Hi everyone!.
So this is my first fan fiction and I know its not very good. Please don't throw rocks at me if there are mistakes, I wrote it in a hurry. I know the names crap but I couldn't think of anything else. It was originally The Black Rose but someone already had that name so I changed it. I would love it if you guys commented I need all the help I can get. If you like it I'll write more and update as soon as I can, I hope.
Ta muchly, hope you enjoy.
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Chapter one
She slid into the tub of hot water and bubbles. The ship was quiet and empty. All she could hear was the waves lapping against the side of the boat and the distant sound of the bustling crowds of Tortuga. The crew had gone to enjoy themselves while she, the captain, took care of some business.
But that can wait till later she thought.
Just because she was the captain of a pirate ship didn't mean she didn't enjoy a bubble bath now and again. She made it well known too. Her crew knew to keep well away from her cabin when she was bathing.. Last time someone interrupted her they walked straight in catching her off her guard and completely naked. As a punishment she had made him carry out his chores naked for a week. As it was winter at the time, it was pretty cold too. Not that any of them would come aboard now at least until tomorrow, she was sure they were having too much fun She, on the other hand would not be having fun. The business she had to take care of was in fact a person. She had been sent to find a certain young man. She had no idea what he looked like or where to find him. If they didn't find him in Tortuga it would be on to the next stop, most likely Port Royal. But she had until tomorrow to search Tortuga. It wasn't that big so she didn't need to rush.
She closed her eyes and hummed a tune to herself "we're devils and black sheep and really." A loud crash stopped her. "This had better be good" she growled.
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Will sprinted towards the docks madly pushing people out of the way shouting apologies as he went.
"Gimme me rum back!" Jack yelled.
"You'll have teh catch me first Jack" Will slurred laughing.
"You think this wise boy? Stealing rum from a pirate" Jack called.
"It's a good thing I am not wise then" Will answered without thinking still running Jack close behind.
He kept running past the boats till he got to the end of the docks.
"Oh dear" Will sniffed. He looked round desperately for a place to hide grasping the bottle of rum tighter. He looked round and saw a magnificent ship in front of him. "The only place would be on that pretty boat.ship" he thought aloud. He grinned like a little child swaying over to the ship and climbing aboard.
Jack pushed his way past the last few people and saw Will climbing aboard a ship.
"The Amber Rose" he whispered. "No, no. no Will! Not a good idea!" he shouted waving his arms about. Will waved "hello Jack! You found me! But yer haven't caught me yet!" he shouted back and disappeared.
Jack ran after him boarding the ship looking nervously around. He heard childish giggling and saw Wills grinning face disappear down the steps leading below deck. He was about to follow when he heard a loud crash. He peered down the steps and saw Will sprawled on the floor drenched in rum with shattered glass around him.
"I think yer caught me Jack" Will hiccupped.
So this is my first fan fiction and I know its not very good. Please don't throw rocks at me if there are mistakes, I wrote it in a hurry. I know the names crap but I couldn't think of anything else. It was originally The Black Rose but someone already had that name so I changed it. I would love it if you guys commented I need all the help I can get. If you like it I'll write more and update as soon as I can, I hope.
Ta muchly, hope you enjoy.
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Chapter one
She slid into the tub of hot water and bubbles. The ship was quiet and empty. All she could hear was the waves lapping against the side of the boat and the distant sound of the bustling crowds of Tortuga. The crew had gone to enjoy themselves while she, the captain, took care of some business.
But that can wait till later she thought.
Just because she was the captain of a pirate ship didn't mean she didn't enjoy a bubble bath now and again. She made it well known too. Her crew knew to keep well away from her cabin when she was bathing.. Last time someone interrupted her they walked straight in catching her off her guard and completely naked. As a punishment she had made him carry out his chores naked for a week. As it was winter at the time, it was pretty cold too. Not that any of them would come aboard now at least until tomorrow, she was sure they were having too much fun She, on the other hand would not be having fun. The business she had to take care of was in fact a person. She had been sent to find a certain young man. She had no idea what he looked like or where to find him. If they didn't find him in Tortuga it would be on to the next stop, most likely Port Royal. But she had until tomorrow to search Tortuga. It wasn't that big so she didn't need to rush.
She closed her eyes and hummed a tune to herself "we're devils and black sheep and really." A loud crash stopped her. "This had better be good" she growled.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Will sprinted towards the docks madly pushing people out of the way shouting apologies as he went.
"Gimme me rum back!" Jack yelled.
"You'll have teh catch me first Jack" Will slurred laughing.
"You think this wise boy? Stealing rum from a pirate" Jack called.
"It's a good thing I am not wise then" Will answered without thinking still running Jack close behind.
He kept running past the boats till he got to the end of the docks.
"Oh dear" Will sniffed. He looked round desperately for a place to hide grasping the bottle of rum tighter. He looked round and saw a magnificent ship in front of him. "The only place would be on that pretty boat.ship" he thought aloud. He grinned like a little child swaying over to the ship and climbing aboard.
Jack pushed his way past the last few people and saw Will climbing aboard a ship.
"The Amber Rose" he whispered. "No, no. no Will! Not a good idea!" he shouted waving his arms about. Will waved "hello Jack! You found me! But yer haven't caught me yet!" he shouted back and disappeared.
Jack ran after him boarding the ship looking nervously around. He heard childish giggling and saw Wills grinning face disappear down the steps leading below deck. He was about to follow when he heard a loud crash. He peered down the steps and saw Will sprawled on the floor drenched in rum with shattered glass around him.
"I think yer caught me Jack" Will hiccupped.