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Bayton and Karlos, Rocker baby owns Morion and I own the rest.
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*Darksbane stands with a screeching mike on a overlighted stage*
Darksbane: Umm, [whispers to Kiz] what am I gonna say?
Kiz: Just promote your story.
Darksbane: Um, ok.
Guy #53: Times up! CUT
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Chapter 4: And this little piggy goes to.?
After god knows how long the testing days were over.
They had all grown strong, but how would eco affect them now? Would they be even better at channelling, and able to use it for lethal purposes?
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Meanwhile the room was being filled again with new people in cages, who had obviously also survived the first experiment. 20 cages along the walls, leaving an open space in the middle.
Some died off over time. One had been experimented on with red eco, so all his muscles had become extremely strong. Including his heart. One day at testing, his pulse got up and BAM, he blew his aorta (biological A/N: first vein directly after the heart. Has to resist enormous pressure during heart systole).
"One less for Sidric to play with", Emaly thought envying his destiny.
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They were taken in 4 at the time.
Jak was in group with a guy named Bayton and two girls named Lisa and Jen. A polite, but quiet quartet.
In the laboratory a cluster of blue eco was set up in the middle. The four were strapped in chairs in one end. Jen was released and everybody watched her as she approached the cluster.
She was the first to try to channel after the experiments. Sidric and another man were watching intensely.
As she touched it, her whole body was engulfed in blue flames and her body gave a twitch as the energy took over her body.
She was no longer in charge of her body. Sparks of blue eco flew through the air. After around 20 seconds it was all over and Jen laid limp on the floor. A guard was send to check her pulse. None. She was then removed by the guards as if she was a bag of potatoes. Out, and on to the next.
Bayton was released and he sceptically walked up to the red eco placed before him. He took a deep breath, closed his eyes and walked into the substance.
Channelling the eco he was send to his knees. The eco made his body heavy but strong. Really strong.
His body was flooded with energy. All he had to do was take control of it. Not as simple as said, but he did keep it from taking the full control of his body.
Meanwhile the others just watched his struggle against an invisible enemy. He was also radiating eco, but at the ending of his chargeup, he had stopped the eco from diffunding out in the room, and could also stand up. His eyes glowed red.
Sidric and the other guy were impressed. In the middle of his enthusiastic scribble-fury Sidric's eyes suddenly began to glow with jealousy. He shook his head and continued writing.
As the eco's effect wore off, Bayton fell to the ground, exhausted. The fight and use of the eco had taken all his energy. He had not yet learned how to use the eco as an energy source, so he quickly used up his body's energy storages.
"Well, that's a keeper. Put him back in the cage for now, but keep an eye on him!", the man next to Sidric said. As for Sidric; he just grumphed.
Jak was up next and both his and Lisa's eyes widened when a guard carefully placed a box of dark eco on the floor after releasing Jak.
"D-d", was all Jak could mutter
"Yes, dark eco. Now go", the man next to Sidric said, "Hopefully it won't hurt you"
Jak was very confused at this point, just standing and staring.
"What the dear Morion is trying to tell you, is that I managed to liquefy dark eco and put it into your system, so you should be able to channel dark eco by now, or at least not get killed by it". He gave a triumphant glare at Morion, who just shot a 'so-what-?' look back.
A guard pushed Jak up to the box with the end of his gun. During the short while he had been in this new world, one of the things he had learned was that such things. weren't to be messed with.
"Go on, stick your hand down in it", Morion said, obviously getting a little impatient.
With seven guns pointing at him from 2 metres distance and one touching his temple, he finally agreed to stick his hand down in the ooze.
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Emaly was in the last group with two green's and a blue (A/N: the colour of the eco which they were experimented with). She knew the blue from before, and hated him as if it was the sole purpose of her life.
She send him an evil glare, but he just smiled back.
"You look so sweet when you get angry, darling."
Her eyes widened and she was just about to jump at him, but a guard held her back.
"Save that for later, you'll need it", a man's voice said from somewhere behind her. He had just entered the room and went to take his seat in the other end of the prisoners.
"Everything is ready to go, sir Morion", Sidric said with great disgust in his voice.
"Ah, I see you finally learned it"
The two scientists didn't pay much attention to the fastened foursome during their little conversation.
"Some day I'm gonna kill you", Emaly said
"Don't make promises you can't hold" He was annoying her as always
"I will, some day. Or else I'll make someone do it for me. But none the less it is a fact: You will die by the hands of someone who hates your guts as much as I do"
"Sure, but it won't be you. You still love me, I know it"
"You always burn your bridges, it will be your death some day."
"Don't change the subject."
"Shut up you two!" Morion had turned his attention from Sidric, who was releasing one of the greens while a guard placed a blue eco cluster in the middle of the room.
"Hey, Isn't that for me?", the blue said gloating as if he knew all about the experiment.
"Good observation, but it is a fact that most of the. survivors are green eco experiments, so we thought we might be interested in knowing how other ecos affect them." With this comment Sidric was beginning to be very excited. You could tell by the way he acted around the experiments that he was a real scientist, seeking all the knowledge he could gain, trying out everything, being very nosy etc.
The green was a fat, little woman in the late 20's. She was pushed into the cluster by one of the guards.
"Tired of waiting?", Emaly thought. They were after all the last experiments of the day.
She looked like she got electroshocked, the eco's sparkles running over her body making her cramp. And eventually fall dead to the floor.
"One more" Morion said calmly
The other green, a young boy, was also pushed into a cluster of blue eco. The same thing happened to him except that he took control of the eco. He channelled it, but couldn't use it. It was just blue sparkles flying over his skin, and they eventually died out.
When it came to green eco, he would channel it like he had done nothing else his entire life. When seeing him channel it was like watching it through green transparent glass. Everything about him just turned more green, his eyes, hair and even skin a little. It was the same with all the other colours.
Next was the blue. He didn't have any trouble at all controlling the eco. He was even better than the green guy before.
"So what do you say baby?" He said turned to Emaly, who was still strapped.
"Oh, shut up Karlos. I'm NOT impressed" Surprised, but definitely not impressed.
He walked over to her. The guards kept a safe distance; you couldn't know what he might do powered up.
She looked prettier than the last time he saw her. In fact, she looked better every time he saw her. She was tanned, brown-haired and brown-eyed, in fact the only thing that broke her anonymous brown shade was the left part of her eye being a clear green. Because of that brown shade, you hardly noticed her anywhere. That making her the perfect thief, which she also was. Everything about her was just attracting to him; she fascinated him.
She was perfectly built in every way, you just didn't notice until you had studied every inch of her body like he had.
"What a shame", he mumbled as the blue eco's effect wore off. He didn't have to fight to control the eco, so he wasn't exhausted at all.
While he was being lead out of the room, Emaly was released. The guards weren't holding on to her, so she easily slid around them and threw a fist at Karlos.
He dodged it and hit her instead with a foot in the stomach, sending her a metre back. Taking advantage of her laying position she quickly swept him from his feet.
She didn't get a chance to get to a standing position before he was over her, nailing her to the ground with his weight and a grip of her short hair. She tried to get away, but couldn't.
"You can't beat me, nobody can", he whispered into her ear.
A guard pulled him to his feet and pointed his gun towards him.
"See you, baby"
Karlos was being dragged out of the room with a vicious grin on his lips. Emaly just gave him a glare. He was still too strong. She would give the world to beat the crap out of him, and enjoy every second. Yes indeed, it would be priceless.
Alone with the scientist and guards in the room she approached the white eco cloud set before her. They said it was unstable. Maybe she could avoid this experiment if she just waited long enough, and let the eco lose its energy?
"Maybe", she thought as she stopped half a metre from the cluster, only to be pushed the last piece of way by the hand of Morion.
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Well, a little cliffie for you guys. Writer's block has struck again and prevented this chapter from being any longer and more plot-evolving (is that a word?). Hope you understand what I mean.
Kiz: Kaza, do your thing! (Darksbane send him after me, and I kept him )
Kaza: What thing?
Kiz: You know, he thing where you sum up all the important things of this chapter..
Kaza: Oh, hmm. Other ecos lose their effect on those who have been experimented on with eco. Yer have to be a really good channeller to control 'your' eco afterwards, 'cause yer body's very sensitive to it. Or else it'll kill ya.
Jak met Bayton, but they were separated soon after. Not much there.
An'. Oh good lord! Emaly an' Karlos have a history together! SHE LIKES THE DAMN BASTARD! *glares angrily at Kiz who just shrugs* Karlos has a thing for her as well, so it's kind of a love-hate relationship.
Why do yer have to be THAT mean?
Kiz: I am.
Kaza: What 'bout her so-called death obsession?
Kiz: More about that later
Kaza: You're insane
Kiz: That too.
Kaza: Oh brother.
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In my opinion not a very good chapter. Couldn't find inspiration despite the fact that I had borrowed a muse. Maybe I ought to get my own. Naw, I'll just use Kaza if Darksbane'll let me.
As for the story I have been thinking of giving Emaly a monologue about her view on life, love (it's gonna be interesting with Karlos around) and. hmm. whatever fall on my mind. Is it a good idea, or should I just drop it?
Until I find out, review responses:
AD: my sincerest apologies. I got confused by the German calling themselves 'deutche' or something. SO I kind of thought it was the same thing.
Emaly: think again.
Kiz: *Goes sit in a corner to wear off shame*
Rocker baby: Re-he-heally? Ya think so? *Gets out of the corner and goes off to celebrate just Kiz and a full wine-cellar* (and yes it's just you, I don't like wine. I LOVE it.)
Darker than your's? Am I good or what?
Emaly: You're not good, you're just mean.
Kiz: And I love it. Je suis le plus méchante (summer holiday has made me forget all my French. So I kinda needed this brush-up)
*Translation: I am the meanest
Kaza: *tries to sneak out door, but it's locked and accidentally starts a very loud alarm*
Kiz: You're not going ANYWHERE. You're my prisoner. *turns off alarm*
Emaly: (relieved) Thank you. Wait a minute, prisoners?
Kiz: Not you, you're property. *Mutes Emaly*
Emaly: *makes big gestures and mouth moving rapidly, but nothing comes out*
Oh, like I have said 5684946 times before I am Danish, you might know H. C. Andersen if any.
Shark: Been there, done that. You like this chappie too?
Darksbane: How did I do? Good enough for ya? Hope so or else *I'll* strangle Kaza!
Kaza: NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, mommy help me! *Kiz grins evilly in the background*
Nobinoir: Thanks, and I have written more (obviously). Fall in love? Maybe, but it won't be twosided (to happy for my little mean story). Besides Emaly has Karlos, and that sure is going to be interesting.
Kiz: That's all for now. Next chapter will be up soon if I manage to find inspiration. Kaza, INPIRE ME; NOW!
Kaza: yer can't MAKE me inspire you. Yer 'ave ta LET me!
Kiz: *grumples*
Review!
Now to the story, but first, a word from our sponsors!
Emaly: Our? Schizophrenic b*tch.
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Have you got a hard time remembering or just thinking? Well try the new skull softener shampoo, it'll get you thinking in no time!
By Kiz shampoos inc.
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*Darksbane stands with a screeching mike on a overlighted stage*
Darksbane: Umm, [whispers to Kiz] what am I gonna say?
Kiz: Just promote your story.
Darksbane: Um, ok.
Guy #53: Times up! CUT
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Chapter 4: And this little piggy goes to.?
After god knows how long the testing days were over.
They had all grown strong, but how would eco affect them now? Would they be even better at channelling, and able to use it for lethal purposes?
-----
Meanwhile the room was being filled again with new people in cages, who had obviously also survived the first experiment. 20 cages along the walls, leaving an open space in the middle.
Some died off over time. One had been experimented on with red eco, so all his muscles had become extremely strong. Including his heart. One day at testing, his pulse got up and BAM, he blew his aorta (biological A/N: first vein directly after the heart. Has to resist enormous pressure during heart systole).
"One less for Sidric to play with", Emaly thought envying his destiny.
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They were taken in 4 at the time.
Jak was in group with a guy named Bayton and two girls named Lisa and Jen. A polite, but quiet quartet.
In the laboratory a cluster of blue eco was set up in the middle. The four were strapped in chairs in one end. Jen was released and everybody watched her as she approached the cluster.
She was the first to try to channel after the experiments. Sidric and another man were watching intensely.
As she touched it, her whole body was engulfed in blue flames and her body gave a twitch as the energy took over her body.
She was no longer in charge of her body. Sparks of blue eco flew through the air. After around 20 seconds it was all over and Jen laid limp on the floor. A guard was send to check her pulse. None. She was then removed by the guards as if she was a bag of potatoes. Out, and on to the next.
Bayton was released and he sceptically walked up to the red eco placed before him. He took a deep breath, closed his eyes and walked into the substance.
Channelling the eco he was send to his knees. The eco made his body heavy but strong. Really strong.
His body was flooded with energy. All he had to do was take control of it. Not as simple as said, but he did keep it from taking the full control of his body.
Meanwhile the others just watched his struggle against an invisible enemy. He was also radiating eco, but at the ending of his chargeup, he had stopped the eco from diffunding out in the room, and could also stand up. His eyes glowed red.
Sidric and the other guy were impressed. In the middle of his enthusiastic scribble-fury Sidric's eyes suddenly began to glow with jealousy. He shook his head and continued writing.
As the eco's effect wore off, Bayton fell to the ground, exhausted. The fight and use of the eco had taken all his energy. He had not yet learned how to use the eco as an energy source, so he quickly used up his body's energy storages.
"Well, that's a keeper. Put him back in the cage for now, but keep an eye on him!", the man next to Sidric said. As for Sidric; he just grumphed.
Jak was up next and both his and Lisa's eyes widened when a guard carefully placed a box of dark eco on the floor after releasing Jak.
"D-d", was all Jak could mutter
"Yes, dark eco. Now go", the man next to Sidric said, "Hopefully it won't hurt you"
Jak was very confused at this point, just standing and staring.
"What the dear Morion is trying to tell you, is that I managed to liquefy dark eco and put it into your system, so you should be able to channel dark eco by now, or at least not get killed by it". He gave a triumphant glare at Morion, who just shot a 'so-what-?' look back.
A guard pushed Jak up to the box with the end of his gun. During the short while he had been in this new world, one of the things he had learned was that such things. weren't to be messed with.
"Go on, stick your hand down in it", Morion said, obviously getting a little impatient.
With seven guns pointing at him from 2 metres distance and one touching his temple, he finally agreed to stick his hand down in the ooze.
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Emaly was in the last group with two green's and a blue (A/N: the colour of the eco which they were experimented with). She knew the blue from before, and hated him as if it was the sole purpose of her life.
She send him an evil glare, but he just smiled back.
"You look so sweet when you get angry, darling."
Her eyes widened and she was just about to jump at him, but a guard held her back.
"Save that for later, you'll need it", a man's voice said from somewhere behind her. He had just entered the room and went to take his seat in the other end of the prisoners.
"Everything is ready to go, sir Morion", Sidric said with great disgust in his voice.
"Ah, I see you finally learned it"
The two scientists didn't pay much attention to the fastened foursome during their little conversation.
"Some day I'm gonna kill you", Emaly said
"Don't make promises you can't hold" He was annoying her as always
"I will, some day. Or else I'll make someone do it for me. But none the less it is a fact: You will die by the hands of someone who hates your guts as much as I do"
"Sure, but it won't be you. You still love me, I know it"
"You always burn your bridges, it will be your death some day."
"Don't change the subject."
"Shut up you two!" Morion had turned his attention from Sidric, who was releasing one of the greens while a guard placed a blue eco cluster in the middle of the room.
"Hey, Isn't that for me?", the blue said gloating as if he knew all about the experiment.
"Good observation, but it is a fact that most of the. survivors are green eco experiments, so we thought we might be interested in knowing how other ecos affect them." With this comment Sidric was beginning to be very excited. You could tell by the way he acted around the experiments that he was a real scientist, seeking all the knowledge he could gain, trying out everything, being very nosy etc.
The green was a fat, little woman in the late 20's. She was pushed into the cluster by one of the guards.
"Tired of waiting?", Emaly thought. They were after all the last experiments of the day.
She looked like she got electroshocked, the eco's sparkles running over her body making her cramp. And eventually fall dead to the floor.
"One more" Morion said calmly
The other green, a young boy, was also pushed into a cluster of blue eco. The same thing happened to him except that he took control of the eco. He channelled it, but couldn't use it. It was just blue sparkles flying over his skin, and they eventually died out.
When it came to green eco, he would channel it like he had done nothing else his entire life. When seeing him channel it was like watching it through green transparent glass. Everything about him just turned more green, his eyes, hair and even skin a little. It was the same with all the other colours.
Next was the blue. He didn't have any trouble at all controlling the eco. He was even better than the green guy before.
"So what do you say baby?" He said turned to Emaly, who was still strapped.
"Oh, shut up Karlos. I'm NOT impressed" Surprised, but definitely not impressed.
He walked over to her. The guards kept a safe distance; you couldn't know what he might do powered up.
She looked prettier than the last time he saw her. In fact, she looked better every time he saw her. She was tanned, brown-haired and brown-eyed, in fact the only thing that broke her anonymous brown shade was the left part of her eye being a clear green. Because of that brown shade, you hardly noticed her anywhere. That making her the perfect thief, which she also was. Everything about her was just attracting to him; she fascinated him.
She was perfectly built in every way, you just didn't notice until you had studied every inch of her body like he had.
"What a shame", he mumbled as the blue eco's effect wore off. He didn't have to fight to control the eco, so he wasn't exhausted at all.
While he was being lead out of the room, Emaly was released. The guards weren't holding on to her, so she easily slid around them and threw a fist at Karlos.
He dodged it and hit her instead with a foot in the stomach, sending her a metre back. Taking advantage of her laying position she quickly swept him from his feet.
She didn't get a chance to get to a standing position before he was over her, nailing her to the ground with his weight and a grip of her short hair. She tried to get away, but couldn't.
"You can't beat me, nobody can", he whispered into her ear.
A guard pulled him to his feet and pointed his gun towards him.
"See you, baby"
Karlos was being dragged out of the room with a vicious grin on his lips. Emaly just gave him a glare. He was still too strong. She would give the world to beat the crap out of him, and enjoy every second. Yes indeed, it would be priceless.
Alone with the scientist and guards in the room she approached the white eco cloud set before her. They said it was unstable. Maybe she could avoid this experiment if she just waited long enough, and let the eco lose its energy?
"Maybe", she thought as she stopped half a metre from the cluster, only to be pushed the last piece of way by the hand of Morion.
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Well, a little cliffie for you guys. Writer's block has struck again and prevented this chapter from being any longer and more plot-evolving (is that a word?). Hope you understand what I mean.
Kiz: Kaza, do your thing! (Darksbane send him after me, and I kept him )
Kaza: What thing?
Kiz: You know, he thing where you sum up all the important things of this chapter..
Kaza: Oh, hmm. Other ecos lose their effect on those who have been experimented on with eco. Yer have to be a really good channeller to control 'your' eco afterwards, 'cause yer body's very sensitive to it. Or else it'll kill ya.
Jak met Bayton, but they were separated soon after. Not much there.
An'. Oh good lord! Emaly an' Karlos have a history together! SHE LIKES THE DAMN BASTARD! *glares angrily at Kiz who just shrugs* Karlos has a thing for her as well, so it's kind of a love-hate relationship.
Why do yer have to be THAT mean?
Kiz: I am.
Kaza: What 'bout her so-called death obsession?
Kiz: More about that later
Kaza: You're insane
Kiz: That too.
Kaza: Oh brother.
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In my opinion not a very good chapter. Couldn't find inspiration despite the fact that I had borrowed a muse. Maybe I ought to get my own. Naw, I'll just use Kaza if Darksbane'll let me.
As for the story I have been thinking of giving Emaly a monologue about her view on life, love (it's gonna be interesting with Karlos around) and. hmm. whatever fall on my mind. Is it a good idea, or should I just drop it?
Until I find out, review responses:
AD: my sincerest apologies. I got confused by the German calling themselves 'deutche' or something. SO I kind of thought it was the same thing.
Emaly: think again.
Kiz: *Goes sit in a corner to wear off shame*
Rocker baby: Re-he-heally? Ya think so? *Gets out of the corner and goes off to celebrate just Kiz and a full wine-cellar* (and yes it's just you, I don't like wine. I LOVE it.)
Darker than your's? Am I good or what?
Emaly: You're not good, you're just mean.
Kiz: And I love it. Je suis le plus méchante (summer holiday has made me forget all my French. So I kinda needed this brush-up)
*Translation: I am the meanest
Kaza: *tries to sneak out door, but it's locked and accidentally starts a very loud alarm*
Kiz: You're not going ANYWHERE. You're my prisoner. *turns off alarm*
Emaly: (relieved) Thank you. Wait a minute, prisoners?
Kiz: Not you, you're property. *Mutes Emaly*
Emaly: *makes big gestures and mouth moving rapidly, but nothing comes out*
Oh, like I have said 5684946 times before I am Danish, you might know H. C. Andersen if any.
Shark: Been there, done that. You like this chappie too?
Darksbane: How did I do? Good enough for ya? Hope so or else *I'll* strangle Kaza!
Kaza: NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, mommy help me! *Kiz grins evilly in the background*
Nobinoir: Thanks, and I have written more (obviously). Fall in love? Maybe, but it won't be twosided (to happy for my little mean story). Besides Emaly has Karlos, and that sure is going to be interesting.
Kiz: That's all for now. Next chapter will be up soon if I manage to find inspiration. Kaza, INPIRE ME; NOW!
Kaza: yer can't MAKE me inspire you. Yer 'ave ta LET me!
Kiz: *grumples*
Review!