Yes I know I was working on a Rurouni Kenshin fic already but I didn't like
it so I started this one. I really hope I do better on it than my last one.
Please R&R and tell me what you think about my first chapter. Ja ne.
Demon: Welcome to my new show 'Temptation'
Kenshin: Oro? Is that a very good title to this story?
Demon: Of course what else would I call a love story between you and kaoru?
Kenshin: Oro o^_^o
Demon: Don't you oro me Kenshin I'm going to write this story and it is going to be good.
Kaoru: Hai, demon what about the rest of Kenshin-gumi?
Demon: they will all be in here I hope anyway.
Yahiko: Hey busu why don't you shut up and get on with the story?
Demon: Don't call me BUSU Yahiko-chan.
Yahiko: Don't call me chan busu.
Kenshin: *sweat drop* Oro
Demon: Ulys get out here and say the disclaimer.In case you don't read any of my other fics Ulys is my muse.
Ulys: *walks onto the stage holding the script.* alright already I'm coming.
Demon: Hey who said you could read the script you little turtle? *grabs script from ulys*
Ulys: This looks like it's going to be a good story after all Demon.
Demon: Of course I wrote it didn't I? Now say the disclaimer before I sick Kenshin on you.
Kenshin: Oro. Demon-dono I don't think that is the best way....
Ulys: Disclaimer: Disturbed Demon Gurl does not own Kenshin-gumi or any of the other charters that appear in this story.
Kaoru: Ja ne and enjoy the First chapter of 'Temptation'
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Temptation Chapter One: No More Tanuki-chan.
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Kaoru sat on the back porch of the dojo, of her home. It had been about a year since the incident with Enishi but Kenshin still hadn't shown kaoru that he cared for her in any way.
'Maybe it is because I'm too much of a tomboy, maybe Kenshin wants someone more mature more feminine traits than a tanuki-chan like me.'
Kaoru turned her head to look towards the house, just beyond the dojo, inside we're all of her friends her family, today was the day they we're all departing for a much needed vacation on a small island called 'koneko island' strange it should be named that when there was indeed no cats on the small island.
Still looking towards the living quarters of her family dojo kaoru let her thoughts wander again, 'Should I start acting more like megumi? More foxy and seducing? But I don't know how to act seductive and if I did, could I do that to Kenshin?'
She shook her head, 'No I don't think I could do anything like that to Kenshin, But I could still start acting more feminine.'
Placing her hands down on either side of the hard wood deck she was sitting on Kaoru pushed herself up and onto her feet, "Yes I think I will stop being a tanuki and become a kitsune" Smiling to herself Kaoru walked across the deck and to the shoji door that lead into the small room her friends where currently at, Sliding the door aside she stepped in.
Everyone in the room stopped talking when the smiling kaoru walked in.
Discarding her wooden sandals by the shoji door Kaoru walked over to take her usual seat by Kenshin at the low dinning table.
"Hey jou-chan what took you so long I'm starving."
"Ya busu what took you so long."
Kaoru still smiling looked at her two friends, "I was thinking sano, and Yahiko-chan one hundred extra swings for calling me busu."
Yahiko's eyes grew wide, "I'm not doing an extra hundred swings just for calling you a busu, and don't call me little."
Everyone around the table expected Kaoru too jump up and start repeatedly hitting Yahiko with her bokken over the head, but she didn't move, she didn't even give Yahiko her own little smart-ass remark.
"Yes you will Yahiko-chan, I am your sensei and you my denshi so there for you have to do what I tell you." Kaoru said it so sweetly her words where practically dripping honey.
Kenshin who was sitting next to kaoru had expected her to hit Yahiko for calling her busu, but was surprised when she just answered Sano and Yahiko why she was late coming to dinner, but what really surprised him was the way she spoke to Yahiko after he yelled at her for the extra swings she had given him.
Kenshin leaned over a little towards kaoru so that he could whisper into her ear, she was never this calm, or this mature unless something was bothering her.
"Daijobou ka kaoru-dono?"
Kaoru looked at the ex-hitokiri that was sitting next to her and smiled, "Hai Daijobou Kenshin"
Kenshin gave her his own smile before turning back to face the rest of the people sitting around the table, there was Megumi, Sanosuke, Yahiko, Misao, Aoshi, and Tsudame was to come shortly after they had eaten.
They where all going to be leaving on a two week vacation in a few hours, Kaoru had got the tickets for the boat ride to the small island, and knew the person that owned it.
No people lived on the island so the fairly small group would have to bring there own food and other supplies, Kaoru had said that there was two small houses there that they could use to bunk in.
Smiling Kenshin raised his chop sticks in the air and spoke, "Itadakimasu"
Everyone else rose there chop sticks and spoke too, "Itadakimasu".
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Demon: I'm sorry that the first chapter is so Short but this is just the Prelude after all, If I gets lots of reviews I will put up the next chapter, I'm liking this one more than, The Battle Within so I won't be stopping this one till I'm done with it, Sorry to the people out there who are reading that story but I just didn't like it, -^_^- But this one I have all planned out, and I really don't know if it is going to have a happy ending hehe sorry if that is the kind of story's that you like, BUT THIS WILL be a Kenshin/Kaoru story, maybe even a Little Battousai/Kaoru in parts, I won't deal to much with the other characters Relationships this is a story mainly based on Kenshin and Kaoru. Ja ne
P.S. Don't Forget the R/R, and in the future read my Author Notes I will be giving you information the story, Like when I will update again, Things you will to know about it, and stuff like that, Please do, because I get tired of people reviewing me and telling me that they don't understand something and I explain it right there in my Author notes. Arigatou Readers and I hope you will enjoy this story.
~Disturbed Demon Gurl~
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Last Updated: September 17, 2003 @ 7:38 p.m.
Demon: Welcome to my new show 'Temptation'
Kenshin: Oro? Is that a very good title to this story?
Demon: Of course what else would I call a love story between you and kaoru?
Kenshin: Oro o^_^o
Demon: Don't you oro me Kenshin I'm going to write this story and it is going to be good.
Kaoru: Hai, demon what about the rest of Kenshin-gumi?
Demon: they will all be in here I hope anyway.
Yahiko: Hey busu why don't you shut up and get on with the story?
Demon: Don't call me BUSU Yahiko-chan.
Yahiko: Don't call me chan busu.
Kenshin: *sweat drop* Oro
Demon: Ulys get out here and say the disclaimer.In case you don't read any of my other fics Ulys is my muse.
Ulys: *walks onto the stage holding the script.* alright already I'm coming.
Demon: Hey who said you could read the script you little turtle? *grabs script from ulys*
Ulys: This looks like it's going to be a good story after all Demon.
Demon: Of course I wrote it didn't I? Now say the disclaimer before I sick Kenshin on you.
Kenshin: Oro. Demon-dono I don't think that is the best way....
Ulys: Disclaimer: Disturbed Demon Gurl does not own Kenshin-gumi or any of the other charters that appear in this story.
Kaoru: Ja ne and enjoy the First chapter of 'Temptation'
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Temptation Chapter One: No More Tanuki-chan.
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Kaoru sat on the back porch of the dojo, of her home. It had been about a year since the incident with Enishi but Kenshin still hadn't shown kaoru that he cared for her in any way.
'Maybe it is because I'm too much of a tomboy, maybe Kenshin wants someone more mature more feminine traits than a tanuki-chan like me.'
Kaoru turned her head to look towards the house, just beyond the dojo, inside we're all of her friends her family, today was the day they we're all departing for a much needed vacation on a small island called 'koneko island' strange it should be named that when there was indeed no cats on the small island.
Still looking towards the living quarters of her family dojo kaoru let her thoughts wander again, 'Should I start acting more like megumi? More foxy and seducing? But I don't know how to act seductive and if I did, could I do that to Kenshin?'
She shook her head, 'No I don't think I could do anything like that to Kenshin, But I could still start acting more feminine.'
Placing her hands down on either side of the hard wood deck she was sitting on Kaoru pushed herself up and onto her feet, "Yes I think I will stop being a tanuki and become a kitsune" Smiling to herself Kaoru walked across the deck and to the shoji door that lead into the small room her friends where currently at, Sliding the door aside she stepped in.
Everyone in the room stopped talking when the smiling kaoru walked in.
Discarding her wooden sandals by the shoji door Kaoru walked over to take her usual seat by Kenshin at the low dinning table.
"Hey jou-chan what took you so long I'm starving."
"Ya busu what took you so long."
Kaoru still smiling looked at her two friends, "I was thinking sano, and Yahiko-chan one hundred extra swings for calling me busu."
Yahiko's eyes grew wide, "I'm not doing an extra hundred swings just for calling you a busu, and don't call me little."
Everyone around the table expected Kaoru too jump up and start repeatedly hitting Yahiko with her bokken over the head, but she didn't move, she didn't even give Yahiko her own little smart-ass remark.
"Yes you will Yahiko-chan, I am your sensei and you my denshi so there for you have to do what I tell you." Kaoru said it so sweetly her words where practically dripping honey.
Kenshin who was sitting next to kaoru had expected her to hit Yahiko for calling her busu, but was surprised when she just answered Sano and Yahiko why she was late coming to dinner, but what really surprised him was the way she spoke to Yahiko after he yelled at her for the extra swings she had given him.
Kenshin leaned over a little towards kaoru so that he could whisper into her ear, she was never this calm, or this mature unless something was bothering her.
"Daijobou ka kaoru-dono?"
Kaoru looked at the ex-hitokiri that was sitting next to her and smiled, "Hai Daijobou Kenshin"
Kenshin gave her his own smile before turning back to face the rest of the people sitting around the table, there was Megumi, Sanosuke, Yahiko, Misao, Aoshi, and Tsudame was to come shortly after they had eaten.
They where all going to be leaving on a two week vacation in a few hours, Kaoru had got the tickets for the boat ride to the small island, and knew the person that owned it.
No people lived on the island so the fairly small group would have to bring there own food and other supplies, Kaoru had said that there was two small houses there that they could use to bunk in.
Smiling Kenshin raised his chop sticks in the air and spoke, "Itadakimasu"
Everyone else rose there chop sticks and spoke too, "Itadakimasu".
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Demon: I'm sorry that the first chapter is so Short but this is just the Prelude after all, If I gets lots of reviews I will put up the next chapter, I'm liking this one more than, The Battle Within so I won't be stopping this one till I'm done with it, Sorry to the people out there who are reading that story but I just didn't like it, -^_^- But this one I have all planned out, and I really don't know if it is going to have a happy ending hehe sorry if that is the kind of story's that you like, BUT THIS WILL be a Kenshin/Kaoru story, maybe even a Little Battousai/Kaoru in parts, I won't deal to much with the other characters Relationships this is a story mainly based on Kenshin and Kaoru. Ja ne
P.S. Don't Forget the R/R, and in the future read my Author Notes I will be giving you information the story, Like when I will update again, Things you will to know about it, and stuff like that, Please do, because I get tired of people reviewing me and telling me that they don't understand something and I explain it right there in my Author notes. Arigatou Readers and I hope you will enjoy this story.
~Disturbed Demon Gurl~
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Last Updated: September 17, 2003 @ 7:38 p.m.