Love and Hatred
Choiler: During chapter three I just realized how little knowledge I have in fanfictions. The 'terms' you writers use are very unfamiliar to me. If you can help me out and tell all the things you guys use to summarize your fics, I'll appreciate it. E-mail me this info; do not give me this info in review form.
Kitty-chan4: No problem, it's the least I could do, thanks for reading mine.
Sam: Are you working for that Mary sue thingy? I just wanted to know. If you do well, don't think I'm weird I have a nitch for finding out things. Well thanks for your advice, I guess. One more thing, why are only fictional characters considered a Mary sue? If you look around, about every show/anime/manga has a perfect female character or at least they are portrayed as one. Oh and do you really think that my fic is a pollutant in fan fanfiction.net? *sniffs*
Lady Sapphira: Thank you for your review, again! You're my fav. reviewer since you were my first reviewer. Update your story soon!
Ashley Villa: I updated! When are you going to update yours?
Princess001: You really want my story to end?
GoingUnder: I'm guessing you like Evanescence, well thanks for your compliments!
Choiler: I personally think that going all out Mary sue fics isn't necessary. If the story is not good, say it's not good. Also, they are many 'Mary-sues' who are real on earth, but we don't notice this. Of course, I'm not saying their perfect, just they seem that way.
Disclaimer: If I owned Yugioh, the show wouldn't be called yugioh, it would be named 'Life & Times of Marik' or 'Marik poses for the ladies and some men will be attracted. Warning: Major sexiness.'
Note: Relina is a girl with flaws, she is not perfect. Rel is just a girl who is lucky enough to eventually fall in love with Marik. Not all men are attracted to her, which is why she is a loser at school! Remember Relina does not in anyway represent me, I do not have peach hair.
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Cracking of someone's bones could be heard and it was an unpleasant sound. It was obvious that the injured one was Relina. Her knees almost bent the other way and Rel shouted out in pain. During her cries Marik immediately stepped on the brakes, the good grip of the vehicle caused the bike to stop quickly, causing Marik to take flight from his bike. Somehow landing on Relina, who was in a state to shock.
"Get of me, get of me!" Relina struggled, as the man's weight overwhelmed her and his robe that surrounded both of them made her panic more. For Relina was weak and she had a fear for confined places. As she thrashed about, Marik's rod slid down from his back and was caught in between his belt and it's loop. Its grip was good, and the two horns of the golden rod scratched Rel's pale skin. This caused more irritation for her; Marik couldn't get off Rel immediately though as much as he tried, because his legs were under his maroon and black bike, thus exerting more weight on the frightened girl. Marik lifted his vehicle with his legs, taking a lot of his strength.
"Ah!" He hollered as he gradually rose the bike off his legs by his legs. With a final breath he moved his right heel to the end of the wheel. Then with all his might he gave it a final push. In exhaustion he just dropped on Rel as his bike rode to the left curve. The speed of Marik falling on Rel was quick, this caused Relina to jerk up in pain, she was stabbed by the tip of the rod's two sharp horns and not only that, it reopened her wounds from long ago. Her eyes widened, she couldn't believe this was happening. She couldn't see things clearly, as everything around her began to blur. Before she completely lost conscious, Rel could see the lights of a gigantic like truck that headed their way. She wrapped her arms around Marik's back, while she slowly but surely bled. This took Marik by surprise, but with all she had left she rolled Marik and herself to the left sidewalk, to safety. Rel then became unconscious, and Marik witnessed as the truck rushed passed them, the truck that would've killed him and this stranger, who had just saved his life. He quickly aligned his index and center fingers of his right hand. He then proceeded to check the pulse of what seemed like a lifeless girl.
"Whew." The blonde sighed in relief; the girl was still alive. As he wiped is sweat, Marik felt something trickling down in his left hand. It was blood, and it came from Relina's left side of her body. He didn't know what to do so the young Egyptian proceeded to his motor cycle. He began his engine, but somehow he felt wrong just leaving the girl on the street to bleed.
"Ugh." He said in frustration. He took of his robe, not noticing that the millennium ring and his cloak's chains were tangled. With his teeth Marik ripped a large portion of his dark mauve cloth. At first feeling a little uncomfortable, he then slowly began to raise Relina's blue shirt. He stopped when he reached her ribs. That's as far has he needed to go as the Egyptian blond laid eyes on the long, slender scar which was placed right above her liver. It was partially open and blood seeped out of the wound in large amounts.
Marik lifted her off the ground and laid the part of cloth he had torn underneath her back. He then began to tie this piece of material like one would tie a ribbon around a gift. Though one little difference, Marik applied pressure to either reduce the massacre or completely stop it. As for the rest of his cape, he decided to just wrap it around the wounded girl. She seemed cold.
With his strong arms he elevated the girl, not bothering to use his rod instead. He made her sit on his leather seat, Marik could see that she wouldn't stay seated for long, she swayed back and forth. So he quickly jumped on his bike and caught Relina before she fell. The tanned blond then held both of Relina's hands and wrapped it around his waist. When he was sure she was secure he began his engine looking for aid or the hospital.
_Battle City Kaiba Corp._
"Mokuba, if my theory is correct, we should be able to locate Marik's location. Since he still has my dueling disk." Seto Kaiba informed his little brother. Joey, Anzu, Serenity, Bakura and Honda were also with the Kaiba brothers in their corp.'s main computer center.
"Just a second Seto, I'll see if our satellite can pick him up." Everyone in the room stood there watching the screen closely.
"Stop little brother. We have found him."
Joey hid his tears as he interrupted, "Where is he Kaiba? I'm gonna kill him for k-killing my best bud!" Serenity held his hand to comfort her big brother.
"I can't believe he's gone." Anzu hadn't stop crying from before. As for Honda, he remained silent.
"Stop being such babies. When I challenge and win against Marik, I'll be the greatest duelists." Kaiba said ignoring Yugi's depressed friends.
"What about Yugi? What about our friend?" Anzu lashed out at the arrogant millionaire.
"Yugi will find a way, I'm sure of it."
Everyone gasped at Kaiba's word; Serenity was the first to question, "Yugi come back. How?"
"How do ya know this?" Joey said merrily and in suspicion.
"Mokuba tell them."
"All right. We've been doing research and according to the scriptures, before one reaches the zone of the dead, the spirit God Osiris judges he who has lost a shadow duel. So if Yami can convince Osiris that he is true, the god may give him a second chance."
"Osiris is the god of the Underworld, his puppet is the Egyptian card, Obelisk."
"Yah, all this was figured out by my big brother, so he should get all the credit." Mokuba cheerfully added.
Bakura finally spoke, "Yugi might return?"
"Really.." Honda first words since Yugi's demise.
Anzu followed completing the brunet boy's remark, "Yugi, might come back?"
Kaiba ended the subject by silently saying, "Maybe, just may be."
_Somewhere in the City_
Marik rode his bike not knowing where he was going. He looked around to find one thing; a red cross sign indicating that it was a hospital. It had almost been ten minutes since the crash and still he hadn't found what he was looking for. The now nervous Egyptian stepped on the gas pedal to quicken the pace. He was becoming worrisome that he may not find a hospital on time, it might be too late, and she might not even be alive. His thought was disrupted when he saw an arrow pointing right, over it the words wrote 'Grey Nuns Hospital.' He took the turn and quickly journeyed to the stone tablet engraved 'Emergency.'
The blond foreigner didn't bother using the silver kickstand of his bike. As soon as he lifted Relina off his bike, it fell abruptly. Nonetheless Marik rushed to the hospital not caring about anything else at the moment. Relina gained a little conscious and she struggled to open her eyes half way. She was weak and before she fell into deep slumber, she laid her on two beautiful amethyst eyes. It was cold but pleasant to watch; what she saw underneath his eyes was disturbing to her. They were scars, scars that seemed to be a perfect cut, that they couldn't just have happened naturally, somebody had drawn them. Whoever had these beautiful eyes was taking her somewhere she didn't know. She was afraid that it might be the sanitarium, she really hoped not, but where else could this person take her. Rel preferred to die than to go back on the lonely white bed where there was more fatality than life. Before she blacked out again she remembered her near death experience here.
He pushed the door open and saw no one in sight. He ran down the hall to find a doctor and just ran into one. "Help me, this girl is close to her demise."
"What happened?" It was a male doctor and Marik noticed in his tag that man's name was Dr. J Smith. Both men lifted her and moved her on a white bed.
"Does it matter, just take her for her healing." The Egyptian saw the white man unknot the cloth he had tied. His facial expression was not optimistic.
"All right, I will. Good thing you found her, this very serious. I just hope she didn't loose too much blood." Marik saw Dr. Smith pushing the bed on wheels to a room. He sighed in relief; 'It's all right now.'
He was no more worried about the girl but more rather himself. He didn't know where he was or what his yami has gotten him into. 'How though, how did I come back?' Marik pondered while he stroked something triangular close to his soul reflexes. He never felt something like this, and when he looked down for the first time he noticed that he had the millennium puzzle. Then he proceeded to his back pocket, he had been feeling something uncomfortable, and he drew out the item, it was the tauk, his sister's necklace! He ran to his motorcycle, he hauled up it up and opened his inventory compartment in this bike. He saw the Ankh, the scale, the eye. 'Why do I have only have six items?' He had no answer to this question. RING! Marik could hear a cell phone ring, it was close by and he was the only one around. He felt his left pocket and took out the rectangular object. A cell phone?
"Hello?" He said hesistantly.
"Master Marik, we have done the house to your liking." The mind slave who was formerly the owner of Marik's new home informed.
"T-thank you."
"Are you returning from your journey?" The blond noticed his monotone voice indicating that his rod was controlling him.
"Yes, but where is my dwelling?" Questioned Marik.
"Are you all right sir?"
"Of course just tell me." Marik was aggravated by this man's questions.
"Where are you located?"
Marik looked at his surroundings and concluded, "I hope you know where the Grey Nuns hospital is."
"Of course, I'll ride there and you can follow me back home."
"How are you going to come?"
"My car."
"All right, hurry." Marik returned his phone back to his pocket. He never knew that his yami had accomplished so much. 'I assume that he also acquired the gods.' Marik smiled as he thought this. When he reached in this right pocket that was exactly what he drew. He had power, but he couldn't keep as much as he wanted to.
He witnessed as a black car parked in front of him. The window rolled down, Marik saw a man he had never seen before. "Master Marik, follow me."
"I shall." He looked back the hospital, he felt proud for saving someone he didn't know, and proud he saved a stranger. Inside he hoped one day that the girl would thank him in the near future.
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Choiler: Well that's it for now. Grey Nuns is an actual hospital, and I don't think it's a good one too. I'll tell you why next chapter. Someone I knew died there…*bad memories* Well thanks for reading, please Review??
Choiler: During chapter three I just realized how little knowledge I have in fanfictions. The 'terms' you writers use are very unfamiliar to me. If you can help me out and tell all the things you guys use to summarize your fics, I'll appreciate it. E-mail me this info; do not give me this info in review form.
Kitty-chan4: No problem, it's the least I could do, thanks for reading mine.
Sam: Are you working for that Mary sue thingy? I just wanted to know. If you do well, don't think I'm weird I have a nitch for finding out things. Well thanks for your advice, I guess. One more thing, why are only fictional characters considered a Mary sue? If you look around, about every show/anime/manga has a perfect female character or at least they are portrayed as one. Oh and do you really think that my fic is a pollutant in fan fanfiction.net? *sniffs*
Lady Sapphira: Thank you for your review, again! You're my fav. reviewer since you were my first reviewer. Update your story soon!
Ashley Villa: I updated! When are you going to update yours?
Princess001: You really want my story to end?
GoingUnder: I'm guessing you like Evanescence, well thanks for your compliments!
Choiler: I personally think that going all out Mary sue fics isn't necessary. If the story is not good, say it's not good. Also, they are many 'Mary-sues' who are real on earth, but we don't notice this. Of course, I'm not saying their perfect, just they seem that way.
Disclaimer: If I owned Yugioh, the show wouldn't be called yugioh, it would be named 'Life & Times of Marik' or 'Marik poses for the ladies and some men will be attracted. Warning: Major sexiness.'
Note: Relina is a girl with flaws, she is not perfect. Rel is just a girl who is lucky enough to eventually fall in love with Marik. Not all men are attracted to her, which is why she is a loser at school! Remember Relina does not in anyway represent me, I do not have peach hair.
*******************************Chapter 4: Saving a Stranger********************************
Cracking of someone's bones could be heard and it was an unpleasant sound. It was obvious that the injured one was Relina. Her knees almost bent the other way and Rel shouted out in pain. During her cries Marik immediately stepped on the brakes, the good grip of the vehicle caused the bike to stop quickly, causing Marik to take flight from his bike. Somehow landing on Relina, who was in a state to shock.
"Get of me, get of me!" Relina struggled, as the man's weight overwhelmed her and his robe that surrounded both of them made her panic more. For Relina was weak and she had a fear for confined places. As she thrashed about, Marik's rod slid down from his back and was caught in between his belt and it's loop. Its grip was good, and the two horns of the golden rod scratched Rel's pale skin. This caused more irritation for her; Marik couldn't get off Rel immediately though as much as he tried, because his legs were under his maroon and black bike, thus exerting more weight on the frightened girl. Marik lifted his vehicle with his legs, taking a lot of his strength.
"Ah!" He hollered as he gradually rose the bike off his legs by his legs. With a final breath he moved his right heel to the end of the wheel. Then with all his might he gave it a final push. In exhaustion he just dropped on Rel as his bike rode to the left curve. The speed of Marik falling on Rel was quick, this caused Relina to jerk up in pain, she was stabbed by the tip of the rod's two sharp horns and not only that, it reopened her wounds from long ago. Her eyes widened, she couldn't believe this was happening. She couldn't see things clearly, as everything around her began to blur. Before she completely lost conscious, Rel could see the lights of a gigantic like truck that headed their way. She wrapped her arms around Marik's back, while she slowly but surely bled. This took Marik by surprise, but with all she had left she rolled Marik and herself to the left sidewalk, to safety. Rel then became unconscious, and Marik witnessed as the truck rushed passed them, the truck that would've killed him and this stranger, who had just saved his life. He quickly aligned his index and center fingers of his right hand. He then proceeded to check the pulse of what seemed like a lifeless girl.
"Whew." The blonde sighed in relief; the girl was still alive. As he wiped is sweat, Marik felt something trickling down in his left hand. It was blood, and it came from Relina's left side of her body. He didn't know what to do so the young Egyptian proceeded to his motor cycle. He began his engine, but somehow he felt wrong just leaving the girl on the street to bleed.
"Ugh." He said in frustration. He took of his robe, not noticing that the millennium ring and his cloak's chains were tangled. With his teeth Marik ripped a large portion of his dark mauve cloth. At first feeling a little uncomfortable, he then slowly began to raise Relina's blue shirt. He stopped when he reached her ribs. That's as far has he needed to go as the Egyptian blond laid eyes on the long, slender scar which was placed right above her liver. It was partially open and blood seeped out of the wound in large amounts.
Marik lifted her off the ground and laid the part of cloth he had torn underneath her back. He then began to tie this piece of material like one would tie a ribbon around a gift. Though one little difference, Marik applied pressure to either reduce the massacre or completely stop it. As for the rest of his cape, he decided to just wrap it around the wounded girl. She seemed cold.
With his strong arms he elevated the girl, not bothering to use his rod instead. He made her sit on his leather seat, Marik could see that she wouldn't stay seated for long, she swayed back and forth. So he quickly jumped on his bike and caught Relina before she fell. The tanned blond then held both of Relina's hands and wrapped it around his waist. When he was sure she was secure he began his engine looking for aid or the hospital.
_Battle City Kaiba Corp._
"Mokuba, if my theory is correct, we should be able to locate Marik's location. Since he still has my dueling disk." Seto Kaiba informed his little brother. Joey, Anzu, Serenity, Bakura and Honda were also with the Kaiba brothers in their corp.'s main computer center.
"Just a second Seto, I'll see if our satellite can pick him up." Everyone in the room stood there watching the screen closely.
"Stop little brother. We have found him."
Joey hid his tears as he interrupted, "Where is he Kaiba? I'm gonna kill him for k-killing my best bud!" Serenity held his hand to comfort her big brother.
"I can't believe he's gone." Anzu hadn't stop crying from before. As for Honda, he remained silent.
"Stop being such babies. When I challenge and win against Marik, I'll be the greatest duelists." Kaiba said ignoring Yugi's depressed friends.
"What about Yugi? What about our friend?" Anzu lashed out at the arrogant millionaire.
"Yugi will find a way, I'm sure of it."
Everyone gasped at Kaiba's word; Serenity was the first to question, "Yugi come back. How?"
"How do ya know this?" Joey said merrily and in suspicion.
"Mokuba tell them."
"All right. We've been doing research and according to the scriptures, before one reaches the zone of the dead, the spirit God Osiris judges he who has lost a shadow duel. So if Yami can convince Osiris that he is true, the god may give him a second chance."
"Osiris is the god of the Underworld, his puppet is the Egyptian card, Obelisk."
"Yah, all this was figured out by my big brother, so he should get all the credit." Mokuba cheerfully added.
Bakura finally spoke, "Yugi might return?"
"Really.." Honda first words since Yugi's demise.
Anzu followed completing the brunet boy's remark, "Yugi, might come back?"
Kaiba ended the subject by silently saying, "Maybe, just may be."
_Somewhere in the City_
Marik rode his bike not knowing where he was going. He looked around to find one thing; a red cross sign indicating that it was a hospital. It had almost been ten minutes since the crash and still he hadn't found what he was looking for. The now nervous Egyptian stepped on the gas pedal to quicken the pace. He was becoming worrisome that he may not find a hospital on time, it might be too late, and she might not even be alive. His thought was disrupted when he saw an arrow pointing right, over it the words wrote 'Grey Nuns Hospital.' He took the turn and quickly journeyed to the stone tablet engraved 'Emergency.'
The blond foreigner didn't bother using the silver kickstand of his bike. As soon as he lifted Relina off his bike, it fell abruptly. Nonetheless Marik rushed to the hospital not caring about anything else at the moment. Relina gained a little conscious and she struggled to open her eyes half way. She was weak and before she fell into deep slumber, she laid her on two beautiful amethyst eyes. It was cold but pleasant to watch; what she saw underneath his eyes was disturbing to her. They were scars, scars that seemed to be a perfect cut, that they couldn't just have happened naturally, somebody had drawn them. Whoever had these beautiful eyes was taking her somewhere she didn't know. She was afraid that it might be the sanitarium, she really hoped not, but where else could this person take her. Rel preferred to die than to go back on the lonely white bed where there was more fatality than life. Before she blacked out again she remembered her near death experience here.
He pushed the door open and saw no one in sight. He ran down the hall to find a doctor and just ran into one. "Help me, this girl is close to her demise."
"What happened?" It was a male doctor and Marik noticed in his tag that man's name was Dr. J Smith. Both men lifted her and moved her on a white bed.
"Does it matter, just take her for her healing." The Egyptian saw the white man unknot the cloth he had tied. His facial expression was not optimistic.
"All right, I will. Good thing you found her, this very serious. I just hope she didn't loose too much blood." Marik saw Dr. Smith pushing the bed on wheels to a room. He sighed in relief; 'It's all right now.'
He was no more worried about the girl but more rather himself. He didn't know where he was or what his yami has gotten him into. 'How though, how did I come back?' Marik pondered while he stroked something triangular close to his soul reflexes. He never felt something like this, and when he looked down for the first time he noticed that he had the millennium puzzle. Then he proceeded to his back pocket, he had been feeling something uncomfortable, and he drew out the item, it was the tauk, his sister's necklace! He ran to his motorcycle, he hauled up it up and opened his inventory compartment in this bike. He saw the Ankh, the scale, the eye. 'Why do I have only have six items?' He had no answer to this question. RING! Marik could hear a cell phone ring, it was close by and he was the only one around. He felt his left pocket and took out the rectangular object. A cell phone?
"Hello?" He said hesistantly.
"Master Marik, we have done the house to your liking." The mind slave who was formerly the owner of Marik's new home informed.
"T-thank you."
"Are you returning from your journey?" The blond noticed his monotone voice indicating that his rod was controlling him.
"Yes, but where is my dwelling?" Questioned Marik.
"Are you all right sir?"
"Of course just tell me." Marik was aggravated by this man's questions.
"Where are you located?"
Marik looked at his surroundings and concluded, "I hope you know where the Grey Nuns hospital is."
"Of course, I'll ride there and you can follow me back home."
"How are you going to come?"
"My car."
"All right, hurry." Marik returned his phone back to his pocket. He never knew that his yami had accomplished so much. 'I assume that he also acquired the gods.' Marik smiled as he thought this. When he reached in this right pocket that was exactly what he drew. He had power, but he couldn't keep as much as he wanted to.
He witnessed as a black car parked in front of him. The window rolled down, Marik saw a man he had never seen before. "Master Marik, follow me."
"I shall." He looked back the hospital, he felt proud for saving someone he didn't know, and proud he saved a stranger. Inside he hoped one day that the girl would thank him in the near future.
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Choiler: Well that's it for now. Grey Nuns is an actual hospital, and I don't think it's a good one too. I'll tell you why next chapter. Someone I knew died there…*bad memories* Well thanks for reading, please Review??