A/n:hey its been awile since i ahve updated my story.
Btw thanks for all of the reviews I just want to hug you guys.
Anyhow I am doing a new poll thing its about the swimming fastival.
Who shall win place youre votes in the review page.
And should I make Ban or Lu apear in the story?
Anyhow here is the new chapter.
Chapter 8: eat youre heart out
~Jake is writing in his journal~
Jake:Dear journal its been some time since I wrote in you. But its been great here I have met the most pretty girl here. She is so beautiful and she is nice . I don't know if she ever finds out about my past. I don't want her to find out that I am on the run for the cops. And that I am hiding here in the town were my brother lives. Sometimes I am very ashamed of myself that I can't look myself in the mirror. And some time's I just want to leave and never come back. But uncle Tony entrusted me with his farm. And I am away now Joe and Kurt are looking after it now. But it's the cooking fastival now and I am the juge. So I have go juge the dishes they made. I heard that my sister enlaw entered it and so does my bro. He was always a good cook. Well until next time journal.
Ann:Hey Jake can you come now? The cooking contest is already started. Lest go already!
Jake: coming Ann.
Gray:Hey Jake whats up? I heard that you are the juge in the cooking contest.
Jake:well you heard right I am.
Gray:lets go I want to see all that food.
Jack:hey little bro ready to taste my cooking skills.
Ann; I am going to win this year again I tried to do my best extra.
Jack:Well there is a first time for everything so prepare to be beaten
Dough: like I am going to lose to you wippersnapers.
Karen:Come on guys lets not get our heads fat.
Jack:you are right dear. Man my babyt have an iron stomache to surevive Karens cooking sheehs
Karen:Did you say something dear?
Jack:nothing honey its nothing.
Jake:Well I hope you guys did youre best. I am a very fine gourmet guy.
Jack:o quit the act bro. You always never saw the diffrence between a burger and a hotdog.
Jake:hey were I live now people know what good food is.
~later at the sqare~
Jack: Say Jake can I talk to you for a wile?
Jake:Sure why not. Whats is about?
Jacke:Well can you make Karen win just for once? I mean she never wins but I want her to win just this time.
Jake:But Jack that's against the rules. I mean I can't we just have to wait and see.
Jack: ok bro jut make sure Karen wins ok?
Jake: no promeses for you bro.
Ann:Say Jake can I talk to you?
Jake:sure Ann whats up?
Ann:Can you make me win? My dad always wins I and I want to win this year can you do that?
Jake: I don't know Ann. I mean its against the rules.
Ann:please Jake ? Il make it up to you in some way.
Jake:lets just wait and see.
Ann:O ok but please Jake?
Jake:Il see what I can do.
Ann:Thanks Jake you are a pal.
Mayor: Hello people of mineral town it's the annual cooking contest. And the contest cookers are ready to show their master pices. And we have a new juge to juge the meals. Lets give him an applaus its Jake from suger town.
Everybody: YAY
Mayor:Here is Dough the inn keeper. And what did you bring this time Dough.
Dough:It's a big fish salad with thastiki saus from Greece.
Mayor: well now doesn't this look delicous. What does our juge think of it?
Jake:Its very good the saus is very fresh taste. Its good realy I am giving you credit on this one.
Mayor: Ok here is the towns little Chef its Ann. What did you bring Ann?
Ann: I brought some mushroom salsa. Its made from wild mushrooms. That gives it the good taste.
Mayor: well mr juge what do you think?
Jake: this has a pretty good mix of different mushrooms. I think that's make's it so good.
Mayor: Ok next is our lovely Karen. What did you make?
Karen:well I made some pizza. Although it does not look like it
Mayor:Ehh well ok now let us juge. Mr Jake if you take the pleasure of tasting it?
Jake:ehh well now is this difffrent. It has an very unige taste.
Mayor: And here is our next cook. Its our very own farmer its Jack. What did you bring?
Jack: I brought some popcorn with caramel.
Mayor:this looks even better then the one you buy at the supermarket.
Jeff: Hey our popcorn is good.
Jake:well tastes very good. And I am very proud that my brother can make this.
~After an hour when all the food was juged~
Mayor:And now Jake will tell us who the winner is!
Everyone: YAY
Mayor: And Jake who is the winner?
Jake: Well now is it going to be. Ehh if I screw up nobody will like me here. The winner is ehem the Mayor will tell me he knows who the winner is.
Jack:Huh ?
Ann:Huh ?
Karen: huh ?
Basil: apple saus?
Mayor: The winner is Manna!
Manna: I win Yay. I win I never won anytyhing in my life. I once won a gold fish but you know bla bla bla bla
Mayor: well now that's cunclude the cooking fastival. The next one is the sea fastival ok men join in if you like? The race will start in 3 weeks.
~later on at the inn~
Jack:Why did you let the Mayor juge the winner?
Ann:Yeah that's what I want to know too?
Karen: well I did not win again but it was fun.
Jake: I let the Mayor chose cos. I did not want to hurt youre feelings.
Jack: Yeah I know we got carried away sorry.
Ann: I am sorry to Jake.
Jake: its ok that you understand now.
Duke: HEEE DOUGH lets give a party. My wife won the cooking fastival.
Dough: well guys that's it now we have to hear Duke brag again for 2 weeks. I hope you are happy jake.
Jake:*plays inocent* What I am schocked.
Everybody: hahhahhaha.
A/n: well that's was an other chapter please R&R yep this was the cooking part. I am lookin forward to the votes for who is going to win the swimming fastival. Until next time.
Chapter 8: eat youre heart out
~Jake is writing in his journal~
Jake:Dear journal its been some time since I wrote in you. But its been great here I have met the most pretty girl here. She is so beautiful and she is nice . I don't know if she ever finds out about my past. I don't want her to find out that I am on the run for the cops. And that I am hiding here in the town were my brother lives. Sometimes I am very ashamed of myself that I can't look myself in the mirror. And some time's I just want to leave and never come back. But uncle Tony entrusted me with his farm. And I am away now Joe and Kurt are looking after it now. But it's the cooking fastival now and I am the juge. So I have go juge the dishes they made. I heard that my sister enlaw entered it and so does my bro. He was always a good cook. Well until next time journal.
Ann:Hey Jake can you come now? The cooking contest is already started. Lest go already!
Jake: coming Ann.
Gray:Hey Jake whats up? I heard that you are the juge in the cooking contest.
Jake:well you heard right I am.
Gray:lets go I want to see all that food.
Jack:hey little bro ready to taste my cooking skills.
Ann; I am going to win this year again I tried to do my best extra.
Jack:Well there is a first time for everything so prepare to be beaten
Dough: like I am going to lose to you wippersnapers.
Karen:Come on guys lets not get our heads fat.
Jack:you are right dear. Man my babyt have an iron stomache to surevive Karens cooking sheehs
Karen:Did you say something dear?
Jack:nothing honey its nothing.
Jake:Well I hope you guys did youre best. I am a very fine gourmet guy.
Jack:o quit the act bro. You always never saw the diffrence between a burger and a hotdog.
Jake:hey were I live now people know what good food is.
~later at the sqare~
Jack: Say Jake can I talk to you for a wile?
Jake:Sure why not. Whats is about?
Jacke:Well can you make Karen win just for once? I mean she never wins but I want her to win just this time.
Jake:But Jack that's against the rules. I mean I can't we just have to wait and see.
Jack: ok bro jut make sure Karen wins ok?
Jake: no promeses for you bro.
Ann:Say Jake can I talk to you?
Jake:sure Ann whats up?
Ann:Can you make me win? My dad always wins I and I want to win this year can you do that?
Jake: I don't know Ann. I mean its against the rules.
Ann:please Jake ? Il make it up to you in some way.
Jake:lets just wait and see.
Ann:O ok but please Jake?
Jake:Il see what I can do.
Ann:Thanks Jake you are a pal.
Mayor: Hello people of mineral town it's the annual cooking contest. And the contest cookers are ready to show their master pices. And we have a new juge to juge the meals. Lets give him an applaus its Jake from suger town.
Everybody: YAY
Mayor:Here is Dough the inn keeper. And what did you bring this time Dough.
Dough:It's a big fish salad with thastiki saus from Greece.
Mayor: well now doesn't this look delicous. What does our juge think of it?
Jake:Its very good the saus is very fresh taste. Its good realy I am giving you credit on this one.
Mayor: Ok here is the towns little Chef its Ann. What did you bring Ann?
Ann: I brought some mushroom salsa. Its made from wild mushrooms. That gives it the good taste.
Mayor: well mr juge what do you think?
Jake: this has a pretty good mix of different mushrooms. I think that's make's it so good.
Mayor: Ok next is our lovely Karen. What did you make?
Karen:well I made some pizza. Although it does not look like it
Mayor:Ehh well ok now let us juge. Mr Jake if you take the pleasure of tasting it?
Jake:ehh well now is this difffrent. It has an very unige taste.
Mayor: And here is our next cook. Its our very own farmer its Jack. What did you bring?
Jack: I brought some popcorn with caramel.
Mayor:this looks even better then the one you buy at the supermarket.
Jeff: Hey our popcorn is good.
Jake:well tastes very good. And I am very proud that my brother can make this.
~After an hour when all the food was juged~
Mayor:And now Jake will tell us who the winner is!
Everyone: YAY
Mayor: And Jake who is the winner?
Jake: Well now is it going to be. Ehh if I screw up nobody will like me here. The winner is ehem the Mayor will tell me he knows who the winner is.
Jack:Huh ?
Ann:Huh ?
Karen: huh ?
Basil: apple saus?
Mayor: The winner is Manna!
Manna: I win Yay. I win I never won anytyhing in my life. I once won a gold fish but you know bla bla bla bla
Mayor: well now that's cunclude the cooking fastival. The next one is the sea fastival ok men join in if you like? The race will start in 3 weeks.
~later on at the inn~
Jack:Why did you let the Mayor juge the winner?
Ann:Yeah that's what I want to know too?
Karen: well I did not win again but it was fun.
Jake: I let the Mayor chose cos. I did not want to hurt youre feelings.
Jack: Yeah I know we got carried away sorry.
Ann: I am sorry to Jake.
Jake: its ok that you understand now.
Duke: HEEE DOUGH lets give a party. My wife won the cooking fastival.
Dough: well guys that's it now we have to hear Duke brag again for 2 weeks. I hope you are happy jake.
Jake:*plays inocent* What I am schocked.
Everybody: hahhahhaha.
A/n: well that's was an other chapter please R&R yep this was the cooking part. I am lookin forward to the votes for who is going to win the swimming fastival. Until next time.