Athor's note: so i got a few good votes and one bad vote i won't call names.
But like the site say's bad review's can be the only reward for the writer.
Anyway's i got some votes from my friend's and from the reader's.
And I had some e-mail's from people I have never seen in reviews but they voted
And that's wat matter's and I will declare the winner it was simple even I had to count 5 e-mails and 6
And I am sorry if Skate punk afeded anyone I removed his reviews.
And I counted the reviews and the winner is ANN yup be suprized well I am not --;
and here is the next chapter
discliamer: you know the drill i don't own harvest moon
Chapter 6
My first date in a new town part 1
Grey:So Jake what are you going to do this night?
Jake:Why do you aks that Grey?
Grey:Well I was wondering if you can hang out with us.
Tim/doc: Yeah it will be fun lets get a drink it's a wensday after all for me.
Jake:Ok il see you guys after dinner here but I am going my brother is home tonight and I am going there for dinner.
Grey: Ok see you later
Tim/Doc: bye see you.
Later at Jack and Karen's House.
Karen: Hey Jake welcome dinner is ready and Jack is almost home.
Jake: Hey Karen thanks For asking me over for dinner.
Karen: Well we don't get much Guests for dinner Don't know why even my own perant's come once a month here.
Jake: Well I am glad that I can be of help when is Jack coming?
Karen:He should be in right now.
Then tere was a knock on the door.
Jack: Honey I am home !
Karen:Jack am I glad to see you.
Jake: Hey big bro did ya miss me.
Jack: little brother What are you doing here?
Jake: Well I am the new owner of uncle tony's ranch and I wanted to tell and visit you.
Jack: I was worried dad said to me you ware not at home when he called.
Jake:I forgot to tell him my new phone nummer.
Karen: OK you two lets eat something before I starve.
Jack: ( Gulp) That's nice dear.
Jake:Geat lets eat.
Karen: Ok here is my specialty France frie's
Jack: it look good dear.
Jake:it looks like it got burned.
Karen: What is it not good ?
Jake: What did I say burned I said it looks good psst bro can we eat this.
Jack: Hey I still live right.
Karen: Ok you two what are you wisperering about?
Jake/Jack: NOTHING!
After the dinner they ate with some sour face's .
Jake Well its time I got back at the inn.
Jack: wait il go with you to get a beer.
Karen don't be late Dear.
Jack: don't worry hey you still ready for the goddess fastival in the morning?
Karen: hey you are looking at the best dancer of mineral town.
Jake: lets go bro.
Jack:Yup lets go.
Later at the inn.
Grey: Hey Jack its nice too see you again.
Tim/Doc: Yeah lets get something to drink.
Grey:So Jack who is youre esscourt?
Jack: do you even want to know it my wife you jerk.
Grey:Haha just kidding what about you Jake?
Jake: il just watch from the sideline's .
Jack: come on Little bro is that pony tail clouding youre brain of course he will get a date.
Jake: o no I know you last time you set me up for a date it was a total disaster!
Jack: how was I soposed to know she had a giant dog!
Ann: so you guys want to order something else?
Jack: Hey Ann long time no see I just have beer.
Grey: Get me a double wiskhey.
Tim/Doc: I just have a wine please.
Ann: Ok say Jake Can I ask you something?
Jake sure what is it ?
Ann: Come with me then.
Jake:Whats with all the secrets?
Grey: good luck Jake haha.
Tim/Doc: knock em dead kid.
Jack: Good luck bro.
Ann: umm Jake the goddes fastival is tommorow and I was wondering if you be my escourt.
Jake: umm well I don't know.
Ann:Come on it il be fun.
Jake:Ok you got me I will come.
Ann: O thank you it will be a blast.
Jake: He guys I am back.
Grey:So what did she wanted?
Tim/Doc: yeah tell us .
Jack: Come on little bro what is it ?
Jake: I can't tell yet I am going to bed see you at the town square.
Grey: huh ok see you later.
Tim/Doc: Bye Jake.
Jack: told you he get a date.
Athor's note: well that's it part one Sorry I din't update my story so much I had a bad cease of writer's block well I hope to end this story as soon as possible until next time so Please R&R thanks a lot.
But like the site say's bad review's can be the only reward for the writer.
Anyway's i got some votes from my friend's and from the reader's.
And I had some e-mail's from people I have never seen in reviews but they voted
And that's wat matter's and I will declare the winner it was simple even I had to count 5 e-mails and 6
And I am sorry if Skate punk afeded anyone I removed his reviews.
And I counted the reviews and the winner is ANN yup be suprized well I am not --;
and here is the next chapter
discliamer: you know the drill i don't own harvest moon
Chapter 6
My first date in a new town part 1
Grey:So Jake what are you going to do this night?
Jake:Why do you aks that Grey?
Grey:Well I was wondering if you can hang out with us.
Tim/doc: Yeah it will be fun lets get a drink it's a wensday after all for me.
Jake:Ok il see you guys after dinner here but I am going my brother is home tonight and I am going there for dinner.
Grey: Ok see you later
Tim/Doc: bye see you.
Later at Jack and Karen's House.
Karen: Hey Jake welcome dinner is ready and Jack is almost home.
Jake: Hey Karen thanks For asking me over for dinner.
Karen: Well we don't get much Guests for dinner Don't know why even my own perant's come once a month here.
Jake: Well I am glad that I can be of help when is Jack coming?
Karen:He should be in right now.
Then tere was a knock on the door.
Jack: Honey I am home !
Karen:Jack am I glad to see you.
Jake: Hey big bro did ya miss me.
Jack: little brother What are you doing here?
Jake: Well I am the new owner of uncle tony's ranch and I wanted to tell and visit you.
Jack: I was worried dad said to me you ware not at home when he called.
Jake:I forgot to tell him my new phone nummer.
Karen: OK you two lets eat something before I starve.
Jack: ( Gulp) That's nice dear.
Jake:Geat lets eat.
Karen: Ok here is my specialty France frie's
Jack: it look good dear.
Jake:it looks like it got burned.
Karen: What is it not good ?
Jake: What did I say burned I said it looks good psst bro can we eat this.
Jack: Hey I still live right.
Karen: Ok you two what are you wisperering about?
Jake/Jack: NOTHING!
After the dinner they ate with some sour face's .
Jake Well its time I got back at the inn.
Jack: wait il go with you to get a beer.
Karen don't be late Dear.
Jack: don't worry hey you still ready for the goddess fastival in the morning?
Karen: hey you are looking at the best dancer of mineral town.
Jake: lets go bro.
Jack:Yup lets go.
Later at the inn.
Grey: Hey Jack its nice too see you again.
Tim/Doc: Yeah lets get something to drink.
Grey:So Jack who is youre esscourt?
Jack: do you even want to know it my wife you jerk.
Grey:Haha just kidding what about you Jake?
Jake: il just watch from the sideline's .
Jack: come on Little bro is that pony tail clouding youre brain of course he will get a date.
Jake: o no I know you last time you set me up for a date it was a total disaster!
Jack: how was I soposed to know she had a giant dog!
Ann: so you guys want to order something else?
Jack: Hey Ann long time no see I just have beer.
Grey: Get me a double wiskhey.
Tim/Doc: I just have a wine please.
Ann: Ok say Jake Can I ask you something?
Jake sure what is it ?
Ann: Come with me then.
Jake:Whats with all the secrets?
Grey: good luck Jake haha.
Tim/Doc: knock em dead kid.
Jack: Good luck bro.
Ann: umm Jake the goddes fastival is tommorow and I was wondering if you be my escourt.
Jake: umm well I don't know.
Ann:Come on it il be fun.
Jake:Ok you got me I will come.
Ann: O thank you it will be a blast.
Jake: He guys I am back.
Grey:So what did she wanted?
Tim/Doc: yeah tell us .
Jack: Come on little bro what is it ?
Jake: I can't tell yet I am going to bed see you at the town square.
Grey: huh ok see you later.
Tim/Doc: Bye Jake.
Jack: told you he get a date.
Athor's note: well that's it part one Sorry I din't update my story so much I had a bad cease of writer's block well I hope to end this story as soon as possible until next time so Please R&R thanks a lot.