Notes to Readers:
Thanks for the reviews! Very helpful, quite motivating.
PansyChubb, it might seem like a no-brainer, but have you ever stopped to
consider *why* no hobbit has ever killed another? Perhaps part of it is due to
severe preventive measures, ruthlessly weeding out troublemakers and dealing
with them, even to the point of banishing them before real trouble can happen.
One of the reasons Pippin protects the Shire so fiercely is because he does not
want hobbits contaminated with the attitudes he's seen among Men. Perhaps one
of his fears is that "there's always a first time". He intends that it won't
happen as long as he's Thain.
Xena, I'm not sure I could ever be a judge. It's a bit easier to write about
such stuff when I know what went on and don't have to depend upon evidence! One
of the purposes of chapter 5 was to show some of the heavy load the Thain lives
under, and just why Pippin was in need of a holiday in "Merlin".
Aemilia Rose, Ferdi is a good guy to have around, I think. Sure wish I had him
to administrate disputes between the children, it would be nice to have a
built-in lie detector.
Bookworm, yes, soldiers are well-known for their gallows humour (or does it
have another name amongst soldiers?)
FantasyFan, that was an interesting point you made, about the distinction
between justice and mercy. Ferdi certainly isn't distracted by appearances, and
in order to understand completely what is going on, he must listen intently and
focus his attention; he cannot allow his mind to wander or he'd be "in the
dark" figuratively as well as literally. Interesting insight, as well, that
Pippin makes a better Thain than Ferdi would. You have hit several key points
in your review as well, which I will not name here since they are important in
upcoming events, but you'll know them when you see them.
O, and by the way, I am now posting new chapters simultaneously to ffnet and www.storiesofarda.com. So if ffnet has a bad day, hopefully
you can still get your update of the continuing saga... I'm also told that
StoriesofArda has author alerts, though I have not yet discovered how they
work. I count myself blessed to have figured out how to post chapters there!
One thing at a time.
Look for the last chapter to "FirstBorn", in case you are following
that story, and if ffnet agrees, on the morrow. Once "FirstBorn" finishes,
chapters of "Shire" may well begin to appear. Another story has appeared on the
horizon, a sequel to "FirstBorn" as a matter of fact, thanks to a comment by
FantasyFan, so we shall see if it is ready to publish before "Shire" or not...
Comments are always welcome. Have some tea and a cream scone fresh from the
oven...
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6. Frodo Did a-Courting Go
O where are you going this fine day?
Singing hey, my laddie, laddie ho!
That's for me to know and none to say,
Singing ho, my laddie hey!
Take a look at him, and I am betting
That come next Spring there will be a wedding,
Come and pluck the goose for the feather bedding,
Singing hey, my laddie ho!
--Courting Song (from the "Shire Songbook")
[A/N: To hear the music to this song, please go to www.storiesofarda.com and find the
story "Shire Songbook", which contains lyrics and links to quite a few songs.
For some reason, I cannot put a link in here, even changing the "dots" to
asterisks. Ffnet is getting wiser, I think.]
Frodo Gamgee took another careful look in the glass in the entryway, adjusting
his collar that would not lie straight, for some reason, and running his hand
over his hair to smooth down that stubborn curl that had a life of its own.
Merry wandered by, humming a catchy little tune, and Frodo found himself
humming along, until Pippin started to sing.
"O where are you going this fine day?" and Frodo recognised the old
courting song and broke off his humming.
'That's for me to know and you to wonder,' he answered.
'No!' Pippin laughed, 'that's not right! You're supposed to say, "That's
for me to know and none to say..."
Merry broke in, 'Singing ho, my laddie hey!'
Together, the two brothers warbled, 'Take a look at him, and I am betting that
come next Spring there will be a wedding, Come and pluck the goose for the
feather bedding, Singing hey, my laddie ho!'
From the kitchen, Mistress Rose was heard starting the song over again. 'O
where are you going this fine day, singing hey, my laddie, laddie ho!' Other
voices joined from various parts of Bag End, and even Frodo was drawn into the
song, in the joy of singing one melody against another.
In the kitchen, Goldi bent over the onions she was chopping and brushed a tear
from her eye. Surely her mother would think it the fault of the onions, and not
the state of her heart. She moved her mouth as if joining in the song, but no sound
came from her lips. Thankfully the rest of the family made up for her lack, and
no one noticed that one member was not contributing her share of harmony.
The Gamgees finished with a flourish, and Mayor Samwise was heard to say from
the back door, 'Now there's a fine greeting to be coming home to! Who's getting
married?'
'Frodo!' Merry and Pippin chorused.
'Hush!' Frodo said.
'Look, he's turning red,' Merry said to his cohort in cheek.
Frodo made a fierce face in the glass and the two scampered off, but not before
Pippin said over his shoulder, 'Don't be making that face at the Burrows' this
evening or Daisy'll find someone else to walk out with!'
'Ah,' Sam said, poking his head in the front entryway. 'So you're walking out
with Daisy this evening? We'll miss you at supper.'
'He won't miss us!' Merry chortled from the corridor and Frodo grinned with a
shake of his head.
'Just wait,' Sam said. 'They'll hear it from Robin and Tolman when their own
turn comes.' Frodo could only hope.
Samwise fixed his eldest son with a serious look. 'Come walk in the garden with
me,' he said. 'I'd like your opinion on how we ought to lay out the vegetable
plantings this year.'
Away from the hole and its listening ears, Samwise bent down, drawing lines in the
dirt as they talked about where to plant the potatoes, and whether the peas
would do better in another spot, and all the other things that are of import
when your reputation hangs upon your harvest.
Straightening up, the Mayor said, 'How is your business coming?'
'Old Master Proudfoot just hired me to do his garden on Tuesdays and Fridays,'
Frodo answered. 'I'm full up to here, and more folk are asking than I have
time.'
'Good,' Sam nodded approvingly. 'If you make a name for yourself, soon enough
you'll be able to name your own price.' He drew the stick idly along the ground
and studied the resulting line. 'Rus Burrows might even make you a partner, and
in that case you'll never want for coins. He's the best gardener hereabouts,
since my old gaffer died.' Frodo smiled to himself. In his opinion, his dad
took the honours.
'I'm putting coins away, Dad,' was all he said. 'It'll be quite a nice little
pile, come next year.'
'Next year,' Sam said quietly. 'You'll be of age. Is that what you're thinking?
Will you be earning enough to keep a wife and family?'
'More than enough, I think,' Frodo said. 'With what I've put away the past few
years, I ought to be able to afford a nice little hole by next Spring, and
still have something left over.'
Sam was silent. He pulled his pipe out of his pocket, filled it, tamped it,
lighted it and drew on it thoughtfully. Finally, he said, 'You children are
growing up. It was only to be expected.'
There was no answer to this, so Frodo took out his own pipe and proceeded to
smoke it as they stood in silence, looking over the promise of the waiting
garden bed.
Sam took his pipe from his mouth and regarded it solemnly. 'Will you be moving
to the new territory? Lots of opportunity there. You can own your own land, make
something of yourself.'
Frodo looked at him quizzically. 'You're not telling me to go?' he said.
Sam shook his head. 'It would be to your advantage,' he said. 'Land around here
is all settled up, not much for you here.'
'If Mum could hear you talk...' Frodo began.
Sam chuckled. 'She'd put me on water rations for sure,' he said. 'But she's
busy cooking supper, and now's as good a time as any to talk.'
Frodo drew on his pipe, blew a smoke ring, watched it dissipate. 'You know,
Dad,' he said, 'I know it would be to my advantage to go out to the Westmarch,
but it is not my desire. My heart is here, in the hole where I was born, the
country around Hobbiton and Bywater.'
Sam relaxed subtly. 'That's good to hear,' he said. 'It'll be yours someday, you
know.'
'Mine?' Frodo asked, confused.
Sam took his pipe out of his mouth again, gestured with it to Bag End and its
surroundings. 'Yours,' he said. 'You're oldest now, with Elanor married. Her
place is with her husband. Had she not married, it would have been hers, of
course, but now...' He put his pipe back in his mouth and smoked in silence.
At a loss, Frodo said, 'I... thank you.'
'Don't thank me,' Sam said quietly. 'Thank the one you were named for.'
Knocking his pipe out against a stone birdbath, he went into Bag End again,
leaving Frodo alone in the garden with his thoughts.
Hearing his mother call the younger girls to come and set the table, he
bestirred himself. Nearly suppertime! If he did not hurry, he would be late to
supper at the Burrows', and that would not do, no, not at all.
