a/n: well, this will be the last chapter of this story. the reason is because very few people seem to read this story which only some of you think is good. AND I'M NOT IN 4TH GRADE DAMNIT!!! this was written by a 14 year old boy that pretty much hates anyone he has met. well, on with the story. oh, and if you want me to do the things that happened before this chapter, just ask me. thanks. R&R!!! one more thing, thank you for telling me how to spell entrails Marth no Samus Sueshijuu. i appreciate that. ^-_-^ and now i'm a cat....damn witch...why not a newt?
What's happened up to now:
Chris and Lauren have found Samus' location and have beaten a Neo-Pirate. Just after the fight a Chozo Ghost apparently fused with Chris' Gun Arm and has given him supposedly the strongest beam weapon to this time, the Plasma Wave. There is a problem with the weapon that Chris finds out after reading a file on it. Only one use and he's dead. Lauren found Samus and toogether they made their way to Chris who was on the Main Bridge of one of the Imperial Ships they were on. Chris has found out his father wasn't really killed and is now wondering what he must do. The 5 men and the 6 women that Chris and Lauren had found on Tallon IV are waiting for them to return inside Samus' ship. As Lauren and Samus enter the Main Bridge, the head Pirate has jumped into the hatch to the engine room and Chris prepares to follow. Now begins the final chapter of Return to Tallon IV.
Samus looked at me as I walked to the hatch. "What is he going to do?"
"He's going to destroy Tallon IV and kill us...." I turned and looked at Lauren and my mother. "I plan to stop him."
"WHAT?! How?!" Lauren shrieked as she ran up to me.
"I'm going to destroy this ship." I looked down at Lauren and smiled.
"How do you plan to do that?" Samus walked up to us and looked down the hatch.
"I plan to do it with this Plasma Wave." I held up my gun arm and switched it to the Plasma Wave weapon."
"Plasma Wave? How the hell did you get that?" Samus didn't believe me.
"A Chozo Ghost fused with my arm. There's just one problem though with using this." I looked at my mom.
"And that is?"
"He's going to die when he uses it." Lauren burst into tears after saying this and buried her face into my chest as Samus shook her head.
"No, I'm not going to let you do it." Samus looked like she was about to start crying too.
I nodded and kissed Lauren's forehead and lifted her chin up with my left hand and kissed her lips gently. "I'm sorry Lauren...I have to do this..."
"But I don't want you to go!" She just started to cry harder.
"Listen, I'll come back if I live. I promise." I looked at my mother. "Take her back to Tallon IV by those teleporters, and get back to your ship. It'll be just outside the Chozo Ruins."
Samus nodded and I kissed Lauren one more time before Samus pried her off of me and pulled her to the teleporters. "Good luck Chris." Samus said to me before the teleporters activated.
I sighed and jumped down the hatch to the engine room. I landed on a suspened platform and immediately began to sweat. 'Damn its hot...Where is that Pirate...' I looked around the engine room and spotted the Pirate at the control pannel for the engine. I stood up and took aim at the pannel in front of the Pirate. 'Say goodbye you peice of shit.' I began to charge up the beam as the Pirate began to final procedures to start the Self-Destruct sequence for the engine.
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Samus jumped into her ship and was greeted by 11 people just looking at her. 'Who are the people?' When Lauren came down one of the men rushed towards her and caught her before she hit the floor. "Where's Chris? Lauren? Where's Chris?"
"He's saving us all..." Lauren began to cry again moaning something about Chris every few seconds.
'Poor girl...She's about to lose him...' One of the women thought as Samus sat down and began to start up the ship.
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The Pirate looked up at me and began to laugh when he saw the charging shot. "You fool! Nothing can stop my from destroying that planet!!!"
I gritted my teeth and got ready to fire the shot. "Wrong. This can..."
"A puny little beam weapon? HA! It'll never get through the energy feild around the engine." The Pirate began to laugh.
A tear ran down my left cheek as I fired the shot at the Pirate and watched a kind of energy bomb go off. 'Goodbye Lauren...' The bomb disentegrated the ship leaving nothing but me, the two halves of the pirate, and a necklace with a picture of him and Lauren inside Samus' ship. Lauren sat on my lap and I had my arms wrapped around her. I reached over with my left hand and put the necklace on before dying.
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Samus looked at the sky when it suddenly turned white then nothing. 'Chris...'
Lauren was still crying when Samus began to fly out into space. She then saw something she thought she wouldn't. She saw her son put on a necklace then die. She brought the ship to a stop next to my body and went to the hatch. She pulled on her helmet and opened the hatch then closed it the second her feet cleared the opening. She then jumped out slowly to my body and to to me after a few seconds. She grabbed my hand and looked around for something to kick off of when she felt something. Looking down she saw the upper half of the pirate I had killed and pushed off of it and to the ship. Samus opened the hatch and pushed my body down then got in and shut the hatch. Lauren looked up and began to scream. She jumped and began to hug my body before Samus could stop her. There sounded like there were some popping in my rib cage from Lauren squeezing too hard.
"Ya know...that kinda hurts..." Lauren's eyes widened when she heard my voice. Samus was completely freaked out. 'I thought he said he'd die after firing the shot...'
"CHRIS!!!!" Lauren began to kiss my face but stopped and just kissed my lips. I could hardly move but wrapped my arms around her and began to kiss her not really caring is everyone was watching.
"Sorry I had to leave. Ya wanna know what Heaven looks like?" I smiled taking a break from kissing Lauren. Lauren began to laugh then started to cry into my shoulder.
"What's wrong?" I rubbed her back as she cried.
"Nothing. Nothing at all." Lauren just kept crying and eventually we went to my room and locked the door.
Samus sat down and began to pilot the ship away from Tallon IV. "So, where are you guys going?" Samus looked back at her 11 passengers.
"Anywhere. As long as we get away from there. Being a prisoner sucks." One of the men sat down next to Samus and looked out.
Samus looked at the man in the seat beside her and smiled. "And you are?"
The man looked at her and smiled. "You know who I am."
Samus gasped and felt a tear roll down her right cheek. 'D-Damon?" The man nodded and Samus slapped him as hard as she could. (That must have hurt because she STILL has her Energy Suit on).
"That was for leaving us." Samus smiled and kissed Damon on his mouth. "That was for coming back."
Return to Tallon IV - End
Ending notes from the writer: Well, that was a nice ending. Well I think it is. I plan to post what happens to everyone after about 10 years. This story is entirely fictional, and if anything does happen that comes close to being like this, DON'T LOOK AT ME!! I hope you had a nice time reading this, while I wrote it. If you want what happens to Chris, Lauren, and Samus, I need a total of 30 reviews for this story. It was fun writing this, and I seriously doubt I'll be writing another Metroid fic. According to one reviewer, whom I shall now call Bob, I write like a 4th grader that just beat Metroid. Really, I only have around %55 completed. DAMN THOSE WAVE TROOPERS!!! well, expect the Epilogue to be up soon. I just have to figure out what Samus and Damon are going to do now that they're back together. BYE!!!! damn you Bob...wait...nvm...i said nothing...well...nothing imporant...: :whips out a M60 machine gun and fires at Bob: : DAMN YOU!!! DAMN YOU BOB THE ALIEN!!!
What's happened up to now:
Chris and Lauren have found Samus' location and have beaten a Neo-Pirate. Just after the fight a Chozo Ghost apparently fused with Chris' Gun Arm and has given him supposedly the strongest beam weapon to this time, the Plasma Wave. There is a problem with the weapon that Chris finds out after reading a file on it. Only one use and he's dead. Lauren found Samus and toogether they made their way to Chris who was on the Main Bridge of one of the Imperial Ships they were on. Chris has found out his father wasn't really killed and is now wondering what he must do. The 5 men and the 6 women that Chris and Lauren had found on Tallon IV are waiting for them to return inside Samus' ship. As Lauren and Samus enter the Main Bridge, the head Pirate has jumped into the hatch to the engine room and Chris prepares to follow. Now begins the final chapter of Return to Tallon IV.
Samus looked at me as I walked to the hatch. "What is he going to do?"
"He's going to destroy Tallon IV and kill us...." I turned and looked at Lauren and my mother. "I plan to stop him."
"WHAT?! How?!" Lauren shrieked as she ran up to me.
"I'm going to destroy this ship." I looked down at Lauren and smiled.
"How do you plan to do that?" Samus walked up to us and looked down the hatch.
"I plan to do it with this Plasma Wave." I held up my gun arm and switched it to the Plasma Wave weapon."
"Plasma Wave? How the hell did you get that?" Samus didn't believe me.
"A Chozo Ghost fused with my arm. There's just one problem though with using this." I looked at my mom.
"And that is?"
"He's going to die when he uses it." Lauren burst into tears after saying this and buried her face into my chest as Samus shook her head.
"No, I'm not going to let you do it." Samus looked like she was about to start crying too.
I nodded and kissed Lauren's forehead and lifted her chin up with my left hand and kissed her lips gently. "I'm sorry Lauren...I have to do this..."
"But I don't want you to go!" She just started to cry harder.
"Listen, I'll come back if I live. I promise." I looked at my mother. "Take her back to Tallon IV by those teleporters, and get back to your ship. It'll be just outside the Chozo Ruins."
Samus nodded and I kissed Lauren one more time before Samus pried her off of me and pulled her to the teleporters. "Good luck Chris." Samus said to me before the teleporters activated.
I sighed and jumped down the hatch to the engine room. I landed on a suspened platform and immediately began to sweat. 'Damn its hot...Where is that Pirate...' I looked around the engine room and spotted the Pirate at the control pannel for the engine. I stood up and took aim at the pannel in front of the Pirate. 'Say goodbye you peice of shit.' I began to charge up the beam as the Pirate began to final procedures to start the Self-Destruct sequence for the engine.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Samus jumped into her ship and was greeted by 11 people just looking at her. 'Who are the people?' When Lauren came down one of the men rushed towards her and caught her before she hit the floor. "Where's Chris? Lauren? Where's Chris?"
"He's saving us all..." Lauren began to cry again moaning something about Chris every few seconds.
'Poor girl...She's about to lose him...' One of the women thought as Samus sat down and began to start up the ship.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Pirate looked up at me and began to laugh when he saw the charging shot. "You fool! Nothing can stop my from destroying that planet!!!"
I gritted my teeth and got ready to fire the shot. "Wrong. This can..."
"A puny little beam weapon? HA! It'll never get through the energy feild around the engine." The Pirate began to laugh.
A tear ran down my left cheek as I fired the shot at the Pirate and watched a kind of energy bomb go off. 'Goodbye Lauren...' The bomb disentegrated the ship leaving nothing but me, the two halves of the pirate, and a necklace with a picture of him and Lauren inside Samus' ship. Lauren sat on my lap and I had my arms wrapped around her. I reached over with my left hand and put the necklace on before dying.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Samus looked at the sky when it suddenly turned white then nothing. 'Chris...'
Lauren was still crying when Samus began to fly out into space. She then saw something she thought she wouldn't. She saw her son put on a necklace then die. She brought the ship to a stop next to my body and went to the hatch. She pulled on her helmet and opened the hatch then closed it the second her feet cleared the opening. She then jumped out slowly to my body and to to me after a few seconds. She grabbed my hand and looked around for something to kick off of when she felt something. Looking down she saw the upper half of the pirate I had killed and pushed off of it and to the ship. Samus opened the hatch and pushed my body down then got in and shut the hatch. Lauren looked up and began to scream. She jumped and began to hug my body before Samus could stop her. There sounded like there were some popping in my rib cage from Lauren squeezing too hard.
"Ya know...that kinda hurts..." Lauren's eyes widened when she heard my voice. Samus was completely freaked out. 'I thought he said he'd die after firing the shot...'
"CHRIS!!!!" Lauren began to kiss my face but stopped and just kissed my lips. I could hardly move but wrapped my arms around her and began to kiss her not really caring is everyone was watching.
"Sorry I had to leave. Ya wanna know what Heaven looks like?" I smiled taking a break from kissing Lauren. Lauren began to laugh then started to cry into my shoulder.
"What's wrong?" I rubbed her back as she cried.
"Nothing. Nothing at all." Lauren just kept crying and eventually we went to my room and locked the door.
Samus sat down and began to pilot the ship away from Tallon IV. "So, where are you guys going?" Samus looked back at her 11 passengers.
"Anywhere. As long as we get away from there. Being a prisoner sucks." One of the men sat down next to Samus and looked out.
Samus looked at the man in the seat beside her and smiled. "And you are?"
The man looked at her and smiled. "You know who I am."
Samus gasped and felt a tear roll down her right cheek. 'D-Damon?" The man nodded and Samus slapped him as hard as she could. (That must have hurt because she STILL has her Energy Suit on).
"That was for leaving us." Samus smiled and kissed Damon on his mouth. "That was for coming back."
Return to Tallon IV - End
Ending notes from the writer: Well, that was a nice ending. Well I think it is. I plan to post what happens to everyone after about 10 years. This story is entirely fictional, and if anything does happen that comes close to being like this, DON'T LOOK AT ME!! I hope you had a nice time reading this, while I wrote it. If you want what happens to Chris, Lauren, and Samus, I need a total of 30 reviews for this story. It was fun writing this, and I seriously doubt I'll be writing another Metroid fic. According to one reviewer, whom I shall now call Bob, I write like a 4th grader that just beat Metroid. Really, I only have around %55 completed. DAMN THOSE WAVE TROOPERS!!! well, expect the Epilogue to be up soon. I just have to figure out what Samus and Damon are going to do now that they're back together. BYE!!!! damn you Bob...wait...nvm...i said nothing...well...nothing imporant...: :whips out a M60 machine gun and fires at Bob: : DAMN YOU!!! DAMN YOU BOB THE ALIEN!!!