( Hello readers! This is the seconded chapter of this fic! *stating oveuse*
anyway I will need 6 reviews for each chappy. When I get the 6 reviews I
Wright the next one! Well on with the story!)
Title: The Punishment
Ren woke up but decided to stay laying there with his eyes
closed and Yoh beside him. He felt Yoh get up.
"Is this right?" he heard Yoh ask.
"This is right." Yoh turned to see Ren sitting up and staring at him.
"This is right because it feels right." Yoh stared back at Ren with
wide eyes. His eyes softened. "I know it feels right Ren. Its just."
Ren stared at the boy he loved begging him to continue.
"Its just that I have to get engaged to Anna and.
and this would just destroy things at the end."
Ren saw sadness in Yoh's eyes.
"Don't worry I'm sure things will turn out great."
(Is Ren OOC? I think he is XP) "Speaking of Anna."
Yoh looked like he was about to die "I FORGOT TO GET THE
THINGS SHE NEEDED!" Yoh ran to the door and got his sandals.
Then ran out the house.
*The corner by Yoh's house*
"Lets see. fish, garlic, chicken, rice and."
Yoh looked at the list. "Eh-oh. I forgot to
get the soysause!"
Yoh groaned "I guess that's a thousand push ups then."
*In front of the house*
Anna waited at the front door. She heard Yoh groan.
"Your late." Yoh forced a smile." I guess that means
more push ups right?" Anna glared at him. "No it doesn't and."
Yoh looked confused. "Since you are late you will run around
the block without stopping." Yoh went into the house to put the
groceries away.
"You forgot the soysause." Yoh got a sweatdrop.
"That means the weights will be heavier, now that
you are running instead of doing push ups..."
Anna glared at Yoh. "And now you will run 35 laps."
*One hour later*
Yoh put on his weights "This sucks." he mumbled
"Bye Anna." Yoh stated his run.
*30 laps past*
"Anna won't know if I stop will she?" Suddenly
the gosets who handed the house appeared.
"I guess that answers my question." Yoh
continued to run.
*Somewhere above*
"Don't worry Yoh if she doesn't accept use we
can escape together."
(soooooo hello what did ya think? Good or bad? Rember I need 6 reviews
from you guys to Wright the next chapter! Review!)
anyway I will need 6 reviews for each chappy. When I get the 6 reviews I
Wright the next one! Well on with the story!)
Title: The Punishment
Ren woke up but decided to stay laying there with his eyes
closed and Yoh beside him. He felt Yoh get up.
"Is this right?" he heard Yoh ask.
"This is right." Yoh turned to see Ren sitting up and staring at him.
"This is right because it feels right." Yoh stared back at Ren with
wide eyes. His eyes softened. "I know it feels right Ren. Its just."
Ren stared at the boy he loved begging him to continue.
"Its just that I have to get engaged to Anna and.
and this would just destroy things at the end."
Ren saw sadness in Yoh's eyes.
"Don't worry I'm sure things will turn out great."
(Is Ren OOC? I think he is XP) "Speaking of Anna."
Yoh looked like he was about to die "I FORGOT TO GET THE
THINGS SHE NEEDED!" Yoh ran to the door and got his sandals.
Then ran out the house.
*The corner by Yoh's house*
"Lets see. fish, garlic, chicken, rice and."
Yoh looked at the list. "Eh-oh. I forgot to
get the soysause!"
Yoh groaned "I guess that's a thousand push ups then."
*In front of the house*
Anna waited at the front door. She heard Yoh groan.
"Your late." Yoh forced a smile." I guess that means
more push ups right?" Anna glared at him. "No it doesn't and."
Yoh looked confused. "Since you are late you will run around
the block without stopping." Yoh went into the house to put the
groceries away.
"You forgot the soysause." Yoh got a sweatdrop.
"That means the weights will be heavier, now that
you are running instead of doing push ups..."
Anna glared at Yoh. "And now you will run 35 laps."
*One hour later*
Yoh put on his weights "This sucks." he mumbled
"Bye Anna." Yoh stated his run.
*30 laps past*
"Anna won't know if I stop will she?" Suddenly
the gosets who handed the house appeared.
"I guess that answers my question." Yoh
continued to run.
*Somewhere above*
"Don't worry Yoh if she doesn't accept use we
can escape together."
(soooooo hello what did ya think? Good or bad? Rember I need 6 reviews
from you guys to Wright the next chapter! Review!)