Okay Review this chapter! No flamers, but polite comments on what should
improve! Chapter 2: A New Ally
At the doll factory, the demon that had visited Kurama, was speaking with another.
"It is good quality, Ne?"
"I congratulate you on this success."
There, Maya lay on strange surface, sound asleep.
"A good dish of resistance. One would say she has some power..." boasted the small demon. "I will profit by augmenting my own."
In a shadowy corner, a large beast arose. "I'm hungry!" he yelled. "To repay you," he said, a mischievous grin on his face, though it was not visible to his companion. "I'm going to eat you," the demon growled.
"What?" the small demon's eyes widened in fear. "Wait!!!" his pleas were ignored, and the beast raised his hands and slashed the smaller demon. All that had been left behind were stains of his blood on the wall.
Yatsude took a seat against the wall. He swallowed down the last bit of the former demon. "Triflent!!!" he said, cringing. "I must content myself with girls."
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The night sky was completely black; accept for the few stars that were visible in the night sky. Kurama sat on his room floor beside the window. He had brought the demon he had fought back to his room, and had set him on his bed. Kurama had spent some time tending to his wounds. Hours had passed by.
The demons eyes shot open. He quickly sat up. 'What?' he thought to himself.
"You have a great capacity to recover," said Kurama. The demon looked to the side, and found Kurama to be sitting against the wall. "Only four hours," Kurama continued.
He looked down at the two slashes on his chest. "My wounds have enclosed..."
"It was deep, I treated you..." Kurama said. "With a Makai remedy."
Minutes went by, and the two remained silent. "You spoke during your sleep..." Kurama said, breaking the silence. "Who is Yukina?" The demon's eyes widened at the mention of the name. "You've had a Jagan for a short time...I feel it..."
The demon paid no attention to Kurama. "You must have a good reason for daring that." He continued, despite the demon's attempts to ignore him. "What connection is there between her and Yatsude," questioned Kurama. A sorrowful glint settled in the demon's eyes.
He frowned in annoyance. "You're very talkative," he said. "I'll remove you."
The demon wrapped the black cloak around his body, and got off the bed, walking towards Kurama. He fixed his gaze on Kurama. "A warning for you as thanks," he said. "Your naiveté has lost a day." With that said, he placed a foot on the window, and was about to jump out when Kurama interrupted him.
"You still intend to fight? It's too soon," warned Kurama.
He frowned. "The more he eats, the stronger he becomes," he said in reply. Kurama turned to look at him.
"What's your name?" he asked.
"..." He turned his eyes to look at Kurama, and then looked away. "Hiei." Without another word, he jumped out of the window, and vanished.
"He already has a high reputation as a thief," Kurama said. "He's going to have trouble against Yatsude."
He sat in silence as time passed by. A ring rung out through the room! "Hmm?" Kurama got up and answered the phone. "Is this Minamino?"
"Yes, this is Minamino here," Kurama said.
"It's me, Tasaka!"
Kurama listened intently. In the midst of the conversation, Kurama heard something terrible. His eyes widened in fear. "What? Maya hasn't returned home!!!" he cried. "She's not at your place?" He set the slammed the phone down.
'The worst could have happened!!!' he thought. Kurama immediately headed for the window and jumped out, intending to follow the demon, for he knew his goal was the same as his own. He jumped from roof to roof, trying to catch up with Hiei. Just a little farther ahead, he could faintly pick out Hiei, though it was quite hard, since he was clothed in black during a dark night.
"I'm coming with you!" he said, yelling after Hiei.
Hiei looked behind his shoulder, and found Kurama following him. "Ah, yes, and why is that?" he asked, turning his attention forward once again.
"I have my reasons," Kurama said coolly.
"It's because of that girl, right?" he questioned.
"That's not it at all!" he replied, concealing his true intentions.
"..." Hiei remained silent, deciding that he should leave the conversation at that.
"I'm really after Yatsude," Kurama said.
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The two traveled together, knowing that to beat Yatsude, both strengths were required. They arrived shortly at the doll factory, which, to their knowledge, was where Yatsude happened to be hiding.
The two walked along the ground, occasionally stepping on dolls. "The ruins..." whispered Hiei. The two looked at the ground in disgust. "He's serious, that guy. He's mixed up the remnants with the dolls."
Kurama frowned in anger an worry. He clenched his fists, causing his knuckles to turn a deathly pale shade from the amount of pressure he was applying. 'Kitajima!!' he thought, worried from what might have happened to her.
"..." Beads of sweat trickled down the sides of his face.
"You are dead!" bellowed a creature from behind. The two straightened up in shock. The enormous creature slammed his fist into the ground, crushing the ground. Kurama and Hiei were fast, and managed to escape the blow.
"You are tenacious," said Yatsude. He was an ugly creature. He was about three times the height of and width of Kurama and Hiei, and had a number of arms. Two of which, strangely enough, grew out from his head. His head was rather small for his large sized body, and his eyes and mouth appeared to be mere slits in his face. Thin, pale strands of hair grew from his head, adding to his already overwhelming hideousness.
Hiei frowned in anger. "I ask you one last time," he said, a hint of warning in his voice. "Who is the ice maiden whom you ate?"
The creature merely smiled. "I don't remember," he said, chuckling to himself. Kurama stepped forward, his fists clenched again.
"You have a girl student today," he said warily. "Where is she?" his voice gaze hardened.
Yatsude's smile grew even wider. "You know her?" he questioned, an amused look apparent on his face. "I'll give you a clue." With an arm, he drew out a piece of, what appeared to be, human flesh. "What's this?" Yatsude said playfully.
Kurama's face turned pale. He grinded his teeth together, anger coursing through his veins. "Filth!!!" he yelled at the top of his lungs. He jumped into the air, surprising Hiei with his sudden actions. From his fingers, long vines wrapped themselves around his fingers, and from them grew a long, slender blade. Hiei accompanied him by drawing out his katana. With that, the two dove into a battle, in which neither knew the outcome.
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Okay this chapter is less than creative! All of these paragraphs belong to AngelFeather1.
At the doll factory, the demon that had visited Kurama, was speaking with another.
"It is good quality, Ne?"
"I congratulate you on this success."
There, Maya lay on strange surface, sound asleep.
"A good dish of resistance. One would say she has some power..." boasted the small demon. "I will profit by augmenting my own."
In a shadowy corner, a large beast arose. "I'm hungry!" he yelled. "To repay you," he said, a mischievous grin on his face, though it was not visible to his companion. "I'm going to eat you," the demon growled.
"What?" the small demon's eyes widened in fear. "Wait!!!" his pleas were ignored, and the beast raised his hands and slashed the smaller demon. All that had been left behind were stains of his blood on the wall.
Yatsude took a seat against the wall. He swallowed down the last bit of the former demon. "Triflent!!!" he said, cringing. "I must content myself with girls."
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The night sky was completely black; accept for the few stars that were visible in the night sky. Kurama sat on his room floor beside the window. He had brought the demon he had fought back to his room, and had set him on his bed. Kurama had spent some time tending to his wounds. Hours had passed by.
The demons eyes shot open. He quickly sat up. 'What?' he thought to himself.
"You have a great capacity to recover," said Kurama. The demon looked to the side, and found Kurama to be sitting against the wall. "Only four hours," Kurama continued.
He looked down at the two slashes on his chest. "My wounds have enclosed..."
"It was deep, I treated you..." Kurama said. "With a Makai remedy."
Minutes went by, and the two remained silent. "You spoke during your sleep..." Kurama said, breaking the silence. "Who is Yukina?" The demon's eyes widened at the mention of the name. "You've had a Jagan for a short time...I feel it..."
The demon paid no attention to Kurama. "You must have a good reason for daring that." He continued, despite the demon's attempts to ignore him. "What connection is there between her and Yatsude," questioned Kurama. A sorrowful glint settled in the demon's eyes.
He frowned in annoyance. "You're very talkative," he said. "I'll remove you."
The demon wrapped the black cloak around his body, and got off the bed, walking towards Kurama. He fixed his gaze on Kurama. "A warning for you as thanks," he said. "Your naiveté has lost a day." With that said, he placed a foot on the window, and was about to jump out when Kurama interrupted him.
"You still intend to fight? It's too soon," warned Kurama.
He frowned. "The more he eats, the stronger he becomes," he said in reply. Kurama turned to look at him.
"What's your name?" he asked.
"..." He turned his eyes to look at Kurama, and then looked away. "Hiei." Without another word, he jumped out of the window, and vanished.
"He already has a high reputation as a thief," Kurama said. "He's going to have trouble against Yatsude."
He sat in silence as time passed by. A ring rung out through the room! "Hmm?" Kurama got up and answered the phone. "Is this Minamino?"
"Yes, this is Minamino here," Kurama said.
"It's me, Tasaka!"
Kurama listened intently. In the midst of the conversation, Kurama heard something terrible. His eyes widened in fear. "What? Maya hasn't returned home!!!" he cried. "She's not at your place?" He set the slammed the phone down.
'The worst could have happened!!!' he thought. Kurama immediately headed for the window and jumped out, intending to follow the demon, for he knew his goal was the same as his own. He jumped from roof to roof, trying to catch up with Hiei. Just a little farther ahead, he could faintly pick out Hiei, though it was quite hard, since he was clothed in black during a dark night.
"I'm coming with you!" he said, yelling after Hiei.
Hiei looked behind his shoulder, and found Kurama following him. "Ah, yes, and why is that?" he asked, turning his attention forward once again.
"I have my reasons," Kurama said coolly.
"It's because of that girl, right?" he questioned.
"That's not it at all!" he replied, concealing his true intentions.
"..." Hiei remained silent, deciding that he should leave the conversation at that.
"I'm really after Yatsude," Kurama said.
________________________________________________________
The two traveled together, knowing that to beat Yatsude, both strengths were required. They arrived shortly at the doll factory, which, to their knowledge, was where Yatsude happened to be hiding.
The two walked along the ground, occasionally stepping on dolls. "The ruins..." whispered Hiei. The two looked at the ground in disgust. "He's serious, that guy. He's mixed up the remnants with the dolls."
Kurama frowned in anger an worry. He clenched his fists, causing his knuckles to turn a deathly pale shade from the amount of pressure he was applying. 'Kitajima!!' he thought, worried from what might have happened to her.
"..." Beads of sweat trickled down the sides of his face.
"You are dead!" bellowed a creature from behind. The two straightened up in shock. The enormous creature slammed his fist into the ground, crushing the ground. Kurama and Hiei were fast, and managed to escape the blow.
"You are tenacious," said Yatsude. He was an ugly creature. He was about three times the height of and width of Kurama and Hiei, and had a number of arms. Two of which, strangely enough, grew out from his head. His head was rather small for his large sized body, and his eyes and mouth appeared to be mere slits in his face. Thin, pale strands of hair grew from his head, adding to his already overwhelming hideousness.
Hiei frowned in anger. "I ask you one last time," he said, a hint of warning in his voice. "Who is the ice maiden whom you ate?"
The creature merely smiled. "I don't remember," he said, chuckling to himself. Kurama stepped forward, his fists clenched again.
"You have a girl student today," he said warily. "Where is she?" his voice gaze hardened.
Yatsude's smile grew even wider. "You know her?" he questioned, an amused look apparent on his face. "I'll give you a clue." With an arm, he drew out a piece of, what appeared to be, human flesh. "What's this?" Yatsude said playfully.
Kurama's face turned pale. He grinded his teeth together, anger coursing through his veins. "Filth!!!" he yelled at the top of his lungs. He jumped into the air, surprising Hiei with his sudden actions. From his fingers, long vines wrapped themselves around his fingers, and from them grew a long, slender blade. Hiei accompanied him by drawing out his katana. With that, the two dove into a battle, in which neither knew the outcome.
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Okay this chapter is less than creative! All of these paragraphs belong to AngelFeather1.