I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho or the characters except Amber, Steffanie (Steff
for short) Boo1 and Boo2, Ahko (Yoko's Ex), the group known as 'Master',
and the main villain, which is 'Boss'.
Ok this is my new story. The Stranger In Red. As I continue to write my Beyblade fanfic (A Lone Beyblade) I'll be writing this story as well. This is the summary of my story. I still need to type Ch 1 up because I have it hand written while my computer was down. Anyways. now for the summary.
The story takes place during the final hours of The Dark Tournament and after. Hiei has fallen in love with an old rive. Add to the fact, Yoko's ex- girlfriend from 200 years ago shows up and says he betrayed her. A new villain comes and has the power to control people. Yusuke finds out who he replaced and is horrified at what has happened. To top it off, the group has, someone trying to kill them that has the power and the will to do so. Even though their suppose to be died.
Please tell me if you like my idea I'll try to get Ch 1 up as soon as I can.
Question in the Yu Yu Hakusho series was the Hotel destroyed? I wouldn't know, here the series is only to the beginning of the final match where they need to find a 5th member and I don't know when we'll be getting new episodes. I haven't heard any thing yet. And it took me hours just to find who really won.
I'll give you a preview some of what I think are the better parts (in Ch 1):
Team Uramesi was sitting in their room relaxing when they heard a knock on the door.
"It's open!" called out the team's leader. Yusuke started mumbling about how no one should be bothering them at a time like this when Kayko and the girls walked in.
Botan heard Yusuke's mumbling and replied "Yusuke you did a fantastic job today. The team won! And." Botan didn't continue because of a figure standing in the window. No one could tell who the person was, if it was a person.
"Lord Koenma, Botan nice to see you again Team Uramesi you did a good job, you should be proud." Spoke the stranger. Botan recognized the voice from earlier, It was Steff's.
~~~~~Different part~~~~~
"I won't, I won't kill any of the team members." Said Steff "I would rather die first."
"That can be arranged, but first how about a wager?"
"What type?"
"Live, Death"
"Who?"
"Let me think. First do you agree?"
Steff glared at him. "Oh sorry, 'Master' but I know I can beat you. So yeah sure. Why not?"
"Perfect" the one called 'Master' smirked. "I know the perfect person too, or rather, demon." With a wave of his hand a portal appeared above the middle of the clearing. "Bring to me the demon I wish." Master said to the portal.
Another portal appeared under Kurama and Hiei, but it only sucked in one of them. The next thing the poor chosen demon knew he was stuck. His live hung in the balance of the fight.
"So do you still want to fight?" asked 'Master'.
Steff looked up to the portal above the clearing only to see the person she wanted least to be here. "Hiei?" His writs and ankles had silver bands around them and he was frozen.
He only could move his head and speak "Amber, you better win or I'll kill you!"
"Sorry, Hiei " Steff called up to him.
~~~~~Different Part~~~~~(Steff's walking away)
When she was almost out of the clearing Hiei ran to catch up then took a large leap, and pulled out his sword. When he landed he was standing at her side with his sword in front only centimeters below her chin. She could feel the coolness of the blade on her neck.
"You still owe me a fight, don't forget it! I'll find you myself if you do." Said Hiei looking forwards into the forest.
"Don't worry I haven't forgotten and never will" said Amber, with that she disappeared again.
Ok this is my new story. The Stranger In Red. As I continue to write my Beyblade fanfic (A Lone Beyblade) I'll be writing this story as well. This is the summary of my story. I still need to type Ch 1 up because I have it hand written while my computer was down. Anyways. now for the summary.
The story takes place during the final hours of The Dark Tournament and after. Hiei has fallen in love with an old rive. Add to the fact, Yoko's ex- girlfriend from 200 years ago shows up and says he betrayed her. A new villain comes and has the power to control people. Yusuke finds out who he replaced and is horrified at what has happened. To top it off, the group has, someone trying to kill them that has the power and the will to do so. Even though their suppose to be died.
Please tell me if you like my idea I'll try to get Ch 1 up as soon as I can.
Question in the Yu Yu Hakusho series was the Hotel destroyed? I wouldn't know, here the series is only to the beginning of the final match where they need to find a 5th member and I don't know when we'll be getting new episodes. I haven't heard any thing yet. And it took me hours just to find who really won.
I'll give you a preview some of what I think are the better parts (in Ch 1):
Team Uramesi was sitting in their room relaxing when they heard a knock on the door.
"It's open!" called out the team's leader. Yusuke started mumbling about how no one should be bothering them at a time like this when Kayko and the girls walked in.
Botan heard Yusuke's mumbling and replied "Yusuke you did a fantastic job today. The team won! And." Botan didn't continue because of a figure standing in the window. No one could tell who the person was, if it was a person.
"Lord Koenma, Botan nice to see you again Team Uramesi you did a good job, you should be proud." Spoke the stranger. Botan recognized the voice from earlier, It was Steff's.
~~~~~Different part~~~~~
"I won't, I won't kill any of the team members." Said Steff "I would rather die first."
"That can be arranged, but first how about a wager?"
"What type?"
"Live, Death"
"Who?"
"Let me think. First do you agree?"
Steff glared at him. "Oh sorry, 'Master' but I know I can beat you. So yeah sure. Why not?"
"Perfect" the one called 'Master' smirked. "I know the perfect person too, or rather, demon." With a wave of his hand a portal appeared above the middle of the clearing. "Bring to me the demon I wish." Master said to the portal.
Another portal appeared under Kurama and Hiei, but it only sucked in one of them. The next thing the poor chosen demon knew he was stuck. His live hung in the balance of the fight.
"So do you still want to fight?" asked 'Master'.
Steff looked up to the portal above the clearing only to see the person she wanted least to be here. "Hiei?" His writs and ankles had silver bands around them and he was frozen.
He only could move his head and speak "Amber, you better win or I'll kill you!"
"Sorry, Hiei " Steff called up to him.
~~~~~Different Part~~~~~(Steff's walking away)
When she was almost out of the clearing Hiei ran to catch up then took a large leap, and pulled out his sword. When he landed he was standing at her side with his sword in front only centimeters below her chin. She could feel the coolness of the blade on her neck.
"You still owe me a fight, don't forget it! I'll find you myself if you do." Said Hiei looking forwards into the forest.
"Don't worry I haven't forgotten and never will" said Amber, with that she disappeared again.