Finally! The first chapter is up. YAY!
Disclaimer: Nintendo and Camelot own golden Sun. I also don't own Inyuasha.
Riptide: You also don't own a brain.
I'll write my chapter as I torment Riptide. MWAHHAHAHA!
Riptide: *gulp*
Chapter one: A Kidnapping
"Garu!" Ivan shouted, "Garu, get over here!" "Where is that son of mine?" he muttered. Suddenly, a whirlwind blew him backward slightly. "AHA! Got ya!" Ivan grunted as he grabbed the foot that had just kicked him in the stomach. He looked at the small boy he had by the foot. "You're not Garu! Sorry!" He dropped the boy, who scampered off. Ivan saw a foot hanging lazily over the edge of a tree branch. "Garu?" "What?" Ivan squinted up at the tree where his son was. "I told you to come home, you've got to help your Mom clean up the yard" Ivan said. "Oh, that was YOU screaming my name! I'm sorry I thought it was a Punch Ant being tortured." "Cut the crap and come home." "Fine, I'm coming down." As he jumped down he "accidentally" knocked an apple towards where Jeremy was sleeping.
"OW! Mercury **** it"
" Jeez, apples don't hurt that much do they Jere?" Garu asked " I just wasn't awake. What's up?" " Time to head in, the party for my sister start's in an hour. "CRAP!" "My thought's exactly!" Jeremy ran to his house bumping into Maha on the way. "Sorry sir!" Maha shook his head as Garu charged towards his house. "Kids. when will they learn to slow down." " Not sure!!" Ivan said as he dashed by. He's 28 and yet Ivan acts like a kid, Maha thought with a sigh.
Even with his heightened wolf senses Maha couldn't detect another watcher in the shadows.
" Happy Birthday Beth!" They shouted as she came into the yard. " All this for me? Sweet! Thanks" As the cake was cut another visitor wearing a dark cloak came forward from the shadows. "Let's see how much Ivan likes it when his little girl is my bargaining chip for the Mars Star" the visitor muttered. As Beth began to open presents a rain started to fall. The guests did not look up, but if they had they would have noticed it was only in an area around the backyard. Once inside Beth opened the only present that was inside. The present from the dark stranger.
Oooo! What a crappy cliffhanger! Oh well R&R review or I will do to you what I did to Riptide Riptide: REVIEW! YOU DON"T WANT TO GO TROUGH WHAT I WENT THROUGH
"Garu!" Ivan shouted, "Garu, get over here!" "Where is that son of mine?" he muttered. Suddenly, a whirlwind blew him backward slightly. "AHA! Got ya!" Ivan grunted as he grabbed the foot that had just kicked him in the stomach. He looked at the small boy he had by the foot. "You're not Garu! Sorry!" He dropped the boy, who scampered off. Ivan saw a foot hanging lazily over the edge of a tree branch. "Garu?" "What?" Ivan squinted up at the tree where his son was. "I told you to come home, you've got to help your Mom clean up the yard" Ivan said. "Oh, that was YOU screaming my name! I'm sorry I thought it was a Punch Ant being tortured." "Cut the crap and come home." "Fine, I'm coming down." As he jumped down he "accidentally" knocked an apple towards where Jeremy was sleeping.
"OW! Mercury **** it"
" Jeez, apples don't hurt that much do they Jere?" Garu asked " I just wasn't awake. What's up?" " Time to head in, the party for my sister start's in an hour. "CRAP!" "My thought's exactly!" Jeremy ran to his house bumping into Maha on the way. "Sorry sir!" Maha shook his head as Garu charged towards his house. "Kids. when will they learn to slow down." " Not sure!!" Ivan said as he dashed by. He's 28 and yet Ivan acts like a kid, Maha thought with a sigh.
Even with his heightened wolf senses Maha couldn't detect another watcher in the shadows.
" Happy Birthday Beth!" They shouted as she came into the yard. " All this for me? Sweet! Thanks" As the cake was cut another visitor wearing a dark cloak came forward from the shadows. "Let's see how much Ivan likes it when his little girl is my bargaining chip for the Mars Star" the visitor muttered. As Beth began to open presents a rain started to fall. The guests did not look up, but if they had they would have noticed it was only in an area around the backyard. Once inside Beth opened the only present that was inside. The present from the dark stranger.
Oooo! What a crappy cliffhanger! Oh well R&R review or I will do to you what I did to Riptide Riptide: REVIEW! YOU DON"T WANT TO GO TROUGH WHAT I WENT THROUGH