Hmm.1 review, that is sooooo sad it aint even funny, but ill keep writin
neway coz da reveiwere asked me 2.. thank you so much 'Irol' @least sum1
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+++++ Hermione sat by the deep blue lake inside the Hogwarts grounds. It had been two months since voldemort was defeated, harry died, ron died yet she was happy. Sitting there in blackpants, a pale pink top and pale blue wool coat.
She held her stomach at the thought of what she and draco had concived. It mde her happy that they shared something so pure, innocent. She closed her eyes, the worst mistake of her life...
A cold firm, harsh and rough hand held over her mouth and she tried and failed to scream, she bit down, the agonised moan told her that her attacker was a man. She reveived a few good punches and then all went black.
+++++ Draco was pacing their dormitory, he was worried, he was scared, not for him but for Hermione. She was an hour late, how could he not be worried. Deciding to put it at the back of his mind, he slowly started pacing the castle.he would meet Snape down in dungeon one in two hours to collect the potion Hermione was to take in insuring her that it was a safe pregnancy.
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Hermione woke, on the front steps on the castle. She lifted her head slightly but felt pain so sat back. She lifted an amr and grasped the step above her in an atemt to lift herselt up, it worked but the look on her face when she saw her bloody body was a look of terror. Grabing the railing, she hoisted herself up and limped towards the doors.
Inside, it was dark and quiet, she looked at her watch as she stumbled forwards, the face had been smashed so she couldn't read it. Stumbling, she passes the great hall and heard footsteps, gave a slight wobble, gasped and toppled down the dungeon staircase
Once she had hit the bottom, unconscious, little did she know that she had just lost one of those pure and innocent things that kept her going, her baby. but that wasn't all..
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Draco rushed towards the dungeons where he had just heard banging and crashing. He aproched a limp bruised and bloody body at the botton. The figure had dark brown curly hair, in an instant, his worst fears had come true.
"Hermione?".
++++++++++++++++++++++ well that chapter was different. hmmm I was using that chap in another fic I wrote but was taken of by da administrator for sum reason, I hav no idea.
+++++ Hermione sat by the deep blue lake inside the Hogwarts grounds. It had been two months since voldemort was defeated, harry died, ron died yet she was happy. Sitting there in blackpants, a pale pink top and pale blue wool coat.
She held her stomach at the thought of what she and draco had concived. It mde her happy that they shared something so pure, innocent. She closed her eyes, the worst mistake of her life...
A cold firm, harsh and rough hand held over her mouth and she tried and failed to scream, she bit down, the agonised moan told her that her attacker was a man. She reveived a few good punches and then all went black.
+++++ Draco was pacing their dormitory, he was worried, he was scared, not for him but for Hermione. She was an hour late, how could he not be worried. Deciding to put it at the back of his mind, he slowly started pacing the castle.he would meet Snape down in dungeon one in two hours to collect the potion Hermione was to take in insuring her that it was a safe pregnancy.
+++++
Hermione woke, on the front steps on the castle. She lifted her head slightly but felt pain so sat back. She lifted an amr and grasped the step above her in an atemt to lift herselt up, it worked but the look on her face when she saw her bloody body was a look of terror. Grabing the railing, she hoisted herself up and limped towards the doors.
Inside, it was dark and quiet, she looked at her watch as she stumbled forwards, the face had been smashed so she couldn't read it. Stumbling, she passes the great hall and heard footsteps, gave a slight wobble, gasped and toppled down the dungeon staircase
Once she had hit the bottom, unconscious, little did she know that she had just lost one of those pure and innocent things that kept her going, her baby. but that wasn't all..
++++++
Draco rushed towards the dungeons where he had just heard banging and crashing. He aproched a limp bruised and bloody body at the botton. The figure had dark brown curly hair, in an instant, his worst fears had come true.
"Hermione?".
++++++++++++++++++++++ well that chapter was different. hmmm I was using that chap in another fic I wrote but was taken of by da administrator for sum reason, I hav no idea.