: kai and tyson stuck in a closet or truth or dare thats always fun.
Response: LOL!!! Kai and tyson stuck in a closet... I think I read that somewhere... IT WAS HILARIOUS! I gotta remember that... thanks for the suggestion!
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dragonmoon (dragonmoon1-5@eboom.com) (2002-08-31) chapter 2:
WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!I love it!!!! But I've just gotta say one correction: Occasionally, you have some weird Typos, but other than that, It's amazing!!
Keep going!!! ^.~!!!
Response: YOU NOTICED TOO??? *is embarassed* I know, they ARE very weird -_- ; ehhhh, oh well, it adds to the humor! Thanks for being honest! I actually didn't see all of them until you pointed it out! I always thought it was just 1-2 -___-;
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Mystik-chan (2002-08-31) chapter 2:
oooo...... SO nice!!!!! ^^ *sighs happily* Kevin and Rei are so cute togetha, ne?
hmm.. and the Kai/Rei chappie.. er.... the ideas section of my brain is currently turned off... :\ sorry.
Response: That's alright!, I'm glad that you think Kevin and Rei are cute together! I think so too! (Even though, realistically I think they'll be in a more brother/brother relationship than romance... sigh, stupid reality thing.)
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Forget-me-not (2002-08-31) chapter 2:
Hm... this is long! o_o Anyways, i'm happy now that Ray and Kevin is friends again or maybe more... and er... write more plz? ^^
Response: *grins* I know! It's sooo long, I bet lots of ppl took one look a the scroll bar and said "No way in hell am I gunna read this!" hehehe, if you wanna read more Kevin/ Rei, read Unitl You Catch Me...
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dragonmoon (dragonmoon105@eboom.com) (2002-08-27) chapter 1
Make it Kai/Rei!!! Please?!! *pouts adorably* poor Kai needs some loving!!! *snickers evily*
Anyway, loved it, and I really need to read more so keep writing! ^.~!!!
Response: whoot, I thanks for being part of the poll! I hope you were happy w/ the out come!
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Summing up the Stars (2002-08-24) chapter 1
FINISH!!!!!!!!!
Response: I DID!!!! Lol, oh, I really think your fic: The saddness told by silver is a really great tribute to Sept. 11th. Thanks for being such a good citizen by posting that up!
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jade-tiger1 (2002-08-23) chapter 1
please make it a Kai/Rei. i think they make a cute couple. i like the story so far so please continue!! ^_^
Response: hehehe, thanks for being in the poll!
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Jenny-fer (2002-08-23) chapter 1
Oh pleeeeeeeaaaaassssssse make it KAI+REI!!!!! ^-^ Tis my fav Beyblade pairing tis tis! Though I always am partial to originality in pairings! Rei+Kevin... Who'd a thunk? ^-^; Yes, I'm odd. You sooooooo have to continue this! I was soooo happy to see that the chapter was so long, but it ended before there was any actual Kai+Rei stuff! ;_; hehe... Anywho! Could you stick some Max+Tyson in there just for the heck of it? ^_~ Ja!
~*Jenny-fer, the insane yaoi/shonen- ai/bishonen/lemon/sugar/fanfic/anime/manga addict! ^-^
Response: LOL first off, thanks for being in the poll, and second of all, thanks for being open to originality in pairings! I hope you are happy with Kai's ending, and I'm sorry for not being able to put in Max+Tyson. Eeeh, that pairing is kinda hard for me to work with... sorry!
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O_O (2002-08-22) chapter 1:
Waiya.. if i didn't read the last part with your comments with Duo, i woulda said Kai/Rei. Dang. now that i think about it, it is kinda like Kevin/Rei too. aiya. O_O I'm just as confused if i were you writing the story. ^^" tally up the votes from all the others and so TTYS! :D
~:D
P.S. i blab too much. ne?
Response: naw, I don't think you blab much. -_-; feh it swings both ways doesn't it. Evil chapter one. oh well, now there's two possible endings and I think it worked out pretty well! Thanks for your input.
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xxTysonxisxLinasxBitchxx (2002-08-22) chapter 1:
sniffles- That... was sooo kawaii! Please continue! -looks sheepish- My opinion would be Kevin/Rei... Sowwie, but I LIKE wierd pairings! For example, I love Kai/Tyson fluff cuz it's just too cute! Hmmh, that gave me some ideas! Heeheehee... Anyways, if you can, could you pweeeeeeeeeee -gasp- eeeeeeeeeeease put in some Tyson/Max or Kai fluff in there, if it'll become Kevin/Rei? -smiles nicely- Pweeeeeease? Thanx, Ja ne!!!
~*~W.S.~*~
Response: KEVIN/REI!!! Whoot!!! I have a believer!! YESSSS (Duo: ulp, this is it! She's lost it!) whew, ANYWAYS, if you like that pairing, read some of my other fics!! O_O. blah, I sound like I'm advertising right now -_-; oh well! Tyson/Kai fluff? Hmm, well, I can't really say that second chapter has tyson/kai fluff, BUT if you squint really really REALLY hard, maybe you can see it... or better yet, bring out the microscopes!
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SilverDeathscythe (2002-08-22) chapter 1:
Oh my.... that was great but i'm just as confused as you are! Hmm... well, as much as I love Kai and Rei together, a Rei/Kevin has never been done before (at least I don't think it has!). But if you do that, it would totally kill Kai, after all, isn't Rei his first love? And Kevin is in Rei's past now, it's time for him to move on. But it still seems like there's an old flame between them and ARG!!! *breaks down crying* I DON'T KNOW!! My logic just doesn't make sense anymore... WAH!
Well, if Rei ends up with Kevin, Kai would probably kill himself or end up with Tyson. If Rei ends up with Kai then Kevin would probably go after Lee or still like Rei, even though he can't be with him. Oh well... hope that helps a bit!
Response: you don't know how much your review meant to me. It basically outlined my fic! And I'm not saying everyone else's doesn't matter. You all matter very much, but yours were one of the first, and one of the ones that came as a big inspiration for the rest of the fic! So thanks a lot, I highly doubt this fic would have turned out the way it did if you hadn't reviewed!
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Luna Tiger (2002-08-2) chapter 1:
o_____o Dude, that... that... is a /damn/ difficult choice. But for one, you already have Kai pining after Rei.. ^^;;; and dammit, Rei digs everyone. I put my vote for Rei/Kevin, only if you dive deep down into the mind of our darling cuddle toy. XD Kevin's, like, all cute and plushie. You just wanna hug him and hear him squeak. And whichever one is chosen.. ={ what happens to the third wheel?
Response: Yeah, I must admit that even at the time I reeeeaally liked Kai/Rei pairings, I started to fall in love w/ the idea of Rei/Kevin. I don't know what happened! In fact, I think I originally started off as a Rei/Kai. weird. And you noticed that Rei's basically falling for everyone too! Hahaha, another one of those major flaws. Hilarious, ne? Oh, and the third wheel? Eeeh, well they're generally happy in a sense that they've become wiser from the whole ordeal... blah, is this all a bit too fairy- tale-ish?
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(anonymous mystery dude -_-;) 2002-08-21 chapter 1:
Kai/Ray. I'm not sure if I'm a bigger Kai/Ray or a Kai/Tyson fan, but since Kai/Tyson is not a choice, make it Kai/Ray.
Response: ah, but you see my friend, this is FANFICTION!!! ANYTHING IS POSSIBLE! Whoooo hoo!
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Forget-me-not (2002-08-2) chapter 1:
Holy... o_o That was kinda unexpected i guess. Although pretty good, do continu!
Response: Really? Oi... I didn't know that! Well, thanks for reviewing!
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Mystik-chan (2002-08-21) chapter 1:
WWWOOOOOOWWW!!!!! ^^ Good story! you could make it Kai/Rei, an absolutely kawaii couple that everybody loves(well, almost everybody), or Kevin/Rei, an unique couple that's never been done before that could be developed quite a bit. Soo... basically what I'm saying is.. I don't know ^^; I'd be fine with it either way
Response: eeep, either way it stayed -_-; well,. I think you reviewed earlier too, but I'm too lazy to check so.eh, thanks for reviewing and thanks for being in the poll! Ad this on to whatever I said up there -_-; (Duo: you can totally see she's tired from typing. Notice how she yawns like a hippo- Flower_on_thewind:*hits Duo with her ever handy frying pan* shut up you stupid baka)
~*the end*~
Flower_on_thewind: well that wasn't too bad. Now everyone knows how special they are!
Duo: owwwie, no need to kill off my brain cells!! I need every one of them to make your life a living hell!
Flower_on_thewind: blaaaah to you!!!!! *whips out her ultra-cool-mega -whoopper- super- fyring-pan-900* be afraid. VERY afraid.
Duo: eeep!! WAIT!! Time out!! WHAT ABOUT ALL THOSE PPL WHO DIDN'T REVIEW BUT DID READ????
Flower_on_thewind: *stops mid step* ulp, I didn't think about that! *turns to reader* thank you very much. I'd like to go into detail but YOU DIDN'T REVIEW!!! So next time, REVIEW!!! ^_^;
Duo: *running away* THANKS READERS! YOU SAVED MY LIFE!!!
Flower_on_thewind: eh??? O_O DUOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
And they lived happily ever after..
Flower_on_thewind: Eeeh, this fic is OLD but I forgot to do something with it..
I forgot to thank the readers!!!!!! MEH, I'm so stupid!!
Duo: BLAH, now look at what you have to do! There would be nothing but a loooong list of reviewers. They don't deserve the time you're wasting.
Flower_on_thewind: *smacks duo with a frying pan* YOU INCONSIDERATE ASS HOLE! They deserve it all! If it weren't for them, I wouldn't know how my stories are, and what my mistakes are!!! Hell, we should give them all a cookie for being so nice!
Duo: Blah, I bet nobody even remembers this fic. it's been so long ago! *reads date* woah, you last updated it. October 07, 2002. DUDE, YOU SUCK!!!!!
Flower_on_thewind: T_T...I know...
~*THE REVIEWS*~
ME (2003-08-21): I LIKE KAIS FINAL BETTER! KEVIN WAS SO MEAN! HE HURT MY REI-CHAN TOO MUCH!
Response: I'm glad you like Kai's ending better! Kai's pretty hot, ne? Thanks for your opinion!
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KMM + Team MINAMI + Jack White (2003-04-26): (chapter 3)
Megumi: Aww. That was cute. I loved this fic, it was so well written and full of passion!
Neph: *dancing around and pretending to play the guitar* Mienai -ashita- dakara koso,
WAKU WAKU, dekirun dato, ah, kizuita,
never lose! Kokoro de kiru, just like cards, kitto
kiseki ga okoru kara!!
Megumi: Having fun?
Neph: Yes. Yes I am.
Megumi: Anywho, I liked both of the endings of your fic, but...oh, I can't decide which one I liked better. They were both very good. I love Rei, he's so cute. And Tala. He has purdy eyes..
Neph: Shut up.
Megumi: Yeah, whatever..
Jack White: Can I leave now? You people are crazy and the pink haired girl is feeling my biceps again.
Mao: *nuzzling up against Jack and purring*
Megumi: No, you can't go, but Mao can. *pushes Mao out a window* I've always wanted to do that.
Response: LOL you guys are COOL!! WAY TO THROW HER OUTTA THE WINDOW! You wanna do it again? *produces a very new and very breakable window from out of nowhere* thank you for reviewing!
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Anime Angel (2003-04-07): GEEZ, IT'S LONG! *yawns* ~_~ How long can u keep this up? Huh?
Response: Good question... *looks at her energizer batteries* Eeep, I gotta buy some more!! *shoves Duo out the door* GET ME ANOTHER TRUCK LOAD! (Duo: argh, she's such a dork...)
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Hehe-kiki (2002-11-11):
veri nice stori! itz veri kool! itz good i took mi time to read it cuz itz worth it! thumbz up!
Response: Oi! Thanks for taking the time to read it! *huggles kiki* You're such a good friend! I'll let you huggle my bro too! *in comes some kid with signs of puberty sprouting on his face* -_-; you're not my brother...
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moonlight-blossom (2002-10-08):
Great chapter
I'm so glad that I read this, it was awesome
I'm glad that you wrote one ending for Kevin and one for Kai, I think that it's great you're so loose with your ideas
Response: *blushes* eep, thanks for the compliment. I'm just glad that no rabid kai fan flamed me... -_-; oi, I think I might have jinxed myself. THANKS A LOT! And I really love your fic: a solitary blue. It ROX!!
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Demon Rising (demon_rising@hotmail.com) (2002-10-08) chapter 3:
*screams and jumps around hyperly* YESYESYES!!!!!! omg, i loved this story!! And i want more, maybe a sequel or a new Kai/Ray story *looks hopefull* This story was sooooooo good, and it was damn well worth the wait! ^_________^ now you've got me all hyper and in a Kai/Ray slurging mood.......cept ive read all the Kai/Ray fics out there and i want moreeee T.T!!! KEEP writing, make more Kay/Ray'z!!! And i disagree with whoever said a Kai/Tyson sequel......*maims them* nooooo, Kai belongs with Ray!! ^____^ Again, the one of the most bestestest storiez ive read in a while!!!
~Demon
Response: O______________O dude, this fic isn't THAAT great, but I'm glad it got you feeling waff-y! *glomps Demon* Kai/Ray is pretty cool, but so is Kai/Tyson... aaaahhh!! I don't know which one's better?!! Erk.*hangs head in shame* (Duo: *snickers* thanks Demon, you got her all confused now!)
Chapter 2/1: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! THERE WAS NO RAY/KAY MUSH/FLUFF/WHATEVER!!!!! WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! lol, I'm obsessed, what can i say? It's just so kawaii! But aside from that, i TOTALLY LOVED the fic, it was really awesome! Keep writing.....maybe a ray/kai fluff later *hint hint* lol, be bak when ya got more out!
~Demon
...oooh, there's going to be two seperate endings....woooooops, missed that part! *laugh sheepishly* my bad, hurry hurry with the Ray/Kai ending then! ::obsessed:: But as i said before, awesome, awesome, awesome fic!! I loved it! I'll write my own Ray/Kai, but it's prolly gonna suck becuz i don't think i've seen enuff Beyblade to rilly be able to write for the characters, but meh, i'll try! KEEP WRITING, you're awesome! I rilly say the word 'awesome' alot don't i? lol
~Demon
Response: I think you should write your own fic!! I bet it'll be REALLY good, cuz you have the personalities down pat! Go for it!
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gamefreak (2002-10-07):
that was a great fic, are you going to keep on writing? more kai/rei? I hope you do
Response: Erm... no... after the fic I'm currently working on, I'm not sure if I will write any more... or, if I do, I'm not sure if it will be with beyblades... BUT HEY! You never know! V-force is pretty good! Maybe I'll be inspired to write something else!
*** Joce (2002-10-0) Chapter 2:
Me agree with Fyredra, except that I AM obsessed with the couple of Kai/Tyson... Make a sequel for Kai/Tyson! *Looks back at the two making-out boys.* Um...gotta go! Hyper! SUGAR!
Jul: *Glares at Joce, P.S. Joce itise.* Alright, which asshole fed her sugar THIS time?
Joce: *Slaps Jul.* Now bad language! Children still live ya' know!
Jul: Shut-up! You're only 11, and that makes YOU a child.
Joce: *Ignores her.* Flower-on-thewind, pwease continue soon! Bye bye!
Response: MWAHAHAHA *feeds Joce more sugar* Kai and Tyson are soooo cute together... especially when they're making-out ^_~; thanks for reviewing, and if you didn't know, chapter 3 was out a while ago!
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:D (2002-09-19) (chapter 2)
WANNA SEE THE NEXT CHAP UP!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Response: IT'S UP!!!!! THANKS FOR BEING SO PATIENT!
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Fyredra (2002-09-18 2) (chapter 2):
Awwww. That. that was SO SWEET!!! *is hyperventilating with joy* Kevin is SOOOO adorable. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *continues laughing her head off with delight* Sorry, it's just that YOUR STORY'S MADE ME TOTALLY HYPER!!!!!!!!! I swear that was one of the best stories I ever read in my WHOLE. DAMN. LIFE!!!!!!!! *continues going crazy with delight* I can't help it, that was just AWESOME! *calms down a bit* Seriously, it was an absolutely WONDERFUL fic, you write Rei and Kevin REALLY well, except that Rei's a bit OOC, I ADORED Kevin in this, Kai's OOC, obviously, Tyson's excellently done. I also just have to say that the wish upon a star scenes were pure beauty, I really enjoyed them, and the butterfly kick story was very interesting as well. Even though I'm not exactly the No. 1 fan of yaoi I still really liked this!!! Maybe you should do a Kai/Tyson sequel. I'm not into that couple but. I REALLY loved this, now if you could do such a great job without the OOCness I swear you would be one of the best fanfic writers on FF.net. At least in my books. Please write more stuff with Kevin and/or Rei in it 'cuz I REALLY WANT MORE OF YOUR EXTRAORDINARILY TALENTED WRITING!!!!!! And I'm not kidding here.
Totally hyper and practically ready to jump out of her skin with total and absolute delight,
~Fyredra~
Response: *is now a tomato from too much compliments* oi, I'm not THAT great of a writer... but I'm glad that you enjoyed it! WHEEEE ANOTHER KEVIN FAN!! There should be more of us out there! Hahaha, I agree w/ you on the OOC part. Oi, I need to work on that. Thanks for being honest w/ me! Enjoy your moment of WAFF! *is still blushing like a demented moron*
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dragon'sShadowlime (2002-09-05) chapter 2:
Thats was soooooo cute ::wipes a tear from her eye:: Now you got me into rai/kevin. Anyways now for ideas: kai and tyson stuck in a closet or truth or dare thats always fun.
Response: LOL!!! Kai and tyson stuck in a closet... I think I read that somewhere... IT WAS HILARIOUS! I gotta remember that... thanks for the suggestion!
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dragonmoon (dragonmoon1-5@eboom.com) (2002-08-31) chapter 2:
WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!I love it!!!! But I've just gotta say one correction: Occasionally, you have some weird Typos, but other than that, It's amazing!!
Keep going!!! ^.~!!!
Response: YOU NOTICED TOO??? *is embarassed* I know, they ARE very weird -_- ; ehhhh, oh well, it adds to the humor! Thanks for being honest! I actually didn't see all of them until you pointed it out! I always thought it was just 1-2 -___-;
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Mystik-chan (2002-08-31) chapter 2:
oooo...... SO nice!!!!! ^^ *sighs happily* Kevin and Rei are so cute togetha, ne?
hmm.. and the Kai/Rei chappie.. er.... the ideas section of my brain is currently turned off... :\ sorry.
Response: That's alright!, I'm glad that you think Kevin and Rei are cute together! I think so too! (Even though, realistically I think they'll be in a more brother/brother relationship than romance... sigh, stupid reality thing.)
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Forget-me-not (2002-08-31) chapter 2:
Hm... this is long! o_o Anyways, i'm happy now that Ray and Kevin is friends again or maybe more... and er... write more plz? ^^
Response: *grins* I know! It's sooo long, I bet lots of ppl took one look a the scroll bar and said "No way in hell am I gunna read this!" hehehe, if you wanna read more Kevin/ Rei, read Unitl You Catch Me...
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dragonmoon (dragonmoon105@eboom.com) (2002-08-27) chapter 1
Make it Kai/Rei!!! Please?!! *pouts adorably* poor Kai needs some loving!!! *snickers evily*
Anyway, loved it, and I really need to read more so keep writing! ^.~!!!
Response: whoot, I thanks for being part of the poll! I hope you were happy w/ the out come!
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Summing up the Stars (2002-08-24) chapter 1
FINISH!!!!!!!!!
Response: I DID!!!! Lol, oh, I really think your fic: The saddness told by silver is a really great tribute to Sept. 11th. Thanks for being such a good citizen by posting that up!
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jade-tiger1 (2002-08-23) chapter 1
please make it a Kai/Rei. i think they make a cute couple. i like the story so far so please continue!! ^_^
Response: hehehe, thanks for being in the poll!
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Jenny-fer (2002-08-23) chapter 1
Oh pleeeeeeeaaaaassssssse make it KAI+REI!!!!! ^-^ Tis my fav Beyblade pairing tis tis! Though I always am partial to originality in pairings! Rei+Kevin... Who'd a thunk? ^-^; Yes, I'm odd. You sooooooo have to continue this! I was soooo happy to see that the chapter was so long, but it ended before there was any actual Kai+Rei stuff! ;_; hehe... Anywho! Could you stick some Max+Tyson in there just for the heck of it? ^_~ Ja!
~*Jenny-fer, the insane yaoi/shonen- ai/bishonen/lemon/sugar/fanfic/anime/manga addict! ^-^
Response: LOL first off, thanks for being in the poll, and second of all, thanks for being open to originality in pairings! I hope you are happy with Kai's ending, and I'm sorry for not being able to put in Max+Tyson. Eeeh, that pairing is kinda hard for me to work with... sorry!
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O_O (2002-08-22) chapter 1:
Waiya.. if i didn't read the last part with your comments with Duo, i woulda said Kai/Rei. Dang. now that i think about it, it is kinda like Kevin/Rei too. aiya. O_O I'm just as confused if i were you writing the story. ^^" tally up the votes from all the others and so TTYS! :D
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P.S. i blab too much. ne?
Response: naw, I don't think you blab much. -_-; feh it swings both ways doesn't it. Evil chapter one. oh well, now there's two possible endings and I think it worked out pretty well! Thanks for your input.
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xxTysonxisxLinasxBitchxx (2002-08-22) chapter 1:
sniffles- That... was sooo kawaii! Please continue! -looks sheepish- My opinion would be Kevin/Rei... Sowwie, but I LIKE wierd pairings! For example, I love Kai/Tyson fluff cuz it's just too cute! Hmmh, that gave me some ideas! Heeheehee... Anyways, if you can, could you pweeeeeeeeeee -gasp- eeeeeeeeeeease put in some Tyson/Max or Kai fluff in there, if it'll become Kevin/Rei? -smiles nicely- Pweeeeeease? Thanx, Ja ne!!!
~*~W.S.~*~
Response: KEVIN/REI!!! Whoot!!! I have a believer!! YESSSS (Duo: ulp, this is it! She's lost it!) whew, ANYWAYS, if you like that pairing, read some of my other fics!! O_O. blah, I sound like I'm advertising right now -_-; oh well! Tyson/Kai fluff? Hmm, well, I can't really say that second chapter has tyson/kai fluff, BUT if you squint really really REALLY hard, maybe you can see it... or better yet, bring out the microscopes!
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SilverDeathscythe (2002-08-22) chapter 1:
Oh my.... that was great but i'm just as confused as you are! Hmm... well, as much as I love Kai and Rei together, a Rei/Kevin has never been done before (at least I don't think it has!). But if you do that, it would totally kill Kai, after all, isn't Rei his first love? And Kevin is in Rei's past now, it's time for him to move on. But it still seems like there's an old flame between them and ARG!!! *breaks down crying* I DON'T KNOW!! My logic just doesn't make sense anymore... WAH!
Well, if Rei ends up with Kevin, Kai would probably kill himself or end up with Tyson. If Rei ends up with Kai then Kevin would probably go after Lee or still like Rei, even though he can't be with him. Oh well... hope that helps a bit!
Response: you don't know how much your review meant to me. It basically outlined my fic! And I'm not saying everyone else's doesn't matter. You all matter very much, but yours were one of the first, and one of the ones that came as a big inspiration for the rest of the fic! So thanks a lot, I highly doubt this fic would have turned out the way it did if you hadn't reviewed!
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Luna Tiger (2002-08-2) chapter 1:
o_____o Dude, that... that... is a /damn/ difficult choice. But for one, you already have Kai pining after Rei.. ^^;;; and dammit, Rei digs everyone. I put my vote for Rei/Kevin, only if you dive deep down into the mind of our darling cuddle toy. XD Kevin's, like, all cute and plushie. You just wanna hug him and hear him squeak. And whichever one is chosen.. ={ what happens to the third wheel?
Response: Yeah, I must admit that even at the time I reeeeaally liked Kai/Rei pairings, I started to fall in love w/ the idea of Rei/Kevin. I don't know what happened! In fact, I think I originally started off as a Rei/Kai. weird. And you noticed that Rei's basically falling for everyone too! Hahaha, another one of those major flaws. Hilarious, ne? Oh, and the third wheel? Eeeh, well they're generally happy in a sense that they've become wiser from the whole ordeal... blah, is this all a bit too fairy- tale-ish?
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(anonymous mystery dude -_-;) 2002-08-21 chapter 1:
Kai/Ray. I'm not sure if I'm a bigger Kai/Ray or a Kai/Tyson fan, but since Kai/Tyson is not a choice, make it Kai/Ray.
Response: ah, but you see my friend, this is FANFICTION!!! ANYTHING IS POSSIBLE! Whoooo hoo!
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Forget-me-not (2002-08-2) chapter 1:
Holy... o_o That was kinda unexpected i guess. Although pretty good, do continu!
Response: Really? Oi... I didn't know that! Well, thanks for reviewing!
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Mystik-chan (2002-08-21) chapter 1:
WWWOOOOOOWWW!!!!! ^^ Good story! you could make it Kai/Rei, an absolutely kawaii couple that everybody loves(well, almost everybody), or Kevin/Rei, an unique couple that's never been done before that could be developed quite a bit. Soo... basically what I'm saying is.. I don't know ^^; I'd be fine with it either way
Response: eeep, either way it stayed -_-; well,. I think you reviewed earlier too, but I'm too lazy to check so.eh, thanks for reviewing and thanks for being in the poll! Ad this on to whatever I said up there -_-; (Duo: you can totally see she's tired from typing. Notice how she yawns like a hippo- Flower_on_thewind:*hits Duo with her ever handy frying pan* shut up you stupid baka)
~*the end*~
Flower_on_thewind: well that wasn't too bad. Now everyone knows how special they are!
Duo: owwwie, no need to kill off my brain cells!! I need every one of them to make your life a living hell!
Flower_on_thewind: blaaaah to you!!!!! *whips out her ultra-cool-mega -whoopper- super- fyring-pan-900* be afraid. VERY afraid.
Duo: eeep!! WAIT!! Time out!! WHAT ABOUT ALL THOSE PPL WHO DIDN'T REVIEW BUT DID READ????
Flower_on_thewind: *stops mid step* ulp, I didn't think about that! *turns to reader* thank you very much. I'd like to go into detail but YOU DIDN'T REVIEW!!! So next time, REVIEW!!! ^_^;
Duo: *running away* THANKS READERS! YOU SAVED MY LIFE!!!
Flower_on_thewind: eh??? O_O DUOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
And they lived happily ever after..