For some reason when I put my story in it changes the punctuation for
people speaking! I will try to figure out what is happing! Please don't be
mad! I did not make the CSI characters and stuff. They belong to CBS! But
the plot is my idea!
Grissom's office
"How could you accuse Greg of murder?!" Sara screams at Grissom. For all he
knew, Greg could be dead. But of course she didn't want to think about it.
Maybe she should of said yes to one of his dinner invitations? But she
would only do that to get Grissom back, or would she?
"His finger prints are all over the murder weapon," Grissom replied
gravely. " And there's nothing I can do about that!"
"Oh, so you proved that was the murder weapon?" Sara retorted, hoping that
he hadn't.
"I'm sorry, but the blood matches the body we found in his apartment,"
Grissom said.
"Yeah well," Sara couldn't think of a good come back. "You wait Gil
Grissom, when we find Greg, you will never here the end of this!"
If we find Greg was more like it, but she had to think of something else,
like the look on Grissom's face. She hadn't called him Gil forever. He
looked liked he had been slapped. Served him right, accusing Greg like
that.
Was her anger from him turning her down? Yes and no.
"You, you know I don't want this to be Greg as much as you..." he started
to say.
"That is the biggest lie ever, you are so self centered!" Sara said but
soon regretted due to the look of pain on his face, but I guess it served
him right as well.
"THAT'S IT!" Sara exclaimed.
"Am I interrupting anything here, we know who the body is," Warrick said.
"No" Grissom snapped at exactly the same time Sara said "Yes"
"Ok then, too bad. The person's name was David Windan, age 28," Warrick
continued, "He worked as a lawyer,"
Hmm, Sara thought, I'm pretty sure I've heard that name before.
"Off the record, that isn't the worst thing that could happen," Nick said.
"Huh, when'd you get here?" Warrick asked.
"Just when you said he was a lawyer," Nick happily replied.
"Yeah, well this one was a prosecutor, which means..."
"Yeah, yeah I know" Nick said very coldly.
"Oh yeah, another lawyer working on our side is gone" Sara said
unenthusiastically. "So was there any connection to Greg, so far?"
"No, other than they're about the same age," Warrick said happily.
He liked Greg as much as the next person, and was annoyed at the fact that
Grissom would think such a thing. There had to be some way to prove it
wasn't Greg.
"Well, before you boys came here I had this very interesting thought!" Sara said quite eagerly. "I'll tell you when we get there, but for now you just come with me to Greg's place and I'll see if I'm right," Sara continued, "Oh, and Nick, could you grab the knife I found?" Sara notice Grissom was quiet this whole time, was it something she said? Yes, it probably was. Oh well, lets go prove that the finger prints could mean nothing! Just before Sara got to Warrick's car (they decided to carpool), Brass caught up with Grissom. Sara stopped to listen.
"The mother of David Windan is flying over tomorrow," Brass said. Oh well, that isn't much to listen to, but just before she started walking to Warrick's car she heard Brass ask Grissom, "What's up with you and Sara?". She couldn't see them, and she really wanted to see the expression on Grissom's face. "Huh, oh nothing" Grissom said in this annoyed yet hurt voice. Ha, he was hurt! "Whatever..." Brass trailed off and mumbled something that she couldn't make out. She knew that they were coming too and started to walk to Warrick's car.
Greg's place
Sara waited for Nick to arrive before she explained what she thought. She knew she had seen that type of knife before. She was happy Greg brought his lunch. Finally Nick got there. Sara grabbed the knife from him and quickly walked into Greg's newer looking kitchen. Then she went and dusted a stainless steal handle, that she thought could be for the utensils. She had a finger print but she knew it could be useless. When she opened the drawer she was relieved to find she had picked the right one. Inside were knifes, with the same unique dark blue handle. But one size was missing. She carefully took all the knifes out to show every one. Then she turned around and saw that there was home made bread there and one peace was cut off. She didn't see a bread maker so she doubted that Greg actually made it.
"See?" Sara said. She knew that no one had a clue what she was doing.
"All I see is that the knifes have the same handles" Nick said. "This is what I think happened," then she said. Greg took one of his knifes out of the drawer to cut that bread over there, then someone either rung the door bell or forced their way in here. They then grabbed Greg and took the knife. Now either Greg had company or the person who was killed was part of the gang that kidnapped him. They used the knife that Greg was using," Sara said proudly.
"Yeah but no one has got a ransom and even though it does work, we're going to need a lot of evidence to prove it," Grissom said. That was the first thing he had said to her in a while.
"I like it," Warrick said.
"Same," Nick said.
RINGGGGG RINGGGG. It was Grissom's cell phone.
"Uh huh, oh my, yes we'll be right over," Grissom said into his phone.
"What'd they say?" Warrick asked
"The office was e-mailed a ransom tape a few minutes ago, it's
untraceable, and it has an audio file. Warrick were going to need your
help the most, but we're all going," Grissom said not noticing the
hurt look on Brass, Sara and Nick's faces.
The E-Mail
Hello CSI, If you ever want to see your friend Greg Saunders then you
will put this one particular case down the drain. We will let Greg go
if you forget about the double murder of Ken Aston and William Role.
'Damn it,' Sara thought. 'That was the case Catherine and I were
working on. David Windan was the lawyer for the case!'
As you already know we are capable of murder, hence the body that
you've probably found in Greg's place by now. If not you are more
idiotic than we thought. If you don't know who it is (it's been
slashed up a bit), too bad because you'll have to figure it out on
your own. If you don't announce publicly that you have come to a dead
end in the case in the next 24 hours, then Greg will die a painful
death. We will then capture and kill a another and then another CSI
until there are none of you left. Also, we want you to destroy all
evidence you gathered for that case. Here is a picture and a audio
file or rather a video file. Click there. Greg.jp
"HEY HELP ME GUY'S, I REALLY WANT TO LIVE!" Greg said to the
camera, he was crying and he looked like he had been beaten, bad. His
hair, was no long spiked. His charming smile was gone. He was alive
(at least half an hour ago) , hence today's news paper that came out
about half an hour ago, reminding the CSI's that there shift was over.
OMG WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO GREGY POO!!
"Well, before you boys came here I had this very interesting thought!" Sara said quite eagerly. "I'll tell you when we get there, but for now you just come with me to Greg's place and I'll see if I'm right," Sara continued, "Oh, and Nick, could you grab the knife I found?" Sara notice Grissom was quiet this whole time, was it something she said? Yes, it probably was. Oh well, lets go prove that the finger prints could mean nothing! Just before Sara got to Warrick's car (they decided to carpool), Brass caught up with Grissom. Sara stopped to listen.
"The mother of David Windan is flying over tomorrow," Brass said. Oh well, that isn't much to listen to, but just before she started walking to Warrick's car she heard Brass ask Grissom, "What's up with you and Sara?". She couldn't see them, and she really wanted to see the expression on Grissom's face. "Huh, oh nothing" Grissom said in this annoyed yet hurt voice. Ha, he was hurt! "Whatever..." Brass trailed off and mumbled something that she couldn't make out. She knew that they were coming too and started to walk to Warrick's car.
Greg's place
Sara waited for Nick to arrive before she explained what she thought. She knew she had seen that type of knife before. She was happy Greg brought his lunch. Finally Nick got there. Sara grabbed the knife from him and quickly walked into Greg's newer looking kitchen. Then she went and dusted a stainless steal handle, that she thought could be for the utensils. She had a finger print but she knew it could be useless. When she opened the drawer she was relieved to find she had picked the right one. Inside were knifes, with the same unique dark blue handle. But one size was missing. She carefully took all the knifes out to show every one. Then she turned around and saw that there was home made bread there and one peace was cut off. She didn't see a bread maker so she doubted that Greg actually made it.
"See?" Sara said. She knew that no one had a clue what she was doing.
"All I see is that the knifes have the same handles" Nick said. "This is what I think happened," then she said. Greg took one of his knifes out of the drawer to cut that bread over there, then someone either rung the door bell or forced their way in here. They then grabbed Greg and took the knife. Now either Greg had company or the person who was killed was part of the gang that kidnapped him. They used the knife that Greg was using," Sara said proudly.
"Yeah but no one has got a ransom and even though it does work, we're going to need a lot of evidence to prove it," Grissom said. That was the first thing he had said to her in a while.
"I like it," Warrick said.
"Same," Nick said.
RINGGGGG RINGGGG. It was Grissom's cell phone.
"Uh huh, oh my, yes we'll be right over," Grissom said into his phone.
"What'd they say?" Warrick asked
"The office was e-mailed a ransom tape a few minutes ago, it's
untraceable, and it has an audio file. Warrick were going to need your
help the most, but we're all going," Grissom said not noticing the
hurt look on Brass, Sara and Nick's faces.
The E-Mail
Hello CSI, If you ever want to see your friend Greg Saunders then you
will put this one particular case down the drain. We will let Greg go
if you forget about the double murder of Ken Aston and William Role.
'Damn it,' Sara thought. 'That was the case Catherine and I were
working on. David Windan was the lawyer for the case!'
As you already know we are capable of murder, hence the body that
you've probably found in Greg's place by now. If not you are more
idiotic than we thought. If you don't know who it is (it's been
slashed up a bit), too bad because you'll have to figure it out on
your own. If you don't announce publicly that you have come to a dead
end in the case in the next 24 hours, then Greg will die a painful
death. We will then capture and kill a another and then another CSI
until there are none of you left. Also, we want you to destroy all
evidence you gathered for that case. Here is a picture and a audio
file or rather a video file. Click there. Greg.jp
"HEY HELP ME GUY'S, I REALLY WANT TO LIVE!" Greg said to the
camera, he was crying and he looked like he had been beaten, bad. His
hair, was no long spiked. His charming smile was gone. He was alive
(at least half an hour ago) , hence today's news paper that came out
about half an hour ago, reminding the CSI's that there shift was over.
OMG WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO GREGY POO!!