BEHOLD MY FIRST FANFICTION!
Please review it! please please!
I own nothing but Clara/ Paloma maybe Frail…. I don't know… No wait! I own the PoTC soundtrack! Ha!
I have decided to rewrite some of the chapters.
Clara sat on the bed reading her book and enjoying the feeling of the boat being knocked around by waves.
Clara and her mom were traveling to the Caribbean because her father had requested that they join him at the new estate.
To a small 8 year old girl this was perfect, nothing could go wrong. She was moving to new place, and new people.
"Clara! Come on up dear!" her mother called from above.
"Coming" she called back. She set the book that she was reading down on her pillow. Climbing the stairs up the deck she thought how lucky she was.
Clara raced over to her mother. She leaned over the rail her brown hair blowing freely in the wind.
"Careful now Clara." Her mother warned.
"Do you think that we'll meet any pirates out here mother?" she asked still looking down at the water.
Her mother laughed nervously and gave her a nervous smile. "No dear"
"Oh… that's too bad I was hoping to see some. I read about them in the book I was reading. I think that would be very exciting, don't you?"
Her mother just looked at her and then turned back to watching the waves.
Her mother tucked her into bed. "Good Night Clara"
"Night mommy"
Clara fell asleep with dreams of pirates. Some was screaming pirates.
"PIRATES!" someone yelled.
Clara's mother shook her awake.
"Clara….Clara wake up dear."
"What? What's going on?"
"We need to hide you" Her mother said, trying to find something in the draw beside Clara's bed.
"Why?"
"No time to explain" Clara's mother shoved something into her hand.
Clara could hear screams coming from outside. Was that a cannon?
Her mother shoved her in a closet and quickly shut the door.
"'ello there…" said some with a strange accent.
Pirates…..
Through the crack between the doors she could she a strange man with a sword.
"NOOOOOOOOO!" she screamed as he brought the sword do on her.
The Pirate turned to the closet and threw open the closet doors.
short eh? Theres another chapter though….
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