[smiles happily] Konnichiwa! This chapter took me all weekend to write- but
hell- I wanted to put it up before Friday and well... here it is! Replies!:
CHIBI-CHAN: Ah- a sex kitten Ryou? [snickers evilly] well- I might try and make his work experience a little toned down for ff.net standards but until then... *_*. Read the general note!
HYATT INSOMNIA: Gothic Ryou? ^_^. Yeah- he's one of those masochists in disguise, I swear! Goth person in the closet! No cashmere pastel colors in his twisted little mind!
LUPUSDRAGON: No words? [smirk] hai!
NIENI WOODLAND: [blink] virgin...ears.... virgin ears?! WTF?! You've probably heard all the lemons I've written- so don't try and pull that! [points her finger accusingly]
RYUARASHI: Reaction? Yeah- a good reaction chapter I'd say.
RENEE THE RABID SQUIRREL: Yup, I went backwards- but I sorta wanted to write the epilogue in a way that it kinda raised a lot of questions and left the story really... open and stuff. [shrug] I think it works.
GENERAL: Alright- this is the "cleaned up" version of my original version of this chapter... and the lemon version is on my website ((which is linked in my profile))... And um... well- it had a possibility of two lemons, I went with one though, and for those dominatrix Ryou fans, there's a little taste of what he does in that version as well. So yeah- read up!
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/.../: Jounouchi's thoughts
There's More to Me Than You: "I Belong in a Waking Dream"
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Jounouchi wasn't actually "prepared" for what greeted him when he arrived back at the Kaiba Mansion- nor was he prepared for the intense cold, frost colored stare of his lover as he entered the master bedroom.
"Uh... 'sup, Seto?" The blond tried to talk casually as he made his way around the large room, taking off his shirt and flinging it into the dirty clothes basket.
"Where have you been?" Seto was sitting with legs and arms crossed, back against the headboard of their king sized bed.
"Out...?" Jounouchi continued to undress, flinging socks into the basket. "What does it seem like?"
"Like I'm pissed off that you weren't here when I got home." His words were sharp.
"I can't stay here all day waiting for you, Seto." The argument of the century- always around and around. The problem was never solved and it only resulted in another sex-less week. That's probably what Jounouchi missed the most sometimes when he was alone- Seto wrapping his arms around his body and claiming him.
"If you love me you fuckin' can." At this the blond rolled his eyes and looked at the brunette who seemed to be taking all of this extremely seriously- as if Jounouchi's absence would actually MEAN he didn't love him.
/Here comes the guilt trip.../ "You know I love you- I just can't stay here ALL DAY. It's bad for my nerves..."
"And you think my being at work is good for my nerves? I would give anything to stay here in peace."
"Then do that- Seto- you're never here, I barely see you and I'm your damn boyfriend. I miss you- I miss people- I can't stay cooped up in here for no reason!"
"I give you everything you want- you're being selfish, mutt." Seto's words stung the blond. Most of the time all canine references were said in a "puppy love" kind of way- but in arguments, he felt their spite. "Look..." The older teenager stood and walked to his lover, wrapping his arms around the slender figure from behind. Jounouchi frowned, closing his eyes as he was pulled against Seto's chest. "I just want to know where you are. I love you- I want to see you when I get home..."
"It makes me wonder when you'll EVER come home..." The shorter man turned in Seto's arms looking up at the blue orbs that starred down at him. "I love you... I-" A single finger was pushed against his lips to silence him.
"I love you too, Jounouchi." The words were soothing to the blond and his frustration in his taller lover washed away. "I just want to see your face when I come back and I want to hold you like this..." His strong arms wrapped around Jounouchi tighter.
"I miss you..."
"I miss you too, puppy." The brunette leaned forward and caressed their cheeks together, moving his lips to whisper in Jounouchi's ear. "I've missed you so much..." The tone was of outright seduction and the blond shivered as he felt the tip of Seto's tongue trace along his earlobe, beginning to suck.
"I've needed to know you're here for me... like before..." Jounouchi whispered as he felt his lover begin to walk, making the blond walk backward towards their bed. Seto moaned a positive response before finally pushing the young man onto his back and onto the soft mattress beneath them.
"That hasn't changed, inu." Those words sent chills down the teenager's spine and he couldn't help but close his eyes in pleasure as Seto began to lick and nip at his exposed neck and chest. He chuckled when lips were pressed against his nipples, tongue tracing along the ring and then suckling it possessively.
"I guess not." Seto's thin fingers began to unbutton Jounouchi's pants, pulling them past his knees and away from their owners to an unknown destination.
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His eyes remained shut as he listened to the movement in the room. /Ja ne, Seto./ The door closed with a hard click signaling the exit of the CEO. Then the honey colored eyes opened, looking to his side at the bright red, digital letters that shone out 4.30 am. /I wonder when I'll see him again./ The single thought crossed through his mind when the blonde's eyes went back to starring at the ceiling.
'Jou- I love you... I want you... JUST SHUT UP AND LET ME HAVE YOU!' The words echoed through him- sex and lust driven words. Is that what their love making meant? That he was a possession that was being commanded to Seto's will? And his body hurt- it was still throbbing and he couldn't move.
What had he changed? Nothing. Jounouchi had only proven that after going out with his friends, he'd be sternly forced to conform back into what his "owner" wanted. /Seto- you don't know how much I meant it when I said I missed you./ Tears were forming at the corner of his eyes and the ceiling was becoming clouded in his honey colored orbs. Cloudy- just like how their relationship had become.
And everyone thought they were happy- just like before when they first decided to be together. /They don't know anything about what really happens around here.../ Jounouchi thought bitterly as he clenched his fist besides him and lifted it enough to look at it. /I'm lonely... he does this every time... I won't see him for another two weeks- "always at the office"/
With difficulty he rolled onto his side- pain from his backside shooting up his spine and enveloping him in internal flames. /Son of a fuckin' bitch... thanks, Seto. I really loved last night./ The teenager clenched his eyes shut as he waited for the waves of pain to wash away- and when it did, he had a frown on his face. /Hmph- and Ryou deals with this every night./
At this, his eyes flashed open. Why did Ryou just come into his mind like that? /Ah- it's just because I haven't seen him in a while.../ But seeing him out of nowhere all of a sudden was certainly a shock- who'd a known Ryou could take it up the ass with no lubricant and no complaint? /He's stronger than me.../ The blond sighed, starring at the bright digits of the clock- 4.40 am. /I wonder what he's doing right now? How long does he work for, anyway?/
Images seemed to register in his mind in those ticking seconds of the time. Silver mane thrown back as an exasperated moan escaped Ryou's beautifully parted lips, virtually pounded from behind in one of the many black barred cages in the room. Jounouchi had been completely thrown off guard when Yami had suggested they go see what Ryou did around there; he hadn't expected to see a sweat covered silver porcelain male being- well, as Yami put it- "fucked shitless" standing up and pressed against the side of a black cage. He would have never have imagined that- nor the way the hikari controlled his charge with a whip.
/Why the fuck am I thinking about that?/ Jounouchi closed his eyes and sighed. /That's not good. I just need rest- that's probably why.../
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Let me clear this up before there is any confusion- Seto DIDN'T rape Jounouchi- this "cleaned up" version kinda made it unclear... so no- he didn't rape him. ^_^.
No updates till I get at least... 25!
((Ah- one of my new favorite quotes!: "Let me remind you, 007- you have a license to kill, not to break the traffic laws." O.o ooohhhh smack!))
And yeah- the original lemon is at geocities.com/quatre_kun86!
CHIBI-CHAN: Ah- a sex kitten Ryou? [snickers evilly] well- I might try and make his work experience a little toned down for ff.net standards but until then... *_*. Read the general note!
HYATT INSOMNIA: Gothic Ryou? ^_^. Yeah- he's one of those masochists in disguise, I swear! Goth person in the closet! No cashmere pastel colors in his twisted little mind!
LUPUSDRAGON: No words? [smirk] hai!
NIENI WOODLAND: [blink] virgin...ears.... virgin ears?! WTF?! You've probably heard all the lemons I've written- so don't try and pull that! [points her finger accusingly]
RYUARASHI: Reaction? Yeah- a good reaction chapter I'd say.
RENEE THE RABID SQUIRREL: Yup, I went backwards- but I sorta wanted to write the epilogue in a way that it kinda raised a lot of questions and left the story really... open and stuff. [shrug] I think it works.
GENERAL: Alright- this is the "cleaned up" version of my original version of this chapter... and the lemon version is on my website ((which is linked in my profile))... And um... well- it had a possibility of two lemons, I went with one though, and for those dominatrix Ryou fans, there's a little taste of what he does in that version as well. So yeah- read up!
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/.../: Jounouchi's thoughts
There's More to Me Than You: "I Belong in a Waking Dream"
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Jounouchi wasn't actually "prepared" for what greeted him when he arrived back at the Kaiba Mansion- nor was he prepared for the intense cold, frost colored stare of his lover as he entered the master bedroom.
"Uh... 'sup, Seto?" The blond tried to talk casually as he made his way around the large room, taking off his shirt and flinging it into the dirty clothes basket.
"Where have you been?" Seto was sitting with legs and arms crossed, back against the headboard of their king sized bed.
"Out...?" Jounouchi continued to undress, flinging socks into the basket. "What does it seem like?"
"Like I'm pissed off that you weren't here when I got home." His words were sharp.
"I can't stay here all day waiting for you, Seto." The argument of the century- always around and around. The problem was never solved and it only resulted in another sex-less week. That's probably what Jounouchi missed the most sometimes when he was alone- Seto wrapping his arms around his body and claiming him.
"If you love me you fuckin' can." At this the blond rolled his eyes and looked at the brunette who seemed to be taking all of this extremely seriously- as if Jounouchi's absence would actually MEAN he didn't love him.
/Here comes the guilt trip.../ "You know I love you- I just can't stay here ALL DAY. It's bad for my nerves..."
"And you think my being at work is good for my nerves? I would give anything to stay here in peace."
"Then do that- Seto- you're never here, I barely see you and I'm your damn boyfriend. I miss you- I miss people- I can't stay cooped up in here for no reason!"
"I give you everything you want- you're being selfish, mutt." Seto's words stung the blond. Most of the time all canine references were said in a "puppy love" kind of way- but in arguments, he felt their spite. "Look..." The older teenager stood and walked to his lover, wrapping his arms around the slender figure from behind. Jounouchi frowned, closing his eyes as he was pulled against Seto's chest. "I just want to know where you are. I love you- I want to see you when I get home..."
"It makes me wonder when you'll EVER come home..." The shorter man turned in Seto's arms looking up at the blue orbs that starred down at him. "I love you... I-" A single finger was pushed against his lips to silence him.
"I love you too, Jounouchi." The words were soothing to the blond and his frustration in his taller lover washed away. "I just want to see your face when I come back and I want to hold you like this..." His strong arms wrapped around Jounouchi tighter.
"I miss you..."
"I miss you too, puppy." The brunette leaned forward and caressed their cheeks together, moving his lips to whisper in Jounouchi's ear. "I've missed you so much..." The tone was of outright seduction and the blond shivered as he felt the tip of Seto's tongue trace along his earlobe, beginning to suck.
"I've needed to know you're here for me... like before..." Jounouchi whispered as he felt his lover begin to walk, making the blond walk backward towards their bed. Seto moaned a positive response before finally pushing the young man onto his back and onto the soft mattress beneath them.
"That hasn't changed, inu." Those words sent chills down the teenager's spine and he couldn't help but close his eyes in pleasure as Seto began to lick and nip at his exposed neck and chest. He chuckled when lips were pressed against his nipples, tongue tracing along the ring and then suckling it possessively.
"I guess not." Seto's thin fingers began to unbutton Jounouchi's pants, pulling them past his knees and away from their owners to an unknown destination.
~*~*~
His eyes remained shut as he listened to the movement in the room. /Ja ne, Seto./ The door closed with a hard click signaling the exit of the CEO. Then the honey colored eyes opened, looking to his side at the bright red, digital letters that shone out 4.30 am. /I wonder when I'll see him again./ The single thought crossed through his mind when the blonde's eyes went back to starring at the ceiling.
'Jou- I love you... I want you... JUST SHUT UP AND LET ME HAVE YOU!' The words echoed through him- sex and lust driven words. Is that what their love making meant? That he was a possession that was being commanded to Seto's will? And his body hurt- it was still throbbing and he couldn't move.
What had he changed? Nothing. Jounouchi had only proven that after going out with his friends, he'd be sternly forced to conform back into what his "owner" wanted. /Seto- you don't know how much I meant it when I said I missed you./ Tears were forming at the corner of his eyes and the ceiling was becoming clouded in his honey colored orbs. Cloudy- just like how their relationship had become.
And everyone thought they were happy- just like before when they first decided to be together. /They don't know anything about what really happens around here.../ Jounouchi thought bitterly as he clenched his fist besides him and lifted it enough to look at it. /I'm lonely... he does this every time... I won't see him for another two weeks- "always at the office"/
With difficulty he rolled onto his side- pain from his backside shooting up his spine and enveloping him in internal flames. /Son of a fuckin' bitch... thanks, Seto. I really loved last night./ The teenager clenched his eyes shut as he waited for the waves of pain to wash away- and when it did, he had a frown on his face. /Hmph- and Ryou deals with this every night./
At this, his eyes flashed open. Why did Ryou just come into his mind like that? /Ah- it's just because I haven't seen him in a while.../ But seeing him out of nowhere all of a sudden was certainly a shock- who'd a known Ryou could take it up the ass with no lubricant and no complaint? /He's stronger than me.../ The blond sighed, starring at the bright digits of the clock- 4.40 am. /I wonder what he's doing right now? How long does he work for, anyway?/
Images seemed to register in his mind in those ticking seconds of the time. Silver mane thrown back as an exasperated moan escaped Ryou's beautifully parted lips, virtually pounded from behind in one of the many black barred cages in the room. Jounouchi had been completely thrown off guard when Yami had suggested they go see what Ryou did around there; he hadn't expected to see a sweat covered silver porcelain male being- well, as Yami put it- "fucked shitless" standing up and pressed against the side of a black cage. He would have never have imagined that- nor the way the hikari controlled his charge with a whip.
/Why the fuck am I thinking about that?/ Jounouchi closed his eyes and sighed. /That's not good. I just need rest- that's probably why.../
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Let me clear this up before there is any confusion- Seto DIDN'T rape Jounouchi- this "cleaned up" version kinda made it unclear... so no- he didn't rape him. ^_^.
No updates till I get at least... 25!
((Ah- one of my new favorite quotes!: "Let me remind you, 007- you have a license to kill, not to break the traffic laws." O.o ooohhhh smack!))
And yeah- the original lemon is at geocities.com/quatre_kun86!