Author's Note: I got 2 reviews. I tried to give you fans some time to review so I delayed the update for a few days... well almost a week. Sorry, I have more time on the weekends and this past Friday and Saturday I've been busy. Well on with the story! Oh, and a lil note. This is the last chapter.
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LAST TIME:
There was nothing she could do. When the Ice Beam headed for her, she knew it was it. She said "I'm sorry, Forgive me." and prepared for her last breath.
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"The Legend Of Kyogre"
Chapter 4
"The Legend Of Kyogre"
Harmony closed her eyes but then she opened them. For some reason, she looked at Marshtomp.
It was blinking white.
Marshtomp was changing shape.
"Marshtomp...is evolving?" Harmony said in awe.
Yes, Marshtomp was indeed evolving into a Swampert. Swampert moved swiftly and acted as a shield. The Ice Beam attack from Kyogre didn't hurt Swampert.
Harmony couldn't believe it, "Marshtomp evolved so it could save me..."
Swampert stood its ground and slowed Kyogre down with a Mud Shot. Harmony said, "Get'm Swampert! Earthquake!"
The ground shook and Kyogre was dizzy and confused. Harmony got out an Ultra Ball and threw it. After it shook, Kyogre got free.
Maybe Swapert's Earthquake wasn't a good idea. A rock fell toward Harmony and Swampert pushed it away. When Harmony saw a rock falling on Kyogre, she cried out, "No!" and threw the first Pokeball she felt in her pocket, which happened to be a PokeBall.
She threw the ball at it, trying to save it. When it clicked, she rolled under the rock and grabbed it. She leaped out of the rock's path, saving herself and the now captured Kyogre.
She ran toward the exit: the ladder.
While she was running, she tripped over something, or rather someone. It was a male teenager,a Pokemon trainer.
He got up, "Hey, I can't get out. Do you know where the exit is?"
Harmony nodded, "Yes, but we've got to hurry. Now that's Kyogre's caught, the cave is falling in!" she yelled through the noise.
"You caught Kyogre??"
"Yes, now let's go!",She jerked him to his feet and ran.
The boy was trying to keep up and inbetween breaths he said, "By the...way, my name...is Zac."
"Harmony," Harmony said quickly,"Now are you coming? I see the entrance!"
While Zac was running, he examined Harmony, *She must be a great trainer to have caught Kyogre. Maybe she's a great kisser, too.*
His thoughts were interrupted by the sunlight. It had stopped raining and the sky was back to normal.
The man who warned Harmony earlier still stood there,"Are you alright? What happened?"
Harmony tossed the Pokeball in her hand,"It's all taken care of."
What?!? You... actually c-caught K-Kyogre??"
Harmony smirked,"Yeah. You got a problem with it?"
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She talked to her father that afternoon. Her father's voice was music in her ears, "You caught Kyogre yet Harmony?"
"Right here in the ball."
"Congratulations, Harmony! You'd make anyone proud." Norman said with a smile.
(A/N: I don't know how they are able to contact anyone in the Hoenn region. I may change this part later on when I see the Hoenn season. So, let's just say she used the phone in the Pokemon Center.)
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The next day, she had defeated Walter, the Sootopolis gym leader. She left him in the dust with her Kyogre.
Walter held out his hand, "Here, Harmony, the Rain Badge. you deserve it!"
"Thank you, " Harmony walked out of the gym and was greeted by Zac.
"Hey, Harmony. Congratulations." Zac said, grinning.
"Thanks."
"So now you're off the Pokemon League?"
"Of course."
"Harmony," Zac started off nervously,"I 've been thinking. Would you..."
"Spit it out Zac. It can't be that bad."
And so, Zac said it: "Would you like to go out with me one day?"
Harmony said, "Not a chance!" but then she laughed.
Zac smiled, eased with himself.
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The next day,Harmony headed toward Ever Grande City, where the Pokemon League was being held. She was surfing on Swampert's back, watching the clear blue water move swiftly under them.
As the ocean wind blew in her face, she held the Pokeball which contained Kyogre and smiled.
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Author's Note: So, how'd you like it? In your review, include your answer to this question: Should I make her journeys into a 3 part series(the first being this one,the second being her journey through Victory Path and beating the Elite Four, and the third part being her capturing the 3 Regis)? Or just skip the Elite Four and make it a 2 part, with this one and the second being about the 3 Regis?
If you don't know what the 3 Regi's are, they are Regice(Ice), Regirock(rock), and Registeel(steel). They are located in three different caves in the Hoenn Region.
I know this fic was fast paced but I actually wrote it months ago, and I have improved my writing skills since then. I don't know what fic I will type next (because I have several Sailor Moon ones, DBZ ones, and a neopets one), but I look forward to all your reviews!
Speaking of reviews, I would like to give thanks to all of you who reveiwed in one or all of the chapters, in order from the most chapters to the least.
Reviewed 3 times: A)Paladin Dragoon
B) romancemaster
If you have an objection to the attacks the Pokemon used in this story, I have proof that that's attacks they do use. How do I know? Because that's Pokemon I have/have owned on the game.
And so... until my next fic!
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LAST TIME:
There was nothing she could do. When the Ice Beam headed for her, she knew it was it. She said "I'm sorry, Forgive me." and prepared for her last breath.
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"The Legend Of Kyogre"
Chapter 4
"The Legend Of Kyogre"
Harmony closed her eyes but then she opened them. For some reason, she looked at Marshtomp.
It was blinking white.
Marshtomp was changing shape.
"Marshtomp...is evolving?" Harmony said in awe.
Yes, Marshtomp was indeed evolving into a Swampert. Swampert moved swiftly and acted as a shield. The Ice Beam attack from Kyogre didn't hurt Swampert.
Harmony couldn't believe it, "Marshtomp evolved so it could save me..."
Swampert stood its ground and slowed Kyogre down with a Mud Shot. Harmony said, "Get'm Swampert! Earthquake!"
The ground shook and Kyogre was dizzy and confused. Harmony got out an Ultra Ball and threw it. After it shook, Kyogre got free.
Maybe Swapert's Earthquake wasn't a good idea. A rock fell toward Harmony and Swampert pushed it away. When Harmony saw a rock falling on Kyogre, she cried out, "No!" and threw the first Pokeball she felt in her pocket, which happened to be a PokeBall.
She threw the ball at it, trying to save it. When it clicked, she rolled under the rock and grabbed it. She leaped out of the rock's path, saving herself and the now captured Kyogre.
She ran toward the exit: the ladder.
While she was running, she tripped over something, or rather someone. It was a male teenager,a Pokemon trainer.
He got up, "Hey, I can't get out. Do you know where the exit is?"
Harmony nodded, "Yes, but we've got to hurry. Now that's Kyogre's caught, the cave is falling in!" she yelled through the noise.
"You caught Kyogre??"
"Yes, now let's go!",She jerked him to his feet and ran.
The boy was trying to keep up and inbetween breaths he said, "By the...way, my name...is Zac."
"Harmony," Harmony said quickly,"Now are you coming? I see the entrance!"
While Zac was running, he examined Harmony, *She must be a great trainer to have caught Kyogre. Maybe she's a great kisser, too.*
His thoughts were interrupted by the sunlight. It had stopped raining and the sky was back to normal.
The man who warned Harmony earlier still stood there,"Are you alright? What happened?"
Harmony tossed the Pokeball in her hand,"It's all taken care of."
What?!? You... actually c-caught K-Kyogre??"
Harmony smirked,"Yeah. You got a problem with it?"
++++++++++++++++
She talked to her father that afternoon. Her father's voice was music in her ears, "You caught Kyogre yet Harmony?"
"Right here in the ball."
"Congratulations, Harmony! You'd make anyone proud." Norman said with a smile.
(A/N: I don't know how they are able to contact anyone in the Hoenn region. I may change this part later on when I see the Hoenn season. So, let's just say she used the phone in the Pokemon Center.)
+++++++++++++++
The next day, she had defeated Walter, the Sootopolis gym leader. She left him in the dust with her Kyogre.
Walter held out his hand, "Here, Harmony, the Rain Badge. you deserve it!"
"Thank you, " Harmony walked out of the gym and was greeted by Zac.
"Hey, Harmony. Congratulations." Zac said, grinning.
"Thanks."
"So now you're off the Pokemon League?"
"Of course."
"Harmony," Zac started off nervously,"I 've been thinking. Would you..."
"Spit it out Zac. It can't be that bad."
And so, Zac said it: "Would you like to go out with me one day?"
Harmony said, "Not a chance!" but then she laughed.
Zac smiled, eased with himself.
+++++++++++++
The next day,Harmony headed toward Ever Grande City, where the Pokemon League was being held. She was surfing on Swampert's back, watching the clear blue water move swiftly under them.
As the ocean wind blew in her face, she held the Pokeball which contained Kyogre and smiled.
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Author's Note: So, how'd you like it? In your review, include your answer to this question: Should I make her journeys into a 3 part series(the first being this one,the second being her journey through Victory Path and beating the Elite Four, and the third part being her capturing the 3 Regis)? Or just skip the Elite Four and make it a 2 part, with this one and the second being about the 3 Regis?
If you don't know what the 3 Regi's are, they are Regice(Ice), Regirock(rock), and Registeel(steel). They are located in three different caves in the Hoenn Region.
I know this fic was fast paced but I actually wrote it months ago, and I have improved my writing skills since then. I don't know what fic I will type next (because I have several Sailor Moon ones, DBZ ones, and a neopets one), but I look forward to all your reviews!
Speaking of reviews, I would like to give thanks to all of you who reveiwed in one or all of the chapters, in order from the most chapters to the least.
Reviewed 3 times: A)Paladin Dragoon
B) romancemaster
If you have an objection to the attacks the Pokemon used in this story, I have proof that that's attacks they do use. How do I know? Because that's Pokemon I have/have owned on the game.
And so... until my next fic!