Life's a bitch, and Then you Get Shot

Mai's eyes opened slowly to the lit up room, littered with devices that looked like they were meant to hurt, not help. She remembered next to nothing of any of the events that lead up to her being here. The door was kept open and people rushed through the hallways, blank, or screaming and crying. These doctors and nurses were tired and worn. As Mai saw it,t hey only did this to get paid, and just hoped all of it would be over, she saw them as blank; she also saw the screaming family members and patients as blank too. Did they really care that much other about what just happened to their friends, family, themselves? Or was it all just exaggerated. That's why when Mai was shot, she didn't scream, or cry, that's why she wasn't making a scene now. It just wasn't that much of a big deal.
All of this rushed through her head in just a few seconds after waking up, then the pain hit her. The pain from the deep, wound located a little above her right breast. Bandages covered anything that would look gruesome to anybody... but that's all it did for her. It didn't take away pain, especially emotional pain. She remembered few memories from the incident. She remembered the fact that she was shot, and why they were there, and the other gang, but nothing more.
Just as she started to drift off to sleep, voices started to come from just outside the door, just nurses and doctors she thought, but then she heard the voice from one of the police who had found her the other night. It was an odd voice for a man she thought, light and bouncy, But just then the voice triggered a sudden thought from the night before, two police officers hovered over her, one a fairly old man, with a few traces of gray hair in his, and a tall thin woman, with long shiny black hair that dropped to a little past her breasts. All of a sudden the memory rushed from her thoughts and stunned Mai for a moment. Then she started to shake and whimper, and a few tears streamed down her face.
Outside the room there were two police officers and a detective, talking to A doctor and nurse who were watching, and taking care of Mai.
"Doctor, I don't know if she'll be awake yet, she's been sleeping for three weeks."
"She's a very strong and sturdy girl, I think she should be awake soon, if not, any minute now."
"We really need to see this patient as soon as possible."
"Well, if you'd like to wait for her a little while, I'm sure she'll be awake and ready to answer any questions you have by the end of today!"
"Well, thank you, we'll wait as long as we have to."
As they walked into the room they saw Mai, shaking, crying and murmuring. The female officer walked up to Mai, and covered her up with the blanket, to try and warm her up. As she pulled the cover up to Mai's neck she whispered in her ear,
"I think it's a bit too chilly in here too." She spoke with a warm inviting, and almost hypnotic tone, that sent shivers down Mai's spine, it was girls like this she simply didn't like.
"Well good she's awake." the doctor announced in a song like tone that made it sound like Mai's health meant as much as an ant did to him. Mai simply did not want to be there, she wanted to run far away, from them, from last night, from her boyfriend, from absolutely everything from her past. She had never felt so weak in her life, and this time she couldn't just push it away, she finally had to face it, she had finally hit the dead end she had seen coming for miles and miles.

So, I've been gone for a long time, but I've had school, and baby sitting, and yoga etc. for the past little while so, sorry, but I'm back bay, YEAH!!!
Sorry for the short chap. but more coming! Tell me what ya'll want to see! But I plan on little to no comedy in this story, sorry U_U