"Moon path" chapter 3
Ok, this is my first Fanfic, so please understand. Also note that English isn't my first language, so there might be some grammar stuff wrong etc.
I wanted to make a story 'bout, what if Jess and Rory didn't go to ride (so, there's no car crash!).
Thanx for the reviews that you've gave to me! I understand what you speak about.
Disclaimer: No, I don't own anything. All the praise and glory to A S-P!
As I told in the end of the second chapter this is wrote in Jess POV!
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Fifteen minutes ago Rory had left, after I kissed her. And after she kissed me. What an awesome kiss it was. It was something that I haven't ever experienced. It was just so unusual. It was much more that I've ever felt. It was full of passion, tender but also in it was a bit of uncertainty.
She left her stuff here. Should I go and take those to her? Maybe I should, she has to go to school tomorrow. I take the books and start walking to their place. When I'm standing in front of their house, I can see it. Rory is telling about it to Lorelai, who seems to be bit confused. I can't go there now. I walk over the bridge, still carrying her books.
Why I seem to make everything so hard? Why I had to kiss her? Well, easy. I love her. I've been in love with her from the day she walked to the diner. She's the only person in this damn town, who understands me. Well Luke is trying his best, but still. Rory is something more, much more. I can really say that she's to only one who always understands when something is wrong with me. She can see it in my eyes, as I can see it too, in her eyes, when something is wrong. I wish there would be something I could do for her. She's still with that bagboy-Dean. I don't understand, he's so boring. What do they have in common? Nothing. Rory and I have more than they. Why can't we be together? Jess, you know the answer already. I have to tell here that I care about her. I took some paper from her notebook and start to write. " Dear Rory."
It was really dark when I was ready. I was feeling so tired. "I have to go and take these to her tomorrow morning." I put the letter to her history book. I walk to the diner, but I can't go upstairs yet. I sit to the chair where I was sitting when we kissed. My mind went back to that moment,
I woke up when it was three. I climbed the stair to our apartment and left the books to the table. I walk to my bed and lay to my bed. Thinking about the day before I fall asleep.
I woke up when Luke came up screaming something.
" Jess!"
" Huh?"
" What have you done now?"
" What, done what ? "
" Yeah, I'm waiting you to tell me?"
" Huh? How can I tell you something I have no idea what you're talking about?
" Why was Rory's books still here?"
I just looked at him. Man, I forget those books. I have to go and take those to her. I got up and started to put more clothes on.
" It's ok. Lorelai came and took those"
" Oh", It was the only thing. So, she told her mom. " But I would like to know what's going on? Lorelai didn't tell me but I would like you to tell me?"
" Nothing is going on Uncle Luke"
" I know something's going on. Rory sat in their car, Lorelai came and took her books and few coffees. Normally they eat breakfast here and . "
" Ikissedher", I said barely hearing it by myself
" What?" Luke stood there with his mouth open.
" I kissed her" , I said more loudly.
" You kissed her, WHY?" Luke was still bit confused by the situation.
" Because I love her, that's why?" I said and took my jacket and run downstairs, leaving Luke standing there.
" Where are you going? I'm not finished yet. " I heard Luke shouting. I couldn't stop. I walked out of the diner and went back to the bridge. I hope Rory finds my letter. Maybe she understands then.
A/N. Here was the third chapter. Tell me what you think about it! So review, good or bad, whatever. Next chapter is coming as soon as I wrote it. Probably it's out this weekend :) ! ~n-g~
Ok, this is my first Fanfic, so please understand. Also note that English isn't my first language, so there might be some grammar stuff wrong etc.
I wanted to make a story 'bout, what if Jess and Rory didn't go to ride (so, there's no car crash!).
Thanx for the reviews that you've gave to me! I understand what you speak about.
Disclaimer: No, I don't own anything. All the praise and glory to A S-P!
As I told in the end of the second chapter this is wrote in Jess POV!
~~*~~
Fifteen minutes ago Rory had left, after I kissed her. And after she kissed me. What an awesome kiss it was. It was something that I haven't ever experienced. It was just so unusual. It was much more that I've ever felt. It was full of passion, tender but also in it was a bit of uncertainty.
She left her stuff here. Should I go and take those to her? Maybe I should, she has to go to school tomorrow. I take the books and start walking to their place. When I'm standing in front of their house, I can see it. Rory is telling about it to Lorelai, who seems to be bit confused. I can't go there now. I walk over the bridge, still carrying her books.
Why I seem to make everything so hard? Why I had to kiss her? Well, easy. I love her. I've been in love with her from the day she walked to the diner. She's the only person in this damn town, who understands me. Well Luke is trying his best, but still. Rory is something more, much more. I can really say that she's to only one who always understands when something is wrong with me. She can see it in my eyes, as I can see it too, in her eyes, when something is wrong. I wish there would be something I could do for her. She's still with that bagboy-Dean. I don't understand, he's so boring. What do they have in common? Nothing. Rory and I have more than they. Why can't we be together? Jess, you know the answer already. I have to tell here that I care about her. I took some paper from her notebook and start to write. " Dear Rory."
It was really dark when I was ready. I was feeling so tired. "I have to go and take these to her tomorrow morning." I put the letter to her history book. I walk to the diner, but I can't go upstairs yet. I sit to the chair where I was sitting when we kissed. My mind went back to that moment,
I woke up when it was three. I climbed the stair to our apartment and left the books to the table. I walk to my bed and lay to my bed. Thinking about the day before I fall asleep.
I woke up when Luke came up screaming something.
" Jess!"
" Huh?"
" What have you done now?"
" What, done what ? "
" Yeah, I'm waiting you to tell me?"
" Huh? How can I tell you something I have no idea what you're talking about?
" Why was Rory's books still here?"
I just looked at him. Man, I forget those books. I have to go and take those to her. I got up and started to put more clothes on.
" It's ok. Lorelai came and took those"
" Oh", It was the only thing. So, she told her mom. " But I would like to know what's going on? Lorelai didn't tell me but I would like you to tell me?"
" Nothing is going on Uncle Luke"
" I know something's going on. Rory sat in their car, Lorelai came and took her books and few coffees. Normally they eat breakfast here and . "
" Ikissedher", I said barely hearing it by myself
" What?" Luke stood there with his mouth open.
" I kissed her" , I said more loudly.
" You kissed her, WHY?" Luke was still bit confused by the situation.
" Because I love her, that's why?" I said and took my jacket and run downstairs, leaving Luke standing there.
" Where are you going? I'm not finished yet. " I heard Luke shouting. I couldn't stop. I walked out of the diner and went back to the bridge. I hope Rory finds my letter. Maybe she understands then.
A/N. Here was the third chapter. Tell me what you think about it! So review, good or bad, whatever. Next chapter is coming as soon as I wrote it. Probably it's out this weekend :) ! ~n-g~