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Lena - Me too!
Water Angel - I hope your not all mad at me for leaving it there for three/four days. But I was GROUNDED! Here's the Reviews:
Kage-Shadow-of-Darkness: Yes, I know. I really felt sorry for Willow when Terra died though..... I was wondering were you were during chapter 12... LOL. Good to have ya' back :)
Potential
CH. 14 - Tetana
Tetana groaned as she awoke. Her head felt as if someone had pounded a foot long nail into her head, or had just thrown her against a wall. Her hands moved to massage her temples, but she heard the clanking of chains. Finally opening her eyes she looked to her right arm.
On her wrist was what looked like a very big, very ugly, gray braclet. Attached to the 'braclet' was a very thick chain. Looking somewhat farther up her arm she saw that the chain was attache too the wall.
Slowly turning her head forward and lifting it, she looked around. The 'room' she was in wasn't too big. Prabably about 10x10. 3 of the walls were a solid gray. The one across from her was bars.
Tetana started to stand, but dizziness overwhelmed her, and she had to sit again. Once more her hands went to her temples. Her migraine was almost gone when someone, or something, opened and slamed a door, making it come back worse than before.
She continued her fluide motions trying to make it go down again.
"Looks like your alive and well." a voice commented.
Tetana froze. There was only one person who could sound like that.
"Caleb" she stated, temperarily forgetting her migrane, and looked up.
"Well it seems you haven't suffured any brain problems.
"Wasn't hit hard enough for it." she stated.
"No I suppose you weren't" He seemed to think for a second, "We'd move you to better acomodations, but we don't exactly trust anyone who helps our enemy."
"Why'd you kidnap me?"
"Why do you think?" He asked tauntingly.
Instead of answering she just keeped her icy looked trained on him.
Caleb sneered and answered, "Well, your not getting an answer." he motioned for someone to come forward.
Out of the shadows came two vampires, in game faces. Tetana barly glanced at them as she continued her steady gaze at Caleb.
"We know you have thought up some way to destroy the First, and we want to hear it. Now we can do this the easy way or the hard way."
Tetana's gaze turned to a glare, it was her turn to sneer as she said, "Go. To. Hell." Pernouncing each and every word carfully.
His gaze went unaltered as he said, "Already have." Before turning to the two vampires, "She's all yours. All I demand is that she is not killed, turned, or feed from."
He tossed one of them a set of keys before turning to walk out, tossing casually over his soulder, "When you want to talk start begging, and they'll come and get me."
Tetana continued looking straite forward until she heard the door open and slam a third time. Moving her gaze slightly she saw the vampires were gone. Sighing she brought her right hand to her head and consentrated. Her hand glowed a pale silver, and her head felt a hundred times better.
While the vampires were gone she decided to test the chains.
***
By the time the vampires got back Tetana realised she couldn't brake the chains. The vampires wheeled in two small tables. Tetana knew what they were going to do. She had seen and read enough about it, on T.V. and in books, to know it was going to be painful. Instead of being fearful and worried, she was expectant and curious. Tetana was sure she was going crazy, but that what she felt. The vampires seemed to realise it because they grinned cruelly at her, telling her they weren't going to be going easy on her.
***
-----Tetana's POV-----
'Oh god that hurts.' I thought as they stuck a burning pocker into my skin yet again. I knew I was beyond crazy to be curious about torture. I had screamed myself hause from the pain. I had run out of tears, and still the pain continued. Sometime after the first hour I had started shacking, and that only made the pain worse. I screamed once more before falling into sleeps welcoming arms.
I was woken by the pain of a knife digging into my arm. Warm tears greeted my face once more as the vampires stepped back. They looked at my with a new look in there eyes. They had tortured my for 4 straite hours, and still I havn't given in and begged for it to stop. Though I had screamed, cried, amd fainted, I hadn't begged. They had expected that I would beg after maybe and hour, as any normal human - expecally any female - would have, I could see it in their eyes. I knew i had gained a little respect, but i also knew it would do no good because their job as to make me give in.
-----End POV-----
They tortured her for another hour before she fainted and couldn't be woken up.
The vampires looked her over and saw that there was rarly a spot that wasn't bruised, burned, or marked. They decided that she fainted from blood lose, before leaving.
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Water Angel - I CANNOT BELIEVE I JUST DID THAT TO MY CHARACTER!!!
Lena - (uncovers ears) Well, you did, so get over it.
Water Angel - You wouldn't be saying that if it was your character.
Lena - No I wouldn't -
Water Angel - See
Lena - because my charater wouldn't have even started screaming. (smugly)
Water Angel - whatever. Anywho, Again I've been grounded so I've had time to write more chapters. I've got two complete ones, and one that's almost complete. This is one of the complete ones. I'm going to post them every three days or so, so that I have time to write another chapter. Pleeeeaaaaaase don't be mad at me.
Lena - Water Angel, Like they would. They stories you write make up for the lateness.
Water Angel - no they don't
Lena - whatever. Anywho, don't forget to review. SO far the reveiwers have gone down to one - Kage-Shadow-of-Darkness. If it wheren't for her then this story would be put on hold. Water Angel is on of those types, that if she doesn't have lots of feed back then she starts loosing interest in a story or something. Anywho, don't forget to review.
Lena - Me too!
Water Angel - I hope your not all mad at me for leaving it there for three/four days. But I was GROUNDED! Here's the Reviews:
Kage-Shadow-of-Darkness: Yes, I know. I really felt sorry for Willow when Terra died though..... I was wondering were you were during chapter 12... LOL. Good to have ya' back :)
Potential
CH. 14 - Tetana
Tetana groaned as she awoke. Her head felt as if someone had pounded a foot long nail into her head, or had just thrown her against a wall. Her hands moved to massage her temples, but she heard the clanking of chains. Finally opening her eyes she looked to her right arm.
On her wrist was what looked like a very big, very ugly, gray braclet. Attached to the 'braclet' was a very thick chain. Looking somewhat farther up her arm she saw that the chain was attache too the wall.
Slowly turning her head forward and lifting it, she looked around. The 'room' she was in wasn't too big. Prabably about 10x10. 3 of the walls were a solid gray. The one across from her was bars.
Tetana started to stand, but dizziness overwhelmed her, and she had to sit again. Once more her hands went to her temples. Her migraine was almost gone when someone, or something, opened and slamed a door, making it come back worse than before.
She continued her fluide motions trying to make it go down again.
"Looks like your alive and well." a voice commented.
Tetana froze. There was only one person who could sound like that.
"Caleb" she stated, temperarily forgetting her migrane, and looked up.
"Well it seems you haven't suffured any brain problems.
"Wasn't hit hard enough for it." she stated.
"No I suppose you weren't" He seemed to think for a second, "We'd move you to better acomodations, but we don't exactly trust anyone who helps our enemy."
"Why'd you kidnap me?"
"Why do you think?" He asked tauntingly.
Instead of answering she just keeped her icy looked trained on him.
Caleb sneered and answered, "Well, your not getting an answer." he motioned for someone to come forward.
Out of the shadows came two vampires, in game faces. Tetana barly glanced at them as she continued her steady gaze at Caleb.
"We know you have thought up some way to destroy the First, and we want to hear it. Now we can do this the easy way or the hard way."
Tetana's gaze turned to a glare, it was her turn to sneer as she said, "Go. To. Hell." Pernouncing each and every word carfully.
His gaze went unaltered as he said, "Already have." Before turning to the two vampires, "She's all yours. All I demand is that she is not killed, turned, or feed from."
He tossed one of them a set of keys before turning to walk out, tossing casually over his soulder, "When you want to talk start begging, and they'll come and get me."
Tetana continued looking straite forward until she heard the door open and slam a third time. Moving her gaze slightly she saw the vampires were gone. Sighing she brought her right hand to her head and consentrated. Her hand glowed a pale silver, and her head felt a hundred times better.
While the vampires were gone she decided to test the chains.
***
By the time the vampires got back Tetana realised she couldn't brake the chains. The vampires wheeled in two small tables. Tetana knew what they were going to do. She had seen and read enough about it, on T.V. and in books, to know it was going to be painful. Instead of being fearful and worried, she was expectant and curious. Tetana was sure she was going crazy, but that what she felt. The vampires seemed to realise it because they grinned cruelly at her, telling her they weren't going to be going easy on her.
***
-----Tetana's POV-----
'Oh god that hurts.' I thought as they stuck a burning pocker into my skin yet again. I knew I was beyond crazy to be curious about torture. I had screamed myself hause from the pain. I had run out of tears, and still the pain continued. Sometime after the first hour I had started shacking, and that only made the pain worse. I screamed once more before falling into sleeps welcoming arms.
I was woken by the pain of a knife digging into my arm. Warm tears greeted my face once more as the vampires stepped back. They looked at my with a new look in there eyes. They had tortured my for 4 straite hours, and still I havn't given in and begged for it to stop. Though I had screamed, cried, amd fainted, I hadn't begged. They had expected that I would beg after maybe and hour, as any normal human - expecally any female - would have, I could see it in their eyes. I knew i had gained a little respect, but i also knew it would do no good because their job as to make me give in.
-----End POV-----
They tortured her for another hour before she fainted and couldn't be woken up.
The vampires looked her over and saw that there was rarly a spot that wasn't bruised, burned, or marked. They decided that she fainted from blood lose, before leaving.
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Water Angel - I CANNOT BELIEVE I JUST DID THAT TO MY CHARACTER!!!
Lena - (uncovers ears) Well, you did, so get over it.
Water Angel - You wouldn't be saying that if it was your character.
Lena - No I wouldn't -
Water Angel - See
Lena - because my charater wouldn't have even started screaming. (smugly)
Water Angel - whatever. Anywho, Again I've been grounded so I've had time to write more chapters. I've got two complete ones, and one that's almost complete. This is one of the complete ones. I'm going to post them every three days or so, so that I have time to write another chapter. Pleeeeaaaaaase don't be mad at me.
Lena - Water Angel, Like they would. They stories you write make up for the lateness.
Water Angel - no they don't
Lena - whatever. Anywho, don't forget to review. SO far the reveiwers have gone down to one - Kage-Shadow-of-Darkness. If it wheren't for her then this story would be put on hold. Water Angel is on of those types, that if she doesn't have lots of feed back then she starts loosing interest in a story or something. Anywho, don't forget to review.