Well, ya know I had some problems so I asked ren-chan to help me out ,
Thanks Ren-chan!!^_^ Well, please read and review T_T need some critics
cause im planning my next fic
Sorry for the format of the first two chapters, hope I can fix that too
-Is it necessary to say I don't own shaman king? ¬¬;
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Chapter 3: Someone that cares
"Yum this is great!" exclaimed Azil eating a bunch of potato chips at once. "Mary feels so fine now" the girl said while chewing a doughnut. Everybody was eating, except for their leader, who sat silently looking at the fire, as always, smiling, thinking about that moment he spent with Tao Ren. "He is cute." he whispered to himself. Hao felt strangely attracted to the golden-eyed shaman, he wanted to meet him again, but how? Well, he could kidnap Yoh and lure Ren to his place, but that would just put the Chinese shaman on Hao`s bad side, or maybe he could keep the story of becoming Tao Ren his ally, that was the most convincing. "Tomorrow i`ll see him again" he said to the fire "I need to see him.really dunno why." he closed his eyes, and breathed the fresh air of the night. ****************************************************************
Ren leaned back on the sakura tree he was before. He sighed while images of Hao crossed across his mind. "I think i`m obsessed, but. this can`t continue.what if he harms my friends? I`ll act as if nothing had happened, I won`t tell anyone bout this.I`ll just have to keep it for myself." ****************************************************************
Anna and Jun were now in other store still buying clothes. "Hey Anna, how do I look in this shirt?" "You look great!" "I trust you, ok then, i`ll buy it!" The girls were already carrying 6 bags each one and they had just spent half of Jun`s allowance. "Jun look at that collar!" said Anna looking at a diamond collar in a jewelry shop. "I wish Ioh would give me something like that someday before marriage" Jun looked at Anna, then at the collar "It`s ok ^_^" she said smiling. "Um Anna, could you get me an ice cream from that store?" "Huh? Ok" Anna headed to the ice cream shop, while Jun entered the jewelry shop. ****************************************************************
The sun appeared behind the distant mountains, and the first daylight landed on Ren`s face. He opened his eyes slowly and blinked twice, then he rubbed his eyes softly. "Aum, it`s already day.was everything a dream?" he yawned. An empty can was in front of him and half a sandwich too. "So everything is real then." Ren finally convinced himself. "I was planning to stay here for a week, but I didn't tell Jun, and knowing her she must have everyone searching for me.oh geez!" The Chinese boy stood up and shoved the sakura petals off him, picked up all the food and leftovers and started walking north, to return home. "It`s a bit far but. i`ll arrive in two hours if I hurry up." "Hey Ren, how about a lift?" exclaimed Hao from the spirit of fire. Ren looked up to see the most powerful shaman smiling warmly to him, he felt so good to see Hao again, but then he remembered Hao was equal to danger still. "Um I.can walk" Hao raised an eyebrow "In my spirit we`ll arrive in five minutes, Ren" "I can handle this situation on my own, thank you" said Ren politely. "Oh now you are on that plan again? The plan of -Mr. Perfect doesn't need anybody to worry about him-?" "Hao don't start that again! It`s not that I mean that. It`s because.well.you are still our enemy, aren't you?" "I don't quite remember being your enemy, but my brother`s, and I understand you don't want your friends to think you are a traitor.but that`s not a problem cause I can leave you a bit far from their houses." Ren placed his hand on his chin thinking, he wasn't in the mood for walking all the long way back, and he`d love to be with Hao.but he just wanted to forget him.he wanted everything to be like before. "Ok Hao.but just this time." Hao descended with his spirit for Ren to climb on it. The long haired boy smiled and reached his hand out for his golden-eyed angel, Ren blushed and took it gently "He is so perfect, he looks like a god" he thought "But I..I.Damn! why does he had to have that strange ambition? I`d love to have him for me.". The spirit of Fire flew so fast, Ren barely could see the surroundings, but he preferred to see Hao`s hair floating behind him, shining more than ever with the daylight. Hao loved to know Ren was at his side, he turned to inspect Ren`s golden eyes, still searching for that warm feeling he needed to feel, but his search was interrupted by Ren "Um Hao, where did you live? Mikihisa didn't raise you, so where did you go?" Hao was so surprised Ren was asking about his past, nobody had done it before, nobody care for him at all. "Ren.I`m astonished you are asking me that" "Why?" "Cause you are the first that asks me such a thing, ok then, I think I need to tell ya now.My fire spirit raised me, he always took care about me. I was so vulnerable at that moment.but he protected me." Hao looked at his spirit, then he smiled "It was so difficult for him to get me clothes and food, I depended totally on my spirit, he bathed me, dress me with the clothes he could get.and warmed me in cold nights.we slept in the mountains. At the age of four I decided it was time to search for allies, since I trained really hard, and I had gained more power at that moment. this are my only clothes right now, but don't think anything funny, I bath at the river everyday and wash them too" "And how do you dry them?" "With my spirit`s help, I still depend on him that much" Ren looked down, Hao`s past was so sad, more than his. "And you?" asked Hao smiling to Ren "What about you?" "Well, I saw many murders when I was little, my father didn't really cared about my fear, he wanted me to become stronger.but still.I had the love I needed from my sister.my mother sometimes would sing me a lullaby, and I had a warm bed to sleep.Now my father has become a good person.and I don't really have any problems but." Ren stopped, he felt sorry for Hao, even his spirit had given him everything, he didn't know what having a mom that sings you a lullaby is, a warm and comfy bed to sleep under a ceiling, or someone that care for him. "maybe that`s why he is like this, because he needs someone that cares for him.that loves him.that sings a lullaby before sleeping and kiss his forehead" he thought. "Hao.and.why do you.." "Hey isn't that Yoh?" interrupted Hao pointing at a little figure, for the spirit was very high. Ren barely distinguish it, and yes it was Hao`s twin, Yoh, with Ryou and Horo Horo calling his name. "Oh I knew Jun must have asked for help to find me!" Hao looked at Ren`s face of misery "It`s ok that somebody worries for you, Mr. Perfect i`m on my own" "Oh shut up!" shot Ren angrily ".still.you can`t really trust on anyone." finished Hao with a serious look on his face, looking at Yoh. Hao left Ren behind his house, still looking serious. "Hao I was going to ask you." "HAO! What are you up to now?" screamed Horo Horo appearing with Yoh and Ryou. "Don't you dare to put one finger on him!" menaced Yoh, looking furious at his brother. "Heh." said Hao smiling, then he turned to see Ren "See ya then, i`ll wait for you joining!" then flames surrounded him and he disappeared with his spirit. Ren watched the sky while the last sparks disappear. "Ren are you all right?" asked Yoh approaching to Ren. "Did he hurt you?" "No.I`m ok" Ren answered unexcitedly. "Ren what did he told you?" asked Horo Horo looking at Ren`s distracted eyes. "He just.he." Ren was unable to answer, he knew Hao wasn't that bad after all, he just needed someone that cared for him, but how to tell the guys? They would never understand. "He was passing by and. that's it!" "Is that so?" asked Ryou with disbelief. "Aren`t you trying to hide something?" "Why should I?" "I heard something about joining.are you going to." Horo Horo stopped afraid at the thought "Is that it, Ren? You want to join Hao?!" "No! He wants me to join but I don't !" "It`s ok Ren, you are our friend, and I trust you" said Yoh smiling, the same smile of Hao. Ren blushed remembering his long haired god. Then the four went to Ren`s house. "Hey, where`s Jun?" "Oh she went with Anna to the city last night to search for you and haven't returned" answered Yoh calmly. "And you don't care?!" "Uh? Anna is quite strong, they`re ok" he responded smiling. **************************************************************************** *
Well how was it? Hope ya like it! Please review or flame, anything XD !!! Hao: Please flame her!!! Goki;*smacks cute Hao-chan* Sorry I love him too but sometimes he can be soo nasty you know. _----!
Sorry for the format of the first two chapters, hope I can fix that too
-Is it necessary to say I don't own shaman king? ¬¬;
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Chapter 3: Someone that cares
"Yum this is great!" exclaimed Azil eating a bunch of potato chips at once. "Mary feels so fine now" the girl said while chewing a doughnut. Everybody was eating, except for their leader, who sat silently looking at the fire, as always, smiling, thinking about that moment he spent with Tao Ren. "He is cute." he whispered to himself. Hao felt strangely attracted to the golden-eyed shaman, he wanted to meet him again, but how? Well, he could kidnap Yoh and lure Ren to his place, but that would just put the Chinese shaman on Hao`s bad side, or maybe he could keep the story of becoming Tao Ren his ally, that was the most convincing. "Tomorrow i`ll see him again" he said to the fire "I need to see him.really dunno why." he closed his eyes, and breathed the fresh air of the night. ****************************************************************
Ren leaned back on the sakura tree he was before. He sighed while images of Hao crossed across his mind. "I think i`m obsessed, but. this can`t continue.what if he harms my friends? I`ll act as if nothing had happened, I won`t tell anyone bout this.I`ll just have to keep it for myself." ****************************************************************
Anna and Jun were now in other store still buying clothes. "Hey Anna, how do I look in this shirt?" "You look great!" "I trust you, ok then, i`ll buy it!" The girls were already carrying 6 bags each one and they had just spent half of Jun`s allowance. "Jun look at that collar!" said Anna looking at a diamond collar in a jewelry shop. "I wish Ioh would give me something like that someday before marriage" Jun looked at Anna, then at the collar "It`s ok ^_^" she said smiling. "Um Anna, could you get me an ice cream from that store?" "Huh? Ok" Anna headed to the ice cream shop, while Jun entered the jewelry shop. ****************************************************************
The sun appeared behind the distant mountains, and the first daylight landed on Ren`s face. He opened his eyes slowly and blinked twice, then he rubbed his eyes softly. "Aum, it`s already day.was everything a dream?" he yawned. An empty can was in front of him and half a sandwich too. "So everything is real then." Ren finally convinced himself. "I was planning to stay here for a week, but I didn't tell Jun, and knowing her she must have everyone searching for me.oh geez!" The Chinese boy stood up and shoved the sakura petals off him, picked up all the food and leftovers and started walking north, to return home. "It`s a bit far but. i`ll arrive in two hours if I hurry up." "Hey Ren, how about a lift?" exclaimed Hao from the spirit of fire. Ren looked up to see the most powerful shaman smiling warmly to him, he felt so good to see Hao again, but then he remembered Hao was equal to danger still. "Um I.can walk" Hao raised an eyebrow "In my spirit we`ll arrive in five minutes, Ren" "I can handle this situation on my own, thank you" said Ren politely. "Oh now you are on that plan again? The plan of -Mr. Perfect doesn't need anybody to worry about him-?" "Hao don't start that again! It`s not that I mean that. It`s because.well.you are still our enemy, aren't you?" "I don't quite remember being your enemy, but my brother`s, and I understand you don't want your friends to think you are a traitor.but that`s not a problem cause I can leave you a bit far from their houses." Ren placed his hand on his chin thinking, he wasn't in the mood for walking all the long way back, and he`d love to be with Hao.but he just wanted to forget him.he wanted everything to be like before. "Ok Hao.but just this time." Hao descended with his spirit for Ren to climb on it. The long haired boy smiled and reached his hand out for his golden-eyed angel, Ren blushed and took it gently "He is so perfect, he looks like a god" he thought "But I..I.Damn! why does he had to have that strange ambition? I`d love to have him for me.". The spirit of Fire flew so fast, Ren barely could see the surroundings, but he preferred to see Hao`s hair floating behind him, shining more than ever with the daylight. Hao loved to know Ren was at his side, he turned to inspect Ren`s golden eyes, still searching for that warm feeling he needed to feel, but his search was interrupted by Ren "Um Hao, where did you live? Mikihisa didn't raise you, so where did you go?" Hao was so surprised Ren was asking about his past, nobody had done it before, nobody care for him at all. "Ren.I`m astonished you are asking me that" "Why?" "Cause you are the first that asks me such a thing, ok then, I think I need to tell ya now.My fire spirit raised me, he always took care about me. I was so vulnerable at that moment.but he protected me." Hao looked at his spirit, then he smiled "It was so difficult for him to get me clothes and food, I depended totally on my spirit, he bathed me, dress me with the clothes he could get.and warmed me in cold nights.we slept in the mountains. At the age of four I decided it was time to search for allies, since I trained really hard, and I had gained more power at that moment. this are my only clothes right now, but don't think anything funny, I bath at the river everyday and wash them too" "And how do you dry them?" "With my spirit`s help, I still depend on him that much" Ren looked down, Hao`s past was so sad, more than his. "And you?" asked Hao smiling to Ren "What about you?" "Well, I saw many murders when I was little, my father didn't really cared about my fear, he wanted me to become stronger.but still.I had the love I needed from my sister.my mother sometimes would sing me a lullaby, and I had a warm bed to sleep.Now my father has become a good person.and I don't really have any problems but." Ren stopped, he felt sorry for Hao, even his spirit had given him everything, he didn't know what having a mom that sings you a lullaby is, a warm and comfy bed to sleep under a ceiling, or someone that care for him. "maybe that`s why he is like this, because he needs someone that cares for him.that loves him.that sings a lullaby before sleeping and kiss his forehead" he thought. "Hao.and.why do you.." "Hey isn't that Yoh?" interrupted Hao pointing at a little figure, for the spirit was very high. Ren barely distinguish it, and yes it was Hao`s twin, Yoh, with Ryou and Horo Horo calling his name. "Oh I knew Jun must have asked for help to find me!" Hao looked at Ren`s face of misery "It`s ok that somebody worries for you, Mr. Perfect i`m on my own" "Oh shut up!" shot Ren angrily ".still.you can`t really trust on anyone." finished Hao with a serious look on his face, looking at Yoh. Hao left Ren behind his house, still looking serious. "Hao I was going to ask you." "HAO! What are you up to now?" screamed Horo Horo appearing with Yoh and Ryou. "Don't you dare to put one finger on him!" menaced Yoh, looking furious at his brother. "Heh." said Hao smiling, then he turned to see Ren "See ya then, i`ll wait for you joining!" then flames surrounded him and he disappeared with his spirit. Ren watched the sky while the last sparks disappear. "Ren are you all right?" asked Yoh approaching to Ren. "Did he hurt you?" "No.I`m ok" Ren answered unexcitedly. "Ren what did he told you?" asked Horo Horo looking at Ren`s distracted eyes. "He just.he." Ren was unable to answer, he knew Hao wasn't that bad after all, he just needed someone that cared for him, but how to tell the guys? They would never understand. "He was passing by and. that's it!" "Is that so?" asked Ryou with disbelief. "Aren`t you trying to hide something?" "Why should I?" "I heard something about joining.are you going to." Horo Horo stopped afraid at the thought "Is that it, Ren? You want to join Hao?!" "No! He wants me to join but I don't !" "It`s ok Ren, you are our friend, and I trust you" said Yoh smiling, the same smile of Hao. Ren blushed remembering his long haired god. Then the four went to Ren`s house. "Hey, where`s Jun?" "Oh she went with Anna to the city last night to search for you and haven't returned" answered Yoh calmly. "And you don't care?!" "Uh? Anna is quite strong, they`re ok" he responded smiling. **************************************************************************** *
Well how was it? Hope ya like it! Please review or flame, anything XD !!! Hao: Please flame her!!! Goki;*smacks cute Hao-chan* Sorry I love him too but sometimes he can be soo nasty you know. _----!