POKEMON : THE LEGEND OF CHAOS
Written by Fire Eevee
Edited by SnowTiger
Author's notes:
I DO NOT OWN POKEMON!(even though I'd LOVE to!).
Comments For Reviewers:
To all of my reviewers – Sorry for the 1 week delay for updating. I was studying for a major test and I wasn't allowed on the computer…
FlyingLizardGecko – I don't really know how long it's gonna be…
Marcus1212 – Things will change in the future chapters *evil grin*
BlackLadyCharon – Yeah, you're right but two pokemon with the same element doesn't make the story interesting that's why I made Mewtwo a dark type.
Seraph – Of course, if not, Brock or Misty are WAY too like sub-characters…
Lazzykane – I'm continuing…
Alex Warlorn – Errr, no but thank you for asking.
RurouniForever28 – Really? I don't think I'm quite good at writing yet though.
pika318 – Oh? Well thanks! Read on!
Hikaru no Yume – Thanks! For the new Pokemon go to www.pokemasters.net and click on sections, then GBA games, then click on obtainable Ruby/Sapphire pokemon, there they are!
SnowTiger – I'm currently writing Pokeblade and this one, I'm starting on one called Ice Wing (Silver wing/Sun Wing/ Fire Wing Sequel.), I'm also making one called 'The Files of the Young KaiDaichi, I might be making a sequel…
This is more things like noises, prophecies etc.
'This' is pokemon talk.
This is for pokemon names
This is telepathic communication!
«These» are thoughts.
'nuff said. Come on chapter 2 here we go!
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CHAPTER 2 : FLAMES OF THUNDER
The forest was burning. All the wild pokemon fled from their homes and made the sky pure black. In the center of the flames, was a ball of thunder. The ball of thunder was shimmering as bright as the stone Professor Ivy gave him. He knew if no one stopped the ball of thunder the entire island in which they are on would eventually be aflame. Ash rushed towards the thunder and slammed into the ball. He braced himself for the shock that would happen when he hit.
«Huh? How come I didn't get shocked? Maybe I got shocked by Pikachu so much that I couldn't feel it?» Then he noticed that his pocket was being shocked.. «But why? Of course! The stone! It was taking all the damage!» Then, Ash's pocket ripped apart, leaving a large hole in his pocket. The stone was floating in mid-air. Turning into a beam of light, the before ball of thunder headed towards Ash. It disappeared into the stone and shattered, leaving pieces everywhere, and where the stone was there was the orb of thunder. All of the shards from the stone turned into energy, merging into the orb. Then, the orb went right into Ash, «Agh, this energy, what is it? I'm feeling weak, agh...» And Ash fainted.
"Ash! Ash! Are you okay?" Misty said.
'Pika pi! Pikachu!!'
Ash woke up and found himself lying on a white hospital bed. Misty, Brock, Professor Oak, Professor Elm, and Professor Ivy were beside the bed along with Pikachu who is perched on Ash's feet. Ash sat up as Pikachu hopped into Misty's arms. "Ugh, I think I am. What happened? And why are you here Professor Ivy?"
"We don't know. We just found you asleep in the entrance of the forest this morning." Brock replied.
Professor Ivy nodded, "I've gotten better overnight, and was allowed to leave the hospital. That is, until I heard you were here, what happened?"
"I can't remember... I probably was just sleepwalking."
No you weren't, Satoshi Ash Ketchum...
"Huh!?"
"What's wrong Ash?" Professor Oak inquired anxiously, hearing the fright in Ash's sudden shout.
'Pika pi?'
Ash quickly answered, "Oh just nothing. I thought I heard voices in my head."
"Nah. It probably was just our voices." Brock assured.
"Uh, can Brock and Misty go to the lab to get the other prophecies? I want to see them."
Misty quirked an eyebrow, "Uhmm.. okay. Ash, get some rest."
'Pikachu!'
Misty with Pikachu, Brock, and the professors left the private patient room. Ash relaxed and lied back down on the white bed, welcoming the silence while organizing his brooding thoughts.
«I wonder why I'm hearing voices in my head...»
You'll find out soon...
"AHH!" Ash jolted upwards.
«How come the voice knows what I'm thinking and what I'm saying and doing?»
Like I said. You'll find out soon...
«Okay then I shouldn't really be so freaked out if it knows so much....»
That's it...
There was a knock at the door, and Professor Ivy stepped in carrying the journal log in which the prophecies were copied down and translated from the stone tablets.
"So here are other prophecies we have. Here's an interesting one: The chosen one shall find the guardians' light spirit, disintegrating one of the stones that he holds, matching the elemental stone with the spirit. Another one says, The chosen one will be with others that hold elemental powers. And when the time comes. They will merge, creating the light forms of the guardians. Here's another one that says that the chosen one has a spirit living inside him, one of lightning... And still another one says that He has the power to speak to Pokemon, and that he has the power to change to his inner self. That means the guardian inside him." Ash felt uncomfortable after hearing the other prophecies. The clues began to fit together: the ball of thunder must've the guardians' light spirit in the prophecy, but he had absorbed the energy of that orb and that means...
"Oh... I'm feeling weak. please let me rest.."
"Okay. Ash, take good care of yourself." With that Professor Ivy left the room.
«That means I'm the chosen one right?» Ash told himself, sorting everything out.
Indeed. The voice unsurprisingly replied without indication.
«So you're Zapdos, right?» Ash reasoned.
Correct Satoshi...I am the spirit of the orb of Thunder.
«How come you can talk to me in my head?»
I'll teach you. You focus your energy on someone or everyone and you talk to them as if you were thinking. It's that simple.
«Uhh okay, I'll try that» He closed his eyes and concentrated.
Is it like this?
Right.
Ash opened his eyes. Oh yeah, why do you call me Satoshi?
Because that is your real name. You were born in the land of Zapdos, and we called you Satoshi Ash Ketchum. We didn't want you to know that you were the chosen one, so we sent you to your other mother. We told her that she should call you Ash, and not by your real name.
You are not safe here. We must leave at once. Zapdos said immediately.
But I can't leave my friends! Especially Pikachu and my pokemon!
They will be safe, I assure you.
Ash considered all that has happened: the prophecies, the ball of thunder, and now this. Realization dawned upon him and he knew what he had to do. Figuring that Zapdos is right, he finally said,
Okay, but can I leave this place without anyone noticing?
Technically, yes. You have electric powers. You can use them. Just focus your energy into one spot, then use the attack.
Okay...
He did as he was told and made an orb of thunder in his hands, throwing it at the ceiling. The window's magnetic frame tore off the wall and stuck to the orb, leaving an area for Satoshi to escape. «Nice Thinking!»
"Why? Why did he have to leave us?" Misty asked no one in particular.
'Pika pi! Pika pi~!' Pikachu wailed for its trainer.
"Professor Oak! I found this letter.." Brock handed the scrap of paper he found among the bedsheets to Oak.
Professor Oak accepted the letter, "Huh? What's this?"
Gasps were heard as everyone crowded around to read the message:
Everyone, I'm sorry I had to leave without telling you guys, but I have an important thing to do. Professor Ivy, I didn't want to tell you this but... I'm the chosen one, I won't tell where I am. I'll be fine. Tell my mother that Zapdos has taken me back. I'll see you again, as soon as I can.
"Satoshi Ash Ketchum"
PS -- Take good care of my pokemon, until I come back.
PPS -- I am not going to die.
PPPS -- And I don't wanna.
"I wish I didn't write that letter, it made me sound stupid.." Ash muttered as he ran through the abundant forest that is a feature of the island they were in.
That teaches you not to do stupid things until you get Celebi to control time, but that shouldn't be used in such a way unless it is necessary...
"Yeah but..."
It's okay. We just have to find the other elemental stones...
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Please vote on the poll for who you want to be an elemental guardian holder (choose more than one to fit all of the elements):
Who else should be a holder of a guardian?:
· Brock,
· Misty,
· Lance,
· Create my own
· That girl that likes the electabuzz baseball team (I forgot her name, could someone tell me her name?)
· A character from a different show
· Gary
· Sabrina
· You choose your own for me
SnowTiger (ST)-Geez it's only been one chapter and I already wanna call it quits! Your spelling is poor and your grammar is terrible! There is too many plot holes and the chapters are too short: settings aren't explained properly and parts don't make sense! Where's all the coherence in this?!
Fire Eevee (FE)-Wadaya mean? I'm good, but not THAT good so what?
ST-But I'm not even getting any payment for this! And editors are supposed to get full access of every resource available! I'm announcing a strike!
FE- I'm announcing a riot!
ST-'Bro without me you'd be nothing!