Hey everyone! Wait, who am I kidding, nobody but FirexAngel (aka best
friend) reviewed, and she doesn't even count!!!!!!! Whaaaaaaaaa! *sniff-
sniff* I didn't think my story was THAT bad?? Oh, and in case anybody read
my bio, I'm really sorry cuz it sounds like I'm a total freak ^what else
would you be??^ SHUT UP!!! See, Becky, the voice in my head, was annoying
me, but for some reason, the people at fanfic deleted everything she said,
and made it sound like I was hallucinating! Anyways, I think I fixed it, so
it's all good! Well, I wanted more than just FirexAngel to review cuz I
knew she would, I just wanted someone else's pov, oh well, maybe this
chapter, things will get better and people will at least take like two
minutes to type even a one word review, I'll be happy! But NOOOOO! Oh well,
here's chapter two!
(oh, and I forgot two mention that Becky will pop in from here on to fill you in with her opinions, so ^blah blah blah^ means Becky, okay? Good!)
'It's so cold. why is it so cold?'
'Why hasn't he come yet? He's late'
Five minutes, now ten
Over to the right he stands.
Tall, short black hair, pale skin glows in the full moon's light. Our breaths are clouded in the icy air.
"Ready?" He shoves his hand in his dark trench coat pockets.
"No"
"Too bad, she will not wait for us." He extends his gloved hand out to my numb fingers.
I stand up shaking. The cold winter air swirls around us as we walk out of the alley, into the streets lined with snow. Pulling my hat closer I peek into my bag slung over my shoulder. Bright Emerald eyes stare up at my face that now is flooded with sadness and doubt.
*DING-DONG!* ^that's a really pathetic doorbell DxH^ (shut up!)
"Wha-!"
"Saori!!! Get the door!!!"
'Oh great, I just woke up and I have to get the door in my pajamas! Hope it's not someone important."
Saori peered through her curtains to see Darren's smiling face. 'Nope, not important' Saori was about to walk back upstairs, but was stopped when her mom turned the corner from the kitchen.
"Who's at the door dear? And you should have at least gotten your bathrobe on."
Saori rolled her eyes, "its Darren, but-"
"Well then let the poor thing in, and invite him for tea dear. Use your manners." And with that, her mother went upstairs, and left Saori to face Darren who was now trying to peer through the curtains.
"Yeah, what do you want?" Darren eyed Saori in her red satin shorts and tank top, embroidered with black lace.
"Nice pajamas," he smirked, then grabbed the door handle as Saori tried to slam is in his face.
"Nice try, but I won't be gotten rid of that easily."
"What do you want Darren?"
"I came over to ask if you could help me," he pointed to his backpack.
"I'm sorry, but I can't give you the help you need, besides, you're past being able to help."
Darren looked at her dumbstruck, "Listen, I didn't come here to fool around, I mean it, honest."
"That's a first." Saori replied dryly as she attempted to close the door again. But before she could, Darren pushed his way between the door and her, pressed his hands against the doorway, and wouldn't budge.
"Saori, I mean it. I understand that you believe me to be this sick pervert and all, but just give me this one chance. I need to bring my grades up or I'm off the football team. Saori, you're the smartest person I know and I need your help."
Saori saw the truth in his amber eyes and hesitantly led him upstairs to her room. "Alright, I need to get my stuff together, what do you need help with?"
"Um, trig, chem., bio, and some other stuff, let me check."
Saori sat across from Darren, desperately trying his hardest, and saw he really meant what he said, even though he could be a total leech at times.
The day passed and the time came to call it quits for the night.
"Thanks a lot Saori; can I come over Saturday too?"
"Yeah, sure."
"Okay! Bye!" Saori watched as he ran down the street to his house all the while wondering that he looked oddly familiar to the guy in her dreams. The dreams that had come to her ever since a few years ago. Ever since her mother had been diagnosed with cancer, and her life began to change.
So???? What do you think??? You gotta tell me some time! So click that little arrow thingy down there to the left next to submit review, and type away! I'll update as soon as I get four or five reviews total.
(oh, and I forgot two mention that Becky will pop in from here on to fill you in with her opinions, so ^blah blah blah^ means Becky, okay? Good!)
'It's so cold. why is it so cold?'
'Why hasn't he come yet? He's late'
Five minutes, now ten
Over to the right he stands.
Tall, short black hair, pale skin glows in the full moon's light. Our breaths are clouded in the icy air.
"Ready?" He shoves his hand in his dark trench coat pockets.
"No"
"Too bad, she will not wait for us." He extends his gloved hand out to my numb fingers.
I stand up shaking. The cold winter air swirls around us as we walk out of the alley, into the streets lined with snow. Pulling my hat closer I peek into my bag slung over my shoulder. Bright Emerald eyes stare up at my face that now is flooded with sadness and doubt.
*DING-DONG!* ^that's a really pathetic doorbell DxH^ (shut up!)
"Wha-!"
"Saori!!! Get the door!!!"
'Oh great, I just woke up and I have to get the door in my pajamas! Hope it's not someone important."
Saori peered through her curtains to see Darren's smiling face. 'Nope, not important' Saori was about to walk back upstairs, but was stopped when her mom turned the corner from the kitchen.
"Who's at the door dear? And you should have at least gotten your bathrobe on."
Saori rolled her eyes, "its Darren, but-"
"Well then let the poor thing in, and invite him for tea dear. Use your manners." And with that, her mother went upstairs, and left Saori to face Darren who was now trying to peer through the curtains.
"Yeah, what do you want?" Darren eyed Saori in her red satin shorts and tank top, embroidered with black lace.
"Nice pajamas," he smirked, then grabbed the door handle as Saori tried to slam is in his face.
"Nice try, but I won't be gotten rid of that easily."
"What do you want Darren?"
"I came over to ask if you could help me," he pointed to his backpack.
"I'm sorry, but I can't give you the help you need, besides, you're past being able to help."
Darren looked at her dumbstruck, "Listen, I didn't come here to fool around, I mean it, honest."
"That's a first." Saori replied dryly as she attempted to close the door again. But before she could, Darren pushed his way between the door and her, pressed his hands against the doorway, and wouldn't budge.
"Saori, I mean it. I understand that you believe me to be this sick pervert and all, but just give me this one chance. I need to bring my grades up or I'm off the football team. Saori, you're the smartest person I know and I need your help."
Saori saw the truth in his amber eyes and hesitantly led him upstairs to her room. "Alright, I need to get my stuff together, what do you need help with?"
"Um, trig, chem., bio, and some other stuff, let me check."
Saori sat across from Darren, desperately trying his hardest, and saw he really meant what he said, even though he could be a total leech at times.
The day passed and the time came to call it quits for the night.
"Thanks a lot Saori; can I come over Saturday too?"
"Yeah, sure."
"Okay! Bye!" Saori watched as he ran down the street to his house all the while wondering that he looked oddly familiar to the guy in her dreams. The dreams that had come to her ever since a few years ago. Ever since her mother had been diagnosed with cancer, and her life began to change.
So???? What do you think??? You gotta tell me some time! So click that little arrow thingy down there to the left next to submit review, and type away! I'll update as soon as I get four or five reviews total.