Ok, I decided to post the last chapter I wrote, I was working on it when I decided to stop, but yesturday I decided that hey, 2 whole people actually reviewed, maybe if i continue the number will change to 3? in other words, this chapter is basicly a test, if i get 1 more review from someone else, ill continue with this fic, if not, then ill use the time that i would be writing the next chapter on just watching tv without a thought in my head, heh.
Deseived
The 4th Maidem, I remember how I was decieved during my quest to rescue her, my first insight to a certain fact, they arent as dumb as they look, no, they as smart as me, if not smarter.
I was suprised to see her, in a cell like Zelda was. 2 months had passed since I first heard the tale, Decieved, it told of a boy who went through great lengths to find a treasure, only to learn it was a lie, though he later found it after facing the lie.
"Gya! no! lets turn back! there must be another way out!"
"Wha...? come on lets just go through this exit! whats there to be picky about?"
"I Refuse! Lets find a darker way out!"
"Stop being a idiot and lets go!"
"No!"
"Come on!"
"No way!"
"Don't make me drag you out by the legs!"
"If you do I'll alit you to flames! don't forget I am a decent of the great sages!"
"Fine!"
"Good!"
"Come on... lets find your exit..."
That was my first hunch something was wrong, why did she refuse to go out? she also refused to go to the 2nd level, wich was filled with windows, any one of them would have made a decent secondary exit. (or was is the basement level? would make more sense, as the entrence was what appeared to be 1 level belove the surface)
While on the second level, I blew a hole in the floor, letting light down to the lower floor, maybe theres another way out down there? better backtrack, find the sage and find the room from that floor, I took off and found her right were I left her.
"Come on I think I found a way."
"Lets go."
After making a small trek, we reached the room, light came from the ceiling, it was then when I wandered to the center of the room I heard a scream unlike anything Ive ever heard before, I looked behind me to find it was coming from her.
"Whats wrong? are you ok?"
She just kept screaming, her body started changing, she was getting alotbigger, more bulky and lit up in fire, i stepped back, away from her, I wondered what was going on, I demanded to know.
"Whats happening to you!?"
She growled and laughed, a very sinister laugh...
"This is my true form, can you guess? im the Sorcerer assigned to guard the sage her, like you could guess, im unable to keep that disguise in bright light, I was hoping that I could have fallowed you out and sabotage your attempt to save another sage, ambushing you through a sneak attack and with the help of the guardian from the otehr temple, but you ruined that plan... No matter, I can still destroy you alone without a sneak attack!!!"
With that, she threw a huge fireball at me, I was able to jump away, too close for comfort, that fire ball nearly used me as fuel. After a short while of evading and watcher her attack, I learned of an opening were i could strike this beat down, after throwing a large fireball, she needs to recharge, after evading her a few more fireballs, she threw a huge one, I evaded it easily and slamed my sword against this sorcerer's throut, her head rolled away and the gown she wore fell to the ground, this was too easy...
"Thats it? Wow the first monster I ever fought that didnt even come near t..."
Her head... it rose, levitated... the gown went to her on its own, she reatached her head ande was as good as new.
"What the...!?!?"
"Gahahaha, think that I'd fall from such a puny attack? If thats your best shot then I already won."
With that, she mutiplied herself to 3 different beings, I thought fast and came up with a plan. One bitch thowing fire at you is easy it evade, but 3 bitches throwing their heads at you is alot harder to evade, I destroyed 2 of them with my sword when the 3rd one reatached itself, she charged up a huge fireball and hurled it at me, nows my chance, I evaded the fire ball, smashed my sword through her neck, her head fell off right infront of the gown, now, quick, before she could reatatch herself to the gown, I took out my ice rod and blasted it at her head, it quickly turned to ice. I win.
"Heh, for a second there I thought you might of had a chance, thank you ice rod." I lifted my shield and smashed her head into thousands of little pieces, though amist of all the shattered Ice was the crystal.
I lifted up the crystal, quickly after the saga was freed and I was off, 4 down, 3 to go.
End of chapter 9
Deseived
The 4th Maidem, I remember how I was decieved during my quest to rescue her, my first insight to a certain fact, they arent as dumb as they look, no, they as smart as me, if not smarter.
I was suprised to see her, in a cell like Zelda was. 2 months had passed since I first heard the tale, Decieved, it told of a boy who went through great lengths to find a treasure, only to learn it was a lie, though he later found it after facing the lie.
"Gya! no! lets turn back! there must be another way out!"
"Wha...? come on lets just go through this exit! whats there to be picky about?"
"I Refuse! Lets find a darker way out!"
"Stop being a idiot and lets go!"
"No!"
"Come on!"
"No way!"
"Don't make me drag you out by the legs!"
"If you do I'll alit you to flames! don't forget I am a decent of the great sages!"
"Fine!"
"Good!"
"Come on... lets find your exit..."
That was my first hunch something was wrong, why did she refuse to go out? she also refused to go to the 2nd level, wich was filled with windows, any one of them would have made a decent secondary exit. (or was is the basement level? would make more sense, as the entrence was what appeared to be 1 level belove the surface)
While on the second level, I blew a hole in the floor, letting light down to the lower floor, maybe theres another way out down there? better backtrack, find the sage and find the room from that floor, I took off and found her right were I left her.
"Come on I think I found a way."
"Lets go."
After making a small trek, we reached the room, light came from the ceiling, it was then when I wandered to the center of the room I heard a scream unlike anything Ive ever heard before, I looked behind me to find it was coming from her.
"Whats wrong? are you ok?"
She just kept screaming, her body started changing, she was getting alotbigger, more bulky and lit up in fire, i stepped back, away from her, I wondered what was going on, I demanded to know.
"Whats happening to you!?"
She growled and laughed, a very sinister laugh...
"This is my true form, can you guess? im the Sorcerer assigned to guard the sage her, like you could guess, im unable to keep that disguise in bright light, I was hoping that I could have fallowed you out and sabotage your attempt to save another sage, ambushing you through a sneak attack and with the help of the guardian from the otehr temple, but you ruined that plan... No matter, I can still destroy you alone without a sneak attack!!!"
With that, she threw a huge fireball at me, I was able to jump away, too close for comfort, that fire ball nearly used me as fuel. After a short while of evading and watcher her attack, I learned of an opening were i could strike this beat down, after throwing a large fireball, she needs to recharge, after evading her a few more fireballs, she threw a huge one, I evaded it easily and slamed my sword against this sorcerer's throut, her head rolled away and the gown she wore fell to the ground, this was too easy...
"Thats it? Wow the first monster I ever fought that didnt even come near t..."
Her head... it rose, levitated... the gown went to her on its own, she reatached her head ande was as good as new.
"What the...!?!?"
"Gahahaha, think that I'd fall from such a puny attack? If thats your best shot then I already won."
With that, she mutiplied herself to 3 different beings, I thought fast and came up with a plan. One bitch thowing fire at you is easy it evade, but 3 bitches throwing their heads at you is alot harder to evade, I destroyed 2 of them with my sword when the 3rd one reatached itself, she charged up a huge fireball and hurled it at me, nows my chance, I evaded the fire ball, smashed my sword through her neck, her head fell off right infront of the gown, now, quick, before she could reatatch herself to the gown, I took out my ice rod and blasted it at her head, it quickly turned to ice. I win.
"Heh, for a second there I thought you might of had a chance, thank you ice rod." I lifted my shield and smashed her head into thousands of little pieces, though amist of all the shattered Ice was the crystal.
I lifted up the crystal, quickly after the saga was freed and I was off, 4 down, 3 to go.
End of chapter 9