Guardian Within
Don't own Neon Genesis Evangelion
" "-Normal speaking Computer messages ' ' In German [ ] Thought or speaking in the mind
#2
Shinji rolled to the court of the school. Shinji turned and started to blade backwards as he
checked everything out from the gates to the girls to outlay of the school to the girls. What? He's
a semi-normal fourteen year old boy. He reach the bottom of the stairs to the school. He turned
around and looked up at the huge school.
"You must be new. Here's a rule for you," Shinji turned to see a girl about his age with
freckle. Brown hair and eyes. Her hair was tried in two ponytails, "No roller blading inside the
school ok?"
"Got it. Name's Shinji Ikari," Shinji said as he held out his hand.
"Hikari Horaki. Your new Class rep," Hikari said as she shook his hand.
"That's a title I haven't heard in a long time," Shinji said. He sat down and pulled off the
blades and put on his shoes as Hikari walked away.
Back at the apartment Misato was searching Shinji's room.
"I can't believe this. But orders are orders. Search Shinji's room for weapons. What kind
of kids carries around weapons?" Misato asked as she closed his closet, "Those blades he threw
at Gendo was nothing. Personally I'll like to take a shot at him but he's my boss,"
She walked out of the room when she hit something against the wall. She hit the ground
hard. She looked and found a trunk with three sets of locks.
"A key lock, combination lock and a laser lock," Misato said, "I can't open all of these,"
She stood up and walked out.
"Class. We have a new student today," The teacher said as Shinji came in. He wrote his
name on the board.
"Tell us a bit about yourself," The teacher said as he sat down.
"Hi. Name's Shinji Ikari. I play the guitar and cello. I know that's strange but I have my
reason for it. I like to roller blade. I'm a computer whiz. I'm also a black belt in karate. Nice to
meet all of you," Shinji said while in front of the class. He could whispers and typing. The
whisper consisted of girls commenting on his features. The boys trying to arrange a beating for
the attention he was getting from the girls.
"Two things I'll make clear. One I am single. Two if you're planning an ambush after
school I'll be to show why I'm the Tokyo 2 martial art city champion," Shinji said, "Any other
questions?" The class was mostly quiet since the chatter and cursing.
"Take any seat," The teacher said. Shinji sat down by the window. He pulled out the
laptop and turned it on. He got his entry info from the office. He put the info in. He looked at his
mailbox. It was filled with e-mails either threaten or asking for a date. One letter caught his eye.
Are you the pilot? Y/N The message said.
"Whatever," Shinji typed in and sent it back. The message came back.
[Don't want the entire school either hating me for destroy part of city and another
praising me as some herp] Shinji thought to himself as he typed N. He could heard some
disappointment from the entire class as the teacher talked about junk. Shinji did what he did in
German. He felt asleep.
At Nerv others were talking about Shinji.
"I found this big steel box with three sets of locks. You know I'm no good with locks,"
Misato said as she drank the coffee.
"It's important to know what kind of weapon Shinji has. He has a licence to have them
but there's no information on what kind of weapons he has," Ritsuko said as she typed on her lap
top.
"What's so dangerous about Shinji? He's seems like a nice kid," Misato said.
"Shinji is a black belt martial artist and close range weapons expert. His mind is as
dangerous. He's a university graduate with an undergrad in computer and mechanics. Top of
classes and a city champion martial artist. He would have gone to the country expect we have a
need for him here," Ritsuko said.
"Ritsuko. Misato. Please report to the bridge. We pick up a Blue pattern," Maya said
over the PA.
"Blue pattern?" Misato asked.
"An angel," Ritsuko said as she stood up and headed for the bridge followed by Misato.
Shinji ducked another a punch and delivered a solid uppercut to the attacker. Shinji spun
around and hit a spinning back kick as another kid charged at attack. Shinji looked to find about
two or three more.
"Man. Can you give it up? I'm not here to steal your girlfriend or crushes," Shinji said.
The other boys charged. Shinji pulled pole from his bag.
"You guys asked for this," Shinji said flicked his wrist. The stick spilt into a pair of
nunchaku. Shinji wrapped the chains around the first kid's ankle as he tried to kick Shinji. Shinji
turned around and threw the guy into his buddies with a lot of force. Rei walked up to Shinji.
"We're needed at Nerv," Rei said before she turned around and headed off.
"You work at Nerv?" One of the kid managed to ask as they tried to crawl from the
wreckage. Suddenly the city sirens rang. Shinji turned and ran off.
"Shinji. We don't have any information on this angel so be careful," Misato said as 01
was released from the locks. A supply building came up with a rifle. 01 grabbed it and giot ready
to action.
"Where is it?" Shinji asked.
"Behind!" Misato yelled. 01 rolled forward as a two whips came from behind the
building and sliced them in one movement.
"Woah. That's deadly," Shinji said as he put the rifle up and fired. The bullet hit it's AT
field.
"Shit!" Shinji yelled as he rolled back. The whips narrowly missed.
"I guess it's Shamshel," Shinji whispered as moved back. The whip moved at lightning
speeds.
"Time for the offense!" Shinji yelled as he moved in. He grabbed the whips or tentacles
and pulled the angel in. 01 broke the AT field and hit it with a head butt.
"That's an weird method of attack," Kensuke said as he taped the fight. He and Toji, who
were in Shinji's class, sneaked out of the shelter to see the fight. The angel pulled it's tentacle
away and hit 01 away. 01 flew through the air at them. Kensuke and Toji screamed as the fingers
of the giants came at them.
"Shit!" Shinji yelled as he sense the life energy. He opened the Eva's fingers.
"Misato! We got civilians!" Shinji yelled.
"Dammit," Misato said, "What to do? What to do? Shinji! Let them into the plug!"
"What? You can't do that!" Ritsuko yelled, "It mess up Shinji's sync,"
"Shinji! Do it!" Misato yelled.
"Alright," Shinji said as he ejected the plug.
"You two Get in!" Misato yelled.
"Don't' have to tell us twice!" Kensuke yelled as the two got inside.
"What the hell is this stuff? Water?" Toji asked as they entered the pitch black plug.
"Where's my camera!?" Kensuke yelled as he searched the liquid. The light came up and
so did the LCL.
"What the hell? We are trying to drown us!" Toji yelled.
"Shut up you two. You can breathe it!" Shinji yelled as he around in his seat.
"Shinji!?" Both yelled. When the Eva shook.
"Shit! I turned back to the battle," Shinji said as he turned back to the screen.
"Shinji! You got only five minutes of power left! Ret...," Misato managed to say when
Shinji cut the com.
[Weak AT field. It's blocked my shot with it's tentacles so it's AT field can't stand any
attack] Shinji thought as he dodged the attacks. He pulled out the knife and waited for his
moment to strike.
The angel threw it's tentacle aside to for a giant swing. The timer reached the 10 second
count.
"Now!" Shinji yelled as he threw the knife into the core. He picked up the rifle and fired
at the core as the tentacles piece the mid section of 01. Shinji scream as he fired. The timer
reached the end. Silent filled the city.
"Damn!" Shinji yelled as the Nerv doctor applied some medicine to the bump on his
head. He was rocked all over the place hitting the walls of the plug hard.
"Shinji. That's nothing when I'm finish with you for disobeying a direct order," Misato
said as she watched Shinji being treated.
"I got the angel didn't I?" Shinji asked.
"But you disobeyed a direct order form your superior officer!" Misato yelled. She saw
her lecture wasn't affecting him, "I have a question for you. Why is it you pilot the Eva? You
didn't seem to want to when you first did," Shinji stood up and walked to Misato.
"I have my reason for fighting. I'll explain it to you at home," Shinji said as he grabbed
his jacket.
"Why not now?" Misato asked.
"I'm hungry. Can we stop by the store?" Shinji asked, "Don't worry. I'll pay for the stuff.
Fighting makes me hunger,"
"Alright but you're making dinner again," Misato said as she followed him out.
Misato wasn't the only one talking about Shinji.
"The Third Child has shown to be more powerful than we ordinally thought he would
be," Seele 08 said.
"We need you to come to Nerv head of the schedule. We need you to report the Third's
activities and find a reason for such an error," Seele 09 said.
"Your will is my command," Kaworu said as he came into the light.
"Good. You may leave us now," Seele 02 said. Kaworu turned and returned to the
shadows.
"This is great," Misato said as she ate dinner Shinji made, "But first. Answer me why
you still pilot,"
"Eva 01 was my mother's project. Her legacy. That's why I pilot it," Shinji said, "I need
to go. Got a chat with an old friend,"
"Where you meet him?" Misato asked.
"It's a her and on the computer," Shinji said as he got into his room. He turned on his
computer and turned on the web cam. He logged on and checked his messenger. He clipped on
his headset to his ear. The window open.
'Where the hell have you been!'" Asuka yelled as her image appeared. Shinji actually
fell backward from the force of her voice. Shinji scrambled back to his seat.
'Moved,' Shinji said as he got up, 'Got a new job too. Can't say I completely like it and I
can complain,'
'Baka. If you don't like it get another job. Easy as that,' Asuka said.
'You wouldn't quit the job I have,' Shinji said.
'And what that be? A manger for a hot spring?' Asuka asked.
'Funny. You're looking at the pilot of the Eva 01. The Third Child,' Shinji said.
'What!!!???' Asuka yelled knocking Shinji over again.
'I'm going to lost my hearing at this rate,' Shinji said as he got back up.
'Where the hell are you so I find you and beat you back to oblivion!' Asuka yelled.
'Calm down. If I knew you were like this I wouldn't have hack to find your e-mail,'
Shinji said as he leaned back.
'Is that any way to talk to the..,' Adam started but Shinji cut in, 'Great Asuka Langley
Soryu,'
'When I get over there I'll make good on my promise!' Asuka yelled.
'Asuka! Lunch time!' Asuka's Step mom yelled from downstairs.
'I'm guessing you're going to show her when a "Step" mother means to Asuka," Shinji
said.
'Later. She's a good chef,' Asuka said as she logged off. Shinji laughed a bit when a
defeated spirit started to talk.
[Bravo. You defeat two of us. The next one will be one of our most powerful brethren.
The air fortress] Shamshel's spirit said to Shinji.
"Ramiel. The Ultimate fortress," Shinji said as he laid down. He could feel the spirit
leave, "Now it's going to get fun,"
Author Notes:
Can you guys give me some idea on what to do. I got the main line of events but most of it
happens much later now so input your idea and I'll try to use it as long as it's sane
Reply to Review
JesterSage-Must say this is probably one of the best AU fics I have read to date. Plot is tight and
well developed. The characters have stayed totally in character (except Shinji, but accpetable)
Please continue. Excellent!
BA: Thanks for the comments
poop-This story is pretty cool. It holds alot of promise. Please post up the next chapter soon.
BA: These the next chapter.
Mr. Advice-Why not just get a pre-reader to tidy up your writing? Or write it in your native
language and look around for an experienced translator. There are a lot of willing people.
As it is now, I found it very difficult to read.
BA: One my native language is English. Second I live in Canada. I don't know where you live
but the story seems alright. Third Does the spacing help with the reading?
D14852001-Please explain why is tha Yui put into Shinji something... an angel maybe?
intersting story... but dont use things like the one from Ristuko with a coin... Used...
Still, pretty good format, and the story is intersting and it leaves questions to continue reading!
Cool
BA: The Angel thing is part of the plt. The coin thing was a joke from one of my friends.
Knight's Shadow-Really good story. Please update soon.
BA: The update will varies due to my summer school class and if I get writer's block
ssj-kabuto-nice i like this story. in the Genre it sayes Romance will it be a Rei/Shinji? please!
anyway continue with this great story!
BA: Sorry but it's going to be Asuka/Shinji I think of Rei as Shinji's sister due to the mother
DNA stuff.
I got a question for you readers who should I pair Rei with? I'm thinking of a) Kensuke
(Strange in my opinion) b) Kaworu (Have some fun with the idea of Kaworu and Rei) c)Own
character
Don't own Neon Genesis Evangelion
" "-Normal speaking Computer messages ' ' In German [ ] Thought or speaking in the mind
#2
Shinji rolled to the court of the school. Shinji turned and started to blade backwards as he
checked everything out from the gates to the girls to outlay of the school to the girls. What? He's
a semi-normal fourteen year old boy. He reach the bottom of the stairs to the school. He turned
around and looked up at the huge school.
"You must be new. Here's a rule for you," Shinji turned to see a girl about his age with
freckle. Brown hair and eyes. Her hair was tried in two ponytails, "No roller blading inside the
school ok?"
"Got it. Name's Shinji Ikari," Shinji said as he held out his hand.
"Hikari Horaki. Your new Class rep," Hikari said as she shook his hand.
"That's a title I haven't heard in a long time," Shinji said. He sat down and pulled off the
blades and put on his shoes as Hikari walked away.
Back at the apartment Misato was searching Shinji's room.
"I can't believe this. But orders are orders. Search Shinji's room for weapons. What kind
of kids carries around weapons?" Misato asked as she closed his closet, "Those blades he threw
at Gendo was nothing. Personally I'll like to take a shot at him but he's my boss,"
She walked out of the room when she hit something against the wall. She hit the ground
hard. She looked and found a trunk with three sets of locks.
"A key lock, combination lock and a laser lock," Misato said, "I can't open all of these,"
She stood up and walked out.
"Class. We have a new student today," The teacher said as Shinji came in. He wrote his
name on the board.
"Tell us a bit about yourself," The teacher said as he sat down.
"Hi. Name's Shinji Ikari. I play the guitar and cello. I know that's strange but I have my
reason for it. I like to roller blade. I'm a computer whiz. I'm also a black belt in karate. Nice to
meet all of you," Shinji said while in front of the class. He could whispers and typing. The
whisper consisted of girls commenting on his features. The boys trying to arrange a beating for
the attention he was getting from the girls.
"Two things I'll make clear. One I am single. Two if you're planning an ambush after
school I'll be to show why I'm the Tokyo 2 martial art city champion," Shinji said, "Any other
questions?" The class was mostly quiet since the chatter and cursing.
"Take any seat," The teacher said. Shinji sat down by the window. He pulled out the
laptop and turned it on. He got his entry info from the office. He put the info in. He looked at his
mailbox. It was filled with e-mails either threaten or asking for a date. One letter caught his eye.
Are you the pilot? Y/N The message said.
"Whatever," Shinji typed in and sent it back. The message came back.
[Don't want the entire school either hating me for destroy part of city and another
praising me as some herp] Shinji thought to himself as he typed N. He could heard some
disappointment from the entire class as the teacher talked about junk. Shinji did what he did in
German. He felt asleep.
At Nerv others were talking about Shinji.
"I found this big steel box with three sets of locks. You know I'm no good with locks,"
Misato said as she drank the coffee.
"It's important to know what kind of weapon Shinji has. He has a licence to have them
but there's no information on what kind of weapons he has," Ritsuko said as she typed on her lap
top.
"What's so dangerous about Shinji? He's seems like a nice kid," Misato said.
"Shinji is a black belt martial artist and close range weapons expert. His mind is as
dangerous. He's a university graduate with an undergrad in computer and mechanics. Top of
classes and a city champion martial artist. He would have gone to the country expect we have a
need for him here," Ritsuko said.
"Ritsuko. Misato. Please report to the bridge. We pick up a Blue pattern," Maya said
over the PA.
"Blue pattern?" Misato asked.
"An angel," Ritsuko said as she stood up and headed for the bridge followed by Misato.
Shinji ducked another a punch and delivered a solid uppercut to the attacker. Shinji spun
around and hit a spinning back kick as another kid charged at attack. Shinji looked to find about
two or three more.
"Man. Can you give it up? I'm not here to steal your girlfriend or crushes," Shinji said.
The other boys charged. Shinji pulled pole from his bag.
"You guys asked for this," Shinji said flicked his wrist. The stick spilt into a pair of
nunchaku. Shinji wrapped the chains around the first kid's ankle as he tried to kick Shinji. Shinji
turned around and threw the guy into his buddies with a lot of force. Rei walked up to Shinji.
"We're needed at Nerv," Rei said before she turned around and headed off.
"You work at Nerv?" One of the kid managed to ask as they tried to crawl from the
wreckage. Suddenly the city sirens rang. Shinji turned and ran off.
"Shinji. We don't have any information on this angel so be careful," Misato said as 01
was released from the locks. A supply building came up with a rifle. 01 grabbed it and giot ready
to action.
"Where is it?" Shinji asked.
"Behind!" Misato yelled. 01 rolled forward as a two whips came from behind the
building and sliced them in one movement.
"Woah. That's deadly," Shinji said as he put the rifle up and fired. The bullet hit it's AT
field.
"Shit!" Shinji yelled as he rolled back. The whips narrowly missed.
"I guess it's Shamshel," Shinji whispered as moved back. The whip moved at lightning
speeds.
"Time for the offense!" Shinji yelled as he moved in. He grabbed the whips or tentacles
and pulled the angel in. 01 broke the AT field and hit it with a head butt.
"That's an weird method of attack," Kensuke said as he taped the fight. He and Toji, who
were in Shinji's class, sneaked out of the shelter to see the fight. The angel pulled it's tentacle
away and hit 01 away. 01 flew through the air at them. Kensuke and Toji screamed as the fingers
of the giants came at them.
"Shit!" Shinji yelled as he sense the life energy. He opened the Eva's fingers.
"Misato! We got civilians!" Shinji yelled.
"Dammit," Misato said, "What to do? What to do? Shinji! Let them into the plug!"
"What? You can't do that!" Ritsuko yelled, "It mess up Shinji's sync,"
"Shinji! Do it!" Misato yelled.
"Alright," Shinji said as he ejected the plug.
"You two Get in!" Misato yelled.
"Don't' have to tell us twice!" Kensuke yelled as the two got inside.
"What the hell is this stuff? Water?" Toji asked as they entered the pitch black plug.
"Where's my camera!?" Kensuke yelled as he searched the liquid. The light came up and
so did the LCL.
"What the hell? We are trying to drown us!" Toji yelled.
"Shut up you two. You can breathe it!" Shinji yelled as he around in his seat.
"Shinji!?" Both yelled. When the Eva shook.
"Shit! I turned back to the battle," Shinji said as he turned back to the screen.
"Shinji! You got only five minutes of power left! Ret...," Misato managed to say when
Shinji cut the com.
[Weak AT field. It's blocked my shot with it's tentacles so it's AT field can't stand any
attack] Shinji thought as he dodged the attacks. He pulled out the knife and waited for his
moment to strike.
The angel threw it's tentacle aside to for a giant swing. The timer reached the 10 second
count.
"Now!" Shinji yelled as he threw the knife into the core. He picked up the rifle and fired
at the core as the tentacles piece the mid section of 01. Shinji scream as he fired. The timer
reached the end. Silent filled the city.
"Damn!" Shinji yelled as the Nerv doctor applied some medicine to the bump on his
head. He was rocked all over the place hitting the walls of the plug hard.
"Shinji. That's nothing when I'm finish with you for disobeying a direct order," Misato
said as she watched Shinji being treated.
"I got the angel didn't I?" Shinji asked.
"But you disobeyed a direct order form your superior officer!" Misato yelled. She saw
her lecture wasn't affecting him, "I have a question for you. Why is it you pilot the Eva? You
didn't seem to want to when you first did," Shinji stood up and walked to Misato.
"I have my reason for fighting. I'll explain it to you at home," Shinji said as he grabbed
his jacket.
"Why not now?" Misato asked.
"I'm hungry. Can we stop by the store?" Shinji asked, "Don't worry. I'll pay for the stuff.
Fighting makes me hunger,"
"Alright but you're making dinner again," Misato said as she followed him out.
Misato wasn't the only one talking about Shinji.
"The Third Child has shown to be more powerful than we ordinally thought he would
be," Seele 08 said.
"We need you to come to Nerv head of the schedule. We need you to report the Third's
activities and find a reason for such an error," Seele 09 said.
"Your will is my command," Kaworu said as he came into the light.
"Good. You may leave us now," Seele 02 said. Kaworu turned and returned to the
shadows.
"This is great," Misato said as she ate dinner Shinji made, "But first. Answer me why
you still pilot,"
"Eva 01 was my mother's project. Her legacy. That's why I pilot it," Shinji said, "I need
to go. Got a chat with an old friend,"
"Where you meet him?" Misato asked.
"It's a her and on the computer," Shinji said as he got into his room. He turned on his
computer and turned on the web cam. He logged on and checked his messenger. He clipped on
his headset to his ear. The window open.
'Where the hell have you been!'" Asuka yelled as her image appeared. Shinji actually
fell backward from the force of her voice. Shinji scrambled back to his seat.
'Moved,' Shinji said as he got up, 'Got a new job too. Can't say I completely like it and I
can complain,'
'Baka. If you don't like it get another job. Easy as that,' Asuka said.
'You wouldn't quit the job I have,' Shinji said.
'And what that be? A manger for a hot spring?' Asuka asked.
'Funny. You're looking at the pilot of the Eva 01. The Third Child,' Shinji said.
'What!!!???' Asuka yelled knocking Shinji over again.
'I'm going to lost my hearing at this rate,' Shinji said as he got back up.
'Where the hell are you so I find you and beat you back to oblivion!' Asuka yelled.
'Calm down. If I knew you were like this I wouldn't have hack to find your e-mail,'
Shinji said as he leaned back.
'Is that any way to talk to the..,' Adam started but Shinji cut in, 'Great Asuka Langley
Soryu,'
'When I get over there I'll make good on my promise!' Asuka yelled.
'Asuka! Lunch time!' Asuka's Step mom yelled from downstairs.
'I'm guessing you're going to show her when a "Step" mother means to Asuka," Shinji
said.
'Later. She's a good chef,' Asuka said as she logged off. Shinji laughed a bit when a
defeated spirit started to talk.
[Bravo. You defeat two of us. The next one will be one of our most powerful brethren.
The air fortress] Shamshel's spirit said to Shinji.
"Ramiel. The Ultimate fortress," Shinji said as he laid down. He could feel the spirit
leave, "Now it's going to get fun,"
Author Notes:
Can you guys give me some idea on what to do. I got the main line of events but most of it
happens much later now so input your idea and I'll try to use it as long as it's sane
Reply to Review
JesterSage-Must say this is probably one of the best AU fics I have read to date. Plot is tight and
well developed. The characters have stayed totally in character (except Shinji, but accpetable)
Please continue. Excellent!
BA: Thanks for the comments
poop-This story is pretty cool. It holds alot of promise. Please post up the next chapter soon.
BA: These the next chapter.
Mr. Advice-Why not just get a pre-reader to tidy up your writing? Or write it in your native
language and look around for an experienced translator. There are a lot of willing people.
As it is now, I found it very difficult to read.
BA: One my native language is English. Second I live in Canada. I don't know where you live
but the story seems alright. Third Does the spacing help with the reading?
D14852001-Please explain why is tha Yui put into Shinji something... an angel maybe?
intersting story... but dont use things like the one from Ristuko with a coin... Used...
Still, pretty good format, and the story is intersting and it leaves questions to continue reading!
Cool
BA: The Angel thing is part of the plt. The coin thing was a joke from one of my friends.
Knight's Shadow-Really good story. Please update soon.
BA: The update will varies due to my summer school class and if I get writer's block
ssj-kabuto-nice i like this story. in the Genre it sayes Romance will it be a Rei/Shinji? please!
anyway continue with this great story!
BA: Sorry but it's going to be Asuka/Shinji I think of Rei as Shinji's sister due to the mother
DNA stuff.
I got a question for you readers who should I pair Rei with? I'm thinking of a) Kensuke
(Strange in my opinion) b) Kaworu (Have some fun with the idea of Kaworu and Rei) c)Own
character