(Ok this is my first fanfic after a long decisions with my younger sister
and my older brother about which I should post so this is the one so r&r ok
please sugentsoins and ideas are welcome^^ toxic2(poison)
intro chapter: the letter It was the last day of winter in mineral town Jack was reading a book about becoming a good father since his wife Karen got pregnant and she was wacting tv. Dear she said when was the last time we went to the bar she asked. Well said Jack you can't go to the bar because you're pregnant that's why. Oww you're no fun winched Karen. Well try to behave you're self wile I am gone to the farmer convention . Well whatever I will try she said but seriously do you have to go? Yes dear I have to go there expecting that I will hold the opening speech Well ok but no looking at the farmer girl's she said with a mad look on her face. Don't worry I won't but lets go to bed I need to get up early to catch the first ferry to the city. Your right I have to get up early too to help out my parents at the supermarket Karen said. Well try not to overwork you're self said Jack with a smile on his face. Were do you get this stuff Jack said Karen you never said that before I got pregnant. Well I was reading in a book for future fathers. Jesus next you're going to put me in a wheel chair said Karen laughing. Maybe I am overprotective I am becoming just like Rick said Jack with a smile. Don't even try Rick as our nebour is hard enough said Karen Let's just get to bed its late said Jack still smiling. The next morning when Karen woke up she noticed that Jack was already gone there was a note on the table it said dear Karen sorry I was gone so early but I had to go I will call you when I am finished here love Jack (yuck what sappy stuff toxic2(poison) ^^). What a dear well she said I hope that our baby will be just as sweet as Jack. She ate her breakfast and went out side spring sure is fast this year she thought . When went pass the mailbox she saw a letter in it she took the letter and opened it said. (Dear big brother how are you I am doing fine since I haven't seen you in a wile because I got to own uncle Tony ranch because he retired from his work so were both farmers now dad is still disappointed that I dint took over his job well everything I going fine so when you get this letter I am on my way to mineral town to see you don't worry my ranch is well taken care of so I will see you 3rd of spring see you then greetings from Jake) well isn't that nice said Karen a little mad Jack is out if town and I am gonna see yonger brother I have never met before.
(wat will happen next so r&r please and ideas and advice is always welcome later) toxic2(poison)
intro chapter: the letter It was the last day of winter in mineral town Jack was reading a book about becoming a good father since his wife Karen got pregnant and she was wacting tv. Dear she said when was the last time we went to the bar she asked. Well said Jack you can't go to the bar because you're pregnant that's why. Oww you're no fun winched Karen. Well try to behave you're self wile I am gone to the farmer convention . Well whatever I will try she said but seriously do you have to go? Yes dear I have to go there expecting that I will hold the opening speech Well ok but no looking at the farmer girl's she said with a mad look on her face. Don't worry I won't but lets go to bed I need to get up early to catch the first ferry to the city. Your right I have to get up early too to help out my parents at the supermarket Karen said. Well try not to overwork you're self said Jack with a smile on his face. Were do you get this stuff Jack said Karen you never said that before I got pregnant. Well I was reading in a book for future fathers. Jesus next you're going to put me in a wheel chair said Karen laughing. Maybe I am overprotective I am becoming just like Rick said Jack with a smile. Don't even try Rick as our nebour is hard enough said Karen Let's just get to bed its late said Jack still smiling. The next morning when Karen woke up she noticed that Jack was already gone there was a note on the table it said dear Karen sorry I was gone so early but I had to go I will call you when I am finished here love Jack (yuck what sappy stuff toxic2(poison) ^^). What a dear well she said I hope that our baby will be just as sweet as Jack. She ate her breakfast and went out side spring sure is fast this year she thought . When went pass the mailbox she saw a letter in it she took the letter and opened it said. (Dear big brother how are you I am doing fine since I haven't seen you in a wile because I got to own uncle Tony ranch because he retired from his work so were both farmers now dad is still disappointed that I dint took over his job well everything I going fine so when you get this letter I am on my way to mineral town to see you don't worry my ranch is well taken care of so I will see you 3rd of spring see you then greetings from Jake) well isn't that nice said Karen a little mad Jack is out if town and I am gonna see yonger brother I have never met before.
(wat will happen next so r&r please and ideas and advice is always welcome later) toxic2(poison)