Wow, 27 reviews!
Inu-kun: She's unconcious.
Fluffy-kun: Yep, guess I'll have to thank the reviewers.
Inu-kun: Why do you get to?
Fluffy-kun: 'Cause I'm older,
Hiei: Just get on with the fic!
HIEI!
Fluffy-kun: She's awake, that means I can't thank everyone.
That's okay Fluffy-kun, you can thank everyone while I go glomp Kurama and Hiei.
Fluffy-kun: YaY! Alright, thanks to everyone who reviewed, and thanks for the ideas. Jessie's been working really hard on your chapters, if she uses your ideas, then you officially get the Great Idea Award.
Inu-kun: The following people have earned the Great Idea Award: Dragonet(I'm going to use one of your ideas about there being a hidden demon who wants Keiko dead), Dragonet again for the "demons get stronger....Keiko is kidnapped" scenerio. kelly has a great idea, about how Yusuke gets jealous when he sees Hiei and Keiko together, I'm not too sure if I should include that though.
Thanks for all the reviews and ideas! I bow to everyone who reads, and also reviews, and hope you like this story!
***Keiko's Protection***
The two woke up, Hiei being woken by the sense of familar spirit energy, Keiko being woken up when Hiei jerked awake. Hiei stood up and looked in the direction of the energy, Keiko sat up and rubbed her eyes sleepily. She smiled slightly, looking up at Hiei.
"You make a nice pillow." he tripped and fell flat on his face at her comment. He imediantly sat up and crossed his arms and legs, scowling. Keiko kept a giggle hidden, seeing that his face was bright red. I mean a tomato red, it was practically glowing.
*I make a nice pillow? What's that supposed to mean! Although it did feel kind of nice, what ama I thinking? She's Yusuke's mate, no wait, they haven't mated yet, what did Yusuke call her? His girlfriend? Feh, that doesn't make sense. STOP THINKING ABOUT HER!* he looked up in time to see Yusuke, Kuwabara, and Kurama tumble into the clearing. "Hn, about time you got here." he smirked mentally when they whirled around to see the two.
"What the, we were here to rescue you!" Yusuke gaped.
"You took too damn long." Hiei replied, closing his eyes.
"How long have you been here?" Kurama asked. Hiei had the grace to open one eye at him before closing it and leaning against a tree.
"Since last night." he turned his back to them, effectively saying that was the end of the conversation.
"And what happened last night? Are you blushing?" Kuwabara asked, gaping. Hiei leaped into a tree, hiding himself in the leaves. Keiko stood up and smiled at them.
"Sorry, Hiei doesn't quite like to be the one captured. He blew up the cell we were in and dragged me out of the place." she said helpfully.
"Alright, somebody tell me what's going on!" Kuwabara demanded.
"What are you talking about?" Yusuke asked, irritated.
"Hiei's blushing and Keiko's defending him! Why is Hiei blushing first of all? And second of all, why is Keiko even here in the Makai?" everyone face- vaulted except for Kuwabara.
"I don't know about the first one but as for the second one: THEY WERE CAPTURED AND WE WERE SENT TO GO SAVE THEM! Any questions?" Yusuke shouted.
"I am rather curious, Keiko, why is Hiei blushing?" Kurama asked, ignoring the two glaring at each other.
"Ah, well, you see," Keiko started to blush slightly. "I made a small comment, and he got embarrassed about it."
"What kind of comment?" Kurama asked, trying to figure it out. Keiko smiled slightly and waved her hand.
"Nothing really."
"I must have been something for Hiei to blush. He's never blushed before."
"It was nothing, even ask him."
"I know what he's going to say," Kurama said dryly, "His favorite two letter word: hn."
"Who knows, maybe he'll answer your question." Keiko ignored the two boys wrestling around them. *Wow, I never noticed that Yusuke could be so childish some times. Is this the reason I'm falling for Hiei?* Keiko thought, looking at Yusuke with a sad look. Kurama caught her look, slightly surprised when she instead looked at Hiei with a longing look.
*I think I got it,* Kurama thought, reconizing the signs. *Keiko doesn't know who she should love, Yusuke, or Hiei.* ___________________________________________________________________
Cliffy! I hope this is longer for you guys! How should I make Kurama act to this realization? and for everyone who didn't figur it out, *....* means thoughts. Please review and if you give me ideas I'll look at them and see if I can fit them into the story. If I use them, then you get the Great Idea Award. Ja ne!
Inu-kun: She's unconcious.
Fluffy-kun: Yep, guess I'll have to thank the reviewers.
Inu-kun: Why do you get to?
Fluffy-kun: 'Cause I'm older,
Hiei: Just get on with the fic!
HIEI!
Fluffy-kun: She's awake, that means I can't thank everyone.
That's okay Fluffy-kun, you can thank everyone while I go glomp Kurama and Hiei.
Fluffy-kun: YaY! Alright, thanks to everyone who reviewed, and thanks for the ideas. Jessie's been working really hard on your chapters, if she uses your ideas, then you officially get the Great Idea Award.
Inu-kun: The following people have earned the Great Idea Award: Dragonet(I'm going to use one of your ideas about there being a hidden demon who wants Keiko dead), Dragonet again for the "demons get stronger....Keiko is kidnapped" scenerio. kelly has a great idea, about how Yusuke gets jealous when he sees Hiei and Keiko together, I'm not too sure if I should include that though.
Thanks for all the reviews and ideas! I bow to everyone who reads, and also reviews, and hope you like this story!
***Keiko's Protection***
The two woke up, Hiei being woken by the sense of familar spirit energy, Keiko being woken up when Hiei jerked awake. Hiei stood up and looked in the direction of the energy, Keiko sat up and rubbed her eyes sleepily. She smiled slightly, looking up at Hiei.
"You make a nice pillow." he tripped and fell flat on his face at her comment. He imediantly sat up and crossed his arms and legs, scowling. Keiko kept a giggle hidden, seeing that his face was bright red. I mean a tomato red, it was practically glowing.
*I make a nice pillow? What's that supposed to mean! Although it did feel kind of nice, what ama I thinking? She's Yusuke's mate, no wait, they haven't mated yet, what did Yusuke call her? His girlfriend? Feh, that doesn't make sense. STOP THINKING ABOUT HER!* he looked up in time to see Yusuke, Kuwabara, and Kurama tumble into the clearing. "Hn, about time you got here." he smirked mentally when they whirled around to see the two.
"What the, we were here to rescue you!" Yusuke gaped.
"You took too damn long." Hiei replied, closing his eyes.
"How long have you been here?" Kurama asked. Hiei had the grace to open one eye at him before closing it and leaning against a tree.
"Since last night." he turned his back to them, effectively saying that was the end of the conversation.
"And what happened last night? Are you blushing?" Kuwabara asked, gaping. Hiei leaped into a tree, hiding himself in the leaves. Keiko stood up and smiled at them.
"Sorry, Hiei doesn't quite like to be the one captured. He blew up the cell we were in and dragged me out of the place." she said helpfully.
"Alright, somebody tell me what's going on!" Kuwabara demanded.
"What are you talking about?" Yusuke asked, irritated.
"Hiei's blushing and Keiko's defending him! Why is Hiei blushing first of all? And second of all, why is Keiko even here in the Makai?" everyone face- vaulted except for Kuwabara.
"I don't know about the first one but as for the second one: THEY WERE CAPTURED AND WE WERE SENT TO GO SAVE THEM! Any questions?" Yusuke shouted.
"I am rather curious, Keiko, why is Hiei blushing?" Kurama asked, ignoring the two glaring at each other.
"Ah, well, you see," Keiko started to blush slightly. "I made a small comment, and he got embarrassed about it."
"What kind of comment?" Kurama asked, trying to figure it out. Keiko smiled slightly and waved her hand.
"Nothing really."
"I must have been something for Hiei to blush. He's never blushed before."
"It was nothing, even ask him."
"I know what he's going to say," Kurama said dryly, "His favorite two letter word: hn."
"Who knows, maybe he'll answer your question." Keiko ignored the two boys wrestling around them. *Wow, I never noticed that Yusuke could be so childish some times. Is this the reason I'm falling for Hiei?* Keiko thought, looking at Yusuke with a sad look. Kurama caught her look, slightly surprised when she instead looked at Hiei with a longing look.
*I think I got it,* Kurama thought, reconizing the signs. *Keiko doesn't know who she should love, Yusuke, or Hiei.* ___________________________________________________________________
Cliffy! I hope this is longer for you guys! How should I make Kurama act to this realization? and for everyone who didn't figur it out, *....* means thoughts. Please review and if you give me ideas I'll look at them and see if I can fit them into the story. If I use them, then you get the Great Idea Award. Ja ne!