Hey again just a little note:
Thanks for the reviews and they help!
XChristinaXBriannaX: your first review did help. As I said, this is my
first fanfic. I like getting criticism. I will make the chapters longer!
And Microsoft Word doesn't have much to do with it I guess I just had to
figure out how to write the chapters so they are spaced and everything.
Your second review was a bit harsh lol but no hard feelings I guess! Sorry
but I am going to continue writing! Hope your next review (if you choose
to) will be more positive towards my stories. Thanks for being honest
though!!!
cutie4u: aww thanks and I did update as soon as I read your review!!
Alexei: hehehe, It may not end up in a Miranda, Gordo pairing!! I'm no into
those too!
Thanks for the support too!
melissaL:thanks for the review!! lol I got lots of reviews I am super happy
now! Hehehe I'll check out your story asap!!
Whoops sorry onto the next (hopefully longer) chapter:
Lizzie sputtered and dropped the shopping bags she was holding. She sheepishly picked them up again and stared into Miranda's dark, puzzled eyes.
"Well. OH NO!! You don't have a crush on him too? Because that would be so..." Miranda went on and on and on.. Lizzie didn't hear anymore of it. Her head felt like a blender. Spinning and spinning.
"Well!! Do you think he likes me too? Do you like him too? Lizzie! Talk to me!!"
Lizzie shook her head and woke up suddenly.
"No. I don't like him I mean.." Lizzie managed to blurt out. "Yeah, umm sure he likes you."
Miranda let out a sigh of relief and continued to chat about how great Gordo is, how great his curly hair looked. Blah blah blah.. Gordo then came back and Miranda changed the subject to their schedules abruptly.
Lizzie was shocked. Even now, a while later sitting beside Miranda felt so very strange. 'Its because we like the same guy you idiot!!" Lizzie thought. But wait!!! They had liked the same guys simultaneously before. Ethan Craft, Danny Kessler. 'Its because its Gordo. Our best friend and in Rome.."
Lizzie's thoughts were interrupted by Mrs. McGuire's frantic yells.
"HURRY UP!!! MATT AND LANNY HAVE TO BE PICKED UP TOO!!!! Lizzie's mom looked upset. Back to school, in which most parents were happy to see their kids go back for another ten months of school, was always upset around this time of year.
Gordo, Miranda and Lizzie half-ran half-stumbled to Mrs. McGuire's van and Mrs McGuire sped out of the parking lot at full speed. Mrs.Mc: "Oh oh oh!! I hope Lanny and Matt are not worried!! I am two minutes late!" Lizzie: Mom!! Two minutes!!? I am sure they are not panicking!! It only takes three minutes to get to the game!!"
Miranda and Gordo stifled laughs as Mrs. Mcguire continued to run red lights and speed through residential areas.
Finally they were at Matt and Lanny's soccer game. They obviously didn't even realize that Mrs. McGuire was late. Matt told everyone that they won and Lanny nodded persistently, then gave Matt a funny look.
"Yes Lanny, you have told me a million times! I should talk more during the game!!!"
At The McGuire House
Gordo and Matt were making curly fries in the kitchen. After Lizzie's and Miranda's groans and moans Gordo reassured them that you can never have too many curly fries in a day. Miranda and Lizzie were upstairs in Lizzie's room.
Lizzie: Miranda I have something to tell you..
Miranda: Oh ya! I never kind of gave you a chance to tell me in Style Shack!! Ok spill!!!
Lizzie: Well In Rome, after I sang on the music awards.. I kind of ki..
Miranda: OMG!! DID ISABELLA CALL YOU BACK YET!!??
Lizzie: MIRANDA I KISSED GORDO IN ROME!! I like him!! I'm sorry.
Miranda: Lizzie..
lol sorry for the cliffie!! I wrote about a page and a bit! The next chapter will be way longer I promise! R/R!! lol -dacia3
Whoops sorry onto the next (hopefully longer) chapter:
Lizzie sputtered and dropped the shopping bags she was holding. She sheepishly picked them up again and stared into Miranda's dark, puzzled eyes.
"Well. OH NO!! You don't have a crush on him too? Because that would be so..." Miranda went on and on and on.. Lizzie didn't hear anymore of it. Her head felt like a blender. Spinning and spinning.
"Well!! Do you think he likes me too? Do you like him too? Lizzie! Talk to me!!"
Lizzie shook her head and woke up suddenly.
"No. I don't like him I mean.." Lizzie managed to blurt out. "Yeah, umm sure he likes you."
Miranda let out a sigh of relief and continued to chat about how great Gordo is, how great his curly hair looked. Blah blah blah.. Gordo then came back and Miranda changed the subject to their schedules abruptly.
Lizzie was shocked. Even now, a while later sitting beside Miranda felt so very strange. 'Its because we like the same guy you idiot!!" Lizzie thought. But wait!!! They had liked the same guys simultaneously before. Ethan Craft, Danny Kessler. 'Its because its Gordo. Our best friend and in Rome.."
Lizzie's thoughts were interrupted by Mrs. McGuire's frantic yells.
"HURRY UP!!! MATT AND LANNY HAVE TO BE PICKED UP TOO!!!! Lizzie's mom looked upset. Back to school, in which most parents were happy to see their kids go back for another ten months of school, was always upset around this time of year.
Gordo, Miranda and Lizzie half-ran half-stumbled to Mrs. McGuire's van and Mrs McGuire sped out of the parking lot at full speed. Mrs.Mc: "Oh oh oh!! I hope Lanny and Matt are not worried!! I am two minutes late!" Lizzie: Mom!! Two minutes!!? I am sure they are not panicking!! It only takes three minutes to get to the game!!"
Miranda and Gordo stifled laughs as Mrs. Mcguire continued to run red lights and speed through residential areas.
Finally they were at Matt and Lanny's soccer game. They obviously didn't even realize that Mrs. McGuire was late. Matt told everyone that they won and Lanny nodded persistently, then gave Matt a funny look.
"Yes Lanny, you have told me a million times! I should talk more during the game!!!"
At The McGuire House
Gordo and Matt were making curly fries in the kitchen. After Lizzie's and Miranda's groans and moans Gordo reassured them that you can never have too many curly fries in a day. Miranda and Lizzie were upstairs in Lizzie's room.
Lizzie: Miranda I have something to tell you..
Miranda: Oh ya! I never kind of gave you a chance to tell me in Style Shack!! Ok spill!!!
Lizzie: Well In Rome, after I sang on the music awards.. I kind of ki..
Miranda: OMG!! DID ISABELLA CALL YOU BACK YET!!??
Lizzie: MIRANDA I KISSED GORDO IN ROME!! I like him!! I'm sorry.
Miranda: Lizzie..
lol sorry for the cliffie!! I wrote about a page and a bit! The next chapter will be way longer I promise! R/R!! lol -dacia3