**Hello I'm Hitomi-chan!!! *before I was known as sakura^-^, yup, that's me!*
He-he, this is my first fan fic!! I love fan fics!! I have been trying to upload this thing for a while, and now I finally found how to @.@ I have known this site for almost a year, but I haven't joined it until now!! I really enjoy writing, which includes, fan fics, and sometimes writing poems, but not as much as I love drawing!!! When I step out from the prehistoric age and actually learn how to put my work in a site for fan art, I'll do so, and don't worry, I'll tell you ^-^
NightAngle has already told me how to, but I still don't have my scanner installed-.- don't be too hard on your flames!!!* but they are acceptable!* I love reviews just like any other human being and I think it's very important to know what you peeps like about my fic and what you peeps don't like about it, so than I can try my hardest to improve my writing.*and make you happy* If you're still alive from my big boring intro, than, um…read my fic???? Enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!!^-^ WARNING, WARNING!!! This is a H/V fic, for any Allen lovers out there, DON'T read this fic!!!*also includes some serious Allen bashing!!!^-^**
:p oops…hee-hee, I almost forgot, I want to dedicate this chappy to NightAngle for being so nice and e-mailing me every so often!!^-^ and LOVE WITCH for not giving up all her hard work that she has put in her fics.* I love her work!* Even when the worst came, she still stood high and continued, great job!!! Okay, now on with the chappy!!!
*Disclaimer* I don't even know why I have to do this, but what the hey!! Okay, I don't own any of the characters *even if I really wanted too, especially Van *drool* so don't sue me, I'M INNOCENT!!…okay, now you can read^^
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"character talking"
character's thought
third person speaking (narrator)
More Than it Meets the Eye**Chapter one- false dreams**
#third person#
It was now early spring, where the flowers were starting to blossom, there were always blue sky, the birds sang throughout the day with its beautiful melody, everything was so perfect that it seemed to be a dream. The sun was now setting with its glorious rays playing upon Hitomi's face. Hitomi had a delightful smile across her face as she recalled the day's event with, no other than Allen Shezar, her big time crush. She had a crush on him since, um, since she realized boys existed. Hitomi sighed as she lay back on Allen's muscular chest while they both watched the sun set.
"Thank you Allen, this was a wonderful date", said Hitomi with a light blush decorating her cheeks.
"No Hitomi, I'm the one that should be thanking you for accepting my offer", Allen replied as he lifted her face to meet his. " I have always waited for this moment, and I want to tell you something very important," he paused to see if he had her full attention, which he did, so he continued, "Hitomi, I have to confess to you, I-I-I have always loved you", Allen stated as he looked away, afraid that his worst nightmare would come true, rejection.
"Oh Allen, and I thought this was a one sided love", said Hitomi with her voice oozing love and happiness.
As she said this, Allen snapped his head to her direction with wide eyes to see if he was really imagining things. He searched her eyes to see if he found any sign of what she said was false. His facial expression relaxed as he only found love in those beautiful emerald eyes of hers, love for him. "Hitomi" whispered Allen as his face lowered to capture her lips with his, just as they were about to touch…BLANG-BLANG-BLANG!!!!!!
"AH!!!!" was all Hitomi could say as she crashed to the ground from her bed.
*hee-hee, thought that was true, eh?? Never!!! I vote for H/V all the way!!
Besides, Allen bashing is way more fun!!*
"Stupid alarm." mumbled Hitomi before breaking the alarm with her killer punch. "oops," grinned Hitomi sheepishly. "I needed a new alarm anyway."
Hitomi made her way to the bathroom and looked at her reflection. "It just had to wake me up at the best part of my dream!" complained Hitomi as her thoughts drifted to the dream once more, thinking how a dream could be so real. "At least it felt real." Added a blushing Hitomi as senses from her dream flooded into her mind. "Ah, I should have known it was a dream, it was too good to be true. He would never ask me out." Confessed Hitomi, even though she was the most popular girl in high school, she couldn't think that Allen could choose her from all of her friends, especially Millerna, the most beautiful girl in school. She still didn't understand why she was the most popular girl if Millerna was beautiful, nice, funny, and she had to admit, she also had a killer body. So why was she more popular??? Could it be her father's wealth??? Mr. Kanzaki was a well-known lawyer and had a lot of success. Not to mention that his family were of wealthy Bankers, and since he was the only child, he inherited all when his mother died of a stroke two tears ago.
Maybe that's the reason, thought Hitomi as she glanced at her clock.. Oh, only 8 am, Hitomi's head snapped back at the clock. " Holy shit!!! I only have 10 minuets before I have to leave for school!!" cried Hitomi while she ran around the room like a maniac trying to find something to wear. When she was ready to leave, she cursed once more to the alarm clock and than dashed like mad to school.
**hee-hee, sorry for the short chappy, but I had to end it there. I love reviews, please tell me what you think!!! If no review, no story!!! muha-ha-ha-ha-ha!!!*evil laughter with fangs sticking out* no, seriously, if I don't get more than 5 reviews or something, I might give up and move underground or something. Like I said before, not to harsh with flames!!! Until the next chappy !!!*cough, maybe*
hitomi-chan^-^ *I have decided to change my name, since there was already another sakura, even though I found this site first!! Just kidding!! It would be too confusing, I wouldn't know if the message was for me or the other sakura @.@ there better not be any other hitomi-chans around cause I'm not changing!!!! Only if you ask nicely ^-^* later days!!!
23/03/03