*sigh* Fine. I said the previous reply was the last one but I think it is still proper to reply to the still coming flames.
Thermopyle, I really don't mind you propagating on 'slamming this dumb bitch'. How you see me, after all, is not in my power to change to however I like it. Though, all I was asking, even from the previous e-mail that I replied to you was that you make it clear, and this does not pertain to my understanding of your review but in terms of what it really is that you deem should be changed in accordance to what you perceive and why. Admittedly, half of the time you reviewed was concentrated on bashing me, which confuses me greatly for it looked like you knew me all my life.
Oh and Fallacies, my apologies in not seeming to stand up at least up to your intellectual heights. My IQ's really low compared to it.
Honestly, I comprehend what you are trying to say to me. However, everything you've said, though subtly in the background, cannot help but pertain to subjectively pointing out what is a fiction for you. What is an AU for you. As how you know it and how you see it. I have read so many Aus that have a defferent perception of what AU really is.True, AU does not mean OOC. That is why I would take into consideration next time on putting up a warning. But is that all? Likewise, I meant it for OOC since it is rather difficult constructing an AU without altering a bit. Also considering that with the relatively few, if none, AU's in the HNG fandom, the fic is nearly an experimental one. So why blow off your lids and find the need to condemn imperfect authors? I'd be glad to discuss this in a more proper manner, about its' mistakes such as the usage of Japanese language. I assure you that it would be taken cared of in the next revision. As for the interesting themes on how this fic could improve, they would be great except that I do not see the need of such complexity being implemented to a story I aimed to be a light read and something meant to be like a fairytale. Though as I said before, I'll take your heed when I write future fictions. They are a relevant add to my learning during the process of writing.
For Cat Who, yes, the formatting would come together with the revision of the chapters. Thank you for pointing it out since I don't have much free time in my hands lately to check things.
For FTFCHRIS , no, the prince's *do* care about the kingdom. The whole plot will just settle things its' way when future chaps come up which for obvious reasons, I cannot spoil. I have barely introduced anything aside from the two characters anyway. Your review was significant and quite frankly, I find the truth in it.
For all the others out there who feel the same contempt and irritation against my fic, I just ask one thing. There is no need for violent and harsh words and expressions. Though it is a respectable profession most people enjoy engaging in, it is just a fiction story. It doesn't deserve this degree or this manner of online fights and arguments. Things can be settled more calmly.
You can tell me a certain part of the whole fic that irks you and make a specific suggestion through example. It can be talked out because despite engaging fiction writing, there are a lot to learn from different readers. Just give authors a chance to mold a better one from the various comments. It will come.
But seeing to most of the flamers, almost all didn't even give that kind of chance before the name-callings. And what's odd about it was it was personally aimed. I didn't find them aggravating or annoying but they were indeed perplexing at the most.