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Hey hey people , dis is the other part of chapter 3 now known as chapter 4 because it made chap 3 really long and I wanted to have thems seperate.Anyway , sorry bout the length of this chapter and sorry for not using much speech , but this in a way could be the informative chappie or something like that.Anyway enjoy.By the way I changed the name so please make note of it , and I hope there are still people reading it.
Script Key :
( ----------) =Action or emotion
"----------" =Speech
----------=Thought
[-----------]=Computer writing
AaBbCcDe=Narative writing
EVAngelic possibilities
Chapter 4 :Battle time !!!
As the 4 catapults launched the Eva's up the tunnels all four of the pilots waited anxiously for the surfacing.On the surface of Tokyo 3 Eva unit's 01 and 02 appeared from the catapult.Both units quickly scampered to the nearest weapon building to grab a weapon for offensive combat and then ducked behind some buildings at the edge of the city.In another part of the city units 00 and 03 emerged form the ground right on top of Nerv.Already carrying a rifle and shield each.
Misato:(Opening a link) "OK guys Shinji , Asuka you two stay at the edge of the city and attack the angel when it appears from over the mountain and touches flat ground."
Shinji and Asuka:(Obediently) "Hai"
Misato: " Good , and Rei and Hiro you two are the last line of defence of Nerv so defend it as much as you can"
Hiro and Rei:(Calmly) "Hai"
Misato: "I have paired you up so if one back each other and dont leave your pairs side unless necessary"
4 Pilots: "Hai"
Misato:(Encouragingly) "And ......Good luck"
Misato then cut of her communications and went back to staring at the main screen.While the 4 pilots ready themselves to engage in combat.
Asuka and Shinji both waited nervously for the angel to emerge , but the fact that it was taking so long was eating away at Asuka.
Asuka:(Annoyingly) "Where is the stupid Angel already , its taking sooooooooo long"
Shinji:(Setting his sights) "Wait Asuka, dont be too sure because its here"
Asuka:(Focussing her sights) "I see it , here we go baka Shinji"
Shinji:(Happily) "Kinda reminds me of our first battle together"
Asuka: (Angrily) "So it seems , but this time I'm not going to lose first !!!"
The angel made its way down the mountain and was closing in on the rim of the city , and as soon as it stepped onto flat ground Asuka lept up from her position and shot a blanket of ammo at the angel and soon after Shinji followed suit , but the angel was not being harmed by the shots and completely ignored the two evas firing upon it and took flight causing Shinji and Asuka to become scattered on the ground from the air waves.
Asuka:(Surprised) "What the hell ?"
Shinji: "(Confused) "Its flying?"
The angel was now hovering over buildings and was obviously looking for something.Hiro and Rei looked in on wonder at the flying angel that seemed to use its A.T field to make itself fly and was harshly snapped out off the gaze by Misato's yelling voice.
Misato:(Shouting) "Rei , Hiro the angels course is calculated up to land right on top of you , MOVE !!!"
Hiro: "What , really ? , SHIT !!!!"
With that unit 00 and 03 made a dive away from their defense positions , but Rei not having any luck of dodging as the angel connected its foot with unit 00's shoulder and had thrown the unit far back into a building.Seeing this Shinji felt something snap in him and summoned his eva to get up , leave Asuka and make at a full sprint to the angel and Asuka also soon followed the purple mecha with a pissed off pilot over to Rei.
Shinji:(Yelling) "REI !!!!"
As the angel had finished summoning its power from its core and was getting ready to launch a attack right on top of HQ , it was stopped by a madly yelling Shinji and Eva unit 01 as the eva flew from its sprint and connected with the angels head sending it flying from its place ontop of HQ to a parallel mountain and making an angel imprint.As the angel was out of commission for even just a moment Shinji took the time to dig unit 00 out of the building debris.
As Shinji cleared the rubble he soon found the limp body of Unit 00
Shinji:(Worried) "Rei , Rei can you hear me , REI !!!"
Misato:(Quickly) "Shinji , shes still alive just unconscious as she was hit on her head"
Shinji:(Breaking into tears) "Shes fine ........."
Misato knowing that Rei in her current state would be a danger to her and the fellow pilots she initiated a retreat.
Misato:(Commandingly) "Bring up catapult 18 and get ready to bring back unit 00"
Maya: "Hai"
Misato: "Shinji get unit 00 and put her back on the catapult and well bring her back"
Shinji: "Ok"
Asuka:(Mockingly) "While Shinji's attending to his girlfriend I'll attack"
Misato:(Demandingly) "Asuka no , wait for Shinji"
It was too late as Asuka made a charge at the angel . Trying to remember his training , Hiro made an attempt to help out and went on back up for Shinji while he was helping Rei.
Hiro: "Misato , I'll back her up ,while Shinji's helping Ayanami"
At that time the angel had become free of the mountain and was shooting energy beams from its eyes at any thing in sight.But Asuka manoeuvred Eva unit 02 around them one by one and launched it self with a right hook and prog knife in hand right at the angels core , but was met by an A.T field.Seeing this new obstacle Asuka put her own field up and was able to break through and become in a clash of hacking and slashing.
Seeing a chance Shinji picked unit 00 up and put it on the catapult and watched it disappear back underground.Meanwhile the angel looked like it was going to buckle under Asuka's attacks when the angel shot a beam right through Asuka's chest armor which ripped the armor off and impaled Unit 02 all the way through to the other side of her body which caused her to fall in pain and giving the angel enough time to wrap its arms around unit 02 and fling it over into a building.
As unit 02 was out of battle Hiro took of what he knew of how to fight and put it into action.Hiro willed his black beast known as Eva unit 03 and ran at the angel full power while shooting at it with a rifle causing it to be embedded into the mountain once again.While running he had used up his ammo and discarded the rifle and opted for the prog knife.Hiro drew the knife up and lept toward the angel aiming for its core and hoping for a direct hit but was denied because the angel had sliced off Hiro's hand with its razor sharp arms and then wrapped its arms around unit 03's body like a blanket and began to squeeze.
In the entry plug Hiro was in pain.
Hiro:(Suffocating) "Got........to.........get......out........"
But suddenly the sharp pain he had , had on his last two activations resurfaced and began to jab at his head adding to the pain but soon enough he felt his consciousness slip away.
As Hiro fell unconscious a being emerged deep within Hiro's mind.This being had no form and only existed in Hiro but none the less this being was trying to make contact with the angel.
Being: "Brother can you hear me?"
Zureal: "Bardiel , is this you ?"
Bardiel: "Yes brother it is"
Zureal: "I thought you had disappeared and been erased , you were meant to awake earlier before me and make your statement with the lillums robot"
Bardiel: "No brother I was not erased , I was merely hiding and waiting for a right chance , as to my likings I had created another plan which I think that will be a more efficient and certain way than the other"
Zureal: "It this so ?"
Bardiel: "I think that that if I had hid instead of appearing as was told and appear later with Tabris to catch the lillum off guard , and they would have to deal with 2 of us instead of one , it would make sense as I am one of the angels that show themselves to the lillum without a physical form , so I would be able to conceal myself and awaken at the right time."
Zureal: "Sounds promising , but as you know the maker will not be pleased of your new plans as they were already set and know you've altered them"
Bardiel: "I know"
Zureal: "Also Tabris will not be happy also as this means he will not be able to get to know the being named Shinji Ikari"
Bardiel: "Yes I know , but my plan is more adequate is it not"
Zureal: "Yes I do think so , brother"
Bardiel: "Well then before you are killed by the lillims please pass on the new plan to Tabris and the others"
Zureal: "As you wish brother"
Bardiel: "Thankyou"
The being known as Bardiel and an angel then slipped back into the back of Hiro's mind and gave Hiro back his consciousness.The conversation between the angels lasted for a long time but in reality it only lasted a few seconds and Hiro was now returning to his senses and remembered his situation he was in. but still not fully awake.
Misato: "Shinji help Hiro"
After hearing the order Shinji lept from where he was and came to Hiro's aid.Shinji slashed the angels arms with his prog knife and threw the angel by its stumped arms over his head and onto the ground with a thump.Instead of helping Hiro out of the arms , Shinji went on a full out attack on the core and sparred with the angel until it resulted in nothing but the angel slicing off Shinji's arm for revenge of its own.The angel regenerated it own arms and picked up Shinji and threw him on the ground ,again and again and again.All that was heared over the comm link was the yelling of Shinji Ikari in pain , hearing this Asuka got up from the ground still in pain from the energy beam but managed to sit up and grab a particle gun from a nearby weapons shaft and launched a assault on the angel.
Asuka:(Yelling) "Die you stupid ass angel , DIE !!!"
The energy from the gun didnt manage to hurt the angel but it pushed it off its feet and let go of Unit 01 which hurled into a building.Asuka emptied what was left of the ammo in her gun into the angels body.But to her surprise the angel got up from the ground after her attack and was going to shoot another beam at her when a pissed off Shinji and unit 01 smashed through a building and punched the angel in the face but only managed to hit air when the angel dodged it and shot a beam at Shinji which he barely managed to block with his A.T field.But during the blocking the angel head butted unit 01 into another set of buildings , and changed its target back to Asuka and slowly advanced on her.
Asuka:(Softly and very scared) "Oh great im gonna die , no-one can save me now not even the invincible Shinji .................,at least I'll die in unit 02"
The angel reared up its blade like arms and flung its arms at Unit 02 with deadly speed.In unit 02's entry plug , Asuka was awaiting her death , but to her surprise she first heard her name being shouted.
Hiro:(Yelling at the top of his lungs) "ASUKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Hiro busted out of his blanket with the power of his awesome A.T field that shook the ground and buildings from his fury , and jettisoned his power cable and ran to Asuka's postion with supersonic speed and was just in time to grab unit 02 and throw it away from the death position.But because of this act he took the full blow of the attack that sliced unit 03 in half.
Seeing the incident , the bridge were in a major panic and Misato was sending orders to the pilots but none responded.
Asuka could only hear the yell of Hiro echoing in her mind as she just witnessed Hiro save her life but for the price of pain or worse death.Realizing this she broke down in tears and curled up into a ball in her entry plug whispering and muttering to herself.
Asuka:(Muttering) "I........D......n............n....e......"
Shinji also witnessed Hiro's acts , which made him remember what the angel had done to Rei ,which infuriated Shinji to an almost anger breakdown , but instead of going crazy and awaken the berseker Shinji took all his anger out on the angel which in turn help him get the upper-hand on it.First by ripping its arms off with his one arm and by frantically beating at the core while the angel was on the ground , and as Shinji had passed his limits of anger , He let out one last battle cry and jabbed the finishing stab into the core which triggered an explosion with unit 01 in the middle of it.
End of Chapter 4 Chapter 5 coming soon (I hope)
A/N
Hope you enjoyed this chapter , even if it was just a battle but I hope it may show you where im heading ...
Anyway thanks for the R and R , I still hope that you ppl review , it's a great confidence booster to continue.
Also im very sorry about the whole script like dialogue.I had to use it because when I tried writing in other ways it seems screwed up and when I read some of Axel terizaki's work I figured that the script-like dialogue would be easy and plus I aint any good at the other kinds so please bare with and still read.
Next chapter coming soon , I write during social studies and on the bus home from school , plus not to mention at home so it should be out sooner or later.Im also thinking of other fics and have started their planning so when im done with this you should see more of my work sooner or later I hope.
Cheers
Th1Rd_Ch1Ld
Hey hey people , dis is the other part of chapter 3 now known as chapter 4 because it made chap 3 really long and I wanted to have thems seperate.Anyway , sorry bout the length of this chapter and sorry for not using much speech , but this in a way could be the informative chappie or something like that.Anyway enjoy.By the way I changed the name so please make note of it , and I hope there are still people reading it.
Script Key :
( ----------) =Action or emotion
"----------" =Speech
----------=Thought
[-----------]=Computer writing
AaBbCcDe=Narative writing
EVAngelic possibilities
Chapter 4 :Battle time !!!
As the 4 catapults launched the Eva's up the tunnels all four of the pilots waited anxiously for the surfacing.On the surface of Tokyo 3 Eva unit's 01 and 02 appeared from the catapult.Both units quickly scampered to the nearest weapon building to grab a weapon for offensive combat and then ducked behind some buildings at the edge of the city.In another part of the city units 00 and 03 emerged form the ground right on top of Nerv.Already carrying a rifle and shield each.
Misato:(Opening a link) "OK guys Shinji , Asuka you two stay at the edge of the city and attack the angel when it appears from over the mountain and touches flat ground."
Shinji and Asuka:(Obediently) "Hai"
Misato: " Good , and Rei and Hiro you two are the last line of defence of Nerv so defend it as much as you can"
Hiro and Rei:(Calmly) "Hai"
Misato: "I have paired you up so if one back each other and dont leave your pairs side unless necessary"
4 Pilots: "Hai"
Misato:(Encouragingly) "And ......Good luck"
Misato then cut of her communications and went back to staring at the main screen.While the 4 pilots ready themselves to engage in combat.
Asuka and Shinji both waited nervously for the angel to emerge , but the fact that it was taking so long was eating away at Asuka.
Asuka:(Annoyingly) "Where is the stupid Angel already , its taking sooooooooo long"
Shinji:(Setting his sights) "Wait Asuka, dont be too sure because its here"
Asuka:(Focussing her sights) "I see it , here we go baka Shinji"
Shinji:(Happily) "Kinda reminds me of our first battle together"
Asuka: (Angrily) "So it seems , but this time I'm not going to lose first !!!"
The angel made its way down the mountain and was closing in on the rim of the city , and as soon as it stepped onto flat ground Asuka lept up from her position and shot a blanket of ammo at the angel and soon after Shinji followed suit , but the angel was not being harmed by the shots and completely ignored the two evas firing upon it and took flight causing Shinji and Asuka to become scattered on the ground from the air waves.
Asuka:(Surprised) "What the hell ?"
Shinji: "(Confused) "Its flying?"
The angel was now hovering over buildings and was obviously looking for something.Hiro and Rei looked in on wonder at the flying angel that seemed to use its A.T field to make itself fly and was harshly snapped out off the gaze by Misato's yelling voice.
Misato:(Shouting) "Rei , Hiro the angels course is calculated up to land right on top of you , MOVE !!!"
Hiro: "What , really ? , SHIT !!!!"
With that unit 00 and 03 made a dive away from their defense positions , but Rei not having any luck of dodging as the angel connected its foot with unit 00's shoulder and had thrown the unit far back into a building.Seeing this Shinji felt something snap in him and summoned his eva to get up , leave Asuka and make at a full sprint to the angel and Asuka also soon followed the purple mecha with a pissed off pilot over to Rei.
Shinji:(Yelling) "REI !!!!"
As the angel had finished summoning its power from its core and was getting ready to launch a attack right on top of HQ , it was stopped by a madly yelling Shinji and Eva unit 01 as the eva flew from its sprint and connected with the angels head sending it flying from its place ontop of HQ to a parallel mountain and making an angel imprint.As the angel was out of commission for even just a moment Shinji took the time to dig unit 00 out of the building debris.
As Shinji cleared the rubble he soon found the limp body of Unit 00
Shinji:(Worried) "Rei , Rei can you hear me , REI !!!"
Misato:(Quickly) "Shinji , shes still alive just unconscious as she was hit on her head"
Shinji:(Breaking into tears) "Shes fine ........."
Misato knowing that Rei in her current state would be a danger to her and the fellow pilots she initiated a retreat.
Misato:(Commandingly) "Bring up catapult 18 and get ready to bring back unit 00"
Maya: "Hai"
Misato: "Shinji get unit 00 and put her back on the catapult and well bring her back"
Shinji: "Ok"
Asuka:(Mockingly) "While Shinji's attending to his girlfriend I'll attack"
Misato:(Demandingly) "Asuka no , wait for Shinji"
It was too late as Asuka made a charge at the angel . Trying to remember his training , Hiro made an attempt to help out and went on back up for Shinji while he was helping Rei.
Hiro: "Misato , I'll back her up ,while Shinji's helping Ayanami"
At that time the angel had become free of the mountain and was shooting energy beams from its eyes at any thing in sight.But Asuka manoeuvred Eva unit 02 around them one by one and launched it self with a right hook and prog knife in hand right at the angels core , but was met by an A.T field.Seeing this new obstacle Asuka put her own field up and was able to break through and become in a clash of hacking and slashing.
Seeing a chance Shinji picked unit 00 up and put it on the catapult and watched it disappear back underground.Meanwhile the angel looked like it was going to buckle under Asuka's attacks when the angel shot a beam right through Asuka's chest armor which ripped the armor off and impaled Unit 02 all the way through to the other side of her body which caused her to fall in pain and giving the angel enough time to wrap its arms around unit 02 and fling it over into a building.
As unit 02 was out of battle Hiro took of what he knew of how to fight and put it into action.Hiro willed his black beast known as Eva unit 03 and ran at the angel full power while shooting at it with a rifle causing it to be embedded into the mountain once again.While running he had used up his ammo and discarded the rifle and opted for the prog knife.Hiro drew the knife up and lept toward the angel aiming for its core and hoping for a direct hit but was denied because the angel had sliced off Hiro's hand with its razor sharp arms and then wrapped its arms around unit 03's body like a blanket and began to squeeze.
In the entry plug Hiro was in pain.
Hiro:(Suffocating) "Got........to.........get......out........"
But suddenly the sharp pain he had , had on his last two activations resurfaced and began to jab at his head adding to the pain but soon enough he felt his consciousness slip away.
As Hiro fell unconscious a being emerged deep within Hiro's mind.This being had no form and only existed in Hiro but none the less this being was trying to make contact with the angel.
Being: "Brother can you hear me?"
Zureal: "Bardiel , is this you ?"
Bardiel: "Yes brother it is"
Zureal: "I thought you had disappeared and been erased , you were meant to awake earlier before me and make your statement with the lillums robot"
Bardiel: "No brother I was not erased , I was merely hiding and waiting for a right chance , as to my likings I had created another plan which I think that will be a more efficient and certain way than the other"
Zureal: "It this so ?"
Bardiel: "I think that that if I had hid instead of appearing as was told and appear later with Tabris to catch the lillum off guard , and they would have to deal with 2 of us instead of one , it would make sense as I am one of the angels that show themselves to the lillum without a physical form , so I would be able to conceal myself and awaken at the right time."
Zureal: "Sounds promising , but as you know the maker will not be pleased of your new plans as they were already set and know you've altered them"
Bardiel: "I know"
Zureal: "Also Tabris will not be happy also as this means he will not be able to get to know the being named Shinji Ikari"
Bardiel: "Yes I know , but my plan is more adequate is it not"
Zureal: "Yes I do think so , brother"
Bardiel: "Well then before you are killed by the lillims please pass on the new plan to Tabris and the others"
Zureal: "As you wish brother"
Bardiel: "Thankyou"
The being known as Bardiel and an angel then slipped back into the back of Hiro's mind and gave Hiro back his consciousness.The conversation between the angels lasted for a long time but in reality it only lasted a few seconds and Hiro was now returning to his senses and remembered his situation he was in. but still not fully awake.
Misato: "Shinji help Hiro"
After hearing the order Shinji lept from where he was and came to Hiro's aid.Shinji slashed the angels arms with his prog knife and threw the angel by its stumped arms over his head and onto the ground with a thump.Instead of helping Hiro out of the arms , Shinji went on a full out attack on the core and sparred with the angel until it resulted in nothing but the angel slicing off Shinji's arm for revenge of its own.The angel regenerated it own arms and picked up Shinji and threw him on the ground ,again and again and again.All that was heared over the comm link was the yelling of Shinji Ikari in pain , hearing this Asuka got up from the ground still in pain from the energy beam but managed to sit up and grab a particle gun from a nearby weapons shaft and launched a assault on the angel.
Asuka:(Yelling) "Die you stupid ass angel , DIE !!!"
The energy from the gun didnt manage to hurt the angel but it pushed it off its feet and let go of Unit 01 which hurled into a building.Asuka emptied what was left of the ammo in her gun into the angels body.But to her surprise the angel got up from the ground after her attack and was going to shoot another beam at her when a pissed off Shinji and unit 01 smashed through a building and punched the angel in the face but only managed to hit air when the angel dodged it and shot a beam at Shinji which he barely managed to block with his A.T field.But during the blocking the angel head butted unit 01 into another set of buildings , and changed its target back to Asuka and slowly advanced on her.
Asuka:(Softly and very scared) "Oh great im gonna die , no-one can save me now not even the invincible Shinji .................,at least I'll die in unit 02"
The angel reared up its blade like arms and flung its arms at Unit 02 with deadly speed.In unit 02's entry plug , Asuka was awaiting her death , but to her surprise she first heard her name being shouted.
Hiro:(Yelling at the top of his lungs) "ASUKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Hiro busted out of his blanket with the power of his awesome A.T field that shook the ground and buildings from his fury , and jettisoned his power cable and ran to Asuka's postion with supersonic speed and was just in time to grab unit 02 and throw it away from the death position.But because of this act he took the full blow of the attack that sliced unit 03 in half.
Seeing the incident , the bridge were in a major panic and Misato was sending orders to the pilots but none responded.
Asuka could only hear the yell of Hiro echoing in her mind as she just witnessed Hiro save her life but for the price of pain or worse death.Realizing this she broke down in tears and curled up into a ball in her entry plug whispering and muttering to herself.
Asuka:(Muttering) "I........D......n............n....e......"
Shinji also witnessed Hiro's acts , which made him remember what the angel had done to Rei ,which infuriated Shinji to an almost anger breakdown , but instead of going crazy and awaken the berseker Shinji took all his anger out on the angel which in turn help him get the upper-hand on it.First by ripping its arms off with his one arm and by frantically beating at the core while the angel was on the ground , and as Shinji had passed his limits of anger , He let out one last battle cry and jabbed the finishing stab into the core which triggered an explosion with unit 01 in the middle of it.
End of Chapter 4 Chapter 5 coming soon (I hope)
A/N
Hope you enjoyed this chapter , even if it was just a battle but I hope it may show you where im heading ...
Anyway thanks for the R and R , I still hope that you ppl review , it's a great confidence booster to continue.
Also im very sorry about the whole script like dialogue.I had to use it because when I tried writing in other ways it seems screwed up and when I read some of Axel terizaki's work I figured that the script-like dialogue would be easy and plus I aint any good at the other kinds so please bare with and still read.
Next chapter coming soon , I write during social studies and on the bus home from school , plus not to mention at home so it should be out sooner or later.Im also thinking of other fics and have started their planning so when im done with this you should see more of my work sooner or later I hope.
Cheers
Th1Rd_Ch1Ld