Hey Everyone!!!! First of all, I want to thank: KittenAngel1403,
SaiyanGoddessBX, and 'me' for their lovely reviews. Second, I want to
apologize for not updating in a long time. I've spent my free time playing
FF VIII and haven't found enough inspiration to write at all, plus I went
to Cancun..it was OK, I've been there a lot so it wasn't really exciting.
Third, some mistakes in the last chapters were pointed out to me (thanks:
'me') and some I found while proofreading them (for the thousand time), so
you can check those out if you want. I didn't change anything major, just
spelling and some awkward sentences, so I guess you'll survive if you don't
read them again ^_^. One last thing: the translation for last chapter's
title is 'A Star Falls Loosing Its Glow.'
Disclaimer: I don't own any DBZ characters/manga/show. But I DO own Kalid (I'm still working on what he looks like ^_^.) Now on with the story, ENJOY!
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Ch. 3: Fui Paloma Por Querer Ser Gavilán
~~~ March ~~~
"Gosh Pan, are you mad at me?" Bra whined through the phone. "You haven't come to my house in over a month..And I'm very sad right now."
"What's wrong? What happened?"
"It's about Goten.um.Pan, can you come over?" Bra pleaded.
"OK" Pan replied, "But leave your window open so I don't have to bug anyone."
"K"
Kalid felt a familiar ki approaching the house, but couldn't tell who it was. He felt the ki enter Bra's room and he set out to find out who it was.
As Kalid approached Bra's room he heard a soft sob and instead decided to listen.
".It's ok, calm down."
Bra stopped sobbing enough to be able to talk.
"Now.what happened?"
"I saw *sob* I saw Goten kissing some girl." Bra whimpered.
"Oh, Bra, maybe SHE kissed him and he just froze.you know how Goten gets when he's nervous." Protested Pan.
"I don't know.and what's worse.I talked to him today, and he didn't even try to come clean!"
"Maybe I can talk to him and find out what really happened and why he hasn't told you." Pan said trying to console Bra.
"Really? Would you do that?...Please?" Asked Bra.
"Yes I'll do it next time I see him."
Bra couldn't thank Pan enough, she now realized she loved Goten, but was afraid to admit it for fear her feelings wouldn't be returned. After this, Pan also saw Bra's feelings.
After the waterworks were over, Pan felt the need to use the bathroom and excused herself. I guess you know who she bumped into.
".Were you eavesdropping on us?" Pan whispered with a look of you-best-not- be-doing-that plastered on her face.
".uh.yeah.I mean.NO! ...well.I heard someone crying.so I thought something was wrong.and then.um." he said scratching his head and mentally preparing himself for the thrashing he was going to get. Looking up he saw something he didn't expect.was that a smile?
Pan had never seen Kalid like this.it reminded her of her grandpa trying to explain himself to Chichi. Pan was trying not to smile, but couldn't help herself when remembering such a happy character.
"Well don't do it again!" with that she walked off.
Before she could reach the bathroom door, Kalid stepped in front of Pan leaning on the wall and flashing a million dollar smile.
"Where are you heading cutie?"
"I hope that wasn't a serious attempt at hitting on me." Pan chuckled. She walked around him and into the bathroom, in the meantime giving him a sly smirk.
Surprisingly, when Pan walked out of the bathroom he was still standing there. "There are a lot of bathrooms in the house you know." She said a little annoyed.
"I wasn't waiting to use the bathroom." Kalid said seductively.
Pan gave him a confused look "What are you playing Kalid? If you want a favor, you should just ask for it."
"Yeah, I want a favor."
Pan stepped closer feeling his breath on her forehead. "Maybe we can arrange something."
"Movies?"
"Eight o'clock tomorrow?"
"K"
It was done. Pan kinda wanted to have something with the chocolate eyed saiyan. She didn't know what it was about him that she wanted.maybe she just wanted to make Trunks jealous.or try to. *yeah, that should teach Trunks* Pan smiled walking back to Bra's room.
Kalid followed the hallway and entered his room only to find a blond haired goddess waiting for him with her arms crossed.
"So?"
"Tomorrow night."
"You think you'll get it?"
"Sure, why not? She seems easy enough."
"Personally, I don't think she is easy at all, but I might be wrong." She hugged Kalid. Her lips inched their way on to Kalid's but as soon as he perked his lips she turned away saying "Remember, if you want some from me, you'll have to screw her first." After stating her promise turned into threat she winked and left the room.
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"What's with you and that little smile of yours.don't you see that I'm in pain?" Bra half joked when Pan entered the room clearly happy about something. "Ok, spill it. I know you were talking to Kalid out there, what happened?"
"I'm going out with him tomorrow night." Pan tried not to sound so happy.
"AAWWW! There goes my chance with him!"
Pan smiled and hugged her best friend knowing Bra was just messing with her head.
"Now seriously Pan, please talk to Goten, this is killing me."
"Ok" was Pan's only reply before she took off.
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Kalid didn't know why he agreed to side with Marron on this ruin-Pan thing. He didn't have anything against Pan; in fact he really liked her.or something like that. He was familiar with the games guys and girls played with each other. Still, he couldn't really explain what he had for Pan. Was it infatuation, or was it just lust for her innocent and young look?
Pan was beautiful, strong willed, had a charming personality, a killer body, and was full of life. However all of these attributes were shunned down by Marron, now there was a woman, yes a woman, not a silly teenager looking for romance.who needed romance anyway? Your hart is bound to be broken sooner or later. Kalid saw this as a lesson he experienced back home *Guess it's not my home anymore.*
But back to the subject, Marron was really something.those eyes.just like looking into the endless sky. Then again Pan's eyes were mesmerizing in their own way. Pan's onyx eyes were so determined to know everything.they pierced into your own eyes.into your soul. Why did he bother thinking about what he liked about Pan and Marron? He was going to have them both anyway. Marron was meant to be his soul mate and Pan his trophy..right?
*What are Marron's intentions anyway, why does she want to do this to Pan, sex is not a big deal anyway, right?* Maybe Marron's intentions are not that Pan had sex, maybe there is something deeper to that.Yes, Pan's father would be furious that Pan slept with some random guy. And she might be looked down on by her loved ones, but how does this benefit Marron? ... Right! That look Trunks had when Kalid was staring at Pan. How he changes the subject whenever Kalid mentions something about Pan.is Trunks the reason? .
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*.Trunks.I wonder if Kalid really likes me.Bra told me about the way he looked at Marron, well, Marron is beautiful and talented, no wonder Trunks chose her over me. But I'm pretty too right? Besides looks aren't everything, and I'm nice.so is Marron, she is really nice to everyone. Kami, why won't Trunks give me the time of day, I mean I'm not that bad am I? Either way, what's done is done, and Trunks gave me the 'negative.' Now I'm getting a chance with someone new.but I don't even like him. Wait, I don't even know him, and I'm making assumptions. I shouldn't make the same mistake Trunks did, I should get to know Kalid, maybe deep down he is a really sweet guy. But Kami, I WANT Trunks. I LOVE Trunks.maybe I really can make him jealous if I go out with Kalid. And I'll give Kalid a chance to prove himself to me.I'll be killing two birds with one shot. Whoa! I'm getting waaaay ahead of myself here. Maybe Kalid doesn't even like me.maybe he just wants to get laid.maybe Trunks will never be jealous of a guy touching me. UGHH! What I should worry about right now is sleep.sweet.sweet.sleep..*
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Sorry this chapter was short.and that it took sooo long to get my lazy ass to post it. I hope you guys liked it; I thought it was kind of boring, but you'll be the judge of that. ^_^
Please review, I'd like to know what y'all think of it. Whew! I moved into my own apartment and I had to organize my stuff, so I'm kinda tired. So, hopefully I'll post a new chapter soon. My mom's right, I'm getting too lazy. But not to worry, once classes start again I'll write instead of doing homework! ^_^ (do you notice that I say 'so' a lot?)
Love Ya!
Chica de las estrellas
Disclaimer: I don't own any DBZ characters/manga/show. But I DO own Kalid (I'm still working on what he looks like ^_^.) Now on with the story, ENJOY!
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Ch. 3: Fui Paloma Por Querer Ser Gavilán
~~~ March ~~~
"Gosh Pan, are you mad at me?" Bra whined through the phone. "You haven't come to my house in over a month..And I'm very sad right now."
"What's wrong? What happened?"
"It's about Goten.um.Pan, can you come over?" Bra pleaded.
"OK" Pan replied, "But leave your window open so I don't have to bug anyone."
"K"
Kalid felt a familiar ki approaching the house, but couldn't tell who it was. He felt the ki enter Bra's room and he set out to find out who it was.
As Kalid approached Bra's room he heard a soft sob and instead decided to listen.
".It's ok, calm down."
Bra stopped sobbing enough to be able to talk.
"Now.what happened?"
"I saw *sob* I saw Goten kissing some girl." Bra whimpered.
"Oh, Bra, maybe SHE kissed him and he just froze.you know how Goten gets when he's nervous." Protested Pan.
"I don't know.and what's worse.I talked to him today, and he didn't even try to come clean!"
"Maybe I can talk to him and find out what really happened and why he hasn't told you." Pan said trying to console Bra.
"Really? Would you do that?...Please?" Asked Bra.
"Yes I'll do it next time I see him."
Bra couldn't thank Pan enough, she now realized she loved Goten, but was afraid to admit it for fear her feelings wouldn't be returned. After this, Pan also saw Bra's feelings.
After the waterworks were over, Pan felt the need to use the bathroom and excused herself. I guess you know who she bumped into.
".Were you eavesdropping on us?" Pan whispered with a look of you-best-not- be-doing-that plastered on her face.
".uh.yeah.I mean.NO! ...well.I heard someone crying.so I thought something was wrong.and then.um." he said scratching his head and mentally preparing himself for the thrashing he was going to get. Looking up he saw something he didn't expect.was that a smile?
Pan had never seen Kalid like this.it reminded her of her grandpa trying to explain himself to Chichi. Pan was trying not to smile, but couldn't help herself when remembering such a happy character.
"Well don't do it again!" with that she walked off.
Before she could reach the bathroom door, Kalid stepped in front of Pan leaning on the wall and flashing a million dollar smile.
"Where are you heading cutie?"
"I hope that wasn't a serious attempt at hitting on me." Pan chuckled. She walked around him and into the bathroom, in the meantime giving him a sly smirk.
Surprisingly, when Pan walked out of the bathroom he was still standing there. "There are a lot of bathrooms in the house you know." She said a little annoyed.
"I wasn't waiting to use the bathroom." Kalid said seductively.
Pan gave him a confused look "What are you playing Kalid? If you want a favor, you should just ask for it."
"Yeah, I want a favor."
Pan stepped closer feeling his breath on her forehead. "Maybe we can arrange something."
"Movies?"
"Eight o'clock tomorrow?"
"K"
It was done. Pan kinda wanted to have something with the chocolate eyed saiyan. She didn't know what it was about him that she wanted.maybe she just wanted to make Trunks jealous.or try to. *yeah, that should teach Trunks* Pan smiled walking back to Bra's room.
Kalid followed the hallway and entered his room only to find a blond haired goddess waiting for him with her arms crossed.
"So?"
"Tomorrow night."
"You think you'll get it?"
"Sure, why not? She seems easy enough."
"Personally, I don't think she is easy at all, but I might be wrong." She hugged Kalid. Her lips inched their way on to Kalid's but as soon as he perked his lips she turned away saying "Remember, if you want some from me, you'll have to screw her first." After stating her promise turned into threat she winked and left the room.
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"What's with you and that little smile of yours.don't you see that I'm in pain?" Bra half joked when Pan entered the room clearly happy about something. "Ok, spill it. I know you were talking to Kalid out there, what happened?"
"I'm going out with him tomorrow night." Pan tried not to sound so happy.
"AAWWW! There goes my chance with him!"
Pan smiled and hugged her best friend knowing Bra was just messing with her head.
"Now seriously Pan, please talk to Goten, this is killing me."
"Ok" was Pan's only reply before she took off.
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Kalid didn't know why he agreed to side with Marron on this ruin-Pan thing. He didn't have anything against Pan; in fact he really liked her.or something like that. He was familiar with the games guys and girls played with each other. Still, he couldn't really explain what he had for Pan. Was it infatuation, or was it just lust for her innocent and young look?
Pan was beautiful, strong willed, had a charming personality, a killer body, and was full of life. However all of these attributes were shunned down by Marron, now there was a woman, yes a woman, not a silly teenager looking for romance.who needed romance anyway? Your hart is bound to be broken sooner or later. Kalid saw this as a lesson he experienced back home *Guess it's not my home anymore.*
But back to the subject, Marron was really something.those eyes.just like looking into the endless sky. Then again Pan's eyes were mesmerizing in their own way. Pan's onyx eyes were so determined to know everything.they pierced into your own eyes.into your soul. Why did he bother thinking about what he liked about Pan and Marron? He was going to have them both anyway. Marron was meant to be his soul mate and Pan his trophy..right?
*What are Marron's intentions anyway, why does she want to do this to Pan, sex is not a big deal anyway, right?* Maybe Marron's intentions are not that Pan had sex, maybe there is something deeper to that.Yes, Pan's father would be furious that Pan slept with some random guy. And she might be looked down on by her loved ones, but how does this benefit Marron? ... Right! That look Trunks had when Kalid was staring at Pan. How he changes the subject whenever Kalid mentions something about Pan.is Trunks the reason? .
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*.Trunks.I wonder if Kalid really likes me.Bra told me about the way he looked at Marron, well, Marron is beautiful and talented, no wonder Trunks chose her over me. But I'm pretty too right? Besides looks aren't everything, and I'm nice.so is Marron, she is really nice to everyone. Kami, why won't Trunks give me the time of day, I mean I'm not that bad am I? Either way, what's done is done, and Trunks gave me the 'negative.' Now I'm getting a chance with someone new.but I don't even like him. Wait, I don't even know him, and I'm making assumptions. I shouldn't make the same mistake Trunks did, I should get to know Kalid, maybe deep down he is a really sweet guy. But Kami, I WANT Trunks. I LOVE Trunks.maybe I really can make him jealous if I go out with Kalid. And I'll give Kalid a chance to prove himself to me.I'll be killing two birds with one shot. Whoa! I'm getting waaaay ahead of myself here. Maybe Kalid doesn't even like me.maybe he just wants to get laid.maybe Trunks will never be jealous of a guy touching me. UGHH! What I should worry about right now is sleep.sweet.sweet.sleep..*
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Sorry this chapter was short.and that it took sooo long to get my lazy ass to post it. I hope you guys liked it; I thought it was kind of boring, but you'll be the judge of that. ^_^
Please review, I'd like to know what y'all think of it. Whew! I moved into my own apartment and I had to organize my stuff, so I'm kinda tired. So, hopefully I'll post a new chapter soon. My mom's right, I'm getting too lazy. But not to worry, once classes start again I'll write instead of doing homework! ^_^ (do you notice that I say 'so' a lot?)
Love Ya!
Chica de las estrellas