Water Angel - this story's almost over. you know this story is going
to be the first one i've finished in... well ever.
** - person change
*** - scene change
**** - time change
REVIEWS-
Kage-Shadow-of-Darkness - let see, you got..(checks review) Usagi right. Um.... The other two yo guessed on are wrong. The last two paragraphs I guess did sound to much like Willow though. (shrugs) By the way thank you for sticking with this story all the way through. If you hadn't I would've quite long ago.
Glow - Thanks for the advice with the grammer, and spell check thing, demo the word thing I'm using doesn't have those, and I don't have any others to use. However I will look over it more than once to make sure all the words are spelled right and such.
Potential
Ch. 18 - Answers, It begins
Shingo stayed up even after Usagi had stopped checking him and had finally fell asleep. He was thinking; thinking about many things. The profency being one of the more current. He was very suprised when a light appeared in front of him.
When the light dissapeared Shingo saw a woman. she was dressed in all white, and had silver hair up in odangos.
"Who are you?" he askes in a whisper.
"Queen Serenity, your sisters... past mother."
"I don't believe you! If your her past mother then you could be the First!"
"Very wise Shingo. You've learned alot, but I asure you I am Queen Serenity."
Shingo still looked suspicious, "What are you here for?"
"To give you a hint at the profency you all heard earlier."
"Why don't you just tell Usagi? And even better why not just tell us who the profency was talking about?" Shingo demanded.
"Because I cant. The only one I can accosiate with is you."
Shingo nodded.
"Now store this in your mind and don't forget it, I can only come once." Shingo nodded again, "Alright. The first decription. Who do you know that was pure but then she gave up her life to save the world?" She paused, "The second description, She's the slayers friend, and she's very powerful." Shingo nodded, "The third decription, this very day you saw someone being very protective.. And the fourth description, she's saved you once, and was the comforted today."
Shingo nodded once and she dissapeared. He spent the rest of the night tossing and turning.
****
The next day he rounded everyone up and told them what had happened last night.
"It could have been the first." Xander told him.
"That's what I told her. She said that she wasn't, and that I'd have to trust her if I wanted to defeat the first." Shingo told them
"That's not like the first. Usually it dissappeares after you call it out." Buffy said.
Meanwhile Usagi was fiddling with her crystle.
"So that makes me think it wasn't the first." Shingo argued.
"Well you never know it could be trying something new" Anya pipped up.
"What did she say?" asked Usagi.
Shingo looked over at her, "She just gave me some clues to the prophency."
"What were they?"
"For the first one she said, 'who do you know that was once pure, but gave it up to save tthe world?" he said.
Everyone thought for a minute on who it could be.
"The second one she said, 'she's the slayer's friend, and she's very powerful."
Without thinking everyone looked at Willow, who sighed.
"The third one was, ' This morning you saw someone being very protective."
Tetana smiled sadly and looked at Teresa.
"And the last one was, ' she saved you once and she was the comforted." he, along with everyone else, looked at Tetana.
"Well I guess we got the four needed." she said.
"That's good because I've got a couple things to say." Buffy told them, "First of all, I killed Caleb -"
"You might have killed Caleb, but you cant kill Chaos. He'll just find another body to inhabit."
"We'll deal with that when it come. Now secondly....." she goes on with a speech.( the one she gives about anyone who can be, will be, a slayer.) for the next hour everyone gets ready to fight.
** - person change
*** - scene change
**** - time change
REVIEWS-
Kage-Shadow-of-Darkness - let see, you got..(checks review) Usagi right. Um.... The other two yo guessed on are wrong. The last two paragraphs I guess did sound to much like Willow though. (shrugs) By the way thank you for sticking with this story all the way through. If you hadn't I would've quite long ago.
Glow - Thanks for the advice with the grammer, and spell check thing, demo the word thing I'm using doesn't have those, and I don't have any others to use. However I will look over it more than once to make sure all the words are spelled right and such.
Potential
Ch. 18 - Answers, It begins
Shingo stayed up even after Usagi had stopped checking him and had finally fell asleep. He was thinking; thinking about many things. The profency being one of the more current. He was very suprised when a light appeared in front of him.
When the light dissapeared Shingo saw a woman. she was dressed in all white, and had silver hair up in odangos.
"Who are you?" he askes in a whisper.
"Queen Serenity, your sisters... past mother."
"I don't believe you! If your her past mother then you could be the First!"
"Very wise Shingo. You've learned alot, but I asure you I am Queen Serenity."
Shingo still looked suspicious, "What are you here for?"
"To give you a hint at the profency you all heard earlier."
"Why don't you just tell Usagi? And even better why not just tell us who the profency was talking about?" Shingo demanded.
"Because I cant. The only one I can accosiate with is you."
Shingo nodded.
"Now store this in your mind and don't forget it, I can only come once." Shingo nodded again, "Alright. The first decription. Who do you know that was pure but then she gave up her life to save the world?" She paused, "The second description, She's the slayers friend, and she's very powerful." Shingo nodded, "The third decription, this very day you saw someone being very protective.. And the fourth description, she's saved you once, and was the comforted today."
Shingo nodded once and she dissapeared. He spent the rest of the night tossing and turning.
****
The next day he rounded everyone up and told them what had happened last night.
"It could have been the first." Xander told him.
"That's what I told her. She said that she wasn't, and that I'd have to trust her if I wanted to defeat the first." Shingo told them
"That's not like the first. Usually it dissappeares after you call it out." Buffy said.
Meanwhile Usagi was fiddling with her crystle.
"So that makes me think it wasn't the first." Shingo argued.
"Well you never know it could be trying something new" Anya pipped up.
"What did she say?" asked Usagi.
Shingo looked over at her, "She just gave me some clues to the prophency."
"What were they?"
"For the first one she said, 'who do you know that was once pure, but gave it up to save tthe world?" he said.
Everyone thought for a minute on who it could be.
"The second one she said, 'she's the slayer's friend, and she's very powerful."
Without thinking everyone looked at Willow, who sighed.
"The third one was, ' This morning you saw someone being very protective."
Tetana smiled sadly and looked at Teresa.
"And the last one was, ' she saved you once and she was the comforted." he, along with everyone else, looked at Tetana.
"Well I guess we got the four needed." she said.
"That's good because I've got a couple things to say." Buffy told them, "First of all, I killed Caleb -"
"You might have killed Caleb, but you cant kill Chaos. He'll just find another body to inhabit."
"We'll deal with that when it come. Now secondly....." she goes on with a speech.( the one she gives about anyone who can be, will be, a slayer.) for the next hour everyone gets ready to fight.