Name: Jedi Apprentice A
Rating: PG/PG-13
Summary: Obi-wan goes to jedi school. Then goes home and has obstacles in
the middle. A normal three act story. Beginning, middle, end. And on the
way, he meets the most different characters you will have ever met,
including a bog creature. The smell. GROSS *Faints*
REVIEW, please!
Jedi Apprentice #1: Prologue
Obi-wan Kenobi had only just sent the application to the Jedi Temple, located in Coruscant, some hundred miles away. His palms had been sweating as he let it drop in to the hands of the post man; he was now feeling light- headed and scared. He then ran upstairs and was sick in the toilet.
He lived in a shack, well a house but it was small, not cozy small. Microscopic small. By day he would help his father plough the land, feed the animals and help his mother do the cooking; and by night he would sit and stare into space imagining life as a Jedi. the many adventure he would have. He was dying to get in, and then his parents could have something to make them proud of him.
On this particular Saturday morning, before he went to milk the cows he noticed a letter on his usual seat at the table in the garden. It was from the Jedi Temple.
He reached forward and then put it down, he dare not open it yet. He will go and do the milking and then open it.
While he attended to the cows (that are different from those on our planet), he though on how distant those adventures seemed now, and how close at the same time. He was in the middle of the second cow when he couldn't take it any longer. He had to open that letter! He had to see if he had got in.
He ran from the barn, across the courtyard and to the table, he grabbed it and opened it.
". we are please to inform you that you have been accepted at the."
He was in. He was in. He read the letter several more times and then started to shout in excitement and complete ecstasy. His parents looked from the crop field, looking bamboozled.
***
He had to have a physical exam a week later, this didn't eat at his excitement, nor his parents. They were proud of him, for the first time in their life they were proud of him. His dream had prospered, he was now day dreaming about the types of people he would meet while he ploughed the cornfield or while mixing eggs he would think of his master. He was soon to became a Jedi, maybe even a Jedi Knight. He looked at the calendar on the wall, with two words scrawled under the next day. It's today!
***
He entered a giant hall at about half-past nine the next morning after travelling by his father's hovercraft for about 4 hours. He was not at all tired, even though he had gotten up at 3am. He was wide awake and eager to get started. At the trainee facility, they had given him a Pre-Padwan Lightsaber, or a PPL which was a type of Lightsaber used so that the trainee would not be hurt, or have any limbs sliced off in the process of training.
His examiner was not what he had expected, the examiner was a short green dwarf; and his name was Yoda. While he maybe wise, his English was maybe not that satisfactory. He jumbled up the words and it took Obi-wan about an hour to be able to finally get the gist of what Yoda was telling him and soon the exam began.
Obi-wan was now blind folded and given a Lightsaber, not a PPL, but this time a real one.
"This very is hard!" Yoda informed him, "Capabilities of the force look we at!"
For the next forty-five minutes Obi-Wan was training harder than ever.
He was doing well for a 6 year old.
**
It was a staggering 6 years later, just a couple of months before he would be sent back to work home (if he didn't find a master in time), he was very nervous and his friends who also had to face this were not so nervous.
Obi-wan was a very fast learner, and his connecting with the force was outstanding, but that was not what the Jedi Masters care about, the Jedi Masters only care about if the Master and Apprentice have a correlation together with the force.
Obi-Wan's thirteenth birthday was coming closed at a dangerously scary rate, he had had many Masters looking to see if he was the one they had been looking for but he wasn't. He knew he had wasted those 6 years, he was now almost planning what he would do when he got home.
***
Obi-Wan was on his way home, his heart was broken, his desire or being a Jedi Padawan had shattered. He sighed and stared ahead and mused over the expressions of his parents.
He was sat next to a man in his thirties and was reading a newspaper when an explosion occurred.
"What the." the ship wobbled, baggage falling out of the compartments and people began to scream. Then the lights went out.
A vivacious man appeared. Even though he looked energetic, he was sincere looking and wore only black.
"Hello." He said simply, he pulled out a double-sided light-sabre, the most difficult light-sabre of them all. He must have been trained by.
The man next to Obi-wan stood up. "Xanatos!" he gasped.
"Qui-gon Jinn, what a pleasant surprise! I'm glad you're here to witness my little stunt, and when I'm done, your little meaningless lives will not man a thing, the darkness will swallow you all up."
Jedi Apprentice #1: Prologue
Obi-wan Kenobi had only just sent the application to the Jedi Temple, located in Coruscant, some hundred miles away. His palms had been sweating as he let it drop in to the hands of the post man; he was now feeling light- headed and scared. He then ran upstairs and was sick in the toilet.
He lived in a shack, well a house but it was small, not cozy small. Microscopic small. By day he would help his father plough the land, feed the animals and help his mother do the cooking; and by night he would sit and stare into space imagining life as a Jedi. the many adventure he would have. He was dying to get in, and then his parents could have something to make them proud of him.
On this particular Saturday morning, before he went to milk the cows he noticed a letter on his usual seat at the table in the garden. It was from the Jedi Temple.
He reached forward and then put it down, he dare not open it yet. He will go and do the milking and then open it.
While he attended to the cows (that are different from those on our planet), he though on how distant those adventures seemed now, and how close at the same time. He was in the middle of the second cow when he couldn't take it any longer. He had to open that letter! He had to see if he had got in.
He ran from the barn, across the courtyard and to the table, he grabbed it and opened it.
". we are please to inform you that you have been accepted at the."
He was in. He was in. He read the letter several more times and then started to shout in excitement and complete ecstasy. His parents looked from the crop field, looking bamboozled.
***
He had to have a physical exam a week later, this didn't eat at his excitement, nor his parents. They were proud of him, for the first time in their life they were proud of him. His dream had prospered, he was now day dreaming about the types of people he would meet while he ploughed the cornfield or while mixing eggs he would think of his master. He was soon to became a Jedi, maybe even a Jedi Knight. He looked at the calendar on the wall, with two words scrawled under the next day. It's today!
***
He entered a giant hall at about half-past nine the next morning after travelling by his father's hovercraft for about 4 hours. He was not at all tired, even though he had gotten up at 3am. He was wide awake and eager to get started. At the trainee facility, they had given him a Pre-Padwan Lightsaber, or a PPL which was a type of Lightsaber used so that the trainee would not be hurt, or have any limbs sliced off in the process of training.
His examiner was not what he had expected, the examiner was a short green dwarf; and his name was Yoda. While he maybe wise, his English was maybe not that satisfactory. He jumbled up the words and it took Obi-wan about an hour to be able to finally get the gist of what Yoda was telling him and soon the exam began.
Obi-wan was now blind folded and given a Lightsaber, not a PPL, but this time a real one.
"This very is hard!" Yoda informed him, "Capabilities of the force look we at!"
For the next forty-five minutes Obi-Wan was training harder than ever.
He was doing well for a 6 year old.
**
It was a staggering 6 years later, just a couple of months before he would be sent back to work home (if he didn't find a master in time), he was very nervous and his friends who also had to face this were not so nervous.
Obi-wan was a very fast learner, and his connecting with the force was outstanding, but that was not what the Jedi Masters care about, the Jedi Masters only care about if the Master and Apprentice have a correlation together with the force.
Obi-Wan's thirteenth birthday was coming closed at a dangerously scary rate, he had had many Masters looking to see if he was the one they had been looking for but he wasn't. He knew he had wasted those 6 years, he was now almost planning what he would do when he got home.
***
Obi-Wan was on his way home, his heart was broken, his desire or being a Jedi Padawan had shattered. He sighed and stared ahead and mused over the expressions of his parents.
He was sat next to a man in his thirties and was reading a newspaper when an explosion occurred.
"What the." the ship wobbled, baggage falling out of the compartments and people began to scream. Then the lights went out.
A vivacious man appeared. Even though he looked energetic, he was sincere looking and wore only black.
"Hello." He said simply, he pulled out a double-sided light-sabre, the most difficult light-sabre of them all. He must have been trained by.
The man next to Obi-wan stood up. "Xanatos!" he gasped.
"Qui-gon Jinn, what a pleasant surprise! I'm glad you're here to witness my little stunt, and when I'm done, your little meaningless lives will not man a thing, the darkness will swallow you all up."