Hey readers!this is MayhemMudvayne666 reporting!
First thing I'd like to say is...Thanks to all those who have reviewed my short little fic!I've read your reviews!and it's come to my understanding,that some of you don't understand the way this story is going?!This story starts of with Raditz first coming too Earth and Piccolo and Goku destroy him,later...Vegeta and Nappa arrive on the scene,and we all know that Vegeta kills Nappa himself{if I'm not mistaken?!}and later on Vegeta-minna discover Goku's a Saiyajin and the second youngest son of Bardock-san!
Well,we only learn little of Goku's past,and Vegeta's!we only get to know who their Fathers are,and not their Mothers;so I figured if I'm going to make this a Yaoi tale, Bardock's mate should be male-right,and so I somehow typed in that Toma should be Bardock's mate{Yah understand a little now?!}really peeps,to tell you the truth when I write stories-I have no freakin clue as too what I'm writting!everything I write comes from my mind and my fingures get to work typing it out.So really this story is coming from my head and I don't know how the plot is going to come out,the second chapter should be updated soon!that all depends if I have some good material I can work with.
Anywho,again thanks to Agent182 and the other authors who have read my story and have kindly updated,the second chap should be coming up shortly sometime next week! Oh and just to give a little warning,I'm not a romantic person!I read my own story and I realized how girlish and sappy I turned Vegeta's pyschotic charecter into:(I feel ashamend of my self for doing that.
One more thing,I'm coming out with a new fic too!with a serial killer that's stalking the 'Z'fighters,and shockingly it might not be a VxG Yaoi!I might put Broly in it somehow, cuz after watching movie eight I've finally in love with Broly and I think he and Goku have much more of a connection than Goku has with Vegeta.My serial killer I made up myself{I'm so proud}and his name is Butcher Bill I even came up with a pyschotic peom
-Have you heard of Butcher Bill?! He's on the midnight news Even in the morning I can hear the babies wailing The children are sobbing The adults are screaming For the slaughterer called Butcher Bill Is on his way! He's done it again what a tragedy it was, Butcher Bill slaughtered a family of three The Mother he hanged her The Father he strangled The son he kidnapped and took him to his Slaughterhouse! That's his home away from home The Slaughterhouse that's where he finishes the job Only the chosen ones get to go Too his Slaughterhouse His house of pain Full of screams Everyone run and hide Butcher Bill he's coming your way-
Everyone run for Butcher Bill is on his way!Buwahahahahahahaha.....
First thing I'd like to say is...Thanks to all those who have reviewed my short little fic!I've read your reviews!and it's come to my understanding,that some of you don't understand the way this story is going?!This story starts of with Raditz first coming too Earth and Piccolo and Goku destroy him,later...Vegeta and Nappa arrive on the scene,and we all know that Vegeta kills Nappa himself{if I'm not mistaken?!}and later on Vegeta-minna discover Goku's a Saiyajin and the second youngest son of Bardock-san!
Well,we only learn little of Goku's past,and Vegeta's!we only get to know who their Fathers are,and not their Mothers;so I figured if I'm going to make this a Yaoi tale, Bardock's mate should be male-right,and so I somehow typed in that Toma should be Bardock's mate{Yah understand a little now?!}really peeps,to tell you the truth when I write stories-I have no freakin clue as too what I'm writting!everything I write comes from my mind and my fingures get to work typing it out.So really this story is coming from my head and I don't know how the plot is going to come out,the second chapter should be updated soon!that all depends if I have some good material I can work with.
Anywho,again thanks to Agent182 and the other authors who have read my story and have kindly updated,the second chap should be coming up shortly sometime next week! Oh and just to give a little warning,I'm not a romantic person!I read my own story and I realized how girlish and sappy I turned Vegeta's pyschotic charecter into:(I feel ashamend of my self for doing that.
One more thing,I'm coming out with a new fic too!with a serial killer that's stalking the 'Z'fighters,and shockingly it might not be a VxG Yaoi!I might put Broly in it somehow, cuz after watching movie eight I've finally in love with Broly and I think he and Goku have much more of a connection than Goku has with Vegeta.My serial killer I made up myself{I'm so proud}and his name is Butcher Bill I even came up with a pyschotic peom
-Have you heard of Butcher Bill?! He's on the midnight news Even in the morning I can hear the babies wailing The children are sobbing The adults are screaming For the slaughterer called Butcher Bill Is on his way! He's done it again what a tragedy it was, Butcher Bill slaughtered a family of three The Mother he hanged her The Father he strangled The son he kidnapped and took him to his Slaughterhouse! That's his home away from home The Slaughterhouse that's where he finishes the job Only the chosen ones get to go Too his Slaughterhouse His house of pain Full of screams Everyone run and hide Butcher Bill he's coming your way-
Everyone run for Butcher Bill is on his way!Buwahahahahahahaha.....