Disclaimer: You know the drill. I don't own anyone except the ones I made
up. Thanks Disney though for writing such a fun story!
Now for the horrible truth. I admit it. I have lured you here under terrible pretenses. This is a Jack/OC story. BUT WAIT! Before you go running for the hills in fear, just give it a chance. I've always hated the idea of MarySue too, but this girl has grown on me a bit since this whole thing has started. You might even like her too (except for the fact that she's got your man - but hey, what good story doesn't have a little love). Besides, I'd like to think you can just go ahead and put yourself in there, making it all the better.
R/R PLEASE! I'd love to hear what you think. Although being my first story I'm a little nervous about having it slaughtered so niceness and constructive criticism is appreciated. Thanks and enjoy!
Angie
Now for the horrible truth. I admit it. I have lured you here under terrible pretenses. This is a Jack/OC story. BUT WAIT! Before you go running for the hills in fear, just give it a chance. I've always hated the idea of MarySue too, but this girl has grown on me a bit since this whole thing has started. You might even like her too (except for the fact that she's got your man - but hey, what good story doesn't have a little love). Besides, I'd like to think you can just go ahead and put yourself in there, making it all the better.
R/R PLEASE! I'd love to hear what you think. Although being my first story I'm a little nervous about having it slaughtered so niceness and constructive criticism is appreciated. Thanks and enjoy!
Angie