I don't own Escaflowne but if I did I would have made more episodes.
I have read many fanfics here 4 a long while now and I never thought that I
would write 1 of my own. Thanks 2 every1 here you all inspired me to write
my own. Hope ya all like this story caz I've liked yours.
This fic takes place in America, I have it this way bcaz I want 2 be
different.
Dilandau? On Earth?
Chapter 1
Hitomi was out one night on her usual routine. At night at 7:00pm she would jog in the park. It was a cold, foggy night with a full moon shining brightly. Hitomi was wearing a long sleeve blue shirt, and blue jeans as her long, light brown hair moved in the gentle breeze. As Hitomi came across the lake where there weren't many trees, she began to slow down. Bending over with her hands on her knees panting for breath a bright light appeared out of the corner of her eye.
"Huh? The hell is this? Bright light? What's happening?" Having no clue of what is about to happen Hitomi blocks the strange bright light that seems to be coming from the sky by putting her arms in front of her face. Squinting her eyes she looks up at the light and sees what looks to be a red metal giant coming down from..god knows where from the sky!
The red metal giant came down with a loud crash making the ground shake so hard that it made Hitomi fall to the ground just as the strange light disappered, leaving the red metal giant which looked badly damage. It took Hitomi a few moments for her to realize what had just happened and to come out of shock. During that time she just sat there starting at this.thing, this red metal giant that came out of the sky. So many things were going through Hitomi's head that she felt like her mind might explode as she was talking a mile a minute.
"Oh my god! What just happened here?! The hell is this thing?! A space ship?! No, it's to small so what else could it be?! A tin man?! A metal giant?! It sure looks like one!" After arguing with herself she slowly stood up and carefully walked toward the strange metal giant, never taking her eyes off it. As she got closer fear went through her mind, afraid of what she might find. The red metal giant was laying flat on it's back with the look all over that it just came from a very bloody battle, for Hitomi could see blood on almost the whole giant along with deadly blows it had taken. For a while Hitomi just stood there staring up at the red metal giant covered in blood not knowing what to do when suddenly a noise, like a door being opened was herd coming from the giant.
Two doors on the giant's chest swung open as steam came out. Terror now rose all over Hitomi as she just stood there shaking not knowing if it was the cold weather or if it was just her. She took two steps back as she could see a figure through the steam coming out of the metal giant. When the steam cleared Hitomi could see it was a boy with short silver hair and looked only about her age, which was 15 or the boy could be at least be a year older. His skin was pale, he had a scar on the right side of his cheek, a sword at his side, and he wore red and black armor that matched the color of his metal giant and more surprising his eyes. The boy had bright blood red eyes that sent chills up Hitomi's back. "Where the fuck am I?!! Where is the battle?!! Where are my Dragon Slayers?!! Where's Jajuka?!! Where is VAN?!!!!" The silver headed boy yelled with anger and rage. Not knowing what to do, what to say, or who and what the strange boy was talking about Hitomi quietly backed away as his mind was on something else.
"And just who are you girl?!" As if noticing Hitomi for the first time the boy turned his blood thirty red eyes on Hitomi glaring at her with a look to kill.
Surprised that the boy had spoken to her and fear still filling up inside her, all Hitomi could think of was "Oh shit! He sees you, RUN!" So that's what she did, without any other thought she turned and ran like she never ran before.
But unfortunatlely for her the boy was faster. He suspected that the girl would run and so the moment she turned around he had already jumped down from the metal giant and landed on the ground in a cat-like stance smirking his devilish grin as he ran after her. It didn't take him long to catch up to her and when he did he reached out with his left hand and grabbed her arm firmly, pulling her back towards him. Filling up with even more terror as the strange boy grabbed her Hitomi screamed, but was cut short as the blood thirty, red eyed boy used his free hand and clamped it over her mouth.
Scared out of her wits and not knowing who this insane boy is felt her back pressed up against the boys armor and could hear his laughter as he spoke. "Don't worry little girl! I'm not gonna hurt you! That is I won't, unless you answer all of my questions!"
Well? What ya think? Good? ok? so and so? Great? bad? Please feel free 2 tell me what ya think and if ya have n e advice tell me. I've got about 1-3 chapters all ready. But still advice is good.
Dilandau? On Earth?
Chapter 1
Hitomi was out one night on her usual routine. At night at 7:00pm she would jog in the park. It was a cold, foggy night with a full moon shining brightly. Hitomi was wearing a long sleeve blue shirt, and blue jeans as her long, light brown hair moved in the gentle breeze. As Hitomi came across the lake where there weren't many trees, she began to slow down. Bending over with her hands on her knees panting for breath a bright light appeared out of the corner of her eye.
"Huh? The hell is this? Bright light? What's happening?" Having no clue of what is about to happen Hitomi blocks the strange bright light that seems to be coming from the sky by putting her arms in front of her face. Squinting her eyes she looks up at the light and sees what looks to be a red metal giant coming down from..god knows where from the sky!
The red metal giant came down with a loud crash making the ground shake so hard that it made Hitomi fall to the ground just as the strange light disappered, leaving the red metal giant which looked badly damage. It took Hitomi a few moments for her to realize what had just happened and to come out of shock. During that time she just sat there starting at this.thing, this red metal giant that came out of the sky. So many things were going through Hitomi's head that she felt like her mind might explode as she was talking a mile a minute.
"Oh my god! What just happened here?! The hell is this thing?! A space ship?! No, it's to small so what else could it be?! A tin man?! A metal giant?! It sure looks like one!" After arguing with herself she slowly stood up and carefully walked toward the strange metal giant, never taking her eyes off it. As she got closer fear went through her mind, afraid of what she might find. The red metal giant was laying flat on it's back with the look all over that it just came from a very bloody battle, for Hitomi could see blood on almost the whole giant along with deadly blows it had taken. For a while Hitomi just stood there staring up at the red metal giant covered in blood not knowing what to do when suddenly a noise, like a door being opened was herd coming from the giant.
Two doors on the giant's chest swung open as steam came out. Terror now rose all over Hitomi as she just stood there shaking not knowing if it was the cold weather or if it was just her. She took two steps back as she could see a figure through the steam coming out of the metal giant. When the steam cleared Hitomi could see it was a boy with short silver hair and looked only about her age, which was 15 or the boy could be at least be a year older. His skin was pale, he had a scar on the right side of his cheek, a sword at his side, and he wore red and black armor that matched the color of his metal giant and more surprising his eyes. The boy had bright blood red eyes that sent chills up Hitomi's back. "Where the fuck am I?!! Where is the battle?!! Where are my Dragon Slayers?!! Where's Jajuka?!! Where is VAN?!!!!" The silver headed boy yelled with anger and rage. Not knowing what to do, what to say, or who and what the strange boy was talking about Hitomi quietly backed away as his mind was on something else.
"And just who are you girl?!" As if noticing Hitomi for the first time the boy turned his blood thirty red eyes on Hitomi glaring at her with a look to kill.
Surprised that the boy had spoken to her and fear still filling up inside her, all Hitomi could think of was "Oh shit! He sees you, RUN!" So that's what she did, without any other thought she turned and ran like she never ran before.
But unfortunatlely for her the boy was faster. He suspected that the girl would run and so the moment she turned around he had already jumped down from the metal giant and landed on the ground in a cat-like stance smirking his devilish grin as he ran after her. It didn't take him long to catch up to her and when he did he reached out with his left hand and grabbed her arm firmly, pulling her back towards him. Filling up with even more terror as the strange boy grabbed her Hitomi screamed, but was cut short as the blood thirty, red eyed boy used his free hand and clamped it over her mouth.
Scared out of her wits and not knowing who this insane boy is felt her back pressed up against the boys armor and could hear his laughter as he spoke. "Don't worry little girl! I'm not gonna hurt you! That is I won't, unless you answer all of my questions!"
Well? What ya think? Good? ok? so and so? Great? bad? Please feel free 2 tell me what ya think and if ya have n e advice tell me. I've got about 1-3 chapters all ready. But still advice is good.