"Moonpath"
Ok, this is my first Fanfic, so please be patient.
I wanted to make a story 'bout, what if Jess and Rory didn't go to ride (so, there's no car crash!).
Disclaimer: No, I don't own anything. All the praise and glory to A S-P!
Author Notice: I've changed the end of last chapter, but there's no need to go back because it's also in this chapter! The cave in -thing could've been quite good, but I didn't have any ideas why it would've cave in. Thanks 'bout the reviews, I enjoy the story if you enjoy it. So on with the story.
END OF CHAPTER 5:
She left the diner, even thought she hadn't eating a thing and was still really hungry. She walked to the bridge and saw Jess sitting in the other end and reading peacefully. She walked over to him.
"Hey" she said and Jess looked up smiling 'She has got the letter' he thought,
"Hey" he answered, tapping the place next to him. She sits down and says.
"Jess, I."
CHAPTER 6
" I broke up with Dean." Rory finished looking down to the water.
"WHAT ?!?" Jess said little confused trying to read her face, but she wasn't looking at him.
" I can't deny my feeling anymore. I broke up with Dean. What happened yesterday was meant to happen." Rory said
He was really surprised but when he saw that Rory was smiling, a big smile formed to his face. He said:
" do you mean, what I think you do?"
" Well, if you're thinking that you would like to kiss me, then you are a mind reader" Rory answered a really big smile on her face.
Jess leaned to Rory and their lips met. At first it was really gentle kiss, but further they went, the kiss came more passionate. Finally they broke up to get some air.
" Wow, that was awesome" Jess said smiling.
"Yeah, It was. Hey, wait here for a moment, ok?" Rory said and started to walk away
" Where are you going? " he asked looking little confused, but Rory couldn't hear his question, she was already too far away.
Rory walked to the diner and saw her mother sitting in a barstool.
" I need coffee" begged Lorelai
"No" answered Luke
" Luke, I need it. Please ", Lorelai begged and begged. When she saw Rory she said " Hey hun, are you fine."
" Yeah, I am. Luke, can I have coffee to-go and two hamburgers."
"Sure, coming right up" Luke said and went to kitchen.
"So why are you smiling. Last time I saw you, you were almost crying" Lorelai said.
" I know, but now I'm the happiest person in the world." Rory answered as Luke came back and gave Rory her food.
" Oh yeah, I broke up with Dean."
"What?" both Lorelai and Luke screamed.
".And now I'm with Jess. Bye!" And she walked out of the diner, leaving the really confused mom and diner keeper without more details.
Rory walked back to the bridge, and saw Jess. He was deep in his thoughts because he didn't seem to notice that Rory sit next to him. Rory kissed him on to his cheek. Jess turned his head and kissed her.
"Where did you go" he asked after the kiss.
"To get some food" Rory said lifting her hamburger.
"Oh" Jess answered.
"What were you reading when I came here at the first time?" Rory asked. Jess took the book from his back pocket. It was Charles Dickens Oliver Twist.
" Would you read to me" Rory asked putting her head against his elbow. Jess started to read just after he had put his hand around her.
It was dark when Jess finished the book.
"Maybe we should go. I didn't tell mom where I was going."
"Ok"
They both got up and before they left Jess kissed her.
"See you tomorrow" Rory said and left.
"Yeah, see ya!" Jess watched her going and the turned his face watching the lake. The night was beautiful and there was a moon path on the surface of the lake.
A/N Here was the actual last chapter. No it's up to you do you wanna have sequel or maybe only epilog. Review and tell me what you think about the last chapter and the whole story! Thanks for reading! ~N-G~
Ok, this is my first Fanfic, so please be patient.
I wanted to make a story 'bout, what if Jess and Rory didn't go to ride (so, there's no car crash!).
Disclaimer: No, I don't own anything. All the praise and glory to A S-P!
Author Notice: I've changed the end of last chapter, but there's no need to go back because it's also in this chapter! The cave in -thing could've been quite good, but I didn't have any ideas why it would've cave in. Thanks 'bout the reviews, I enjoy the story if you enjoy it. So on with the story.
END OF CHAPTER 5:
She left the diner, even thought she hadn't eating a thing and was still really hungry. She walked to the bridge and saw Jess sitting in the other end and reading peacefully. She walked over to him.
"Hey" she said and Jess looked up smiling 'She has got the letter' he thought,
"Hey" he answered, tapping the place next to him. She sits down and says.
"Jess, I."
CHAPTER 6
" I broke up with Dean." Rory finished looking down to the water.
"WHAT ?!?" Jess said little confused trying to read her face, but she wasn't looking at him.
" I can't deny my feeling anymore. I broke up with Dean. What happened yesterday was meant to happen." Rory said
He was really surprised but when he saw that Rory was smiling, a big smile formed to his face. He said:
" do you mean, what I think you do?"
" Well, if you're thinking that you would like to kiss me, then you are a mind reader" Rory answered a really big smile on her face.
Jess leaned to Rory and their lips met. At first it was really gentle kiss, but further they went, the kiss came more passionate. Finally they broke up to get some air.
" Wow, that was awesome" Jess said smiling.
"Yeah, It was. Hey, wait here for a moment, ok?" Rory said and started to walk away
" Where are you going? " he asked looking little confused, but Rory couldn't hear his question, she was already too far away.
Rory walked to the diner and saw her mother sitting in a barstool.
" I need coffee" begged Lorelai
"No" answered Luke
" Luke, I need it. Please ", Lorelai begged and begged. When she saw Rory she said " Hey hun, are you fine."
" Yeah, I am. Luke, can I have coffee to-go and two hamburgers."
"Sure, coming right up" Luke said and went to kitchen.
"So why are you smiling. Last time I saw you, you were almost crying" Lorelai said.
" I know, but now I'm the happiest person in the world." Rory answered as Luke came back and gave Rory her food.
" Oh yeah, I broke up with Dean."
"What?" both Lorelai and Luke screamed.
".And now I'm with Jess. Bye!" And she walked out of the diner, leaving the really confused mom and diner keeper without more details.
Rory walked back to the bridge, and saw Jess. He was deep in his thoughts because he didn't seem to notice that Rory sit next to him. Rory kissed him on to his cheek. Jess turned his head and kissed her.
"Where did you go" he asked after the kiss.
"To get some food" Rory said lifting her hamburger.
"Oh" Jess answered.
"What were you reading when I came here at the first time?" Rory asked. Jess took the book from his back pocket. It was Charles Dickens Oliver Twist.
" Would you read to me" Rory asked putting her head against his elbow. Jess started to read just after he had put his hand around her.
It was dark when Jess finished the book.
"Maybe we should go. I didn't tell mom where I was going."
"Ok"
They both got up and before they left Jess kissed her.
"See you tomorrow" Rory said and left.
"Yeah, see ya!" Jess watched her going and the turned his face watching the lake. The night was beautiful and there was a moon path on the surface of the lake.
A/N Here was the actual last chapter. No it's up to you do you wanna have sequel or maybe only epilog. Review and tell me what you think about the last chapter and the whole story! Thanks for reading! ~N-G~