[NB: This script isn't in real-time. Well, it is, but the action that takes place is minly a jist of what happens. In the real thing though, scenes would be a lot longer and yadda yadda yadda. Enjoy my story...]
Previously on 24...
*Tony Almeida*: "...A set of very important documents were stolen by a known terrorist group known only as "Burning Fuel." We did find evidence of a terrorist attack.. in the form of germ warfare. We have reason to belive that this group plan to destory CTU's existance like we destroyed there's..."
*Jack Bauer*: (Jack opens the door, and the guy at the door attempts to stab Jack. Jack immediately wrestles him to the ground, and knocks him unconscience. Jack pulls the unconscience man onto the couch. He searches the pockets for identification)
*President David Palmer*
Dana: "It's a sinch Mr. President. I believe that you're going to win the re-election."
David: (Laughs) "You get payed to say that!"
Tony: "I'm needing some info on a terrorist group known as "Burning Fuel"."
David: "Agent Almeida- you and I know that there is now no history of that group ever existing. All the documents were destroyed."
Tony: "Untrue sir. The FBI have information on the factory we tore down three months ago..."
*Milo Pressman*: "I knew it. I knew it was too good to be true. So, what was I to you? A fling? A bit on the side..."
Sam: "I don't think of you as a boyfriend, Milo..."
Milo: "No Sam, No! We are through. I cannot let myself be led by you. I run my own life..."
(A shot is heard in the distance. People scream as Milo falls down through shattered glass. He's been shot. Sam and her husband run down to see if he's alright... He's dead..)
Tony: "It's a list of detained agents that have been arrested for treason. Only one occurance have we had to pardon one agent, Agent Myers... She's related to Arnold Kempsfeld, an escaped member of the group."
(Jack searches through the wallet of the unconsience man on his couch. The man then wakes up.)
Man: "I... I do not know who I am..."
Jack: "Okay- found some name here. Huh. Does the name "Arnold Kempsfield" mean anything to you?"
Man: "It.. It sounds familar."
Jack: "Should do. It's yours..."
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"The Following Takes Place Between 5.00 pm and 6.00 pm..."
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(Tony recieves a phone call at CTU. Whilst he is speaking, we also see Michelle and Carl search through the computers, with the file that Tony gave them about the past traitors. The two also occasionally look at each other and smile. Tony notices this, hangs up, and approaches Carl.)
Tony: "Carl, can I have a word with you."
(Carl looks at Michelle and then Tony)
Carl: "Sure..."
(The two enter Tony's office.)
Carl: "Tony, I think I know what this is about..."
Tony: "Oh, you do, do you?"
Carl: "Look, I know Michelle is your girlfriend, and I also know that I have been flirting with her a lot lately. But, you gotta admit, she is attractive..."
(Pause)
Tony: "Carl. I've just received a message that an old CTU technician has been shot by a sniper in the mall."
(Carl looks distressed.)
Carl: "Who... who was it?"
Tony: "I'm sorry... It was Milo Pressman."
(Carl leans onto a wall.)
Tony: "I know you two were close friends."
Carl: "Who did it?"
Tony: "That, we're not sure of.."
Carl: "Who DID IT..?"
Tony: "We are looking into it. Believe me we are."
Carl: "Milo? Not Milo.. He got me into this job.."
Tony: "Carl. We have to deal with this serious terrorist threat. That is our main priority of the day."
Carl: "The people trying to bring down CTU?"
Tony: "Yeah."
Carl: "Hey.. how old was that disk with every workers profile on it that was stolen an hour ago?"
Tony: "We've confirmed that it was at least four or five years out of date."
Carl: "Milo was working during that time. He only quit three years ago."
Tony: "Wait.. this means that these people are only trying to kill CTU agents who were on that disk. God, if it's five years out of date, who knows who is at risk?"
(Cut to: Jack's Apartment. Jack has Arnold Kempsfield tied up to a chair. A CTU team consisting of three people are already there.)
Jack: "Hey, be careful with this one. He claims that he doesn't know who he is."
Agent 1: "What do you know about him so far?"
Jack: "Well, his wallet has his I.D. as Arnold Kempsfield. I don't know if that's an alias or anything."
(Agent 1 pulls out a phone and asks for background information on Arnold.)
Arnold: "What are you doing to me?"
Jack: "Arnold. There is a pretty serious threat on a government agency that will take place some time tomorrow. At the moment, you're our main man."
Arnold: "What terrorist threat.. I told you, I don't know anything.."
Jack: "You work for a terrorist group known as Burning Fuel..."
Arnold: "Listen. If I were a terrorist, wouldn't I be of some foriegn power?"
Jack: "Burning Fuel is known as an Inside Terror Group. All members are U.S. citezens who hate their country, or don't agree with the way it's run. Recently, a government division called the Counter Terrorist Unit brought down every single member of their group. Within the past few weeks, several have escaped. We think that you are one of them."
Agent 1: "Jack."
Jack: "Yeah?"
Agent 1: "It's been confirmed. Arnold is a number three man of the group."
Jack: "(To Arnold) Hear that? You are a terrorist?"
Arnold: "I don't know who I am..."
(Cut To: Palmer's Re-election Campaign in New York. A supporter rips down part of a poster so it reads "2 Hours til' Result!". Palmer chats with Dana.)
David: "Hey, Dana. How are the polls doing?"
Dana: "Well, FOX news are doing instant polls every hour. The latest one has you at 70% popularity.."
David: "Wasn't it 74 an hour ago?"
Dana: "Yeah.. and it was 60 this morning. Don't let this bother you sir, you've had an amazing term as President, and the American Public can see this."
David: "I just hope you're right."
Dana: "I know I'm right."
(Dana yawns, David Smiles.)
David: "I just realised that you havent slept in over 24 hours."
Dana: "Yeesh, coming up to thirty-four."
David: "I haven't seen anybody so commited in all my life. I can't believe you've only been here, less than a month."
Dana: "If you're not President by the end of today sir, I would have just wasted the amount of work I've put in for you."
David: "That's true. Keep up the good work, and you better sleep tonight.."
Dana: "I'll sleep once you'r in the Whit House, sir.."
David: "Heh. Thanks Dana."
(CUT TO: Jack's Apartment. Kate sits in the lounge with Kim.)
Kim: "Who is this guy?"
Kate: "I think that they are involved with terrorism or something."
Kim: "I hope Dad doesn't have to work tonight. I had so many things planned for him."
Kate: "Me too..."
(Kate realises who she's talking to.)
Kate: "Oh, Oh God.. Umm.. No.. I mean..."
Kim: "Kate. You don't need to feel uncomfortable round me. I know Dad has his own life now. You or him shouldn't feel difficult around me."
Kate: "Sorry, Kim.. It's just that I haven't seen you a lot lately."
Kim: "Well, I've moved in with my fianceé now."
Kate: "Ah yes, How is Dave?"
Kim: "He's good. He's on a diet aswell. He wants to fit into his tux before the wedding.."
Kate: "Heh heh."
(Jack walks in)
Jack: "I'm sorry, sweety, I have to go into CTU now."
Kate: "Why?"
Kim: "Is it about the guy on your couch?"
Jack: "I need to drive him into CTU. People there are gonna interrogate him."
Kate: "Can't the other agents do it?"
Jack: "Well, he tried to kill be an hour ago, I'd kinda like to know why."
Kate: "Very well... Happy Birthday anyway.."
Jack: "Thanks, honey."
(At Palmer's Re-Election campaign in New York, we see two people exit the building.)
Man: "So, d'you think he'll do it again?"
Woman: "Well, I'm gonna vote for him anyway."
Man: "Well, I am part of his security team, it would kinda be stupid for me not to vote for him."
Woman: "Heh.. that's true..."
(The two people bump into a person wearing a long cloak and hat, making it impossible to see his face. The couple apologise to them, and the woman carries on walking.)
Woman: "Well, I have been rooting for him in the past year or so..."
(The woman stops and utters her husbands name. She turns around to see that he is dead. She screams, getting the attention of a Cop. The Cop chases after the person in the long cloak. The person runs into an alley, followed by the cop. He stops outside the alley and requests back up from all units. He gets a torch, and enters the alleyway, only to be shot immediately by the person. The screen splits to show David Palmer looking out at the window. Dana asks what's wrong, and he mentions he thought he heard a scream. Jack loads Arthur into the back of a CTU turck in chains, as Kim and Kate wait indoors. We zoom in onto the dead cop. The person picks up and throws his radio down, smahing it. A glimpse of light into the alleyway reveals this person to be.. Nina Myers...)
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Previously on 24...
*Tony Almeida*: "...A set of very important documents were stolen by a known terrorist group known only as "Burning Fuel." We did find evidence of a terrorist attack.. in the form of germ warfare. We have reason to belive that this group plan to destory CTU's existance like we destroyed there's..."
*Jack Bauer*: (Jack opens the door, and the guy at the door attempts to stab Jack. Jack immediately wrestles him to the ground, and knocks him unconscience. Jack pulls the unconscience man onto the couch. He searches the pockets for identification)
*President David Palmer*
Dana: "It's a sinch Mr. President. I believe that you're going to win the re-election."
David: (Laughs) "You get payed to say that!"
Tony: "I'm needing some info on a terrorist group known as "Burning Fuel"."
David: "Agent Almeida- you and I know that there is now no history of that group ever existing. All the documents were destroyed."
Tony: "Untrue sir. The FBI have information on the factory we tore down three months ago..."
*Milo Pressman*: "I knew it. I knew it was too good to be true. So, what was I to you? A fling? A bit on the side..."
Sam: "I don't think of you as a boyfriend, Milo..."
Milo: "No Sam, No! We are through. I cannot let myself be led by you. I run my own life..."
(A shot is heard in the distance. People scream as Milo falls down through shattered glass. He's been shot. Sam and her husband run down to see if he's alright... He's dead..)
Tony: "It's a list of detained agents that have been arrested for treason. Only one occurance have we had to pardon one agent, Agent Myers... She's related to Arnold Kempsfeld, an escaped member of the group."
(Jack searches through the wallet of the unconsience man on his couch. The man then wakes up.)
Man: "I... I do not know who I am..."
Jack: "Okay- found some name here. Huh. Does the name "Arnold Kempsfield" mean anything to you?"
Man: "It.. It sounds familar."
Jack: "Should do. It's yours..."
===
"The Following Takes Place Between 5.00 pm and 6.00 pm..."
===
(Tony recieves a phone call at CTU. Whilst he is speaking, we also see Michelle and Carl search through the computers, with the file that Tony gave them about the past traitors. The two also occasionally look at each other and smile. Tony notices this, hangs up, and approaches Carl.)
Tony: "Carl, can I have a word with you."
(Carl looks at Michelle and then Tony)
Carl: "Sure..."
(The two enter Tony's office.)
Carl: "Tony, I think I know what this is about..."
Tony: "Oh, you do, do you?"
Carl: "Look, I know Michelle is your girlfriend, and I also know that I have been flirting with her a lot lately. But, you gotta admit, she is attractive..."
(Pause)
Tony: "Carl. I've just received a message that an old CTU technician has been shot by a sniper in the mall."
(Carl looks distressed.)
Carl: "Who... who was it?"
Tony: "I'm sorry... It was Milo Pressman."
(Carl leans onto a wall.)
Tony: "I know you two were close friends."
Carl: "Who did it?"
Tony: "That, we're not sure of.."
Carl: "Who DID IT..?"
Tony: "We are looking into it. Believe me we are."
Carl: "Milo? Not Milo.. He got me into this job.."
Tony: "Carl. We have to deal with this serious terrorist threat. That is our main priority of the day."
Carl: "The people trying to bring down CTU?"
Tony: "Yeah."
Carl: "Hey.. how old was that disk with every workers profile on it that was stolen an hour ago?"
Tony: "We've confirmed that it was at least four or five years out of date."
Carl: "Milo was working during that time. He only quit three years ago."
Tony: "Wait.. this means that these people are only trying to kill CTU agents who were on that disk. God, if it's five years out of date, who knows who is at risk?"
(Cut to: Jack's Apartment. Jack has Arnold Kempsfield tied up to a chair. A CTU team consisting of three people are already there.)
Jack: "Hey, be careful with this one. He claims that he doesn't know who he is."
Agent 1: "What do you know about him so far?"
Jack: "Well, his wallet has his I.D. as Arnold Kempsfield. I don't know if that's an alias or anything."
(Agent 1 pulls out a phone and asks for background information on Arnold.)
Arnold: "What are you doing to me?"
Jack: "Arnold. There is a pretty serious threat on a government agency that will take place some time tomorrow. At the moment, you're our main man."
Arnold: "What terrorist threat.. I told you, I don't know anything.."
Jack: "You work for a terrorist group known as Burning Fuel..."
Arnold: "Listen. If I were a terrorist, wouldn't I be of some foriegn power?"
Jack: "Burning Fuel is known as an Inside Terror Group. All members are U.S. citezens who hate their country, or don't agree with the way it's run. Recently, a government division called the Counter Terrorist Unit brought down every single member of their group. Within the past few weeks, several have escaped. We think that you are one of them."
Agent 1: "Jack."
Jack: "Yeah?"
Agent 1: "It's been confirmed. Arnold is a number three man of the group."
Jack: "(To Arnold) Hear that? You are a terrorist?"
Arnold: "I don't know who I am..."
(Cut To: Palmer's Re-election Campaign in New York. A supporter rips down part of a poster so it reads "2 Hours til' Result!". Palmer chats with Dana.)
David: "Hey, Dana. How are the polls doing?"
Dana: "Well, FOX news are doing instant polls every hour. The latest one has you at 70% popularity.."
David: "Wasn't it 74 an hour ago?"
Dana: "Yeah.. and it was 60 this morning. Don't let this bother you sir, you've had an amazing term as President, and the American Public can see this."
David: "I just hope you're right."
Dana: "I know I'm right."
(Dana yawns, David Smiles.)
David: "I just realised that you havent slept in over 24 hours."
Dana: "Yeesh, coming up to thirty-four."
David: "I haven't seen anybody so commited in all my life. I can't believe you've only been here, less than a month."
Dana: "If you're not President by the end of today sir, I would have just wasted the amount of work I've put in for you."
David: "That's true. Keep up the good work, and you better sleep tonight.."
Dana: "I'll sleep once you'r in the Whit House, sir.."
David: "Heh. Thanks Dana."
(CUT TO: Jack's Apartment. Kate sits in the lounge with Kim.)
Kim: "Who is this guy?"
Kate: "I think that they are involved with terrorism or something."
Kim: "I hope Dad doesn't have to work tonight. I had so many things planned for him."
Kate: "Me too..."
(Kate realises who she's talking to.)
Kate: "Oh, Oh God.. Umm.. No.. I mean..."
Kim: "Kate. You don't need to feel uncomfortable round me. I know Dad has his own life now. You or him shouldn't feel difficult around me."
Kate: "Sorry, Kim.. It's just that I haven't seen you a lot lately."
Kim: "Well, I've moved in with my fianceé now."
Kate: "Ah yes, How is Dave?"
Kim: "He's good. He's on a diet aswell. He wants to fit into his tux before the wedding.."
Kate: "Heh heh."
(Jack walks in)
Jack: "I'm sorry, sweety, I have to go into CTU now."
Kate: "Why?"
Kim: "Is it about the guy on your couch?"
Jack: "I need to drive him into CTU. People there are gonna interrogate him."
Kate: "Can't the other agents do it?"
Jack: "Well, he tried to kill be an hour ago, I'd kinda like to know why."
Kate: "Very well... Happy Birthday anyway.."
Jack: "Thanks, honey."
(At Palmer's Re-Election campaign in New York, we see two people exit the building.)
Man: "So, d'you think he'll do it again?"
Woman: "Well, I'm gonna vote for him anyway."
Man: "Well, I am part of his security team, it would kinda be stupid for me not to vote for him."
Woman: "Heh.. that's true..."
(The two people bump into a person wearing a long cloak and hat, making it impossible to see his face. The couple apologise to them, and the woman carries on walking.)
Woman: "Well, I have been rooting for him in the past year or so..."
(The woman stops and utters her husbands name. She turns around to see that he is dead. She screams, getting the attention of a Cop. The Cop chases after the person in the long cloak. The person runs into an alley, followed by the cop. He stops outside the alley and requests back up from all units. He gets a torch, and enters the alleyway, only to be shot immediately by the person. The screen splits to show David Palmer looking out at the window. Dana asks what's wrong, and he mentions he thought he heard a scream. Jack loads Arthur into the back of a CTU turck in chains, as Kim and Kate wait indoors. We zoom in onto the dead cop. The person picks up and throws his radio down, smahing it. A glimpse of light into the alleyway reveals this person to be.. Nina Myers...)
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