All right!!! Well to start off this is my very first fanfic so plz plz plz
be kind and I do not own X-Men: Evolution or any of its characters, but I
do own Ana, Amanda and Heather. and this crazy story!!
well I'm not sure where this story will go I have some ideas but I'm not
sure so I'll see how you guys like the first chapter. so plz R/R thanks a
mill! Sakura-asuka2005
****actions/ sound effects stuff***** ~~~thoughts~~~~~ ^^^^memories/ flash backs^^^^
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( All right to let you know the X-Men are just finishing up a fight with the brotherhood, and this fight is taking place in deserted part of Bayville)
The dust slowly settled after Scott used his optic blast to smash Blob into a wall of a near by building.
"That'll like teach them to mess with us!" told the young valley girl to everyone around her. As the X-Men congratulated each other on a job well done. No one seemed to notice a shadowy figure slowly make it's way up behind Jean. **stab** a masive sword made its way into Jean's stomach. The swordsmen twisted and turned the sword, tearing up her insides. Jean tried to use her powers but they didn't work.
"HELP ME!!!" she screamed.
"Oh my god!!" Scott yelled. He blasted his optic beam at the swordsmen but he disappeared leaving behind a bloody Jean. "Oh my god jean, speak to me, It's gona be okay you'll see" Scott tried to reassure her but he knew that she had lost too much blood and there was nothing they could do.
Amongst the confusion and sadness a giant beam of light fell from the sky landing in front of the X-Men. When the light finally faded away it left behind 3 girls that looked to be in there mid-teens. They were dressed in some sort of school uniform. Their pants were grey dress pants, and their shirts were white colf shirts with "Cardinal Leger" imbroded on them, and to top it off they all were wearing black shoes. One of the girls had short brown hair that came down to about her shoulders with faded red highlights. She had make-up on that made her look like a punk, and she had spiky bracelets on and a toy monkey sticking out of the top of her pants. She was also slender and looked very friendly. She looked to be about 175-176 cm tall.
The second girl stood about the same and very skinny, she makes all the X-girls look chubby. Her hair is a shocking red/orange (a true red head) and had a lip ring in and a slightly visible belly stud. The last girl was the tallest of the three around 177-178 cm! She had red and black plastic bracelets on her left wrist and a couple spikey bracelets and had a lip ring, eyebrow ring, and many earrings. She also looked like a punk. But had a friendly look to her.
~~~At least I'm not the only different looking one~~~ thought Rouge, the resident goth. "Where the f**k are we!!" yelled the red head.
"Shut the f**k up Ana. Does it look like we know where the f**k we are you stuped bitch." snapped the first girl.
"Ana, Amanda! Both of you shut up before I f**kin' beat both your asses!!" yelled the last girl with authority.
"Hey" yelled Ana to the shocked looking X-Men, "do you know where we are??!!"
"Never mind you, someone please help Jean!" yelled Scott to his x-men.
"I'm sorry Scott but theres nothing that we can do for Jean" Hank told Scott fighting back his tears. All the X-Men stood there dumbfounded. How could one of there friends die. They were still so young and there was still so much for Jean to do. They all knew people were killed every day but someone they knew and loved . . . that just couldn't happen, could it?
"Oh for f**k's sake!!" yelled Ana as she walked over to where Scott was with Jean.
"Move it!" she yelled at him and shoved the weeping Scott out of the way. Then she kneeled down next to the dying Jean and began to say some words that no one could make out. Then a bright light began to emit from her hands and she yelled out "Recovery!" while placing her hands on Jean's wond. After a few minutes the light faded and Jean and Ana got up! " It's like a miracle" shouted Kitty as she ran up and hugged the very confused Jean.
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** Beta-edited by Resident Bishounen **
Well, wha'd you think about that? I know this may not be the greatest, but cut me some slack, it's my first fic. Anyway, tell me what you think, and your ideas for the next chapter. I've got some ideas, but I'd like to see what you think.
~Sakura-Asuka2005~
****actions/ sound effects stuff***** ~~~thoughts~~~~~ ^^^^memories/ flash backs^^^^
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------
( All right to let you know the X-Men are just finishing up a fight with the brotherhood, and this fight is taking place in deserted part of Bayville)
The dust slowly settled after Scott used his optic blast to smash Blob into a wall of a near by building.
"That'll like teach them to mess with us!" told the young valley girl to everyone around her. As the X-Men congratulated each other on a job well done. No one seemed to notice a shadowy figure slowly make it's way up behind Jean. **stab** a masive sword made its way into Jean's stomach. The swordsmen twisted and turned the sword, tearing up her insides. Jean tried to use her powers but they didn't work.
"HELP ME!!!" she screamed.
"Oh my god!!" Scott yelled. He blasted his optic beam at the swordsmen but he disappeared leaving behind a bloody Jean. "Oh my god jean, speak to me, It's gona be okay you'll see" Scott tried to reassure her but he knew that she had lost too much blood and there was nothing they could do.
Amongst the confusion and sadness a giant beam of light fell from the sky landing in front of the X-Men. When the light finally faded away it left behind 3 girls that looked to be in there mid-teens. They were dressed in some sort of school uniform. Their pants were grey dress pants, and their shirts were white colf shirts with "Cardinal Leger" imbroded on them, and to top it off they all were wearing black shoes. One of the girls had short brown hair that came down to about her shoulders with faded red highlights. She had make-up on that made her look like a punk, and she had spiky bracelets on and a toy monkey sticking out of the top of her pants. She was also slender and looked very friendly. She looked to be about 175-176 cm tall.
The second girl stood about the same and very skinny, she makes all the X-girls look chubby. Her hair is a shocking red/orange (a true red head) and had a lip ring in and a slightly visible belly stud. The last girl was the tallest of the three around 177-178 cm! She had red and black plastic bracelets on her left wrist and a couple spikey bracelets and had a lip ring, eyebrow ring, and many earrings. She also looked like a punk. But had a friendly look to her.
~~~At least I'm not the only different looking one~~~ thought Rouge, the resident goth. "Where the f**k are we!!" yelled the red head.
"Shut the f**k up Ana. Does it look like we know where the f**k we are you stuped bitch." snapped the first girl.
"Ana, Amanda! Both of you shut up before I f**kin' beat both your asses!!" yelled the last girl with authority.
"Hey" yelled Ana to the shocked looking X-Men, "do you know where we are??!!"
"Never mind you, someone please help Jean!" yelled Scott to his x-men.
"I'm sorry Scott but theres nothing that we can do for Jean" Hank told Scott fighting back his tears. All the X-Men stood there dumbfounded. How could one of there friends die. They were still so young and there was still so much for Jean to do. They all knew people were killed every day but someone they knew and loved . . . that just couldn't happen, could it?
"Oh for f**k's sake!!" yelled Ana as she walked over to where Scott was with Jean.
"Move it!" she yelled at him and shoved the weeping Scott out of the way. Then she kneeled down next to the dying Jean and began to say some words that no one could make out. Then a bright light began to emit from her hands and she yelled out "Recovery!" while placing her hands on Jean's wond. After a few minutes the light faded and Jean and Ana got up! " It's like a miracle" shouted Kitty as she ran up and hugged the very confused Jean.
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** Beta-edited by Resident Bishounen **
Well, wha'd you think about that? I know this may not be the greatest, but cut me some slack, it's my first fic. Anyway, tell me what you think, and your ideas for the next chapter. I've got some ideas, but I'd like to see what you think.
~Sakura-Asuka2005~