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Chapter 4: "But he'll never come now."
Irvine and Moonbay watched helplessly as Rai departed with Fiona. Something must be done. Moonbay decides that they must talk to Van. Only he would be a match for Rai. Must be weird having an evil long lost twin brother. The weirdest things happen to Van.
"Irvine. We have to find Van. Poor Fiona, with that evil guy. Why didn't we do anything to stop him from taking her?" said Moonbay, sounding angry with herself. Why didn't they do anything to stop Rai? "Don't know. Now, let's find Van! As much as he denies it, he loves Fiona." Stated Irvine, as he got in his Command Wolf and started tampering with a few buttons. "How can you be so sure?" asked Moonbay, with an insecure look on her face. "Sure of what?" "That Van loves Fiona." Moonbay answered as she leaned on the leg of Irvine's Command Wolf. "Oh, come on. It's not like it isn't obvious. It doesn't take a genius to find out that they have feelings for each other." He said as his Command Wolf sprung to life.
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Van was resting in an oasis in the desert. He was miles away from where the campsite was. He was thinking, meditating.
"Van, take me with you to the military base! I'm sure I'll find a Zoid and then I'll help!" Fiona begged. "But Fiona, it's dangerous! I don't want you to go." He said, making Fiona a bit angry. "But it's hard to wait, and being left out! I worry a lot." She added. "Well, I don't care! You're staying. I don't want you to get hurt." He declared. Then he thought, he should tell her now. "Fiona, I." But he couldn't finish what he wanted to tell her so much. She just burst out. "I hate you! With all my heart! And I never want to see you again! " she said, at the top of her lungs. Van's eyes went wide as those words pierced deep inside his heart, and shattered it.
"Every time I remember it, the wound inside my heart deepens. How could she break my heart like this? Haven't I always looked out for her, protected her? Face it, Van. She doesn't love you. She does not share the same feelings you have. She hates you." Van said to himself, as he rolled to the side.
Tears formed in his eyes, but they did not fall. Now that Fiona hated him, life was not worth living. It felt like he didn't have to exist anymore. He wasn't needed in the Planet Zi. Zeke sensed his master's sadness and laid down next to him to provide comfort.
"Roooaaaarrrrr." [Translation: I'm sorry, Van.] "Why do you think she hates me? What have I ever done to her!?" "Roar. [ I don't know.]"
Van, trying to forget, closed his eyes and fell asleep, as Zeke curled up next to him.
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Meanwhile, somewhere near Guylos City.
"My beautiful Fiona. I honestly don't see how you could possibly like Van, ya know. Can't you see? Look at me!" Rai said as he pulled Fiona closer to him, so that she could see his eyes, Van's eyes, pitch black to the core. Fiona could barely look at them and turned her head.
"I SAID LOOK AT ME!" Rai grabbed her face and turned it to look right into his eyes. He couldn't stop smiling now. "I am superior to Van in every way...my zoid, my eyes..."
Rai moved his face closer to hers, forcing her to look directly into his eyes up close.
"I should be the one you love...you are too pretty to be in love with him... Besides, has he ever kissed you or something?" he said, faking a smile. "Not really." Fiona said, now that she thought about it. "Hmm, he must not like you, then." Muttered Rai, putting his hand on his chin. "Stop it! I can't take it anymore! Leave me alone!" Fiona said, in the verge of tears. "Come on. Don't you like me? Not even a little bit? After all, I'm Van, except 10 times better."
Fiona tried to back away. Rai grabbed her shoulder.
"Gee, you're gonna hurt my feelings..." he said, pretending to be hurt.
He pulled her back over. Fiona cringed. Rai began to run his fingers through her hair. Fiona was trembling in fear now. It seemed to feed Rai; he was loving every minute of it. He was playing with her like a mouse captured by a cat. He twirled her hair in his fingers.
"Listen, Fiona. Don't go hoping for Van to come and rescue you. He'll never come now. You hate him, remember?" Rai reminded her, as she covered her ears. "No! I don't hate him!" she yelled at Rai. "Sure you do! Now, thanks for the chat but now we must go back to what I've been waiting to do for so long.destroy Van." He said, as he pulled Fiona to his black Blade Liger. "NO! Van!" Fiona yelled as she was forced to sit on the back seat of the liger and was restrained by the belts. Rai had programmed his zoid so that the belts would only loosen on his command, so she couldn't get out.
TO BE CONTINUED. *********************** "Fiona here. Rai is torturing me by forcing me to admit that he's better than Van, and that Van feels hated by me. Is that true? Wait! Who's this nice guy who helps me? Meanwhile, Van battles an internal conflict. Next time on Zoids: Chapter 5: Fight now, Rai! See ya on the battlefield!"
Rai evil!!! Yeah! Now please review!
Chapter 4: "But he'll never come now."
Irvine and Moonbay watched helplessly as Rai departed with Fiona. Something must be done. Moonbay decides that they must talk to Van. Only he would be a match for Rai. Must be weird having an evil long lost twin brother. The weirdest things happen to Van.
"Irvine. We have to find Van. Poor Fiona, with that evil guy. Why didn't we do anything to stop him from taking her?" said Moonbay, sounding angry with herself. Why didn't they do anything to stop Rai? "Don't know. Now, let's find Van! As much as he denies it, he loves Fiona." Stated Irvine, as he got in his Command Wolf and started tampering with a few buttons. "How can you be so sure?" asked Moonbay, with an insecure look on her face. "Sure of what?" "That Van loves Fiona." Moonbay answered as she leaned on the leg of Irvine's Command Wolf. "Oh, come on. It's not like it isn't obvious. It doesn't take a genius to find out that they have feelings for each other." He said as his Command Wolf sprung to life.
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Van was resting in an oasis in the desert. He was miles away from where the campsite was. He was thinking, meditating.
"Van, take me with you to the military base! I'm sure I'll find a Zoid and then I'll help!" Fiona begged. "But Fiona, it's dangerous! I don't want you to go." He said, making Fiona a bit angry. "But it's hard to wait, and being left out! I worry a lot." She added. "Well, I don't care! You're staying. I don't want you to get hurt." He declared. Then he thought, he should tell her now. "Fiona, I." But he couldn't finish what he wanted to tell her so much. She just burst out. "I hate you! With all my heart! And I never want to see you again! " she said, at the top of her lungs. Van's eyes went wide as those words pierced deep inside his heart, and shattered it.
"Every time I remember it, the wound inside my heart deepens. How could she break my heart like this? Haven't I always looked out for her, protected her? Face it, Van. She doesn't love you. She does not share the same feelings you have. She hates you." Van said to himself, as he rolled to the side.
Tears formed in his eyes, but they did not fall. Now that Fiona hated him, life was not worth living. It felt like he didn't have to exist anymore. He wasn't needed in the Planet Zi. Zeke sensed his master's sadness and laid down next to him to provide comfort.
"Roooaaaarrrrr." [Translation: I'm sorry, Van.] "Why do you think she hates me? What have I ever done to her!?" "Roar. [ I don't know.]"
Van, trying to forget, closed his eyes and fell asleep, as Zeke curled up next to him.
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Meanwhile, somewhere near Guylos City.
"My beautiful Fiona. I honestly don't see how you could possibly like Van, ya know. Can't you see? Look at me!" Rai said as he pulled Fiona closer to him, so that she could see his eyes, Van's eyes, pitch black to the core. Fiona could barely look at them and turned her head.
"I SAID LOOK AT ME!" Rai grabbed her face and turned it to look right into his eyes. He couldn't stop smiling now. "I am superior to Van in every way...my zoid, my eyes..."
Rai moved his face closer to hers, forcing her to look directly into his eyes up close.
"I should be the one you love...you are too pretty to be in love with him... Besides, has he ever kissed you or something?" he said, faking a smile. "Not really." Fiona said, now that she thought about it. "Hmm, he must not like you, then." Muttered Rai, putting his hand on his chin. "Stop it! I can't take it anymore! Leave me alone!" Fiona said, in the verge of tears. "Come on. Don't you like me? Not even a little bit? After all, I'm Van, except 10 times better."
Fiona tried to back away. Rai grabbed her shoulder.
"Gee, you're gonna hurt my feelings..." he said, pretending to be hurt.
He pulled her back over. Fiona cringed. Rai began to run his fingers through her hair. Fiona was trembling in fear now. It seemed to feed Rai; he was loving every minute of it. He was playing with her like a mouse captured by a cat. He twirled her hair in his fingers.
"Listen, Fiona. Don't go hoping for Van to come and rescue you. He'll never come now. You hate him, remember?" Rai reminded her, as she covered her ears. "No! I don't hate him!" she yelled at Rai. "Sure you do! Now, thanks for the chat but now we must go back to what I've been waiting to do for so long.destroy Van." He said, as he pulled Fiona to his black Blade Liger. "NO! Van!" Fiona yelled as she was forced to sit on the back seat of the liger and was restrained by the belts. Rai had programmed his zoid so that the belts would only loosen on his command, so she couldn't get out.
TO BE CONTINUED. *********************** "Fiona here. Rai is torturing me by forcing me to admit that he's better than Van, and that Van feels hated by me. Is that true? Wait! Who's this nice guy who helps me? Meanwhile, Van battles an internal conflict. Next time on Zoids: Chapter 5: Fight now, Rai! See ya on the battlefield!"
Rai evil!!! Yeah! Now please review!