The Aura and The Element Hero!

by AzAlexzZ

Satoshi and Serena are born in an entirely new universe filled with Quirks. Follow their journey as they study at U.A High School to become Pro Heroes. As they bond with and befriend Izuku, Ochaco, Shoto, Tenya, and the rest of Class 1-A, what will they learn and how will they succeed? What challenges lie in their path and how will they overcome them? SatoSere

12. Closed

Hey guys!

Again, another rewrite. I have decided to rewrite all of my stories and of course, this one isn't special.

Even though this one wasn't rushed, I realized I relied way too much on the anime plotline for the story. I felt it was not too original and even though I tried to add new characters, I ended up marginalizing other characters + failing to provide good context for the new ones.

I've decided to remove Serena and other plotlines from the story (Satoshi's body aching form using Aura, which I totally ignored) because I did not integrate them well and constantly wrote myself into corners trying to balance two new characters and I was forced to come to terms that my writing abilities are just not cut out for that.

Basically what this means is that:

1) Class 1-A will be back to 20 students again, I'll decide who Satoshi replaces later, Serena will not be in the story;

2) In the first version of the story, Satoshi met Izuku and All Might months before the U.A. entrance exams began. I'm not doing that for the rewrite. The story will go from the prologue straight to the entrance exam, this means Satoshi will not help All Might with the Sludge monster incident, and he will not help Izuku with training, he will meet Izuku after the first day of class.

3) I will try to add more context for the characters. What they are doing, who they are, and how I want them to function in my story.

4) As I have already written 11 chapters and over 100,000 words. I won't change the bulk of what I have written (except for the start), certain things will have to change because I changed the size of the classes and removed Serena.

5) I will break down chapters into smaller ones instead of having 10,000 chapters every single time, maybe half of that (or a bit more) depending on the chapter. This means there will be more chapters but I will also try to flesh out characters and include more backstories.

5) I won't be uploading anything until I have the first 10-15 chapters done, it won't take too long hopefully since I already have something to work with.

So yeah, sorry for more news like this. Hope you guys look forward to it! Let me know if you guys have any suggestions!

I plan on releasing this rewrite at the start of next year. Hopefully in January!

AzAlexzZ out!