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Chapter 2: "I tried, but it's no use."
He had tried to tell Fiona how he really felt, but she had cut him off and told him how she felt. "She hates me. I'm just a spineless weakling, a big loser who just couldn't tell the most beautiful girl that I .love her." Van said sadly as he looked down. "Why does it have to be so difficult?" Meanwhile, Fiona was still searching for him. She hadn't realized what she had said, until now. "Van, come out! Please! I have to tell you something. Please come out." She begged, as she couldn't find him anywhere. Where could he be? Then all of a sudden, she heard Van's voice coming from up a tree. "Why should I? You hate me and you never want to see me again; you made yourself pretty clear, if you ask me, Fiona." he said, as he rested his body on a branch. "No, that's." she started to apologize, but Van couldn't keep quiet. "Just leave me alone. Beat it!" he yelled at her from his branch. Fiona got startled, as Van had never yelled at her sounding angry before. "Just leave me alone. Please." Fiona started to cry. "I hate you, Van! I really do!" she yelled back at him, as she took off running. "What have I said.?" she thought to herself. "I know, Fiona. I know." He said calmly as he sat on his branch, looking down the path Fiona ran through. Then he let himself fall back onto the branch again, sighing. "Way to go, Van. You chased away the only girl you've ever loved. You stupid idiot." He said to himself.
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Back at the campsite, Moonbay got worried when she saw Fiona run back to the campsite crying. She approached her, and put a comforting hand on her shoulder. "What's wrong, Fiona?" Moonbay asked in a gentle tone of voice. Fiona turned to look at her. "I hate him!" she said sobbing, and hiding her face in Moonbay's shirt. "There, there. Who do you hate, Fiona?" she wondered, who could this innocent girl hate? "Van! He's such a jerk!" she stated. Then she started imitating him. "Just leave me alone. Beat it!" "Are you sure? That's not like Van at all." Said Moonbay with a puzzled face, as Fiona went to where Zeke was. "After all, just this morning, I heard him asking Zeke for advice on how to tell Fiona how he felt about her. I know it's a stupid idea to ask an organoid for love advice, but. Van will be Van." She said, as she wandered into the forest to look for Van.
***** Moonbay found Van, and was running to catch up to him. Apparently, he was going somewhere.
"Hey Van! Wait up!" she called out to him. Van ignored her request. "Leave me alone." Was all he said as he kept walking with his head hung low. "C'mon. I just wanna talk to you." She kept trying until he finally slowed down. Van sighed. "What do you want?" he asked her. "I would like to know; what the heck is your problem with Fiona????!!!!!" she yelled at him. "Ask her! She's the Oh so wise Ancient Zoidian that's got a problem with me, not the other way around!" he said, sounding frustrated. "She told me you acted like a jerk." "Bet she probably didn't tell you that she said she hated me!" "She said she hated you before you got mad at her?" Moonbay asked, suddenly her anger disappearing. "It's all my fault. I started that fight we had earlier and during it, Fiona got mad 'cause I wouldn't let her go with me. I told her I didn't want her to get hurt and she said she hated me and that she never wanted to see me again right before I told her that I." he said, as a few tears came down his cheeks. "That you love her?" Moonbay completed, with a mental grin.
Van didn't answer. Moonbay thought for a second then said:
"Don't worry! We'll sort this out at the Gustav." She said in a comforting tone. "I'm not going back!" he said, moving away from her. "What do you mean?" she asked him. "I'm going back home with Zeke and the Liger." He said, walking away from her, headed for the desert. Zeke appeared next to him, sensing Van wanted him to be near. Then he and Zeke ran off into the desert, where the liger was waiting for them.
*************************************************** "Moonbay here. Why does Van want to return home? And does he LOVE Fiona? I tried to talk my way into convincing him but he wanted to leave. I hope Irvine has better luck. Meanwhile, a mysterious pilot is wreaking havoc on Zi. Just who is this guy anyway? Next time on Zoids: Chapter 3: "Snap out of it, Van!" See ya on the battlefield!"
You heard Moonbay. So, if you want to know what happens next, Review! It is a wonderful thing to do for a newbie writer like myself.
Disclaimer: I don't own Zoids or anything, except when my own characters come out.
Chapter 2: "I tried, but it's no use."
He had tried to tell Fiona how he really felt, but she had cut him off and told him how she felt. "She hates me. I'm just a spineless weakling, a big loser who just couldn't tell the most beautiful girl that I .love her." Van said sadly as he looked down. "Why does it have to be so difficult?" Meanwhile, Fiona was still searching for him. She hadn't realized what she had said, until now. "Van, come out! Please! I have to tell you something. Please come out." She begged, as she couldn't find him anywhere. Where could he be? Then all of a sudden, she heard Van's voice coming from up a tree. "Why should I? You hate me and you never want to see me again; you made yourself pretty clear, if you ask me, Fiona." he said, as he rested his body on a branch. "No, that's." she started to apologize, but Van couldn't keep quiet. "Just leave me alone. Beat it!" he yelled at her from his branch. Fiona got startled, as Van had never yelled at her sounding angry before. "Just leave me alone. Please." Fiona started to cry. "I hate you, Van! I really do!" she yelled back at him, as she took off running. "What have I said.?" she thought to herself. "I know, Fiona. I know." He said calmly as he sat on his branch, looking down the path Fiona ran through. Then he let himself fall back onto the branch again, sighing. "Way to go, Van. You chased away the only girl you've ever loved. You stupid idiot." He said to himself.
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Back at the campsite, Moonbay got worried when she saw Fiona run back to the campsite crying. She approached her, and put a comforting hand on her shoulder. "What's wrong, Fiona?" Moonbay asked in a gentle tone of voice. Fiona turned to look at her. "I hate him!" she said sobbing, and hiding her face in Moonbay's shirt. "There, there. Who do you hate, Fiona?" she wondered, who could this innocent girl hate? "Van! He's such a jerk!" she stated. Then she started imitating him. "Just leave me alone. Beat it!" "Are you sure? That's not like Van at all." Said Moonbay with a puzzled face, as Fiona went to where Zeke was. "After all, just this morning, I heard him asking Zeke for advice on how to tell Fiona how he felt about her. I know it's a stupid idea to ask an organoid for love advice, but. Van will be Van." She said, as she wandered into the forest to look for Van.
***** Moonbay found Van, and was running to catch up to him. Apparently, he was going somewhere.
"Hey Van! Wait up!" she called out to him. Van ignored her request. "Leave me alone." Was all he said as he kept walking with his head hung low. "C'mon. I just wanna talk to you." She kept trying until he finally slowed down. Van sighed. "What do you want?" he asked her. "I would like to know; what the heck is your problem with Fiona????!!!!!" she yelled at him. "Ask her! She's the Oh so wise Ancient Zoidian that's got a problem with me, not the other way around!" he said, sounding frustrated. "She told me you acted like a jerk." "Bet she probably didn't tell you that she said she hated me!" "She said she hated you before you got mad at her?" Moonbay asked, suddenly her anger disappearing. "It's all my fault. I started that fight we had earlier and during it, Fiona got mad 'cause I wouldn't let her go with me. I told her I didn't want her to get hurt and she said she hated me and that she never wanted to see me again right before I told her that I." he said, as a few tears came down his cheeks. "That you love her?" Moonbay completed, with a mental grin.
Van didn't answer. Moonbay thought for a second then said:
"Don't worry! We'll sort this out at the Gustav." She said in a comforting tone. "I'm not going back!" he said, moving away from her. "What do you mean?" she asked him. "I'm going back home with Zeke and the Liger." He said, walking away from her, headed for the desert. Zeke appeared next to him, sensing Van wanted him to be near. Then he and Zeke ran off into the desert, where the liger was waiting for them.
*************************************************** "Moonbay here. Why does Van want to return home? And does he LOVE Fiona? I tried to talk my way into convincing him but he wanted to leave. I hope Irvine has better luck. Meanwhile, a mysterious pilot is wreaking havoc on Zi. Just who is this guy anyway? Next time on Zoids: Chapter 3: "Snap out of it, Van!" See ya on the battlefield!"
You heard Moonbay. So, if you want to know what happens next, Review! It is a wonderful thing to do for a newbie writer like myself.